Unit 5 写作专项提优-【通成学典·拔尖特训】2026-2027学年八年级上册英语（译林版·新教材）

拔尖特训·英语（译林版）八年级上 写作专项提优 “答案与解析”见P23 9目佳作赏析 品读范文，拆解核心技巧▲ 所有生物都是地球的主人，人与动物共享同一家园。你校英语校刊将要举行以“One earth, one home”为题的英语作文竞赛。请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文参赛。 What problems are wild animals facing? One earth, Why do we need to protect wild animals? one home What can we do to protect them as students? [高分范文] [名师点评] One earth,one home ①主题扣题：开篇点明地球是人类与 The earth is home to both humans and wild animals.But野生动物共同的家园，直指人类活动导致野 today wild animals are facing serious problems because of生动物濒危的问题，主题鲜明、全程扣题。 humans.People cut down treese for money.What's ②内容落地：先指出野生动物面临的 worse,people kill animals for their fur or bones.So many 真实问题(cut down trees和kill animals), animals are in danger. 再强调保护的紧迫性，最后给出学生可执行 It's time for us to save the earth and the wild animals..If的具体行动(be volunteers和shouldn'tbuy we take action to protect our earth and animals right away,fur coats),内容充实，贴近现实，说服力强。 our earth will become comfortable for us to live in and animals ③语言节奏：运用What's worse、 can live happily.Otherwise,terrible things will happen. Otherwise、First、.What's more、Last but First,as students,.we can try to be volunteers●and do not least等衔接词，层次清晰，过渡自然；句 small things.What's more,we shouldn't buy fur coats any式长短结合，还使用了If引导的条件状语从 more.Last but not least,we should make more pcople句，句式丰富，辽辑严谨，读起来流畅有 understand the importance of proteeting the earth and loving层s次。 the animals ④收尾简明：结尾发出共同行动的呼 Let's act together to make a more beautiful home for us 吁，呼应标题。 humans and animals as well. 的素材积累 储备金句，提升语言质感 [开头句] 1.We are members of the Wild Animals Club. 2.In our country,the number of wild animals is becoming smaller and smaller. 3.Many wild animals are now in danger because of hunting. 4.I am writing to ask for your help to protect the rhinos in the wild. [中间句] 1.Most bears eat meat and fish,but some also eat plants and insects. 2.People also hunted us for our horns. 3.Many animals lose their lives because people hunt them. 4.Air and water pollution makes it hard for wild animals to live healthy lives. 98 Unit 5 Wild animals [结尾句 1.I think everybody should act to protect wild animals. 2.Please help us,or there may be none of us left in the future. 3.We hope you can accept our invitation and join us. [名言警句] 1.To protect animals is to protect ourselves! 保护动物就是保护我们自己！ 2.Please be good friends with animals. 请和动物做好朋友。 目写作演练 实战练笔，夯实写作功底 本周是学校的“爱护野生动物周”。请你根据表格中的提示，以“Wolves are in danger'”为题，用 英语写一篇短文。 外表 体型不是很大；毛很厚 能力 能看到、听到、闻到远处的东西… 品质 团队协作：不会为娱乐而杀生 主食 动物；有时吃昆虫 危险 居住区域…；人们捕杀，因为… 措施 …(至少列举两项措施) 总结 动物是我们的朋友… 要求：1.短文包括表格中的信息，省略号部分须补充完整。2.词数80左右。 [思路点拨]1.文体：说明文。2.时态：一般现在时。3.人称：以第三人称为主。 [写作提纲] Wolves are not very... They can see,hear... Wolves are in danger Sadly,wolves are now in danger. So we had better take action... Animals are our friends... [妙笔生花] Wolves are in danger 99probably be no polar bears.5.To tell people to help polar bears. 第4课时Integration -1.dropped 2.risk 3.disasters 4.certain 5.pollution 6.whale 二、1.got hurt2.hunting3.melting4.illness 5.Indian 三、1.B2.A3.C4.B 四、1.D根据“Wake up early enough and..you'll likely hear the pleasant singing of birds.”可知，清晨 听见鸟鸣是“常见的”。 2.B根据下文they choose early morning hours可 知，鸟鸣持续几个“小时”。 3.A根据other birds to avoid their area可知，此处 指“警告”其他鸟类。 4.B根据food及鸟类的生存活动可知，此处指“寻 找”食物。 5.C因为觅食困难，所以它们“转而”去唱歌， instead符合语境。 6.B根据前文“One theory is that..”可知，此处 指另一个“理论”。 7.C根据“It isn't easy for birds to live in the..” 及鸟类的自然生存环境可知，wd符合语境。 8.B根据through the night及生存挑战可知，此处 指“安全”度过。 9.D根据“birds'singing to travel clearly thanks to the cooler,drier air'”可知，空气使鸟鸣能够清晰 传播。 10.D根据tell who is singing及清晰传播的目的可 知，此处指分辨“附近的”鸣叫者。 11.B根据greater distances及声音的传播特性可 知，travel符合语境。 12.A根据前文“a common belief that..”可知，此 处指代“这个观点”。 13.A根据“played sparrow..in the morning and at noon'”可知，研究人员播放的是提前录制的“录音”。 14.A根据didn't travel farther和were more consistent可知，前后分句之间是转折关系，用but。 15.C根据“when they have the best..of being heard”及能量有限的语境可知，此处指被听到的 “机会”。 长难句解读 原句：There used to be a common belief that birds sang so much in the mornings because the sounds could travel greater distances because of less air movement. 结构剖析：There used to be a common belief是主 句；that引导同位语从句，解释belief的具体内容； 同位语从句中又包含because引导的原因状语从 句；because of less air movement是介词短语作原 因状语。 翻译：过去人们普遍认为，鸟类在清晨频繁鸣叫，是 因为空气流动少，声音能传播得更远。 五、1.C细节理解题。根据“Bakso is a Sumatran tiger,a type found on the Indonesian island of Sumatra..”及“Bakso is the first tiger born at the Animal Kingdom in seven years and it takes a whole team to care for him.”可知，巴克索是出生并生活在 迪士尼动物王国的苏门答腊虎。 2.B细节理解题。根据“She saw Bakso inside his mum for the first time before his birth in September, 2024.”可知，巴克索出生在2024年9月。 3.C细节理解题。根据“For his birthday celebration,Heavey wrapped toys in paper for Bakso to open.Bakso also got some of his favourite treats, such as goat's milk,during the party.”可知，为了庆 祝生日，饲养员给巴克索准备了包好的玩具，还提供 了他最爱的零食。 4.D词义猜测题。根据“Natalie Mylniczenko is a vet at the Animal Kingdom.She's been monitoring Bakso's health since he was born.”可知，兽医从巴克 索出生就关注他的健康，后续还会给他做定期检查， 因此，monitor意为“监控，关注”，与watch over含义 一致。 5.A推理判断题。根据“The animals teach me a lot of things every day.”可知，她从动物身上学到很多。 写作专项提优 One possible version: Wolves are in danger Wolves are not very big.They have thick fur. They can see,hear and smell things far away.They can run for hours without stopping.Wolves often work as a team.They never kill for fun.Wolves live mainly on animals,but sometimes they also eat insects. Sadly,wolves are now in danger.They have fewer and fewer living areas and people kill them because they think wolves are dangerous to humans. So we had better take action to protect wolves right now.We should build more wolf reserves and make laws to protect them. Animals are our friends.To protect animals is to protect ourselves. 听力专项提优 [听力材料] 第一部分听对话回答问题 本部分共有10道小题，每小题你将听到一段对 话，每段对话听两遍。在听每段对话前，你将有5秒 钟的时间阅读题目；听完每段对话后，你仍有5秒钟 的时间选出你认为最合适的备选答案。请在听到 “嘀”的信号时，进入下一小题。 1.M:Could you tell me what your favourite animal looks like？ W:Sure.It has black and white fur and lives on bamboo. 2.W:I'm going to make a fruit salad.Please help me buy some red apples,green pears and purple grapes. M:OK.I'll go to the supermarket at once. 3.M:Is that girl your best friend Lily? W:No.Lily has long straight hair. 4.W:Do you often take the school bus to school, Jack? M:No.I usually ride my bicycle.But this morning my father drove me here because of the rain. 5.M:I want the storybook and that magazine.How much are they? W:The storybook is fifteen dollars,and that magazine is forty dollars. 6.W:I'll move to New York.I've got a new job. M:Oh,we'll miss you. 7.M:The best time to go swimming is in July. W:I don't think so.I think it's in December. 8.W:You mean you didn't catch the train.Why? M:I didn't know the way to the station was busy. 9.W:When does the next bus come? M:Buses come every fifteen minutes.You're five minutes late. 2 10.M:Mary,would you like to go to the cinema with me this Sunday? W:I'm afraid that day is full for me,Tom.I have to finish my homework and go to the Swimming Club. 第二部分听对话和短文回答问题 你将听到一段对话和两篇短文，各听两遍。听每 段对话或短文前，你将有时间阅读相关小题，每小题 5秒钟；听完后，每小题你仍有5秒钟的时间选出你 认为最合适的备选答案。 听一段对话，回答第11~12小题。答题完毕，请 等待“嘀”的信号，进入第一篇短文。 W:Did you enjoy yourself at the party last night? M:Of course. W:Did John go there too? M:No.He fell off his bike,and his left leg was hurt.He had to stay in hospital for two weeks. W:I'm sorry to hear that.I hope he will be better soon. M:I hope so.By the way,I'm going to see him after school.Would you like to go with me? W:Sure.When and where shall we meet? M:What about 5 o'clock outside the school gate? W:OK.See you then. 听第一篇短文，回答第13一15小题，请根据短文 内容，选择正确答案，完成信息记录表。答题完毕，请 等待“嘀”的信号，进入下一篇短文。 Some people think that all wild animals are dangerous.In fact,very few of them will hurt a man if he leaves them alone.If you meet a tiger or an elephant,you will run away.But even a tiger will keep away from a man if it is not very hungry.Lions and tigers only kill and eat men when they are too old to catch their usual food.Wild animals only hurt people when they are afraid that their babies may be in danger,or when people hunt them or make them angry. 听第二篇短文，回答第16~20小题。 Everyone in China knows giant pandas.In 1957, China began to send pandas to other countries.Giant pandas are very quiet.And they are also shy animals. They live alone in the forest.To our surprise,the giant panda eats at least ten kilos of bamboo each day.Giant pandas are good at climbing trees and