专题 10 书面表达（期中专项训练）六年级英语上学期（人教大同版·新教材）

专题10 书面表达 (期中专项训练) 答题技巧 1. 读懂写作任务，找准写作主题，确定文章所用时态、人称，看清词数与要点要求。 2. 梳理写作要点，把题目给出的提示信息逐条整理，不要漏掉关键信息。 3. 组织句子，选用本单元学过的单词和句型串联要点，适当使用连接词，完成初稿。 4. 写完自查通读，检查动词形式、单词拼写、句首大写、标点符号，修改错误。 ✅ 感受描写类（一般现在时）：写出事件 + 个人情绪，用 because 说明原因，准确使用描述感受的形容词。 ✅ 过去活动记叙类（一般过去时）：描述过去发生的事情，动词要变为过去式；问句中 did 后动词用原形。 ✅ 人物故事介绍类（一般过去时）：交代故事背景、人物，用形容词描述人物性格品质，正确使用 was/were。 1. 时态混用：写当下感受用一般现在；描述过去发生的故事、活动，要用一般过去时。 2. 专有名词、句首首字母大写、英文句号等细节，容易造成不必要失分。 3. 助动词 did 后面，动词必须用原形，不能继续使用过去式。 4. 优先使用自己熟练掌握的简单句型，不必强行写复杂长句，降低出错概率。 读题定主题时态，要点梳理不缺漏； 动词变形仔细看，大小写标点要检查。 一、做题四步法 二、分题型要点 A A 三、常见陷阱提醒 口诀 习题演练 一、题目：以 My feelings 为题，写一篇短文，介绍一次经历以及你的感受。内容包含：发生了什么事，你的感受，产生这种感受的原因。不少于 40 词。 提示词：afraid, angry, excited, tired, worried, hungry, because My feelings _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二、请以 My last weekend 为题，写一篇短文，介绍你上周末的活动。 要求： 1. 用一般过去时； 2. 不少于 40 词； 3. 语句通顺，标点正确。 提示短语：share with, play with, help out, look after, say sorry to My last weekend _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三、我们读过木兰的故事，请你以 A great girl — Mulan 为题，写短文介绍木兰。 要求： 1. 介绍人物、故事发生的时间、地点； 2. 描述她的品质； 3. 不少于 5 句话。 提示词：brave, honest, hard-working, proud A great girl — Mulan _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________四、书面表达：你的好朋友和你发生矛盾，请写一小段话，写你如何和朋友友好相处。 可选用短语 care for, listen to, talk to, share with, say sorry to。不少于 40 词。 Getting along with my friend _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________五、Starter 单元写作：介绍我们的地球。根据提示写短文。 图片提示：简笔画地球，标出亚洲、太平洋。 提示词：the Earth, Asia, the Pacific Ocean, big This is our Earth _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案 一、My feelings 范文： Hello, I’m Tom. Last Friday, I took part in a running race at our school. I felt excited before the race. When I ran on the track, I felt tired and wanted to stop. At last, I won the race. I felt so excited because I tried my best. My classmates cheered for me. I was very happy. 【详解】 题干解读：本篇描述事件与内心感受，结合一般过去时叙事，用 because 引出感受的原因。 参考词汇：excited, tired, because, try one’s best, cheer for 参考句型：I felt … / I felt … because … 二、My last weekend 范文： Last weekend, I went to the park with my best friend Jack. We played games happily under the big tree. I shared my yummy snacks with him. Later I broke his favourite toy by accident. I said sorry to him at once. He accepted my apology. We still had a good time together. 【详解】 题干解读：本篇主题为上周末活动，使用一般过去时，重点关注动词过去式变形。 参考词汇：went, played, shared, broke, said, accepted 参考句型：I went to… / I … with … 三、A great girl — Mulan 范文： Mulan was a girl in ancient China. The story took place many years ago. It began in a quiet small village. Mulan was brave and hard-working. She loved her family very much. I think she is a great hero. I feel proud of her. 【详解】 题干解读：人物故事介绍，时态为一般过去时，运用 was 描述人物特征。 参考词汇：brave, hard-working, honest, many years ago, proud 参考句型：Mulan was… / The story took place… 四、Getting along with my friend 范文： Friends are very important to me. Sometimes I may have problems with my friend. I will talk to him patiently. I listen to his ideas carefully. I share my interesting things with him. If I make mistakes, I will say sorry to him. We can care for each other and get along well. 【详解】 题干解读：围绕朋友相处，选用单元核心短语，表达如何维护友谊。 参考短语：talk to, listen to, share with, say sorry to，care for 五、This is our Earth 范文： This is our beautiful Earth. There are seven continents and four oceans on it. Asia is very big. The Pacific Ocean is the biggest ocean in the world. We live on the Earth. We must love and protect our home. 【详解】 题干解读：介绍地球，一般现在时，注意专有名词首字母大写。 参考词汇：the Earth, Asia, the Pacific Ocean, protect 2 / 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $