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2026全国I 卷读后续写 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Emily Sanders, a 25-year-old from Detroit, Michigan, set out on December 23rd with high hopes of reaching Toronto to meet her boy friend for Christmas. Although she had heard warnings about an approaching snowstorm, she didn’t give it much thought. She assumed that much like in Michigan, police would simply detour (使绕道) traffic around any closed-sections of the highway. But that didn't happen. As the snow came down more and more heavily, Emily was directed off the highway. She drove on for a while and found herself on an unfamiliar road toward a Canadian town. The blinding whiteout made driving nearly impossible. At one point, Emily's car got stuck. After a struggle, she managed to free the vehicle and continued inching along the snow-covered road. As night fell, panic set in. While Emily was driving on a narrow stretch of road her car slid into a ditch (沟). She tried to call for help but found no signal on her phone. Seeing no hope of immediate rescue, Emily decided to spend the night in her car. She wrapped herself in a blanket, waiting for morning. To stay, warm, she ran her engine for a few minutes every now and then. Eventually, she fell asleep. Emily awoke to a gentle knock on her car window. Standing outside were Daniel and his wife Rachel who noticed the stranded(被困的) vehicle on their way home and stopped to see if they could help. When Emily rolled down the window, Rachel asked if she was okay and told her it was not safe to stay overnight in the car. With genuine warmth in her voice, Rachel said they could take Emily to a nearby cafe they knew. Grateful and relieved, Emily accepted the offer. In the cafe, the couple bought Emily a hot chocolate and listened patiently as she explained her desperate situation: she was about a hundred miles from her destination, and her car was completely stuck, and her entire holiday plan could be ruined. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ( Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily cont i nue her jou rn ey by train. Three days later, Emily ret urn ed to get her car. ) Reading Read the story carefully and complete the following tasks. Identify the basic elements of the story (Who, When, Where) and summarize the storyline. What is the major conflict in the story? Underline the clues and foreshadowing details that may be useful for the continuation. Find the language and text features of the story. Point of view Setting Emotional changes Descriptive language Plot development Writing Circle the key words in the given sentences Ask questions about the plots according to the clues and the given sentences Para 1: Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. Q1 Q2 Q3 Para 2:Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. Q1 Q2 Q3 参考范文: Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. Hearing this, a sudden wave of relief chased away her panic, and she nodded eagerly as a heavy burden was finally lifted from her chest. Without hesitation, the kind couple drove her through the snowy streets to the nearest station and accompanied her to the ticket counter. Before parting, Rachel tenderly wrapped her own thick, wool scarf around Emily’s neck, bringing a sudden rush of warmth to her freezing body. Meanwhile, Daniel handed her a slip of paper with their phone number, giving her a profound sense of security she had lost in the storm. Touched by their unexpected kindness, Emily felt tears welling up in her eyes. A few hours later, as the train safely pulled into the Toronto station, she rushed onto the platform and threw herself into her boyfriend’s waiting arms, her heart overflowing with joy because her Christmas holiday was saved. Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. The roaring storm had finally given way to a bright, sunlit winter morning, with crisp air and thick snow sparkling beautifully under the sun. As Emily approached the narrow ditch, her eyes widened in utter surprise. Her stranded car had already been pulled out and was parked safely on the cleared roadside. Standing right beside it were Daniel and Rachel, waving at her with warm, familiar smiles; they had used their familiarity with the local area to arrange a town tow truck ahead of time. Daniel walked up and handed her the keys with a grin, adding that they had thoroughly checked the engine to ensure it still ran smoothly despite her starting it repeatedly during the whiteout. Overwhelmed with gratitude, Emily hugged them tightly, her voice trembling with emotion. Driving away and watching them wave goodbye in her rearview mirror, Emily took a deep breath, realizing that although she had underestimated the storm, she had also underestimated the incredible warmth of human kindness. 1 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $ 以2026高考全国I卷读后续写为例 读后续写技技巧训练 线索+情感线+问题驱动回扣设计 1 What can you see in the picture? How do you think Emily feels at this moment? Why? What do you think happened before this picture was taken? 2 Where do you think Emily is and where is she going? What problems might she have experienced before arriving here? Who might have helped her get here, and how might she thank them later? Emily 3 PART ONE Reading 4 Read for Plot and Continuation Read the story carefully and complete the following tasks. Identify the basic elements of the story (Who, When, Where) and summarize the storyline.  What is the major conflict in the story? Underline the clues and foreshadowing details that may be useful for the continuation. Find the language and text features of the story. Point of view Setting Emotional changes Descriptive language Plot development   5 Who (Characters) Emily Sanders A 25-year-old woman from Detroit, Michiganng to Toronto to spend Christmas wi. She is travelith her boyfriend. Daniel and Rachel A kind local couple. They discover Emily's stranded car and offer help. Emily's Boyfriend Waiting for her in Toronto for Christmas. 6 From Detroit, Michigan, to Toronto, Canada. A snow-covered highway and unfamiliar rural roads. A ditch beside a narrow road. Emily's car. A nearby café. Where (Setting) 8 December 23rd, just before Christmas. During a severe snowstorm. When (Time) 9 The blinding whiteout made driving nearly impossible. At one point, Emily's car got stuck. After a struggle, she managed to free the vehicle and continued inching along the snow-covered road. As night fell, panic set in. While Emily was driving on a narrow stretch of road her car slid into a ditch (沟). She tried to call for help but found no signal on her phone. Seeing no hope of immediate rescue, Emily decided to spend the night in her car. She wrapped herself in a blanket, waiting for morning. To stay, warm, she ran her engine for a few minutes every now and then. Eventually, she fell asleep. Climax 10 Emily awoke to a gentle knock on her car window. Standing outside were Daniel and his wife Rachel who noticed the stranded(被困的) vehicle on their way home and stopped to see if they could help. When Emily rolled down the window, Rachel asked if she was okay and told her it was not safe to stay overnight in the car. With genuine warmth in her voice, Rachel said they could take Emily to a nearby cafe they knew. Grateful and relieved, Emily accepted the offer. In the cafe, the couple bought Emily a hot chocolate and listened patiently as she explained her desperate situation: she was about a hundred miles from her destination her car was completely stuck, and her entre holiday plan could be ruined. Turning Point 11 Emily Sanders, a 25-year-old from Detroit, Michigan, set out on December 23rd with high hopes of reaching Toronto to meet her boy friend for Christmas. Although she had heard warmings about an approaching snowstorm, she didn’t give it much thought. She assumed that much like in Michigan, police would simply detour (使绕道) traffic around any closed-sections of the highway. But that didn't happen. As the snow came down more and more heavily, Emily was directed off the highway. She drove on for a while and found herself on an unfamiliar road toward a Canadian town. Beginning Development 12 Conflict External Conflict Emily vs. Nature Emily struggles against the powerful snowstorm, which causes: Road closures Poor visibility Dangerous driving conditions Her car becoming stranded Internal Conflict Emily vs. Fear and Anxiety As the situation worsens, Emily experiences: Panic Helplessness Uncertainty Fear that her Christmas plans will be ruined 13 Clues Tell the clues you have found and what you can infer from the clues. 14 Clues Emily Sanders, a 25-year-old from Detroit, Michigan, set out on December 23rd with high hopes of reaching Toronto to meet her boy friend for Christmas. Although she had heard warmings about an approaching snowstorm, she didn’t give it much thought. She assumed that much like in Michigan, police would simply detour (使绕道) traffic around any closed-sections of the highway. But that didn't happen. As the snow came down more and more heavily, Emily was directed off the highway. She drove on for a while and found herself on an unfamiliar road toward a Canadian town. This suggests that reaching Toronto remains Emily's ultimate goal. She will probably find another way to continue her trip. 15 The blinding whiteout made driving nearly impossible. At one point, Emily's car got stuck. After a struggle, she managed to free the vehicle and continued inching along the snow-covered road. As night fell, panic set in. While Emily was driving on a narrow stretch of road her car slid into a ditch (沟). She tried to call for help but found no signal on her phone. Seeing no hope of immediate rescue, Emily decided to spend the night in her car. She wrapped herself in a blanket, waiting for morning. To stay, warm, she ran her engine for a few minutes every now and then. Eventually, she fell asleep. This foreshadows that Emily cannot continue driving and must use another form of transportation, which matches the first given sentence. 16 Emily awoke to a gentle knock on her car window. Standing outside were Daniel and his wife Rachel who noticed the stranded(被困的) vehicle on their way home and stopped to see if they could help. When Emily rolled down the window, Rachel asked if she was okay and told her it was not safe to stay overnight in the car. With genuine warmth in her voice, Rachel said they could take Emily to a nearby cafe they knew. Grateful and relieved, Emily accepted the offer. The couple are likely to play an important role in solving Emily's problem and helping her complete her journey. This indicates that they are local residents who know the area well and may help Emily make practical arrangements. This highlights the danger Emily faced and prepares readers for a theme centered on gratitude and human kindness. 17 In the cafe, the couple bought Emily a hot chocolate and listened patiently as she explained her desperate situation: she was about a hundred miles from her destination her car was completely stuck, and her entre holiday plan could be ruined. This shows that Daniel and Rachel are compassionate and willing to help, not only physically but also emotionally. The hot chocolate symbolizes warmth, kindness, and care. This detail may be echoed later in the continuation. 18 Man vs. Nature + Man vs. Self 情境类型:意外困境(极端天气)+陌生人陌生人善意救助 Point of View Third-person narration Setting:The setting plays a crucial role in the story. Weather approaching snowstorm blinding whiteout snow-covered road Time night fell overnight morning Place highway unfamiliar road ditch café 19 Emily's emotions change throughout the story. Emily Sanders, a 25-year-old from Detroit, Michigan, set out on December 23rd with high hopes of reaching Toronto to meet her boy friend for Christmas. Although she had heard warmings about an approaching snowstorm, she didn’t give it much thought. She assumed that much like in Michigan, police would simply detour (使绕道) traffic around any closed-sections of the highway. But that didn't happen. As the snow came down more and more heavily, Emily was directed off the highway. She drove on for a while and found herself on an unfamiliar road toward a Canadian town. The blinding whiteout made driving nearly impossible. At one point, Emily's car got stuck. After a struggle, she managed to free the vehicle and continued inching along the snow-covered road. As night fell, panic set in. While Emily was driving on a narrow stretch of road her car slid into a ditch (沟). She tried to call for help but found no signal on her phone. Seeing no hope of immediate rescue, Emily decided to spend the night in her car. She wrapped herself in a blanket, waiting for morning. To stay, warm, she ran her engine for a few minutes every now and then. Eventually, she fell asleep. Emily awoke to a gentle knock on her car window. Standing outside were Daniel and his wife Rachel who noticed the stranded(被困的) vehicle on their way home and stopped to see if they could help. When Emily rolled down the window, Rachel asked if she was okay and told her it was not safe to stay overnight in the car. With genuine warmth in her voice, Rachel said they could take Emily to a nearby cafe they knew. Grateful and relieved, Emily accepted the offer. In the cafe, the couple bought Emily a hot chocolate and listened patiently as she explained her desperate situation: she was about a hundred miles from her destination her car was completely stuck, and her entre holiday plan could be ruined. 20 High hopes for Christmas → worried by the snowstorm → nervous as roads became unfamiliar → panic set in when night fell → helpless with no phone signal → desperate in the stranded car → relieved after meeting Daniel and Rachel → grateful for their help → hopeful about reaching Toronto → deeply thankful for the kindness of strangers Emily's emotions change throughout the story. How would she feel in the continuation? 21 PART TWO Writing 22 Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. 衔接一:? 衔接二:? 衔接三:? when: Where: Who: Main idea: Plots: ? when: Where: Who: Main idea: Plots: ? Theme? Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. 衔接一:? 衔接二:? 衔接三:? when: Where: Who: Main idea: Plots: ? when: Where: Who: Main idea: Plots: ? Theme? What can we infer about the plots from the given sentences? What is the theme? Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. Q1 How did Emily react to their suggestion, and what practical help did the couple offer to get her to the train station Q2 What did Daniel and Rachel leave Emily with before parting ways at the station Q3 Did she manage to arrive in Toronto on time? What was the scene like when they finally reunited? Ask detailed questions and answer them. Q1 How had the weather and environment changed after three days? When Emily arrived at the ditch, what did she find about her stranded car? Q2 Did Daniel and Rachel show up again? What kind of preparations had they already made to help her out with the vehicle ? Q3 As Emily drove away, what did she realize about her unforgettable journey? What is the deeper message or moral of this story regarding human kindness? Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. Ask detailed questions and answer them. Plot Development The story follows a clear structure: Journey → Crisis → Rescue → Solution → Gratitude 27 Main Theme The Kindness of Strangers The story demonstrates how strangers' kindness can make a significant difference during difficult times. Supporting Themes Helping people in need Human warmth in times of hardship Hope in difficult situations Gratitude and generosity 28 Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. Q1 How did Emily react to their suggestion, and what practical help did the couple offer to get her to the train station 一股宽慰的暖流瞬间驱散了她的恐慌,她急切地向夫妇俩点头,压在心头多日的沉重大石终于落了地。 Answerer the questions from the following aspects: (Actions+ expressions +emotions +environment +echoing the clues) A wave of relief chased away her panic, and she nodded eagerly as a heavy burden was finally lifted from her chest. 29 Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. Answerer the questions from the following aspects: (Actions+ expressions +emotions +environment ) Q2 What did Daniel and Rachel leave Emily with before parting ways at the station Rachel tenderly wrapped her own thick, wool scarf around Emily’s neck, bringing a sudden rush of warmth to her freezing body. 临别前,瑞秋心疼地解下自己身上那条厚实的纯羊毛围巾,温柔地系在埃米莉的脖子上,让惊魂未定的埃米莉浑身涌起一股久违的暖意。 30 Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. Answerer the questions from the following aspects: (Actions+ expressions +emotions +environment ) Q2 What did Daniel and Rachel leave Emily with before parting ways at the station Daniel handed her a slip of paper with their phone number, giving her a profound sense of security she had lost in the storm. 丹尼尔塞给她一张写有他们电话号码的便条,这让在暴风雪中失联已久的埃米莉,重新获得了一种踏实的安全感。 31 Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. Answerer the questions from the following aspects: (Actions+ expressions +emotions +environment +echoing the clues) Q3 Did she manage to arrive in Toronto on time? What was the scene like when they finally reunited? She rushed onto the platform and threw herself into her boyfriend’s waiting arms, her heart overflowing with joy because her Christmas was saved. 当火车终于驶入多伦多车站,她迫不及待地冲上站台,紧紧扑进男朋友早已张开的双臂中,心中满溢着圣诞假期失而复得的喜悦。 32 Answerer the questions from the following aspects: (Actions+ expressions +emotions +environment +echoing the clues) Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. Q1 How had the weather and environment changed after three days? When Emily arrived at the ditch, what did she find about her stranded car? The blinding whiteout had given way to a bright, sunlit morning, and Emily’s eyes widened in utter surprise to find her car already pulled out of the ditch. 肆虐的暴风雪早已停息,取而代之的是一个洒满阳光、银装素裹的明媚清晨;当埃米莉赶到现场,她惊讶地瞪大了眼睛——她的车竟然已经被完好损地从沟里拖了出来。 33 Answerer the questions from the following aspects: (Actions+ expressions +emotions +environment +echoing the clues) Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. Q2 Did Daniel and Rachel show up again? What kind of preparations had they already made to help her out with the vehicle ? Standing by the car were Daniel and Rachel, who had used their familiarity with the local area to arrange a tow truck ahead of time. 丹尼尔和瑞秋正站在车旁微笑着向她挥手,原来他们利用自己对当地环境的熟悉,提前帮埃米莉联系好了镇上的拖车。 34 Answerer the questions from the following aspects: (Actions+ expressions +emotions +environment +echoing the clues) Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. Q2 Did Daniel and Rachel show up again? What kind of preparations had they already made to help her out with the vehicle ? Daniel handed her the keys with a grin, saying that they had thoroughly checked the engine to ensure it still ran smoothly. 丹尼尔笑着把车钥匙还给埃米莉,并贴心地告诉她,他们已经彻底检查过汽车引擎,确保频繁启动没有对车辆造成损伤。 35 Answerer the questions from the following aspects: (Actions+ expressions +emotions +environment +echoing the clues) Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. Q3 As Emily drove away, what did she realize about her unforgettable journey? What is the deeper message or moral of this story regarding human kindness? Watching them wave goodbye in her rearview mirror, Emily realized that although she had underestimated the storm, she had also underestimated the incredible warmth of human kindness. 看着后视镜里渐渐远去、不断向她挥手的夫妇俩,埃米莉深吸了一口气,心中感慨万千:自己虽然低估了这场暴风雪的威力,但更低估了人间善意所带来的无尽温暖。 36 Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. Hearing this, a sudden wave of relief chased away her panic, and she nodded eagerly as a heavy burden was finally lifted from her chest. Without hesitation, the kind couple drove her through the snowy streets to the nearest station and accompanied her to the ticket counter. Before parting, Rachel tenderly wrapped her own thick, wool scarf around Emily’s neck, bringing a sudden rush of warmth to her freezing body. Meanwhile, Daniel handed her a slip of paper with their phone number, giving her a profound sense of security she had lost in the storm. Touched by their unexpected kindness, Emily felt tears welling up in her eyes. A few hours later, as the train safely pulled into the Toronto station, she rushed onto the platform and threw herself into her boyfriend’s waiting arms, her heart overflowing with joy because her Christmas holiday was saved. 37 Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. The roaring storm had finally given way to a bright, sunlit winter morning, with crisp air and thick snow sparkling beautifully under the sun. As Emily approached the narrow ditch, her eyes widened in utter surprise. Her stranded car had already been pulled out and was parked safely on the cleared roadside. Standing right beside it were Daniel and Rachel, waving at her with warm, familiar smiles; they had used their familiarity with the local area to arrange a town tow truck ahead of time. Daniel walked up and handed her the keys with a grin, adding that they had thoroughly checked the engine to ensure it still ran smoothly despite her starting it repeatedly during the whiteout. Overwhelmed with gratitude, Emily hugged them tightly, her voice trembling with emotion. Driving away and watching them wave goodbye in her rearview mirror, Emily took a deep breath, realizing that although she had underestimated the storm, she had also underestimated the incredible warmth of human kindness. 38 $

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