Unit5作文讲义 2026-2027学年译林版九年级英语上册

9A Unit 5 Music speaks 作文讲义 一、话题解读 1.核心话题：介绍自己喜爱的音乐风格，结合音乐特点、常见乐器、音乐家或作品，说明喜欢的理由及音乐对自己的影响。 2.写作要求：① 能介绍音乐风格、特点、乐器、音乐家或作品； ② 恰当使用because、since、as或for说明原因； ③ 结合具体经历和感受，写清音乐如何影响自己； ④ 词数90-120，以具体题目要求为准。 3.中考定位：本话题可迁移为“我喜爱的音乐”“音乐与成长”“一次音乐活动”等写作。重点是介绍清楚、理由具体、感受自然。 二、写作任务 本单元的主要写作任务是介绍自己喜爱的音乐风格。可以参考教材中Sandy介绍古典音乐的文章，按“风格与理由—特点及作品—个人感受”组织内容，并迁移练习音乐会邀请信。 三、审题指导 先确定要介绍哪种音乐，再选取与其相符的特点、乐器及作品。喜欢的理由应结合自己的经历或感受说明，可以按以下问题列出要点： What style of music do you like best?（你最喜欢哪种音乐风格？） What do you like about this style?（你喜欢这种音乐的什么特点？） What instruments are common in this style?（这种音乐常用哪些乐器？） What makes this style special?（这种音乐有什么特别之处？） What musicians are famous for this style?（这一风格有哪些著名音乐家？） What are your favourite pieces of music?（你最喜欢哪些音乐作品？） 四、写作步骤 ◆ 步骤一：开头点明最喜欢的音乐风格，简要说明喜欢的理由。 ◆ 步骤二：介绍特点、乐器、音乐家或代表作品，并补充个人经历与感受。 ◆ 步骤三：结尾总结音乐对自己的影响，表达喜爱、希望或推荐。 五、写作框架 写作部分 核心内容 推荐时态 连接词/过渡语 开头（总起） 点明音乐风格，概括喜欢的理由 一般现在时 My favourite style of music is..., I love this style because... I first fell in love with it when... 中间（分述） 描述特点、常见乐器、音乐家或作品，加入具体经历 一般现在时 一般过去时 Common instruments include..., For example..., Besides..., Since/As..., I... 结尾（总结） 总结音乐带来的感受、收获或影响，表达希望或推荐 一般现在时 一般将来时 For me, music is..., It fills my heart with..., I hope more people will... 六、素材宝库 1.词汇积累 音乐风格类 乐器与作品类 特点与感受类 理由与过渡语 classical music 古典音乐 piano 钢琴 gentle 柔和的 because 因为 folk music 民间音乐 violin 小提琴 powerful 有力量的 since 因为 既然 country music 乡村音乐 flute 长笛 lively 欢快的 as 因为 jazz 爵士乐 guitar 吉他 relaxing 令人放松的 for 因为 rock 摇滚乐 drum 鼓 relaxed 放松的 besides 此外 electronic music 电子音乐 piece 乐曲 exciting 令人兴奋的 what's more 而且 style 风格 composer 作曲家 peaceful 平静的 for example 例如 concert 音乐会 melody 旋律 moving 动人的 for me 对我而言 2. 句型积累 1. My favourite style of music is ... . 我最喜欢的音乐风格是……。 2. I love this style because ... . 我喜欢这种音乐风格，因为……。 3. Common instruments in this style include ... . 这种音乐常用的乐器有……。 4. One of my favourite pieces of music is ... . 我最喜欢的音乐作品之一是……。 5. This music always makes me feel ... . 这种音乐总是让我感到……。 6. I first fell in love with it when ... . 我第一次爱上这种音乐是在……时。 7. Since/As ..., I ... . 因为……，所以我……。 8. Music is important to me, for it fills my heart with joy. 音乐对我很重要，因为它使我的心充满快乐。 表达要点：不要把because与so重复用于同一组因果分句；for补充说明理由时，前面通常用逗号，后面接完整句子。 3. 写作模板 音乐风格介绍模板 My favourite style of music is [音乐风格]. I love it because [喜欢的理由]. I first became interested in it when [相关经历]. Common instruments in this style include [乐器]. The music is [特点1] and [特点2]. My favourite musician is [音乐家]. One of my favourite pieces is [作品], because [具体理由或感受]. For me, this music is [个人评价]. Since/As [个人处境或需要], I often [听音乐的情境]. It helps me [带来的影响]. I hope [愿望]. 音乐会邀请信模板 Dear [收信人姓名], Would you like to join me at [音乐活动] on [日期]? The concert starts at [时间] in/at [地点]. We will enjoy [音乐风格或作品]. I think you will like it because [喜欢的理由]. Since/As [对方的兴趣或需要], this will be a good chance to [活动意义]. Shall we meet at [见面地点] at [见面时间]? Please let me know if you can come. I am looking forward to enjoying the music with you. Yours, [你的姓名] 七、参考范文 1.音乐风格介绍 My favourite style of music My favourite style of music is classical music. I love it because it is beautiful and usually makes me feel relaxed. Common instruments in classical music include the piano, violin and flute. Their different sounds work together to create wonderful music. I first became interested in this style when I watched a school concert. My favourite composers are Beethoven and Mozart. I especially enjoy Mozart's The Magic Flute because its songs are full of energy and imagination. As school life can be busy and stressful, I often listen to classical music after finishing my homework. For me, it is a good friend that brings peace and joy. 2.歌曲欣赏 My favourite piece of music My favourite piece of music is "Jasmine Flower", a traditional Chinese folk song. I first heard it at our school music festival and loved it at once. The melody is gentle and beautiful. It reminds me of a peaceful garden and helps me forget my worries for a while. Since it has strong local colour, I also feel closer to Chinese culture when I listen to it. Sometimes I sing it with my friends after class. For me, music is more than a way to relax. It can connect people and carry the beauty of a culture. I hope more people around the world will enjoy this lovely song. 3.变式训练题目 假如你是李华，请给朋友Mike写一封邀请信，请他参加本周六的校园音乐节。要点：下午3点在学校礼堂开始；欣赏中国传统民间音乐，如“Jasmine Flower”；说明参加的理由；约定下午2点40分在校门口见面。 要求：要点齐全，语言连贯；词数100左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, Would you like to join me at our school music festival this Saturday? 答案范文： Dear Mike, Would you like to join me at our school music festival this Saturday? The concert starts at 3 p.m. in the school hall. We will enjoy traditional Chinese folk music, including "Jasmine Flower". You will love it because its gentle melody can help you relax. The pieces also have strong local colour. As you are interested in Chinese culture, you can also learn more about it. Shall we meet at the school gate at 2:40 p.m.? We will have enough time to find our seats. Please let me know if you can come. I am looking forward to enjoying the music with you. Yours, Li Hua 范文翻译： 亲爱的Mike：你愿意本周六和我一起参加学校音乐节吗？ 音乐会下午3点在学校礼堂开始。我们将欣赏包括《茉莉花》在内的中国传统民间音乐。你会喜欢它，因为柔和的旋律能帮你放松。这些作品也有地方特色。你对中国文化感兴趣，也能通过这次活动加深了解。 我们下午2点40分在校门口见面好吗？这样就有足够的时间找到座位。请告诉我你是否能来。我期待与你一起欣赏音乐。你的朋友，李华。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $