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What do they eat for breakfast?
Wang Xinyue/Millie
Luo Yang/Simon
Each morning, I usually have some , , and .
I eat or after morning exercises.
bread
milk
an egg
an apple
a banana
I seldom eat , but I have a big breakfast.
I usually have , pancakes or baozi.
My mum also cooks delicious .
fruit
an egg
porridge
Why is breakfast important for us?
Breakfast is an important meal. It gives us energy for the morning. We should never the breakfast.
whole
miss
What can we write about lifestyles?
exercise
sleep
diet
lifestyle
What can we write about lifestyles?
milk, bread and an egg
meat, vegetables and rice
porridge, vegetables and fish
eight cups of water
cola(可乐)/sweets
play football/basketball/ping-pong, go for a walk,go swimming
about 9 hours every day /stay up(late)
a pie and an egg
rice, meat and vegetables
noodles
do sport almost every day
sleep for about 9 hours most nights
have a yogurt between meals
Write about lifestyle
Read and analyze(structure)
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2
3
4
5
Main ideas
What is a .
What I eat for ,for ,between , and for .
I do .
I .
I can with a healthy lifestyle.
healthy lifestyle
breakfast
lunch
dinner
sport
sleep
stay fit
Tip 1: Put your main idea(top sentences) at the beginning of a paragraph.
meals
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Write about lifestyle
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2
3
4
5
Main ideas
What is a .
I do .
I .
I can with a healthy lifestyle.
healthy lifestyle
sport
sleep
stay fit
Part 1: Introduction(what)
Part 3: Ending
What I eat for ,for ,between , and for .
breakfast
lunch
dinner
meals
Part 2:
Main body
(how to keep a healthy lifestyle)
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Write about lifestyle
Read and analyze(details)
Para1, 5
What’s a healthy lifestyle?
Tip 2: Your ending should be related to the beginning(首尾呼应).
It is important to have such a healthy lifestyle.
What else can you add to your ending?
advice?
feeling?
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Write about lifestyle
Read and analyze(details)
Para2-4
What I do + Why I do
Tip 3: Give reasons for your ideas.
Write about lifestyle
Read and analyze(details)
Find the words about time
Tip 4: Time words make your lifestyle more vivid(鲜活的).
Improve Amy’s writing --- Para 3
I often ... to keep fit
I do (some) exercise for an hour every day.
It’s important for me to ...... every day.
This helps me....
Improve Amy’s writing --- Para 4
To get enough sleep, I usually ......
I never / sometimes/ often stay up late at night.
Write an article about your lifestyle.
Write about lifestyle
Writing
Introduction
Comment
Main body
Show time
Write about lifestyle
Writing
Write about lifestyle
After Writing
问题 是 否 如果为“否”,如何改进?
你在短文中是否介绍了自己的生活方式?
你在短文的首段是否点明自己具体从哪几方面描述自己的生活方式?
你在每一段首句是否点明段落大意?
你在短文的尾段是否对文章进行了总结并写出自己的感想?
你在短文中是否提供了重要和充足的细节(比如原因)?
你的短文是否使用了恰当的句型和丰富的词语?
你的短文在拼写、语法和标点方面是否都正确?
Self-review
Write about lifestyle
After Writing
peer-review
评价指标 得分 评分标准
短文是否介绍了作者的生活方式? 5 = Excellent
4 = Good
3 = Acceptable
2 = Needs Improvement
短文是否有清晰的开头和结尾?
短文是否分段描述了作者在饮食、运动以及睡眠等不同方面的表现,并提出改进措施?
短文各段的细节是否充足?
短文是否使用了恰当的句型和丰富的词语?
短文在拼写、语法和标点方面是否都正确?
A life without health is like a river without water.
Write about lifestyle
Homework
For all:
For some:
1. Polish up your writing with the help of assessment.
1. Do a survey about the lifestyle of other students and do a report next class.
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