内容正文:
Unit 1 You and Me
Project Make your own personal profile /ˈprəʊfaɪl/.
/əʊn/ /ˈpɜːsənl/ n. 简介,概述
adj. 自己的 adj. 个人的,
私人的
Andre Kalu想结交新朋友,因此他发布了一个个人简介,向大家介绍自己。你想交朋友吗?请阅读他的个人简介尝试去了解他。并且也发布一个你自己的个人简介介绍关于你自己的信息以及你的一个朋友。
3b
写作要点:1. Talk about yourself. 2. Talk about one of your friends.
3. How do you feel about making friends?
写作要求:1. 文章需包含所有写作要点,可适当拓展。
2. 文章不得出现真实人名和地名。 3. 文章不少于80词。
读写作要求定主题
My friend and I
What does Andre Kalu talk about?
name
age
country
South Africa /saʊθ 'æfrɪkə/南非共和国
living place
family
pet
favorite things(food, sport)
How many parts多少部分 do we need to write in the personal profile?
Beginning:
Body:
Ending:
Beginning:
Body:
Ending:
要点1和2放在文章正文Body部分。
要点3为文章结尾Ending部分
文章开头Beginning要自行组织
分析各个写作要点分布在文章的哪个部分?
How many parts多少部分 do we need to write in the personal profile?
Beginning:
Body:
Ending:
Lead in the topic.引出主题
Talk about the information of my friend and me.谈论朋友和自己的信息
Talk about the feelings about friends.谈论对朋友的感受。
What do we need to write in each part?每个部分具体怎么写?
Beginning:
Hello, everyone. Let me tell you something about my friend and me.
大家好,让我告诉你们关于我和朋友的一些事情。
Hello, everyone. I’d like to introduce myself and my friend to you.
大家好,我想给你们介绍我和我的朋友。
Hello, everyone. Do you want to get to know my friend and me? Let me tell you. 大家好,你们想认识我和我的朋友吗?让我告诉你。
Everyone needs friends. Now, let me tell you about my friend and me. And I also want to make more friends. 每个人都需要朋友。现在让我告诉你们关于我和我的朋友。并且我也想交更多朋友。
What do we need to write in each part?每个部分具体怎么写?
Body:
paragraph 2&3
Paragraph 2: My information.
Paragraph 3: My friend’s information.
information
name
age
country
living place
family
pet
favorite things(food, sport...)
What do we need to write in each part?每个部分具体怎么写?
Body:
Paragraph 2: My information.
name:
My (full) name is Mary Brown.
Name: Mary Brown
Age: 13
Country: the US
Living place: Beijing
Family: parents, brother and sister
Pet: a parrot (Gina)
Favorite color: blue
Favorite animal: dogs
Favorite place: the Great Wall
Favorite food: Beijing roast duck
Favorite sport: tennis
Hobby: dancing
I am Mary Brown.
My first name is Mary.
My last name is Brown.
age:
I am 13 years old.
I am 13 .
What do we need to write in each part?每个部分具体怎么写?
Body:
Paragraph 2: My information.
country:
I am from the US.
Name: Mary Brown
Age: 13
Country: the US
Living place: Beijing
Family: parents, brother and sister
Pet: a parrot (Gina), can sing
Favorite color: blue
Favorite animal: dogs
Favorite place: the Great Wall
Favorite food: Beijing roast duck
Favorite sport: tennis
Hobby: dancing
I come from the US.
Living place& family:
I live in Beijing with my parents, brother and sister now.
pet:
I have a pet. Her name is Gina.
She can sing.
What do we need to write in each part?每个部分具体怎么写?
Body:
Paragraph 2: My information.
Favorite color/ animal/ place/ food/ sport :
My favorite color is blue.
Name: Mary Brown
Age: 13
Country: the US
Living place: Beijing
Family: parents, brother and sister
Pet: a parrot (Gina), can sing
Favorite color: blue
Favorite animal: dogs
Favorite place: the Great Wall
Favorite food: Beijing roast duck
Favorite sport: tennis
Hobby: dancing
I like blue best.
My favorite animal is dogs.
I like dogs best.
My favorite place is the Great Wall.
I like the Great Wall best.
My favorite food is Beijing roast duck.
I like Beijing roast duck best.
My favorite sport is tennis.
I like tennis best.
What do we need to write in each part?每个部分具体怎么写?
Body:
Paragraph 2: My information.
hobby:
Name: Mary Brown
Age: 13
Country: the US
Living place: Beijing
Family: parents, brother and sister
Pet: a parrot (Gina), can sing
Favorite color: blue
Favorite animal: dogs
Favorite place: the Great Wall
Favorite food: Beijing roast duck
Favorite sport: tennis
Hobby: dancing
I like to dance.
I like dancing.
My hobby is dancing.
I often dance with my sister after school.
What do we need to write in each part?每个部分具体怎么写?
Body:
Paragraph 3: My friend’s information.
name:
His (full) name is Jack Miller.
Name: Jack Miller
Age: 15
Country: Singapore
Living place: the UK
Family: parents
Pet: a cat (Bobby)
Favorite color: green
Favorite animal: sheep
Favorite place: London
Favorite food: vegetables
Favorite sport: running
Hobby: playing the guitar
He is Jack Miller.
His first name is Jack.
His last name is Miller.
age:
He is 15 years old.
He is 15 .
What do we need to write in each part?每个部分具体怎么写?
Body:
Paragraph 3: My friend’s information.
country:
He is from Singapore.
He comes from Singapore.
Living place& family:
He lives in the UK with his parents.
pet:
He has a cat. His name is Bobby.
Name: Jack Miller
Age: 15
Country: Singapore
Living place: the UK
Family: parents
Pet: a cat (Bobby)
Favorite color: green
Favorite animal: sheep
Favorite place: London
Favorite food: vegetables
Favorite sport: running
Hobby: playing the guitar
What do we need to write in each part?每个部分具体怎么写?
Body:
Paragraph 3: My friend’s information.
Favorite color/ animal/ place/ food/ sport :
His favorite color is green.
He likes green best.
His favorite animal is sheep.
He likes sheep best.
His favorite place is London.
He likes London best.
His favorite food is vegetables.
He likes vegetables best.
His favorite sport is running.
He likes running best.
Name: Jack Miller
Age: 15
Country: Singapore
Living place: the UK
Family: parents
Pet: a cat (Bobby)
Favorite color: green
Favorite animal: sheep
Favorite place: London
Favorite food: vegetables
Favorite sport: running
Hobby: playing the guitar
What do we need to write in each part?每个部分具体怎么写?
Body:
Paragraph 3: My friend’s information.
hobby:
He likes to play the guitar.
He likes playing the guitar.
His hobby is playing the guitar.
He always plays the guitar on the weekend.
Name: Jack Miller
Age: 15
Country: Singapore
Living place: the UK
Family: parents
Pet: a cat (Bobby)
Favorite color: green
Favorite animal: sheep
Favorite place: London
Favorite food: vegetables
Favorite sport: running
Hobby: playing the guitar
What do we need to write in each part?每个部分具体怎么写?
Ending:
Would you like to be my friend? 你想成为我的朋友吗?
This is my friend and me. I hope to make more friends. 这就是我和我的朋友。我希望交更多的朋友。
If you want to make friends with me. You can tell me soon. 如果你想和我交朋友,你可以尽快告诉我。
I am really/ very happy to have such a good friend. Do you want to make friends with me? Can you tell me about you? 我非常开心拥有一个这么好的朋友。你想和我交朋友吗?你能告诉我关于你吗?
An example例子:
Hello, everyone! Let me tell you something about my friend and me.
My name is Mary Brown. I am 13 years old. I come from the US, but now I live in Beijing. And I live with my parents, brother and sister. I have a pet parrot. Its name is Gina. It can sing. My favourite colour is blue. I love dogs best. My favourite place is the Great Wall. Beijing roast duck is my favourite food. My favorite sport is tennis and my hobby is dancing. I often dance with my sister after school.
Jack Miller is my good friend. He is 15 and he is from Singapore. Now he lives in the UK with his parents. He has a pet cat. His name is Bobby. Green is Jack’s favourite colour. His favourite animal is sheep. He loves London very much. His favourite food is vegetables. He likes running and he enjoys playing the guitar. He always plays the guitar on the weekend.
This is my friend and me. Would you like to be our new friends?
The passage structure作文框架:
Hello, everyone! Let me tell you something about my friend and me.
My name is ... ./ I am... . I am ... years old. I come/ am from ... , but now I live in ... . And I live with ... . I have a pet ... . Its name is ... . It can+做某事. My favourite colour is ... . My favorite animal is... ./ I love ... best. My favourite place is ... . ... is my favourite food. My favorite sport is ... .my hobby is ... . I often+做某件事 with+人+时间.
... is my good friend. He/ She is... years old. He/ She is from ... . Now he/ she lives in ... with ... . He/ She has a pet ... . Its name is ... . ... is his/ her favourite colour. His/ Her favourite animal is ... . His/ Her favorite place is... ./ He/ She loves ...best. His/ Her favourite food is ... . His/ Her favorite sport is... . He/ She likes ... . He/ She always 做某件事 with+人+时间.
I am really/ very happy to have such a good friend. Do you want to make friends with me? Can you tell me about you and your friend?
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