Unit 6 写作专项提优-【通成学典·拔尖特训】2026-2027学年八年级上册英语（译林版·新教材）

拔尖持训· 英语（译林版）八年级上 写作专项提优 “答案与解析”见P28 9相佳作赏析 品读范文，拆解核心技巧 最近你所在的班级进行了题为“我最喜欢的季节”的调查，50%的同学最喜欢春天，40%的同学 最喜欢秋天，而你喜欢的季节与他们都不同。请根据讨论结果及下图写一篇80词左右的调查报 告，并谈谈自己最喜欢的季节。 My favourite season weather activities [高分范文] [名师点评] We had a discussion about our favourite season recently. ①主题扣题：开篇直接点明文章核 Here are the results 心是关于“最喜欢的季节”的讨论结果，中 50 per cent of my classmates like spring best because the 心明确。 weather is warm and pleasant.Everything grows and is lively. ②内容落地：用50 per cent、.40per Bees and butterflies fly around.And we can smell the flowers cent的具体数据分别说明同学们偏爱春 and hear the birds sing.Moreover,it is the best time to fly 天、秋天的原因，有数据、有景物、有活动， 内容具体翔实、层次清晰。 kites. 40 per cent of my classmates like autumn best because ③语言节奏：运用Moreover、As for me等衔接词，让段落与语句过渡自然；多 the air is cool and it is cloudless.Leaves turn yellow and fall into piles on the ground.The birds fly to the south to find warm 处使用because引导的原因状语从句，句 places.We can go climbing in autumn. 式丰富。 ④收尾简明：以个人对冬天的喜爱 As for me,winter is my favourite season.I like snow and 直接收尾，清晰表达个人观点。 Ireally enjoy having snowball fights and seeing ice lanterns. 的素材积累 储备金句，提升语言质感▲ [开头句] 1.I'm a big fan of winter. 2.Of all the seasons,I like summer best. 3.Winter is my favourite season. [中间句] 1.I like summer because I can go swimming with my friends. 2.A windy day is a perfect time to fly kites. 3.It's exciting to have snowball fights. 4.Sometimes white snow covers the ground. [结尾句] 1.I love winter! 2.It often rains in summer,but I still love summer. 3.Spring not only lets us enjoy the beauty of nature,but also gives us lots of fun and hope. 118 Unit 6 Seasons [名言警句] 1.Make your whole year's plans in spring,and your day's plan early in the morning. 一年之计在于春，一日之计在于晨。 2.If winter comes,can spring be far behind?如果冬天来了，春天还会远吗？ 3.Autumn is a second spring when every leaf is a flower..秋天是第二个春天，每片叶子都是花朵。 ]写作演练 实战练笔，奔实写作功底 假设你是丹尼尔，请你根据思维导图中提供的信息，给你的英国笔友朱迪写一封关于四季 的信。 春：观蜂蝶飞舞； 夏：天气炎热，使人 享自然之美： 困倦；溪边玩耍；树 去… 下休息… Four seasons 秋：秋叶成堆；农 冬：几场暴风雪：堆 忙之际… 雪人；打雪仗… 要求：1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。2.必须包括思维导图中所有的信息，并适当发挥。 3.词数80左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。 [思路点拔]1.文体：应用文。2.时态：一般现在时。3.人称：以第二、三人称为主。 [写作提纲] I'm willing to tell you something... In spring,you can .. Four In summer,it is very hot .. seasons In autumn,leaves turn brown .. There are several snowstorms .. These are our four seasons .. [妙笔生花 Dear Judy, I'm willing to tell you something about the four seasons in Nanjing.I'm sure you will like the seasons. These are our four seasons.Each season has good things.I hope you will like them Yours, Daniel 119第4课时Integration -,1.snowstorm 2.dividing 3.Connecting 4.positive 5.average 6.awful 7.thicker 8.degrees 9.order 10.deep 二、1.effect2.frozen3.growth4.to get around 5.threw 三、1.B2.C3.A4.B 四、1.method2.custom3.forward4.begins 5.hide 6.Another 7.frozen 8.connects 9.even 10.return 五、1.Dtil表示“直到”，符合作者此前未察觉妈妈 的付出，直到参与种花才明白的逻辑。 2.A代词指代前文提到的单数花籽，用it。 3.A all through the winter为固定短语，意为“整个 冬天”。 4.C根据后文leave them at our neighbours'asa surprise可知是把花放在邻居家门口。 5.C由后文“Their beauty is supposed to be..”可 知，此处指欣赏花的美丽。 6.C结合妈妈送花给邻居的行为及后文beauty sharing可知，是指美的分享 7.A根据后文get to the second house可知，先到达 的是第一户人家。 8.D根据后文hiding secretly somewhere nearby可 知送完花后匆忙离开。 9.B结合邻居收到花的反应与作者内心的喜悦可 知，妈妈心情激动。 10.C花园里的花被送给邻居，因此变空，与后文心 里满满的形成对比。 六、1.Tie a string to a conker.2.Every October.. 3.In warm meat soup. 4.Pumpkin coffee.5.I enjoy going hiking and collecting colourful leaves. 之有理即可) 写作专项提优 One possible version: Dear Judy, I'm willing to tell you something about the four seasons in Nanjing.I'm sure you will like the seasons. 2 In spring,you can watch bees and butterflies fly about and enjoy the beauty of nature.You can also go for an outing in the hills.Spring is the most comfortable season. In summer,it is very hot.The temperature can reach above thirty degrees.You may feel sleepy on summer afternoons.But you can play by the stream, cool down under the trees and have a rest. In autumn,leaves turn brown and fall into piles. Autumn is the best season to go hiking.Autumn is also a busy season for farming.The weather slowly turns cold. There are several snowstorms in winter.We can make snowmen and have snowball fights.Winter is not only the season of snow,but also our happy season. These are our four seasons.Each season has good things.I hope you will like them. Yours, Daniel 听力专项提优 [听力材料] 第一部分听对话回答问题 本部分共有10道小题，每小题你将听到一段对 话，每段对话听两遍。在听每段对话前，你将有5秒 钟的时间阅读题目；听完每段对话后，你仍有5秒钟 的时间选出你认为最合适的备选答案。请在听到 “嘀”的信号时，进入下一小题。 1.W:How hot it is!I want to go for a walk. M:You'd better take an umbrella.Look at the clouds and the sky.I think it will rain soon. 2.M:It's good to have a picnic on such a sunny spring day,right? W:Yes.Look at those beautiful birds.Oh,several butterflies are staying on the flowers.Take a photo of them. 3.W:I like winter.I think it is interesting to make a snowman. M:I like winter too.I often go skating on the river near my home.It's so exciting.