（课件）旅游景观介绍写作-Unit5 Natural Wonders in the World-《英语 基础模块3》（高教版第三版）【单元写作精讲】

An Introduction to a Tourist Attraction Learning Objectives 1. Master tourist‑spot‑related vocabulary, phrases and universal sentence patterns. 2. Learn the structure of an introduction to a tourist attraction. 3. Write an 80‑120‑word short passage with complete points and correct grammar. What famous scenic spots do you know in China? Lead‑in Tom’s foreign pen‑pal will come to China. He wants to write a short passage to introduce the Great Wall to him. But he doesn’t know how to write it, can you help him. What is tourist‑spot introduction ● 定义：景点介绍属于说明文，用来向他人介绍一处旅游胜地 ● 核心目的：Introduce location → introduce features /history → show its value ● 和记叙文的区别：侧重客观介绍地理位置、特色、看点，不是写个人旅游经历 链接高考 ● 体裁地位：地点 / 景点说明文是春考书面表达高频体裁 ● 字数要求：80‑120 words ● 评分核心：信息完整 + 语言通顺 + 语法无误 + 逻辑清晰 ● 常见话题：景点、城市、校园、社区、博物馆介绍 Basic Vocabulary tourist attraction n. 旅游景点 spot n. 地点；景点 famous adj. 著名的 location n. 位置 history n. 历史 scenery n. 风景 visitor n. 游客 culture n. 文化 feature n. 特色；特点 visit v. 参观 Advanced Vocabulary be known for 因…… 闻名 consist of 由…… 组成 a long history of … …… 悠久的历史 worth visiting 值得参观 besides 此外 attract v. 吸引 thousands of 成千上万的 Quick quiz 1. The West Lake is a well‑known tourist ______(attract / attraction). 2. It has a long ______(history / histories) of more than 2000 years. attraction tourist attraction是固定搭配，名胜古迹 history a 后面加单数可数名词 Useful Phrases 🔹 Location & history lie in /be located in 坐落于…… be famous for 因…… 而出名 have a long history of … 拥有…… 悠久历史 thousands of visitors 成千上万的游客 Useful Phrases 🔹 Features & recommendations consist of 由…… 组成 beautiful natural scenery 美丽的自然风光 rich culture 丰富的文化 be well worth visiting 非常值得参观 besides /what’s more 此外，而且 Sentence Patterns Opening 开篇总述 The Great Wall is one of the most famous tourist attractions in China. Body‑1 主体：位置、历史 It is located in northern China. It has a very long history. Sentence Patterns Body‑2 主体：特色、游客情况 Thousands of tourists visit it every year. You can enjoy special ancient culture here. Ending 结尾评价推荐 Besides, it is well‑worth visiting. It is our national treasure. Grammar Focus 1. Tense：一般现在时（客观介绍地点） 2. 固定短语：places of interest；be well‑worth doing；be located in 3. 数量表达：thousands of + 名词复数 4. 过渡词：besides /what’s more 此外 5. Tip：This is a short passage, NO letter format.（不需要书信格式） Common Mistakes （1）固定短语错误 ❌ many places of interests ✅ many places of interest places of interest 固定短语，interest 不加 s。 Common Mistakes （2）worth 用法错误 ❌ It is well‑worth visit. ✅ It is well‑worth visiting. be well‑worth 后面接 doing 动名词。 Common Mistakes （3）名词复数错误 ❌ Thousand of visitor come here. ✅ Thousands of visitors come here. thousands of + 可数名词复数。 Four Key Points 1. Passage type：说明文短文，无书信格式 2. Brief introduction：总述，点明是什么景点 3. Location & history：地理位置、历史背景 4. Scenery features & recommendation：景观特色、游览价值、推荐 Writing Template ________ is one of the most famous tourist attractions in China. It is located in ________. It has ________. Thousands of ________ visit it every year. You can enjoy ________ here. Writing Template Besides, it is well‑worth visiting. It is our national treasure. Writing Task 学校英文报征集稿件，请写一篇短文介绍长城。 提示要点： 1. 总述：长城是中国著名旅游景点之一； 2. 坐落于中国北方，历史悠久； 3. 每年成千上万游客前来，可以感受古老文化； 4. 值得参观，是我们的国宝； 5. 词数 80‑120，不需要书信格式。 Steps for Writing 第一步：Judge the style → Descriptive short passage. No letter format! 第二步：Extract four key points Passage type: short passage（无称呼署名） Brief introduction: one of the most famous tourist attractions Steps for Writing Location & history: located in northern China; a long history Features & recommendation: thousands of visitors; enjoy ancient culture; well‑worth visiting 第三步：Fill in template；检查 places of interest，worth doing，名词复数 Model Essay The Great Wall is one of the most famous tourist attractions in China. It is located in northern China. It has a very long history. Thousands of tourists visit it every year. You can enjoy special ancient culture here. Many people come to learn about our past. Besides, it is well‑worth visiting. It is our national treasure. Summary 1. Words & phrases：旅游景观主题词汇、地点介绍短语 2. Sentences：总述 — 位置历史 — 景观特色 — 结尾推荐句型 3. Structure：四要素：总述 — 位置历史 — 特色 — 推荐；不用书信格式 4. Rules：places of interest；be well‑worth doing；thousands of 用法 Homework 1.Basic：Recite the template and key sentences, copy the model essay. 2.Advanced：Write a short passage to introduce the Terracotta Army. Thank you! $