（课件）培养工匠精神的建议信写作-Unit6 Craftsmanship-《英语 基础模块2》（高教版第三版）【单元写作精讲】

An Advice Letter on Developing Craftsmanship Learning Objectives 1. Master craftsmanship‑related vocabulary, phrases and advice‑letter sentence patterns. 2. Master the standard format and structure of an advice letter. 3. Write an 80‑120‑word advice letter with complete points and correct format. Lead—in Group Dissicussion： 1.What qualities does craftsmanship include? 2.What should we do in practical training? My younger schoolmate Tom will take practical training. He is confused about how to develop craftsmanship. Can you give him some advice？ What is an advice letter？ ● 定义：建议信是正式书信应用文，针对对方的困惑，给出切实可行的建议。 ● 核心目的：Show understanding → give practical suggestions → give encouragement & wishes ● 和其它书信区别：语气真诚体贴；建议贴合中职实训生活；严格遵守书信邮件格式。 链接高考 ● 体裁地位：建议信是春考最高频书信应用文 ● 字数要求：80‑120 words ● 评分核心：书信格式规范；理解对方处境；建议具体可行；语气礼貌真诚；语法正确 ● 高频话题：学习、实训、职业素养、生活习惯建议 Basic Vocabulary craftsmanship n. 工匠精神 training n. 实训；训练 detail n. 细节 patient adj. 有耐心的 strict adj. 严格的 skill n. 技能 practice v.&n. 练习 confused adj. 困惑的 suggestion n. 建议 encourage v. 鼓励 Advanced Vocabulary develop craftsmanship 培养工 匠精神 pay attention to details 注重细节 be strict with oneself 严格要 求自己 practice skills again and again 反复练习技能 in practical training 在实训中 It’s a good idea to… …… 是个好主意 You should… 你应该…… I’d like to give you some advice. 我想给你一些建议。 Quick quiz 1. We should pay attention to many ______(detail / details) in training. 2. It’s a good idea ______(practice / to practice) your skills. details many后面需要加复数 to practice It’s a good idea to do sth.是固定搭配 Useful Phrases 🔹 Show understanding & state purpose I know you will take practical training soon. 我知道你很快将要参加实训。 You feel confused about how to develop craftsmanship. 你对如何培养工匠精神感到困惑。 I’d like to give you some useful advice. 我想给你一些有用的建议。 Useful Phrases 🔹 Give suggestions & encouragement pay attention to details注重细节 practice skills again and again反复练习技能 Be patient and be strict with yourself要有耐心，严格要求自己 Don’t be afraid of making mistakes不要害怕犯错 make great progress取得很大进步 Sentence Patterns Opening 开篇：表达理解，引出建议 Dear Tom, I know you will take practical training soon. You feel confused about how to develop craftsmanship. I’d like to give you some useful advice. Sentence Patterns Body‑1 主体：第一条、第二条建议 First, you should pay attention to details in your training. Second, it’s a good idea to practice your skills again and again. Body‑2 主体：第三条建议 + 鼓励 Besides, be patient and be strict with yourself. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Sentence Patterns Ending 结尾：美好祝愿 I hope my advice will be helpful. Wish you great progress! Grammar Focus 1. Tense：一般现在时（提建议，描述客观做法） 2. 可数名词复数：detail‑details 3. 提建议句型：You should do… ; It’s a good idea to do… 4. 固定搭配：be strict with oneself 严格要求自己 5. 书信格式：Dear …, 称呼后面必须加英文逗号；Yours, + 姓名 Common Mistakes （1）名词复数 ❌ I have many skill for this job. ✅ I have many skills for this job. many 后面接可数名词复数。 Common Mistakes （2）介词后动名词 ❌ I am good at communicate with people. ✅ I am good at communicating with people. at 是介词，后面接 doing 动名词。 Common Mistakes （3）书信格式错误 ❌ Dear Manager ✅ Dear Manager, 英文正式书信称呼后必须加英文逗号。 Four key points 1. Letter format：完整书信格式（称呼、正文、结束语、署名） 2. Situation & understanding：了解对方处境，理解他的困惑 3. Practical advice：2‑3 条具体可行建议（注重细节；反复练习；严格要求自己） 4. Encouragement & wishes：表达鼓励，送上美好祝愿 Writing Template Dear Tom, I know you will take ______ soon. You feel confused about how to develop craftsmanship. I’d like to give you some useful advice. First, you should ______ in your training. Second, it’s a good idea to ______. Writing Template Besides, be ______ and be strict with yourself. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. I hope my advice will be helpful. Wish you great progress! Yours, Li Hua Writing Task 假定你是李华，你的学弟 Tom 即将参加专业实训，对于怎样培养工匠精神感到困惑，请给他写一封建议信。 提示要点： 1. 了解他即将实训，理解他的困惑，给出建议； Writing Task 2. 建议：①实训中注重细节；②反复练习技能；③有耐心，严格要求自己；不要害怕犯错； 3. 鼓励，祝愿取得进步； 4. 书信格式完整，词数 80‑120。 Steps for writing 第一步：Judge the style → Advice letter，pay attention to letter format 第二步：Extract four key points Format: Dear Tom, / Yours, Li Hua Situation & understanding: take practical training; confused about craftsmanship Steps for writing Advice: pay attention to details; practice skills again and again; be patient and strict with oneself Encouragement & wishes: advice helpful; wish great progress 第三步：Fill in template；检查名词复数、提建议句型、书信格式 Model Essay Dear Tom, I know you will take practical training soon. You feel confused about how to develop craftsmanship. I’d like to give you some useful advice. First, you should pay attention to details in your training. Model Essay Second, it’s a good idea to practice your skills again and again. Besides, be patient and be strict with yourself. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. I hope my advice will be helpful. Wish you great progress! Yours, Li Hua Summary 1. Words & phrases：工匠精神主题词汇、建议信功能短语 2. Sentences：理解处境‑给出多条建议‑鼓励祝愿句型 3. Structure：四要素：书信格式 — 处境理解 — 可行建议 — 鼓励祝愿 4. Rules：名词复数；It’s a good idea to do；规范书信格式 Homework 1.Basic：Recite the template and key sentences, copy the model essay. 2.Advanced：Write a short passage My Understanding of Craftsmanship. Thank you $