第一次月考作文讲解The Great Changes Have Taken Place Around Me课件 2026-2027学年仁爱科普版九年级英语上册

The Great Changes Have Taken Place Around Me 书面表达写作指导课（今昔对比） 2026-2027学年 · 仁爱科普版九年级英语上册 作文题目 随着社会的快速发展，我们的生活发生了巨大变化，尤其是在居住环境、交通、购物、休闲娱乐这些方面。请以 The Great Changes Have Taken Place Around Me 为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍这些方面的变化，并谈谈你的感受。 写作要求：词数80个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 第一步：头脑风暴（过去 vs 现在） 居住：一家人挤小房子 → 高楼大厦 be crowded into small houses → tall buildings 交通：骑车/坐公交 → 出行快捷便利 ride bikes/take buses → get around fast and easily 购物：小商店 → 大超市/网购 small shops → supermarkets / shop online 休闲：听收音机/下棋 → 上网/旅游 listen to the radio/play chess → surf the Internet/travel 过去常常做某事 used to do 多亏了国家，生活越来越好 thanks to / better and better 第二步：连词成句（过去的生活） 过去，一大家人挤在小房子里。 关键词：过去 in the past｜一大家人 big families｜挤在 be crowded into｜小房子 small houses In the past, big families were crowded into small houses. 他们骑车或坐公交上下班。 关键词：骑车 ride bicycles｜坐公交 take buses｜上下班 to and from work They rode bicycles or took buses to and from work. 下班后他们常待在家里，因为没有太多休闲活动。 关键词：下班后 after work｜待在家里 stay at home｜因为 because｜休闲活动 leisure activities They usually stayed at home after work, because they didn't have many leisure activities. 第二步：连词成句（现在的生活 & 感受） 现在建了很多高楼，出行也更快捷便利了。 关键词：高楼大厦 tall buildings｜出行 get around｜快捷便利 fast and easy Now, many tall buildings have been built. It's much faster and easier to get around. 到处都是大超市，人们还可以网购，休闲活动也更丰富了。 关键词：大超市 large supermarkets｜到处 everywhere｜网购 shop online｜休闲活动 colorful Large supermarkets are everywhere, and people can also shop online. Leisure activities are more colorful. 多亏了国家，我们过着幸福生活，希望未来越来越好。 关键词：多亏了 thanks to｜过着幸福生活 live a happy life｜I hope that｜better and better Thanks to our country, we live a happy life. I hope our life will become better and better in the future. 范文赏析：The Great Changes Have Taken Place Around Me With the rapid development of society, great changes have taken place around me, especially in living conditions, transportation, shopping and leisure activities. In the past, big families were crowded into small houses. They rode bicycles or took buses to work. They usually stayed at home after work, because they didn't have many leisure activities. They used to listen to the radio or play chess. But now, many tall buildings have been built. It's much faster and easier to get around. Large supermarkets are everywhere, and people can also shop online. Leisure activities are more colorful. Thanks to our country, we live a happy life. I hope our life will become better and better in the future. 图例： 红色=从句/高级句型 蓝色=重点短语 绿色=好句亮点 范文用到的语法结构（约125词） ① 现在完成时 have taken place / have been built ② 被动语态 were crowded into ③ because 原因状语从句 ④ used to do 过去常常 ⑤ It's + adj + to do 形式主语 ⑥ I hope (that) 宾语从句 语法精讲① used to do 过去常常做某事 【原句】 They used to listen to the radio or play chess. 【翻译】 他们过去常听收音机或下棋。 【要点】 used to + 动词原形，表示过去常常（现在不这样了） ✍ 仿写练习：看中文+关键词，自己说英文 我过去常常骑自行车上学。 关键词：used to｜骑自行车上学 ride a bike to school I used to ride a bike to school. 我奶奶过去常常在小商店买东西。 关键词：used to｜买东西 buy things｜在小商店 in small shops My grandma used to buy things in small shops. 语法精讲② because 原因状语从句 【原句】 They usually stayed at home after work, because they didn't have many leisure activities. 【翻译】 他们下班后常待在家里，因为没有太多休闲活动。 【要点】 because表示"因为"，引导原因状语从句，放句首或句末都可以 ✍ 仿写练习：看中文+关键词，自己说英文 他喜欢英语，因为它很有趣。 关键词：because｜有趣 interesting He likes English, because it is very interesting. 因为下雨，我们没去公园。 关键词：because｜下雨 rain｜去公园 go to the park We didn't go to the park, because it rained. 语法精讲③ It's + adj + to do 做某事是……的 【原句】 It's much faster and easier to get around. 【翻译】 出行更快捷、更便利了。 【要点】 It是形式主语，真正主语是后面的to do；get around = 出行、走动 ✍ 仿写练习：看中文+关键词，自己说英文 学好英语很重要。 关键词：It's + adj｜重要的 important｜学好英语 learn English well It's very important to learn English well. 在网上购物很方便。 关键词：It's + adj｜方便的 convenient｜在网上购物 shop online It's very convenient to shop online. 语法精讲④ I hope (that) 宾语从句 【原句】 I hope our life will become better and better in the future. 【翻译】 我希望我们的生活未来会越来越好。 【要点】 I hope后接句子作宾语，that可省略；better and better 越来越好 ✍ 仿写练习：看中文+关键词，自己说英文 我希望我们的城市会越来越美丽。 关键词：I hope that｜城市 city｜越来越美丽 more and more beautiful I hope our city will become more and more beautiful. 我希望你能梦想成真。 关键词：I hope that｜你的梦想 your dream｜实现 come true I hope your dream will come true. 重点短语必背（选自范文） ① take place 发生 ② be crowded into 挤进、挤在 ③ used to do 过去常常 ④ get around 出行、走动 ⑤ shop online 网购 ⑥ thanks to 多亏了、由于 ⑦ better and better 越来越好 短语闯关（看中文说英文） ① 发生 take place ② 挤进、挤在 be crowded into ③ 过去常常 used to do ④ 出行、走动 get around ⑤ 网购 shop online ⑥ 多亏了、由于 thanks to ⑦ 越来越好 better and better 背诵闯关（一）看中文背英文 过去，一大家人挤在小房子里。 结构：in the past｜big families｜be crowded into In the past, big families were crowded into small houses. 他们下班后常待在家里，因为没有太多休闲活动。 结构：stay at home｜after work｜because They usually stayed at home after work, because they didn't have many leisure activities. 他们过去常听收音机或下棋。 结构：used to do｜listen to the radio｜play chess They used to listen to the radio or play chess. 背诵闯关（二）看中文背英文 现在建了很多高楼，出行也更快捷便利了。 结构：tall buildings｜have been built｜It's faster and easier to get around Now, many tall buildings have been built. It's much faster and easier to get around. 大超市到处都是，人们还可以网购。 结构：large supermarkets｜everywhere｜shop online Large supermarkets are everywhere, and people can also shop online. 多亏了国家，我们过着幸福生活，希望未来越来越好。 结构：thanks to｜live a happy life｜I hope that｜better and better Thanks to our country, we live a happy life. I hope our life will become better and better in the future. 写作技巧总结 ① 今昔对比结构 开头点题→过去vs现在对比→结尾感受 ② 过去/现在分开写 In the past... / But now... 对比清晰 ③ 用because说原因 过去没活动的原因，用because从句 ④ used to do 过去常常做某事，今昔对比必备句型 ⑤ 结尾升华 Thanks to... / I hope...better and better Great Changes, Better Life. 时代在变，生活越来越好。下节课见！ 2026-2027学年 · 仁爱科普版九年级英语上册 $