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期中复习之书面表达15篇 （福建专用） 单元题目 单元话题 Unit 1 The changing world 社会变迁，对比生活、交通、通讯的变化 Unit 2 Greener planet, better home 环境保护、低碳生活、共建绿色家园 Unit 3 Great ideas 伟大的思想与发明，认识发明以及它们带来的影响 1．假如你是李华，你的国际笔友Tom在给你的邮件中谈到，他对中国的发展变化很感兴趣。请你结合以下提示，用英语写一封邮件回复他，介绍你家乡过去和现在的变化及你的感受。不少于80词。 Great Changes in My Hometown The Past The Present Living conditions Small houses, crowded Modern apartments, convenient Transportation Slow, narrow High-speed trains, travel Environment Pollution, … Improve, greener, better My feelings Proud, hope, … 要求： 1．必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥; 2．意思清楚，表达通顺，书写规范; 3．文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等); 4．词数：不少于80词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数) Dear Tom, It’s great to hear that you’re interested in the development of China! I’m happy to share with you the changes in my hometown over the past few years. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．最近大同小区完成了旧社区升级改造，这个改造给小区居民的生活带来了很大的改变。假如你是李华，亲历了小区变化，请结合以下几个方面，以Changes in My community为题写一篇英语短文。写作提示： ●描述改造前后的变化 (如环境、设施等) 。 ●对比改造前后的生活体验 (如邻里关系、活动空间等) 。 ●表达你的感受 (是否满意) 写作要求： 1.文中必须包含所有的要点提示，可以适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80-100词左右。 (开头已给出，不计入总词数) 提示词：renovation (翻新) ，gray，broken，fitness equipment (健身器材) ，convenient，environment， Changes in My Community My community used to be noisy and crowded, but after the renovation, it became ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．世界日新月异，社会千变万化。你的生活发生了怎样的变化呢？你自己又有哪些变化? 你是如何看待这些变化的？学校英语俱乐部最近组织了一次题为“Changes in My Life”的主题演讲。你是俱乐部的成员李华，需要根据以下思维导图，结合自身经历写一篇不少于80词的演讲词。 Changes in My Life How has your life changed? How have you changed? What do you think of the changes? 注意事项: 1. 所写内容包含思维导图所有内容，可适当补充; 2. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Changes in My Life _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．升入初三，你自身以及你的身边都发生了许多变化。英语俱乐部正在开展以“Changes Around Me”为主题的征文活动，变化可涵盖学习（study）、环境（environment）、出行方式（transport）等方面。请你根据以下提示写一篇短文投稿。提示： 1. What changes have taken place around you? 你自身或者你的身边发生了哪些变化？ 2. How are the changes different from the past? 这些变化和过去相比有什么不同？ 3. What benefits do the changes bring to you? 这些变化给你带来了哪些好处？ 注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息。 This term, I’m in Grade 9. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．你校英文公众号正在开展以Changes in My Life为主题的征文活动。请你从以下提示信息中选择或自定两个方面，写一篇短文投稿。 In what aspects your life has changed: … ★How has your life changed in the past two years at junior high school? (past & present) ★How do you feel about these changes? ★What have you learned from these changes? 注意事项： 1. 应包含所有要点，可适当发挥，不少于80词； 2. 条理清晰，行文连贯，书写规范： 3. 文中不出现真实姓名和校名。 Changes in My Life __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．美丽福州，人人有责。英语周报社拟举办以“How to Make a Beautiful Fuzhou”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你结合以下提示，用英语写一篇征文稿，描述一下福州发展的现状和环境的改善，谈谈中学生该如何做一名环保人士守护我们美丽的家园。 要求： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 2. 不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 With the development of society, Fuzhou has become more and more beautiful. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．低碳生活，从我做起。为倡导同学们践行绿色低碳的生活方式，你校英语俱乐部决定向全体同学发出倡议。请你根据以下思维导图，以俱乐部的名义写一封英文倡议书。 写作要点： 参考词汇：low-carbon adj. 低碳的 要求： 1．必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2．要点齐全，行文连贯，语法正确； 3．文中不得出现真实校名、姓名 Dear schoolmates, Our school is building a green campus. To live a low-carbon life, we should _______________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The English Club 8．假如你是李华，你正在参与校报题为“Protect the Earth, Protect Ourselves”的征稿活动。请根据以下相关信息，就地球面临的某一个问题发表你的观点，完成稿件。词数80左右。 Problems □land pollution □air pollution □noise pollution □water waste □… Protect the Earth, Protect Ourselves * What problem do you want to talk about? * What causes the problem? * What can we do? Protect the Earth, Protect Ourselves Our Earth is facing serious problems now. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．近年来，我国全面展开蓝天、碧水、净土保卫战。环保意识在心中，实际行动在手中。为了号召同学们参与环保行动，学校将组织一次主题为“Let’s Go Green”的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英语演讲稿，内容包括： 1．根据所给信息，从reduce，reuse，recycle三个方面谈谈在校园里，你为环保做过哪些事情/日常的环保行为，并简述这么做的原因； 2．表达你对绿色生活的看法，呼吁大家共同行动，保护地球。 写作要求： 1．结构完整，语句通顺，逻辑连贯； 2．文中不得透露真实的个人信息，否则不予评分； 3．词数80-100个（短文首尾句已给出，不计入总词数）。 Let’s Go Green Hello, everyone. As we all know, our country is making great efforts to protect the environment. As a middle school student, I have been doing my part. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for listening! 10．假定你是某校学生李华，你校将在世界环境日组织一场以“Small Changes, Big Difference”为主题的活动。请你结合以下提示准备一份发言稿，分享你曾经做过的环保小改变和日常生活中的环保小妙招，并呼吁大家一起加入环保行动。词数80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．“苟日新，日日新，又日新”古有四大发明，今有科技创新，从造纸术、指南针到移动支付、高速铁路，以及生活中常见的篮球、电视、手表等，都给我们的生活带来了改变和便利，假设你学校正在举办科技节，请你以“My Favorite Invention”为题用英语写一则演讲稿，介绍你最喜欢的发明。 写作提示：1. What is your favorite invention? 2. What is it used for? 3. Why do you like it best? 写作要求：1.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称； 2.词数100左右。 My Favorite Invention ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．生活中，许多发明都在悄然改变着我们的生活。假如你是九年级学生张明，你校英语校刊将举办以“A Great Invention That Changed My Life”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下写作提示和要求写一篇短文参加活动，讲述一项改变了你生活的伟大发明。 写作提示： 1. What is this invention? 2. How does it change your life? 3. What do you think of this invention? 写作要求： 1.文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右。 A Great Invention That Changed My Life People have made many amazing inventions. The one that has brought a big change to my life is____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．科技发展让我们的生活日新月异。你校英文报正在举办以"Teens and inventions"为主题的征文比赛。假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示，选择一项你经常使用的发明进行介绍。 1.What invention do you most often use？ 2.What does the invention bring to you？ 3.What's your advice on making good use of it？ 注意： 1.根据以上提示，适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Technological inventions have changed our lives a lot. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．假如你是李华，你校英文报正举行主题为 “发明改变生活” 的征文比赛。请根据下面的海报，选择其中一项发明，简要介绍该项发明在你家庭中的使用情况，以及带来的影响。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。         Great inventions bring great changes to our lives. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．学校英语报正在征集稿件，主题是“How to Become an Inventor” (如何成为一名发明家)。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。要点提示： 1. 发现生活中的难题 (find problems in daily life)； 2. 把想法画在纸上，制定计划 (draw your ideas, make plans)； 3. 勇敢实施计划，遇到困难向他人求助 (carry out your plans, ask for help)。要求： 1. 词数80-120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。 Do you want to be an inventor? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 期中复习之书面表达15篇 （福建专用） 单元题目 单元话题 Unit 1 The changing world 社会变迁，对比生活、交通、通讯的变化 Unit 2 Greener planet, better home 环境保护、低碳生活、共建绿色家园 Unit 3 Great ideas 伟大的思想与发明，认识发明以及它们带来的影响 1．假如你是李华，你的国际笔友Tom在给你的邮件中谈到，他对中国的发展变化很感兴趣。请你结合以下提示，用英语写一封邮件回复他，介绍你家乡过去和现在的变化及你的感受。不少于80词。 Great Changes in My Hometown The Past The Present Living conditions Small houses, crowded Modern apartments, convenient Transportation Slow, narrow High-speed trains, travel Environment Pollution, … Improve, greener, better My feelings Proud, hope, … 要求： 1．必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥; 2．意思清楚，表达通顺，书写规范; 3．文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等); 4．词数：不少于80词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数) Dear Tom, It’s great to hear that you’re interested in the development of China! I’m happy to share with you the changes in my hometown over the past few years. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： Dear Tom, It’s great to hear that you’re interested in the development of China! I’m happy to share with you the changes in my hometown over the past few years. In the past, people lived in small and crowded houses, and life was not very convenient. The roads were slow and narrow. What’s worse, the environment was badly polluted. However, great changes have taken place in recent years. Now most families live in modern apartments, and life is much more convenient. High-speed trains make it easy and fast for us to travel. Besides, the environment has improved a lot—the sky is bluer, the water is cleaner, and my hometown is greener and more beautiful than before. I’m proud of these changes, and I hope my hometown will become better and better. I also hope you can come and visit it one day! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：英文邮件，以一般过去时、一般现在时和现在完成时为主 明确要点：家乡过去的居住条件、交通、环境，家乡现在的居住条件、交通、环境，个人感受 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名、校名和地名等个人真实信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接邮件开头，引出家乡变化的主题 主体段：先介绍家乡过去的状况，再对比描述当下的全新面貌 结尾段：表达个人的骄傲与期许，向笔友发出到访邀请 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：过去的家乡 居住条件：small and crowded houses/old and dark houses, shared small rooms等 交通状况：roads were slow and narrow/no public buses, people went out on foot or by bike等 环境情况：badly polluted/rivers were dirty, there was much waste everywhere等 要点二：现在的家乡 居住条件：modern apartments, life is much more convenient/bright and large houses, people have their own personal space等 交通状况：high-speed trains make it easy and fast to travel/wide roads, shared bikes and subways are everywhere等 环境情况：environment has improved a lot, greener and more beautiful/more trees and parks, fresh clean air等 要点三：个人感受 情绪表达：proud of these changes/feel happy and satisfied, excited about the development等 期许内容：hope my hometown will become better and better/hope we can build a more lovely hometown, invite friends to come for a visit等 2．最近大同小区完成了旧社区升级改造，这个改造给小区居民的生活带来了很大的改变。假如你是李华，亲历了小区变化，请结合以下几个方面，以Changes in My community为题写一篇英语短文。写作提示： ●描述改造前后的变化 (如环境、设施等) 。 ●对比改造前后的生活体验 (如邻里关系、活动空间等) 。 ●表达你的感受 (是否满意) 写作要求： 1.文中必须包含所有的要点提示，可以适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80-100词左右。 (开头已给出，不计入总词数) 提示词：renovation (翻新) ，gray，broken，fitness equipment (健身器材) ，convenient，environment， Changes in My Community My community used to be noisy and crowded, but after the renovation, it became ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： Changes in My Community     My community used to be noisy and crowded, but after the renovation, it became quiet and beautiful. The gray walls were painted brightly, and the broken roads were fixed. Also, more trees and flowers were planted. Now, there is new fitness equipment in the garden for us to use.      In the past, people rarely talked with each other. However, now neighbors often chat and exercise together in the square. The environment is much cleaner and life is more convenient.      I feel very satisfied with these changes. Living here makes me happy and proud. It is a wonderful place to live. I really love my new community. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，时态以一般过去时、一般现在时为主 明确要点：①改造前后小区环境、设施的变化；②改造前后邻里关系、活动空间等生活体验对比；③表达个人感受，说明是否满意 确定人称：第一人称（I） 注意事项：词数 80–100 词左右，开头已给出，必须包含所有提示信息并适当发挥，文中不得出现真实人名和校名 [第二步：构思布局] 按 “三段式” 梳理结构： 开头段：引出小区翻新，介绍环境与基础设施的前后变化； 主体段：对比改造前后邻里交往情况、公共活动空间带来的生活体验变化； 结尾段：表达自己对小区改造的满意感受，抒发内心的喜悦。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：改造前后环境、设施变化 变化：gray walls, broken roads, plant more trees and flowers, new fitness equipment, old dark walls, worn paths, add more plants, new sports facilities...等 要点二：邻里关系、生活体验对比 对比：rarely talked with each other, chat and exercise together, cleaner environment, more convenient, seldom communicated, talk and do sports together, tidier surroundings, easier for daily life...等 要点三：个人感受 感受：feel satisfied with these changes, happy and proud, a wonderful place to live, love my new community, be pleased with the improvements, glad and proud, a great place to stay, enjoy living in the community...等 3．世界日新月异，社会千变万化。你的生活发生了怎样的变化呢？你自己又有哪些变化? 你是如何看待这些变化的？学校英语俱乐部最近组织了一次题为“Changes in My Life”的主题演讲。你是俱乐部的成员李华，需要根据以下思维导图，结合自身经历写一篇不少于80词的演讲词。 Changes in My Life How has your life changed? How have you changed? What do you think of the changes? 注意事项: 1. 所写内容包含思维导图所有内容，可适当补充; 2. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Changes in My Life _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Changes in My Life Hello everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s my honor to speak here. Great changes have taken place in my life. In the past, I spent much time playing games. Now, I enjoy reading and doing sports. My life is healthier than before. Also, technology makes learning easier. We can study online at home. As for me, I have become more independent and hard-working. I think these changes are wonderful. They help me become a better person. I will keep working hard to embrace the future. Thank you for listening! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文（英语演讲稿） 明确要点：生活发生的变化、自身发生的变化、对这些变化的看法，可适当补充内容 确定人称：第一人称（I） 注意事项：不少于80词；包含思维导图全部要点；文中不能出现真实姓名、校名、地名 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：问候听众，自我介绍，引出本次演讲主题Changes in My Life 主体段：先介绍生活上发生的变化，再介绍个人自身的变化 结尾段：表达对变化的看法，抒发感悟，礼貌收尾致谢 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：演讲开篇引入 句子：Hello everyone, I’m Li Hua. It’s my honor to speak here. Great changes have taken place in my life./Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. I’m glad to give a speech about the changes in my life. 要点二：生活方面的变化 句子：In the past, I spent much time playing games. Now, I enjoy reading and doing sports. My life is healthier than before./I used to spend lots of time on games, but now I love reading and exercise, so my lifestyle becomes much healthier. 要点三：生活变化补充 句子：Also, technology makes learning easier. We can study online at home./Besides, new technology helps us learn better. We are able to take online lessons at home. 要点四：自身个人的变化 句子：As for me, I have become more independent and hard-working./For myself, I’m more hard-working and I can do many things on my own now. 要点五：对变化的看法 句子：I think these changes are wonderful. They help me become a better person. I will keep working hard to embrace the future./I believe these changes are good for me. They make me improve a lot and I will keep moving forward. 要点六：演讲结尾致谢 句子：Thank you for listening!/Thanks a lot for your listening. 4．升入初三，你自身以及你的身边都发生了许多变化。英语俱乐部正在开展以“Changes Around Me”为主题的征文活动，变化可涵盖学习（study）、环境（environment）、出行方式（transport）等方面。请你根据以下提示写一篇短文投稿。提示： 1. What changes have taken place around you? 你自身或者你的身边发生了哪些变化？ 2. How are the changes different from the past? 这些变化和过去相比有什么不同？ 3. What benefits do the changes bring to you? 这些变化给你带来了哪些好处？ 注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息。 This term, I’m in Grade 9. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 This term, I’m in Grade 9. Great changes have taken place around me. In the past, I spent little time on study and often played games. But now I study much harder because I want to enter a good high school. My school environment has also changed. There are more books in the library and more trees on campus. For transport, I used to go to school by car, but now I ride a bike. It is greener and healthier.   These changes bring me many benefits. I have become more independent and healthier. I also do better in my studies. I believe these changes will help me grow into a better person. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文/对比类文章，综合运用一般过去时和一般现在时 明确要点：身边发生的变化、变化与过去的不同、变化带来的好处 确定人称：第一人称（I/my）为主 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，需涵盖所有提示要点 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出身边的变化 主体段：从学习、环境、出行方式等方面对比过去与现在的不同 结尾段：说明变化带来的好处 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：学习方面的变化 过去情况：spent little time on study / played games / didn’t focus on lessons等 现在情况：study much harder / want to enter a good high school / work harder than before等 对比表达：In the past...but now... / used to...but now... / have changed a lot等 要点二：环境方面的变化 学校环境：more books in the library / more trees on campus / a cleaner playground等 其他环境：cleaner streets / more parks / fresher air等 对比表达：has also changed / There are more... / It is much better than before等 要点三：出行方式的变化 过去方式：used to go to school by car / by bus / on foot等 现在方式：ride a bike / walk to school / take the subway等 好处表达：greener and healthier / save money / protect the environment等 要点四：变化带来的好处 个人成长：become more independent / become healthier / learn to manage myself better / grow stronger等 学习进步：do better in my studies / make great progress / get higher grades / improve my learning skills等 未来展望：help me grow into a better person / prepare me for the future / make me more confident / lead me to a brighter future等 5．你校英文公众号正在开展以Changes in My Life为主题的征文活动。请你从以下提示信息中选择或自定两个方面，写一篇短文投稿。 In what aspects your life has changed: … ★How has your life changed in the past two years at junior high school? (past & present) ★How do you feel about these changes? ★What have you learned from these changes? 注意事项： 1. 应包含所有要点，可适当发挥，不少于80词； 2. 条理清晰，行文连贯，书写规范： 3. 文中不出现真实姓名和校名。 Changes in My Life __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： Changes in My Life    How time flies! I have been a junior high school student for two years and great changes have taken place in my life..     In the past, I used to depend on my teachers and parents. Now I can study independently. I make study plans and work out problems on my own. Besides, I used to take the bus to school, but now I ride a bike. It is good for both my health and the environment.     I am happy and proud of these changes. I realize change is part of life. If we face it bravely, we will keep improving. 【详解】写作步骤： 【第一步：审题立意】 确定文体：记叙文（征文），主要使用一般过去时、一般现在时 明确要点： ①初中两年生活发生了哪些变化（过去&现在对比，自选两个方面：study、transport） ②对这些变化的感受 ③从变化中学到了什么 确定人称：第一人称（I / my） 注意事项：词数不少于80词；行文连贯；文中不能出现真实姓名、校名 【第二步：构思布局】 三段式结构 开头段：总起，引出话题——时光飞逝，初中两年我的生活发生很大变化 主体段：分两点对比学习习惯、出行方式的过去与现在 结尾段：表达感受，升华主题，写出收获 【第三步：要点展开】 要点一：学习方面（study） 过去：used to depend on teachers and parents/rely on/wait for others’ help/lack self-management等 现在：study independently/make study plans/work out problems on my own/develop self-discipline/take notes carefully/review lessons in time等 作用效果：improve my learning skills/become more self-directed等 要点二：出行方式（transport） 过去：used to take the bus to school/wait for the bus/waste much time等 现在：ride a bike to school/go to school by bike/take exercise/cut down pollution/protect the environment等 作用效果：keep healthy/be eco-friendly/save time等 要点三：个人感受 proud/pleased/satisfied等 要点四：收获与感悟 face difficulties bravely/make progress/keep improving/accept changes等 6．美丽福州，人人有责。英语周报社拟举办以“How to Make a Beautiful Fuzhou”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你结合以下提示，用英语写一篇征文稿，描述一下福州发展的现状和环境的改善，谈谈中学生该如何做一名环保人士守护我们美丽的家园。 要求： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 2. 不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 With the development of society, Fuzhou has become more and more beautiful. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 参考范文 With the development of society, Fuzhou has become more and more beautiful. Great changes have taken place in our city. The roads are wider than before and there are more trees. The environment has improved a lot. As students, we should try our best to be a greener person. At home, we can take showers instead of taking a bath. We can also walk or ride a bike for short trips. At school, we should use both sides of paper. What’s more, we must remember to turn off the lights when we leave the classroom. These small actions can make a big difference. It’s our duty to protect the environment. Let’s take action right now to make Fuzhou a more beautiful city! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：描述福州的发展现状和环境的改善；谈谈中学生该如何做一名环保人士；发出呼吁，号召大家共同守护美丽家园 确定人称：第一人称（we） 注意事项：不得在文中使用真实的姓名和校名 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构 开头段：开篇点题，承接给出的开头，描述福州道路变宽、树木增多、环境改善等巨大变化。 主体段：结合生活实际，分别从“在家里”（淋浴代替盆浴、步行或骑车）和“在学校”（纸张双面使用、离开时关灯）两个方面，阐述中学生应如何践行环保。 结尾段： 总结全文，发出呼吁，强调保护环境是每个人的责任，号召大家采取行动。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：福州的发展与变化 变化：the roads are wider than before/there are more trees around/the environment has improved a lot/more parks have been built/the air is fresher than before等 要点二：如何做环保人士 在家：take showers instead of taking a bath/walk or ride a bike instead of taking cars/turn off the tap when brushing teeth/save water and electricity等 在学校：use both sides of paper/turn off the lights when we leave the classroom/shut off taps in time to save water/collect waste paper for recycling等 要点三：结尾呼吁 呼吁：It’s our duty to protect the environment /Let’s work together to create a greener and more charming Fuzhou/Everyone should play a part in protecting our beautiful home等 7．低碳生活，从我做起。为倡导同学们践行绿色低碳的生活方式，你校英语俱乐部决定向全体同学发出倡议。请你根据以下思维导图，以俱乐部的名义写一封英文倡议书。 写作要点： 参考词汇：low-carbon adj. 低碳的 要求： 1．必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2．要点齐全，行文连贯，语法正确； 3．文中不得出现真实校名、姓名 Dear schoolmates, Our school is building a green campus. To live a low-carbon life, we should _______________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The English Club 【答案】范文参考 Dear schoolmates, Our school is building a green campus. To live a low-carbon life, we should do something to protect the environment. Now I’d like to give some practical suggestions. First, we should remember to turn off the lights as soon as we leave classrooms or bedrooms. Saving electricity is a simple way to cut down waste. Second, we can choose green traveling. Instead of asking parents to drive us to school, we may walk or ride bikes. It is good for both the environment and our health. Third, we need to follow the three Rs: reduce, reuse and recycle. We can use reusable bottles instead of plastic ones and sort rubbish properly. Small actions can make a big difference. I call on all students to take action right now. Let’s work together to live a low-carbon life. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：倡议书，时态以一般现在时为主 明确要点：倡导低碳生活、给出低碳建议、号召全体同学行动 确定人称：第一人称 (we) 注意事项：必须包含思维导图所有要点，可适当发挥；文中不得出现真实校名和人名 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：使用给出开头句，点明低碳生活能够保护环境，引出下文建议 主体段：列举多条低碳生活建议：随手关灯、绿色出行、践行 3R 原则 (reduce，reuse，recycle) 结尾段：说明微小行动也会产生巨大影响，号召同学们立刻行动，共同践行低碳生活 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：低碳生活的目的 核心表达：live a low-carbon life；protect the environment 连接词：To live a low-carbon life,... 要点二：给出低碳建议 1. 随手关灯：remember to turn off the lights；save electricity；cut down waste 连接词：First 2. 绿色出行：choose green traveling；ride bikes /walk to school；instead of driving 连接词：Second 3. 遵循 3R 原则：follow the three Rs: reduce, reuse and recycle；use reusable bottles；sort rubbish properly 连接词：Third 要点三：号召同学们行动 核心表达：Small actions can make a big difference；call on sb. to do sth.；take action；work together 连接词：In a word / Finally 8．假如你是李华，你正在参与校报题为“Protect the Earth, Protect Ourselves”的征稿活动。请根据以下相关信息，就地球面临的某一个问题发表你的观点，完成稿件。词数80左右。 Problems □land pollution □air pollution □noise pollution □water waste □… Protect the Earth, Protect Ourselves * What problem do you want to talk about? * What causes the problem? * What can we do? Protect the Earth, Protect Ourselves Our Earth is facing serious problems now. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Protect the Earth, Protect Ourselves Our Earth is facing serious problems now. I want to talk about water waste.   Water is very important to all living things. However, many people waste water every day. They leave the tap running while brushing their teeth, and some factories pour dirty water into rivers.   To solve this problem, we should save water in our daily lives. We can turn off the tap when not using it and take shorter showers. We should also tell others to protect water. Every drop counts. Let’s work together to protect our Earth! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：想谈论的问题、问题的原因、我们可以做什么 确定人称：第一人称复数（we/us）为主 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，需涵盖所有要点 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出地球面临的问题 主体段：说明问题的原因 结尾段：提出解决措施，发出号召 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：问题描述 问题选择：water waste/air pollution/land pollution/noise pollution等 问题现状：serious problems/water is wasted every day/rivers are polluted等 表达方式：I want to talk about.../The problem is...等 要点二：问题原因 原因一：leave the tap running while brushing teeth/waste water in daily life等 原因二：factories pour dirty water into rivers/pollute water sources等 其他原因：throw rubbish into rivers/not fix leaking taps等 要点三：解决措施 日常做法：turn off the tap when not using/take shorter showers等 宣传呼吁：tell others to protect water/share tips with friends等 其他措施：reuse water/collect rainwater等 要点四：总结号召 号召表达：Every drop counts./Let’s work together.等 愿景表达：protect our Earth/make a better future等 9．近年来，我国全面展开蓝天、碧水、净土保卫战。环保意识在心中，实际行动在手中。为了号召同学们参与环保行动，学校将组织一次主题为“Let’s Go Green”的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英语演讲稿，内容包括： 1．根据所给信息，从reduce，reuse，recycle三个方面谈谈在校园里，你为环保做过哪些事情/日常的环保行为，并简述这么做的原因； 2．表达你对绿色生活的看法，呼吁大家共同行动，保护地球。 写作要求： 1．结构完整，语句通顺，逻辑连贯； 2．文中不得透露真实的个人信息，否则不予评分； 3．词数80-100个（短文首尾句已给出，不计入总词数）。 Let’s Go Green Hello, everyone. As we all know, our country is making great efforts to protect the environment. As a middle school student, I have been doing my part. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for listening! 【答案】 例文 Let’s Go Green Hello, everyone. As we all know, our country is making great efforts to protect the environment. As a middle school student, I have been doing my part. In my school life, I follow the “3Rs” rule. First, to reduce waste, I always remember to turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Second, instead of throwing away old books, I choose to donate them to younger students so that they can be reused. Third, I often collect plastic bottles and waste paper to recycle them. By doing these, we can save natural resources and reduce pollution. In my opinion, living a green life is not only a duty but also a way to build a better future. Let’s take action together to protect our earth! That’s all. Thanks for listening! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：英语演讲稿，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：从reduce、reuse、recycle三方面介绍校园环保行动+原因；表达绿色生活看法，呼吁大家保护地球 确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：词数80—100词；首尾句已给出不计入词数；不透露真实个人信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：题目已给出开篇句子，引入话题 主体段：分3R（reduce/reuse/recycle）介绍校园环保行为+说明意义 结尾段：阐述对绿色生活的观点，发出环保呼吁（结尾句已给出） [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：Reduce（减少浪费） remember to turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom/cut down waste/save electricity等 要点二：Reuse（重复利用） instead of throwing away old books, I choose to donate them to younger students so that they can be reused/reuse paper/use reusable bags等 要点三：Recycle（回收利用） collect plastic bottles and waste paper to recycle them/sort rubbish/recycle waste materials等 要点四：环保意义与观点呼吁 save natural resources and reduce pollution/living a green life is not only a duty but also a way to build a better future./Let’s take action together to protect our earth!/protect our environment/make our planet greener等 10．假定你是某校学生李华，你校将在世界环境日组织一场以“Small Changes, Big Difference”为主题的活动。请你结合以下提示准备一份发言稿，分享你曾经做过的环保小改变和日常生活中的环保小妙招，并呼吁大家一起加入环保行动。词数80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】     Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. Today I’d like to talk about “Small Changes, Big Difference”.     I used to waste water and use plastic bags. But now, I have made some changes. Here are some tips for our daily life. First, we should reuse bags when shopping. Second, remember to shut off the lights when leaving a room. Third, it is important to save water.     I hope everyone can make efforts to protect our earth. Even small changes can make a big difference.     Thank you! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：发言稿，以一般过去时和一般现在时为主 明确要点：自身过去的环保陋习、日常环保小妙招、呼吁大家保护环境 确定人称：第一人称(I/we) 注意事项：词数80左右，语言口语化，符合发言稿格式，不得透露真实个人信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：问候，点明本次发言主题Small Changes, Big Difference 主体段：介绍自己过去的习惯，列出几条日常生活环保小妙招 结尾段：表达期望，呼吁大家行动，点明主旨，致谢 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：个人环保改变 过去习惯：waste water/use plastic bags/throw rubbish casually/waste electricity等 现在转变：make some changes/reuse bags/save water/turn off lights/develop green habits/live a low‑carbon life等 要点二：环保小妙招 购物：reuse bags/avoid plastic bags/use cloth bags/reduce waste等 用电：shut off the lights/turn off electric devices/save energy/power off unused machines等 用水：save water/reuse water/collect rainwater/turn off taps in time等 要点三：呼吁与希望 行动号召：make efforts to protect our earth/join in environmental protection/take action/do our part等 主旨升华：small changes/make a big difference/protect the environment/keep the world clean等 11．“苟日新，日日新，又日新”古有四大发明，今有科技创新，从造纸术、指南针到移动支付、高速铁路，以及生活中常见的篮球、电视、手表等，都给我们的生活带来了改变和便利，假设你学校正在举办科技节，请你以“My Favorite Invention”为题用英语写一则演讲稿，介绍你最喜欢的发明。 写作提示：1. What is your favorite invention? 2. What is it used for? 3. Why do you like it best? 写作要求：1.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称； 2.词数100左右。 My Favorite Invention ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Favorite Invention Good morning, everyone! My favorite invention is the smartphone. It is used for many things—making calls, taking photos, navigating, and searching for information. During the pandemic, it even helped me take online classes. Why do I like it best? First, it connects me with my family and friends anytime, anywhere. Second, it gives me quick access to knowledge, helping me learn new things every day. As the saying goes, “Renew yourself daily.” The smartphone truly makes that possible. Inventions like this show us that human creativity is powerful. I hope one day I can create something useful too! Thank you! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：演讲稿，以一般现在时为主，需包含问候语和结束语 明确要点：最喜欢的发明（是什么）、用途（用于什么）、喜爱原因（为什么） 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称；词数100左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：问候语，点明最喜欢的发明 主体段：介绍发明的用途及喜爱的原因（分点阐述） 结尾段：总结感想，表达愿望，致谢 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：最喜欢的发明 发明选择：smartphone/computer/television/paper/compass/watch/basketball/mobile payment/high-speed railway等 要点二：用途描述 功能列举：making calls, taking photos, navigating, searching for information, taking online classes/watching videos/sending messages/telling time/playing sports/traveling fast/paying for goods等 要点三：喜爱原因 原因分层：connects me with family and friends/gives me quick access to knowledge/helps me learn new things every day/makes life convenient/saves time/brings fun/opens up the world/improves efficiency等 引用名句：As the saying goes, “Renew yourself daily.”/“Necessity is the mother of invention.”等 结尾升华：human creativity is powerful/hope one day I can create something useful/inventions change the world/technology makes a better life等 12．生活中，许多发明都在悄然改变着我们的生活。假如你是九年级学生张明，你校英语校刊将举办以“A Great Invention That Changed My Life”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下写作提示和要求写一篇短文参加活动，讲述一项改变了你生活的伟大发明。 写作提示： 1. What is this invention? 2. How does it change your life? 3. What do you think of this invention? 写作要求： 1.文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右。 A Great Invention That Changed My Life People have made many amazing inventions. The one that has brought a big change to my life is____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Great Invention That Changed My Life People have made many amazing inventions. The one that has brought a big change to my life is the Internet. The Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. It is useful to me in many ways. First of all, it can help me with my homework. I can find almost everything I need online. Secondly, it can make my life much easier. For example, I can shop and chat online. Finally, it can help me keep in touch with my friends. Through the Internet, I can make friends with people from all over the world. The Internet makes my life more colorful and convenient. I’m sure it will bring even more changes to my life in the future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍类说明文，时态以一般现在时为主 明确要点：一项改变生活的伟大发明；它是如何改变生活的；对该发明的看法 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；词数100左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接给定开头，直接点明改变生活的伟大发明是什么 主体段：具体阐述该发明是如何改变生活的 结尾段：总结对该发明的看法 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：改变生活的伟大发明 发明选择：the Internet/smartphone/computer/high-speed train等 要点二：发明如何改变生活 学习用途：help me with my homework/help me learn English online every day/search for useful information等 生活便利：make my life much easier/shop and chat online/connect me with the world/help me keep in touch with my friends等 放松娱乐：listen to music to relax/bring me a lot of fun in my free time/watch movies to relax等 要点三：对该发明的看法 评价与建议：make my life more colorful and convenient/a useful tool/use it wisely/shouldn’t spend too much time on it等 13．科技发展让我们的生活日新月异。你校英文报正在举办以"Teens and inventions"为主题的征文比赛。假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示，选择一项你经常使用的发明进行介绍。 1.What invention do you most often use？ 2.What does the invention bring to you？ 3.What's your advice on making good use of it？ 注意： 1.根据以上提示，适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Technological inventions have changed our lives a lot. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： Technological inventions have changed our lives a lot. Among all the inventions, the one I use most often is the smartphone. It has become an important part of my daily life. The smartphone brings me great convenience. It allows me to search for useful learning materials easily and communicate with teachers and friends anytime. Besides, I can listen to music to relax.   However, we should make good use of it. We’d better set a time limit instead of playing mobile games all day. In this way, it can truly serve our study and life. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，主要使用一般现在时 明确要点：选择并介绍一项常用的发明（如智能手机）、阐述该发明带来的便利与益处、提出合理使用该发明的建议 确定人称：第一人称（I/my/we/our） 注意事项：全面涵盖提示中的3个问题；词数80左右；文中不得出现真实姓名和校名 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接已给出的总起句，点明自己最常用的科技发明是智能手机，并概括其重要性（问题①） 主体段：详细阐述这项发明在查阅学习资料、日常人际沟通及放松身心等方面带来的巨大便利（问题②） 结尾段：提出合理利用发明的具体建议，强调设定时间限制、避免沉迷游戏，让科技真正服务于学习与生活（问题③） [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：最常使用的发明 发明选择：the smartphone/the computer/an e-dictionary/the smart watch/the tablet等 地位引入：the one I use most often is the smartphone/become an important part of my daily life/play an important role in my life等 要点二：发明带来的益处 学习与沟通：brings me great convenience/search for useful learning materials easily/communicate with teachers and friends anytime/look up new words/have online classes等 休闲与放松：listen to music to relax/broaden my horizons/watch educational videos等 要点三：合理使用的建议 时间管理：make good use of it/set a time limit/we’d better not spend too much time on it/protect our eyesight等 正确用途：instead of playing mobile games all day/truly serve our study and life/focus on study rather than games/use it properly等 14．假如你是李华，你校英文报正举行主题为 “发明改变生活” 的征文比赛。请根据下面的海报，选择其中一项发明，简要介绍该项发明在你家庭中的使用情况，以及带来的影响。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。         Great inventions bring great changes to our lives. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Great inventions bring great changes to our lives. The smartphone is one of them. In my family, everyone has a smartphone and we use it every day. My parents check the news on it. They can get information quickly. I often use it to listen to English and talk with my friends. During family trips, we can use the phone to take photos and find directions easily. And we can also go shopping online through the phone. It helps us learn, relax, and stay close to each other. Truly, it makes our life more convenient and colourful. 【详解】写作步骤    [第一步：审题立意]    确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：介绍一项发明（智能手机）、这项发明在家庭中的使用情况、这项发明给家庭生活带来的影响。 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名、校名和地名 [第二步：构思布局]    三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，点明发明改变生活，引出介绍的发明 主体段：介绍智能手机在家庭里的日常使用情况 结尾段：总结智能手机带来的影响，升华主题    [第三步：要点展开]    要点一：介绍一项发明（智能手机） 引出发明：The smartphone is one of them/The smartphone changes our daily life/The smartphone is a great invention等 家庭使用概况：In my family, everyone has a smartphone and we use it every day/All my family members use the smartphone every day/We have our own smartphones at home等 要点二：这项发明在家庭中的使用情况 父母的使用：My parents check the news on it/They can get information quickly/My parents watch short videos on it/My parents search useful information on it等 我的使用：I often use it to listen to English and talk with my friends/I use it to practise my spoken English/I chat with my classmates on it等 全家外出时的使用：During family trips, we can use the phone to take photos and find directions easily/We use it to look for interesting places on trips/We record wonderful moments on our family trips等 线上使用：And we can also go shopping online through the phone/We buy daily goods on it/We pay for things on the Internet with it等    要点三：这项发明给家庭生活带来的影响 带来的帮助：It helps us learn, relax, and stay close to each other/It helps us communicate with each other better/It makes our study much easier等 总体作用：Truly, it makes our life more convenient and colourful/It brings great fun to our family life/It makes our daily life much simpler等 15．学校英语报正在征集稿件，主题是“How to Become an Inventor” (如何成为一名发明家)。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。要点提示： 1. 发现生活中的难题 (find problems in daily life)； 2. 把想法画在纸上，制定计划 (draw your ideas, make plans)； 3. 勇敢实施计划，遇到困难向他人求助 (carry out your plans, ask for help)。要求： 1. 词数80-120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。 Do you want to be an inventor? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to Become an Inventor Do you want to be an inventor? Many useful inventions are created to solve daily problems. Here I will give you some useful advice. First of all, you should find problems in your daily life. Those problems can bring you new ideas. Next, draw your ideas on paper and make clear plans. You can widen your mind by searching for information online. And then, carry out your plans bravely. If similar inventions were made before, you can make new improvements. When troubles darken your way, remember to ask teachers and friends for help. I believe if you stick to your ideas and never give up, you will create your own great inventions one day. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文（征文），以一般现在时为主 明确要点：成为发明家的几条建议；表达坚持就能成功的观点 确定人称：第二人称 (you/your) 为主，第一人称 (I/my) 辅助 注意事项：条理清晰，使用合适的顺序词分层介绍建议，不透露真实个人信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：设问引出话题，总起，说明本文要给出成为发明家的建议 主体段：用顺序词逐条介绍成为发明家的方法 结尾段：总结观点，表达对读者的鼓励与展望 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：发现生活中的问题 写作思路：观察日常生活，生活难题可以激发发明想法 可用表达：find problems in daily life/bring new ideas/observe carefully in everyday life/get new ideas from daily life等 要点二：构思方案、查阅资料 写作思路：画出想法，制定计划；上网查阅资料拓宽思路 可用表达：draw ideas on paper/make clear plans/search for information online/widen your mind/write down ideas on paper/make a plan carefully/get information online等 要点三：动手实践，改进创新，遇到困难寻求帮助 写作思路：勇敢执行计划；参考已有发明并改进；遇到难题向他人求助 可用表达：carry out plans/make new improvements/ask teachers and friends for help/try to make your plans be carried out/make something new to improve the inventions in our life/ask friends and teachers for advice等 要点四：结尾升华 写作思路：坚持想法、永不放弃，终会做出发明 可用表达：stick to your ideas/never give up/create great inventions/continue to try something new/keep on trying after you failed/make it in the end等 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $