Unit 2 Natural disasters 作文范文学习清单 -2025-2026学年高中英语译林版必修第三册

译林版 必修3 Unit2 Natural disasters作文范文学习清单 如何写读后续写？ 一、读透原文，把握要素 Setting（背景）：时间、地点、环境氛围 Characters（人物）：主要人物的性格、关系、情感状态 Plot（情节）：已发生的事件、冲突、悬念 二、合理预测，逻辑连贯 续写内容必须与原文人物一致、内容衔接，情节发展要符合逻辑，不能突兀 可参考原文中的伏笔（如天气报告、防洪物资、邻居等） 三、结构清晰，过渡自然 开头：用过渡句连接原文结尾（如“The sudden silence was broken by...”） 中间：推进情节，制造冲突或转折 结尾：解决问题，升华主题（如亲情、勇气、互助） 四、语言丰富，句式多样 1. 多用动作描写、心理描写、环境描写 2. 适当使用对话，推动情节、展现性格 3. 运用高分句式：倒装、强调句、分词短语、独立主格等 五、情感真挚，主题积极 体现人物情感变化（恐惧→勇气→感恩），传递正能量（团结、互助、希望） 六、检查修改，精益求精 检查标点、拼写、语法；注意用词准确、风格一致；请同伴互评，提出改进建议 Caught in a Flood (Part II)范文 The sudden silence was broken by a deafening crash. A tree branch smashed against the window, sending cracks across the glass. Mary screamed and buried her face in her mother's shoulder. Without hesitation, Dad sprang to his feet. "We must move upstairs now!" he ordered, his voice steady despite the chaos. Grabbing the bag and a flashlight, the family scrambled up the stairs. Mary's heart pounded so loudly that she could barely hear her mother's comforting whispers. The water was already seeping under the front door, dark and cold. On the second floor, they huddled together, listening to the terrifying sounds below. Suddenly, Mary noticed a small boat outside—their neighbors, the Wilsons, waving frantically. Dad threw them a rope, and one by one, they climbed through the window to safety. As the night wore on, the storm finally began to weaken. By dawn, the floodwater had started to recede. Mary looked at her parents, their faces weary but relieved. At that moment, she realized that even in the darkest times, love and courage could light the way. 范文重难点单词与短语 第一段 1. 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 2. deafening /ˈdefnɪŋ/ adj. 震耳欲聋的 3. crash /kræʃ/ n. 撞击声 4. branch /brɑːntʃ/ n. 树枝 5. smash /smæʃ/ v. 猛撞 6. crack /kræk/ n. 裂缝 7. scream /skriːm/ v. 尖叫 8. bury /ˈberi/ v. 埋；把……埋入 9. hesitation /ˌhezɪˈteɪʃn/ n. 犹豫 10. steady /ˈstedi/ adj. 镇定的 11. chaos /ˈkeɪɒs/ n. 混乱 12. grab /ɡræb/ v. 抓住 13. flashlight /ˈflæʃlaɪt/ n. 手电筒 14. scramble /ˈskræmbl/ v. 匆忙爬 15. pound /paʊnd/ v. 剧烈跳动 16. whisper /ˈwɪspə(r)/ n. 低语 17. seep /siːp/ v. 渗漏 第二段 1. 2. huddle /ˈhʌdl/ v. 挤在一起 3. terrifying /ˈterɪfaɪɪŋ/ adj. 可怕的 4. wave /weɪv/ v. 挥手 5. frantically /ˈfræntɪkli/ adv. 疯狂地 6. throw /θrəʊ/ v. 扔 7. rope /rəʊp/ n. 绳子 8. safety /ˈseɪfti/ n. 安全 9. weaken /ˈwiːkən/ v. 减弱 10. dawn /dɔːn/ n. 黎明 11. floodwater /ˈflʌdwɔːtə(r)/ n. 洪水 12. recede /rɪˈsiːd/ v. 退去 13. weary /ˈwɪəri/ adj. 疲惫的 14. relieved /rɪˈliːvd/ adj. 宽慰的 15. courage /ˈkʌrɪdʒ/ n. 勇气 重点短语 1. 2. spring to one's feet 突然站起来 3. scramble up the stairs 匆忙爬上楼梯 4. seep under the door 从门底下渗进来 5. huddle together 挤在一起 6. wave frantically 疯狂地挥手 7. one by one 一个接一个 8. as the night wore on 随着夜色渐深 9. by dawn 到黎明时分 10. at that moment 就在那一刻 11. light the way 照亮前路 15个高分句式搞定读后续写 句式1：upon doing结构（情节转场） 结构： Upon doing sth, sb did sth. 例句： Upon hearing the good news, a big and happy smile appeared on his face. 句式2：时间连词/倒装（情节转场） 结构： Hardly had sb done sth when sb did sth. / No sooner had sb done sth than sb did sth. 例句： Hardly had Tom sat down on the station bench to rest when the bus he had been waiting for arrived. 句式3：情感名词前置—Overwhelmed with+n. 结构： Overwhelmed with + 感情名词，sb did sth. 例句： Overwhelmed with excitement, he jumped up and shouted loudly when he heard the good news. 句式4：情感名词前置——To one's + 感情名词（心理描写） 结构： To one's + 感情名词，句子 例句： To his surprise, his father was standing at the school gate, waiting for him in the rain. 句式5：现在分词Having done（叙事逻辑） 结构： Having done A, sb did B. 例句： Having said goodbye to her mother, she turned around and walked into the exam hall with a firm step.和母亲道别后，她转过身，迈着坚定的步伐走进了考场。 句式6：分词作伴随状语（动作描写） 结构： Sb did A, doing B. / Doing B, sb did A. 例句： The little girl ran towards her father, shouting with joy and waving her arms. 句式7：with复合结构（动作描写） 结构： Sb did A, (with) sb doing B / B done. 例句： The mother stood at the door, with tears streaming down her cheeks. 句式8：双形容词并列（心理描写） 结构： adj. and adj., sb did sth. 例句： Tired and hungry, the little boy finally reached his grandmother's house. 句式9：形容词倒装——adj. as/though sb was（逆境转折） 结构： adj. as/though sb was, sb did sth. 例句： Frightened as she was, she forced herself to open the door and see what was happening. 句式10：对话细节描写（对话描写） 结构： “......,” sb said, his/her voice filled with the emotion of... 例句： “I'm so sorry, Mom. I didn't mean to hurt you,” she said, her voice filled with regret and guilt. 句式11：determined前置（决心表达） 结构： Determined to do A, sb did B. 例句： Determined to save the drowning child, he jumped into the river without hesitation. 句式12：无灵主语句（心理描写） 结构： A wave of + 感情名词 + surged through / washed over sb. 例句： When she saw her father waiting at the school gate, a wave of warmth washed over her. 句式13：So倒装（倒装强调） 结构： So adj. was sb that + 结果句 例句： So touched was he that he could hardly hold back his tears. 句式14：Never倒装（倒装强调） 结构： Never had sb done sth. 例句： Never had he felt so grateful to anyone in his entire life. 句式15：感悟升华句（结尾升华） 结构： At that moment, it dawned on sb that... / Sb realized that... 例句： At that moment, it dawned on him that it was never too late to say sorry to the ones he loved. $