Unit 4 Get ready for the future （单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材冀教版九年级下册

Unit 4 Get ready for the future 单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于 “人与自我” 范畴，涉及 “生活与职业选择、人生规划与理想信念”。 该单元旨在引导学生思考未来职业理想，了解不同职业的工作内容与素养要求，认识到梦想需要依靠努力、坚持与自身能力去实现；同时感悟青春的内涵，树立积极向上的人生态度，学会规划个人成长，勇敢面对挫折，保持对未来的热爱与追求。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.pilot 飞行员 2.artist 艺术家 3.transportation engineer 交通工程师 4.astronaut 宇航员 5.cook /chef 厨师 6.fireman (firefighter) 消防员 7.doctor 医生 8.dentist 牙医 9.merchant 商人 10.policeman 警察 11.professional 专业人士 12.career 职业；生涯 13.plan 计划 14.future 未来 15.dream 梦想 16.talent 天赋 17.interest 兴趣 18.wealth 财富 19.safety 安全 20.patient 病人 21.first aid 急救 22.graduating class 毕业班 23.astronaut 航天员 24.mission 任务 25.flag 旗帜 26.spirit 精神 27.grow up 长大 28.would like to be 想要成为 29.travel around the world 环游世界 30.run a big factory 经营一家大工厂 31.make money 赚钱 32.protect the environment 保护环境 33.invent things 发明东西 34.put out fires 灭火 35.save people 救人 36.educate the public 教育公众 37.keep learning 持续学习 38.offer advice 提供建议 39.achieve one’s dream 实现梦想 40.achieve a breakthrough 取得突破 41.take a new road 开启新道路 42.pick oneself up 振作起来 43.display the flag 展示旗帜 44.bear pressure 承受压力 45.complete the task 完成任务 46.plant seeds 播种 47.reap a harvest 收获 48.desert one’s ideals 放弃理想 49.solar-powered 太阳能的 50.brave 勇敢的 51.hard-working 勤奋的 52.patient 有耐心的 53.intelligent 聪明的 54.creative 有创造力的 55.valuable 有价值的 56.bright 光明的 57.calm 冷静的 58.professional 专业的 59.devoted 奉献的 60.patriotic 爱国的 61.infinite 无限的 62.contaminated 被污染的 63.rosy 红润的 64.supple 柔韧的 65.timid 胆小的 66.enthusiastic 热情的 67.optimistic 乐观的 68.pessimistic 悲观的 69.discuss their plans for the future 讨论未来规划 70.match not only your interests but also your talents 不仅符合兴趣，也匹配天赋 71.keep one’s mission in mind 牢记使命 72.in the face of death 面对死亡 73.dedication to duties 忠于职责 74.the passport to success 通往成功的途径 75.have bright futures ahead of you 拥有光明的未来 76.There is no such thing as true failure. 没有真正意义上的失败。 77.Failure is an opportunity to try something new. 失败是尝试新事物的机会。 78.keep your choices open 保留选择的余地 79.do well in school 在学校好好学习 80.carve…from… 从…… 雕琢出…… 81.grow old by deserting our ideals 因放弃理想而老去 82.courage over timidity 勇气战胜怯懦 83.as for me 至于我 84.on behalf of 代表 85.at times 有时 86.just at that moment 就在那时 87.luckily 幸运的是 88.overall 总的来说 句式积累 开头句： 1. What I want to be when I grow up is a job that fits my interests and talents. 我长大后想从事一份符合我兴趣与天赋的工作。 2. Everyone has a dream for the future, and my dream is to be a great astronaut. 每个人都有对未来的梦想，我的梦想是成为一名宇航员。 3. It has always been my dream to work as a firefighter to help people in need. 成为一名消防员，帮助有需要的人，一直是我的梦想。 中间句： 1. Not only does this job interest me, but it also requires me to keep learning all the time. 这份工作不仅吸引我，还要求我不断学习。 2. To make my dream come true, I will work harder and develop useful skills from now on. 为实现梦想，从现在起我会更加努力，培养实用技能。 3. Failure is never a stop; it is a chance for us to try something new. 失败不是终点，而是我们尝试新事物的机会。 结尾句： 1. I believe as long as I stick to my dream and keep working hard, it will come true one day. 我相信只要坚持梦想、不懈努力，终有一天梦想会实现。 2. Hard work is the passport to success, and I will never give up my ideals. 努力是通往成功的通行证，我永远不会放弃理想。 3. I will hold on to my dream and look forward to my bright future. 我会坚守梦想，期待属于自己的光明未来。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：Whatever you want to be, you need to work hard to achieve it. 仿写：无论我拥有什么梦想，我都需要坚持努力去实现它。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：Failure is an opportunity to try something new. 仿写：如果我遇到困难，那就是让自己变得更好的机会。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：I wish you the best in everything you do. 仿写：我相信只要坚守梦想，我将会拥有光明的未来。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. Whatever dream I have, I need to keep trying to make it come true. 2. If I meet difficulties, it is an opportunity to become better. 3. I believe I will have a bright future if I stick to my dream. 典例 假设你是李华，你校正在开展“多彩未来”职业规划主题活动，现向学生广泛征集信息。请你根据以下调查问卷，给活动负责人Mr. Black写一封邮件，谈谈自己的理想职业及理由，并阐述职业规划。 My Dream Job1. What do you want to be in the future? □A doctor.□A teacher.□Others ____________ 2. Why do you choose that? 3. How will you achieve your dream? 4. What colour can represent you? 注意： （1）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； （2）词数：90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. Black, I’m Li Hua from Grade Nine and I’m writing to talk about my dream job. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 审题 ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件应用文； ② 人称、时态：要求描写理想职业是什么、选择该职业的理由、如何实现梦想以及代表自己的颜色；人称为第一人称，时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。 ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 谋篇布局 开头 总起句，引出话题。 中间 分别介绍理想职业是什么、选择该职业的理由、如何实现梦想以及代表自己的颜色。 结尾 表达愿望，升华主题 佳作展示 Dear Mr. Black, I’m Li Hua from Grade Nine and I’m writing to talk about my dream job. I want to be a doctor in the future. I choose this job because I want to help sick people and save their lives. Also, doctors are always respected by others. To achieve my dream, I will study hard to get into a good medical university. Besides, I plan to read more books about medicine to get more knowledge. I think white can represent myself. White means purity and kindness, which are important qualities for a doctor. I believe my dream will come true one day. Yours, Li Hua 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： ① are always respected by others被其他人尊重 ② achieve my dream实现梦想 ③ come true 实现 高分句型： ① I choose this job because I want to help sick people and save their lives.（because引导的原因状语从句） ② To achieve my dream, I will study hard to get into a good medical university.（动词不定式表目的） （一） 毕业之际，学校英文报将举行以“My dream job”为题的征文比赛。请你根据自己的理想，选择下表中一个职业或自行确定另一个职业写一篇英语短文，向校英文报投稿。 内容要点 参考词汇 What do you want to be when you grow up? a teacher a scientist Why do you want to be a(n)...? • be good at communicating • work with children • be interested in science • invent new products How are you going to do that? • get a good education • learn how to teach children • study science hard • do scientific research Where are you going to work? • ... • ... When are you going to start? • ... • ... 注意：(1)文中必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用； (2)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； (3)词数80～100。 My dream job _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My dream job    Everyone has a dream job. As for me, I dream of being a scientist. I have always been deeply interested in science. I want to invent new products to improve people’s lives.     In order to achieve my dream, I must take action right now. First, I’m going to study science very hard. Second, I plan to do scientific research. Most importantly, I’ll read as many books as possible.     After I graduate from university, I am going to work in Beijing, where I can communicate with more experts. I firmly believe my dream will come true if I work hard. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文（征文） 明确要点：长大后想成为什么职业、为什么选择这个职业、打算如何实现、计划在哪里工作、何时开始行动 确定人称：第一人称 (I) 注意事项：包含表格全部要点，可适当发挥；文中不能出现真实人名、校名；词数80～100；标题My dream job [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出话题，点明理想职业是科学家，说明选择的原因 主体段：介绍为实现梦想将要付出的行动 结尾段：说明工作地点，表达对梦想能够实现的信心 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：开篇点明理想职业与原因 表达 1：Everyone has a dream job./All people have their own dream jobs. 表达 2：As for me, I dream of being a scientist./For me, my dream job is to be a scientist. 表达 3：I have always been deeply interested in science./Science has always attracted me a lot. 表达 4：I want to invent new products to improve people’s lives./I hope to create new things to make people’s lives better. 要点二：实现梦想的做法 表达 1：In order to achieve my dream, I must take action right now./I have to start working hard to make my dream come true. 表达 2：First, I’m going to study science very hard./First of all, I will put much effort into science study. 表达 3：Second, I plan to do scientific research./Besides, I will take part in scientific studies. 表达 4：Most importantly, I’ll read as many books as possible./What matters most is that I will read lots of books. 要点三：工作地点与结尾感悟 表达 1：After I graduate from university, I am going to work in Beijing, where I can communicate with more experts./I will work in Beijing after college so that I can talk with more experts. 表达 2：I firmly believe my dream will come true if I work hard./I’m sure I can realize my dream through hard work. （二） 请以“Growth Notes of My Ninth Grade”为题，写一篇关于九年级成长的短文，词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 提示： 1. 学习上：注重细节，不轻易放弃；作业多时列清单规划；考前复习 2. 课余：喜欢阅读、擅长篮球；上周参加阅读比赛获一等奖 3. 成长愿望：想成为青少年工作者，帮助青少年解决问题 Growth Notes of My Ninth Grade I’m Li Hua. My ninth grade is a journey of growth and dream-chasing. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Growth Notes of My Ninth Grade I’m Li Hua. My ninth grade is a journey of growth and dream-chasing. In study, I always pay attention to details and never give up easily. When there is too much homework, I try to make a list of all the homework and work out how much time I need to finish it all. Before exams, I go over what I’ve learnt as often as possible. In my spare time, I love reading and I’m good at playing basketball. Last week, I took part in a reading competition and won the first prize. For my growth wish, I want to be a youth worker because they can help teenagers solve their problems. I will keep trying hard to realize my dream. 【详解】写作步骤   [第一步：审题立意]    确定文体：记叙文，以一般现在时为主，兼用一般过去时    明确要点：学习上的成长、课余生活与成绩、成长愿望    确定人称：第一人称（I / my）    注意事项：词数100左右，开头已给出不计入总词数   [第二步：构思布局]    三段式结构：    第一段：已给出 第二段：学习上的变化与努力 + 课余爱好与获奖经历 第三段：成长愿望，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开]    要点一：学习上    pay attention to details, never give up easily, make a list to plan time, review carefully before exams, go over notes, ask teachers for help, keep trying when facing difficulties   要点二：课余    love reading, be good at basketball, take part in a reading competition, win first prize, feel proud, spend free time meaningfully, develop different interests   要点三：成长愿望    want to be a youth worker, help teenagers solve problems, listen to others, give advice, support young people, make a difference, grow happily with others （三） 假设你是李华，你校正在举办“My Space Dream（我的太空梦）”英语征文活动。请你根据以下提示写一篇短文。 提示：1. 你的太空梦想是什么；2. 你为什么会有这样的梦想（至少两点理由）；3. 你打算如何实现它。 要求：1. 词数80—100；2. 语句通顺、语法正确；3. 包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥；4. 至少使用三处一般将来时的被动语态。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My space dream is that a Chinese space station will be built on the moon one day. There are two reasons for my dream. First, important experiments will be carried out there. Because there is no air on the moon, new medicines and materials will be produced in ways that are impossible on Earth. Second, the moon may have special energy resources. More solutions to the energy problem will be found for both China and the world. To make my dream come true, I will study maths and science hard. I will also keep exercising to stay strong. 【详解】写作步骤 【第一步：审题立意】 确定文体：观点类说明文，时态以一般将来时为主 明确要点：依次写清我的太空梦想是什么，拥有这个梦想的两点理由，如何实现梦想 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：必须包含全部3个要点，控制词数80–100，重点使用“will be + 过去分词”的一般将来时被动语态。 【第二步：构思布局】 三段式结构： 开头段：开门见山，直接点明我的太空梦想 主体段：分两点阐述产生这个梦想的理由 结尾段：写自己为实现梦想打算付出的行动 【第三步：要点展开】 要点一：太空梦想 太空梦想：a Chinese space station will be built on the moon/space base/in the near future等 要点二：为什么会有这样的梦想 两点理由：first/important experiments will be carried out/new medicines and materials will be produced/in special ways/second/special energy resources on the moon will be found/more solutions to energy problems will be found for our world等 要点三：实现梦想的做法 实现梦想的做法：come true/study maths and science hard/keep exercising to stay strong/believe/will come true/only the best will be chosen/devote myself to learning/take regular exercise等 （四） 你的英语老师布置了一项特殊的英语活动：给十年后的自己写一封信。假设你是李华，请根据以下提示完成这封信。 写作要求： 1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； 3.词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Future Me, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Future Me,     How is everything going? I’m writing to share my present life and future dreams with you.     Now I’m a middle school student. I’m outgoing and friendly. I work hard at school, especially in English. In my free time, I love reading and playing table tennis. They keep me relaxed and healthy. Ten years later, I hope you are an excellent teacher to help kids learn. Keep reading and exercising. Whatever happens, stay brave and happy.     I am looking forward to meeting you in the future. Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文 时态：一般现在时（描述现在的自己）；一般将来时/一般现在时（描述对十年后的期待） 明确要点：介绍现在的个人情况；介绍业余爱好；对十年后的自己的期待 确定人称：第一人称I；第二人称you（称呼十年后的自己） 注意事项：词数80左右；要点齐全；语句通顺 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：问候，点明写信目的 主体段：介绍现在的自己：性格、学习、爱好；再写对十年后的期许 结尾段：表达期待 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：介绍现在的个人情况（身份、性格、学习） 身份：Now I’m a middle school student./ I am a student in Grade Nine. 性格：I’m outgoing and friendly./I am easy‑going and ready to help others. 学习：I work hard at school, especially in English./I study hard and I’m good at English. 要点二：介绍业余爱好 In my free time, I love reading and playing table tennis. They keep me relaxed and healthy./When I am free, I enjoy reading and playing table tennis. These hobbies help me stay relaxed and healthy. 要点三：对十年后的自己的期待（职业、习惯、心态） 职业和习惯：Ten years later, I hope you are an excellent teacher to help kids learn. Keep reading and exercising. /I hope you will be a great teacher to help children study. Keep on reading and doing sports. 心态：Whatever happens, stay brave and happy./No matter what difficulties you meet, be brave and keep happy. （五） 告别了八年级，九年级的挑战正在向你走来。回顾过去，你一定有许多收获：展望未来，你希望自己在哪些方面变得更好？请根据下图提示，以“My Plan for a Better Me”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你打算如何从健康、爱好、学习三个方面提升自己，为九年级做好准备。 要求： 1. 紧扣作文题目，注意正确运用时态； 2. 语言表达准确、语意通顺连贯； 3. 词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总数)。 My Plan for a Better Me As I am going to Grade 9, I realise it’s time to make some changes in my life. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Plan for a Better Me As I am going to Grade 9, I realise it’s time to make some changes in my life. First, I will exercise more to keep healthy. I plan to run every morning and stay away from junk food. Second, I want to learn a new skill. I will practice drawing on weekends. It can help me relax. Third, I will work hard at my lessons to improve my grades. I will make study plans and ask for help when I have problems. I believe these plans will help me become better and get ready for Grade 9. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：英语短文，以一般将来时为主 明确要点：从健康、爱好、学习三个方面写提升计划，为九年级做好准备 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：紧扣主题，时态准确；语句通顺连贯，不能出现真实人名、校名；词数80左右；开头已给出不计入总词数 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接已给开头 主体段：分别从健康、爱好、学习三方面介绍计划 结尾段：表达对计划的信心，做好升入九年级的准备 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：健康 计划选择：exercise more/run every morning/stay away from junk food/do more sports instead of staying up late等 目的作用：keep healthy/build up my body等 要点二：爱好 计划选择：learn a new skill/practice drawing on weekends/learn to play the guitar in my free time等 目的作用：help me relax/develop my interest等 要点三：学习 计划选择：work hard at my lessons/make study plans/ask for help when having problems/listen to teachers carefully等 目的作用：improve my grades/get ready for Grade 9等 （六） 人们常说：人生是一场马拉松。每天进步一点点，在平凡中不断突破，你将遇见更优秀的你。请以“Be a Better Person”为题，结合自己的实际情况，从生活习惯、体育锻炼、人际交往三方面，用英语写一篇短文。 内容包括：1．你未来的目标； 2．你的哪些不足阻碍了目标的实现，请举例说明（至少两点）； 3．你将如何改进不足，让自己更优秀（至少两点）。 写作要求：1．语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； 2．词数70—90，开头部分已经给出，不计入总词数； 3．书写规范，卷面整洁； 4．文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 Be a Better Person Life is like a marathon. We should make an effort to improve ourselves every day. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Be a Better Person Life is like a marathon. We should make an effort to improve ourselves every day. My biggest goal is to form good living habits. It can keep me energetic for my study and daily life. However, two bad habits stop me. I always stay up late and it makes me tired in the daytime. Besides, I seldom take exercise. To solve the problem, I decide to sleep early every night. What’s more, I will take regular exercise and communicate politely with others. I strongly believe small daily progress will help me be a better person. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般现在时、一般将来时为主 明确要点：未来目标/自身不足/改进方案（生活习惯、体育锻炼、人际交往三方面） 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出主题，句子已给出 主体段：分别介绍未来目标、阻碍目标的不足、自我改进措施 结尾段：总结感受，升华主题，表达持续进步的决心 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：未来目标 目标方向：good living habits/regular exercise/good interpersonal relationships等 目标作用：keep energetic/strengthen body/build friendly relationships等 要点二：自身不足 不足选择：stay up late/lack sports/communicate impatiently等 负面影响：make me tired/make me weak/bad for friendship等 要点三：改进方案 改进选择：sleep early/do daily sports/talk patiently等 预期效果：keep energetic/improve health/develop better friendships等 （七） 时光飞逝，初三学年已开始。回望初中过去两年，我们在学习与生活中收获成长，也看到自身的不足。初三是关键的收官之年，我们更要脚踏实地、奋力拼搏。校英语专栏Share Your Voice现面向全体九年级同学开展征文活动，请你以Meet the Better Me为题投稿，谈谈自己过去两年取得的进步、简述其原因，并反思自己目前不足之处、针对其提出新学期计划。 要求： 1. 80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 Meet the Better Me Looking back on the past two years, I have changed a lot. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Meet the Better Me Looking back on the past two years, I have changed a lot. I have made great progress. I have become more confident because I often take part in school activities. Also, I have learned to manage my time wisely, which helps me study better. However, I still have some weaknesses. For example, I sometimes feel nervous before exams. Besides, I often make some careless mistakes in my homework. In the new term, I have made some plans. First, I will make proper time plans to prepare for exams. Second, I will face difficulties bravely and ask teachers for help. I believe I will meet a better me in the future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，以现在完成时和一般现在时为主 明确要点：过去两年的进步及原因；目前不足之处；新学期计划 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：词数80-120；不得出现真实信息 [第二步：构思布局] 开头段：总起初中两年的变化（题干已给出） 主体段：分两层介绍进步（更自信、管理时间）及其原因；介绍不足（考前紧张、粗心犯错）及具体表现；介绍新学期计划（合理安排时间、勇敢面对困难） 结尾段：表达对未来更好的自己的信心 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：进步与原因 进步一：become more confident/take an active part in activities/speak in public等 进步二：learn to manage time wisely/plan my study well/organise my daily life等 原因：take part in school activities/practice more/push myself out of comfort zone等 要点二：不足之处 不足一：feel nervous before exams/get anxious before tests/worry about grades等 不足二：make careless mistakes/forget details/be not careful enough等 要点三：新学期计划 计划一：make proper time plans/prepare for exams/plan my study ahead等 计划二：face difficulties bravely/ask teachers for help/talk to friends等 （八） 暑假是自我提升的好时机。你校英文网站正在开展主题为“Improve Myself, Grow Better”的征文活动，征文通知页面附带一份自我评价量表，供同学们对照自查。请你从中选择自己最需要提升的一个方面，写一篇短文投稿。 Articles Wanted: Improve Myself, Grow Better We’re waiting for your articles! Read the self-check table first and start your writing. Self-check for Personal Improvement How well do you do in these areas? Very well OK Need improvement  Doing sports □ □ □  Eating habits □ □ □  Daily reading □ □ □  Volunteer work □ □ □  Housework □ □ □  Art learning □ □ □  Getting on with others □ □ □ Writing points: 1. What do you want to improve most? 2. Why do you want to improve it? 3. How do you plan to improve it? Summer vacation is a good chance to improve myself. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 要求： 1．词数100左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2．要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名。 【答案】例文 Summer vacation is a good chance to improve myself. I want to improve myself in doing sports most. I used to spend too much time studying and playing computer games, so I am a little weak and often get sick. Doing sports can help me keep healthy and energetic. To achieve this goal, I have made a plan. First, I will go jogging in the park for half an hour every morning. Second, I plan to play basketball with my friends twice a week. Finally, I will eat more healthy food instead of junk food. I believe I will grow better and stronger this summer. 【详解】写作步骤 第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般现在时和一般将来时为主 明确要点：1. 最想提升的方面 (运动)；2. 想提升的原因； 3. 提升计划 确定人称：第一人称 (I/my) 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名、校名 第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接给定开头，点明最想提升运动 主体段：第一层写自身问题+运动好处；第二层分点写提升计划 结尾段：总结展望，升华成长主题 第三步：要点展开： 要点一：最需提升之处——doing sports 现状描述：spend too much time studying and playing computer games/a little weak/often get sick/fall ill easily等 提升价值：keep healthy and energetic/strengthen my body/improve physical health/reduce stress and anxiety等 要点二：提升计划 计划：go jogging/play basketball/swim/run/eat healthy food等 时间频率：half an hour every morning/twice a week/every weekend等 要点三：结尾升华 表达期许：grow better and stronger/become healthier/make big changes to myself等 （九） 假设你是李华，你的笔友询问你的未来理想。请写一篇80词左右的邮件。 要点提示： 你的理想职业是什么； 你打算通过哪些行动实现梦想； 简单说说你的看法。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 Dear Tom, I’m glad to tell you my dream. I want to be a photographer when I grow up. To make my dream come true, I am going to take photography lessons. I plan to take more photos in my free time. And I will read books about photography to learn more skills. I know it is not easy. But I will keep trying. Where there is a will, there is a way. What’s your dream job? Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：电子邮件，以一般将来时为主 明确要点：介绍理想职业是什么、打算通过哪些行动实现梦想，并说说自己的看法 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：80词左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：介绍自己的梦想是什么 主体段：为自己的梦想的实现做哪些行动 结尾段：表达自己的看法，坚定信念，为理想坚持 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：介绍自己的理想 理想：want to be a photographer/teacher/dancer/doctor/grow up/in the future等 要点二：为梦想而付诸行动 具体行动：take photography lessons/study hard/in my free time/read books/about/learn more/skills/knowledge等 要点三：看法 具体看法：it is not easy/But I will keep trying/Where there is a will, there is a way./if I keep working hard, I can make it.等 （十） 梁启超在《少年中国说》中提到“少年智则国智，少年强则国强”。作为新时代的青少年，你认为青少年应该如何肩负起责任，为国家和社会做出贡献？请根据以下提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。 要点： 1. 你认为当代青少年应该具备哪些品质（如：独立、勤奋、有责任心等）？ 2. 你能在哪些方面(如：学习、环保、帮助他人等)贡献自己的力量？ 3. 你对未来有何展望？ 要求： 内容须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥。 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Possible Version 1: As teenagers in the new era, we should be independent, hard-working and responsible. We are the future of our country, so we should take our duty seriously. We can contribute in many ways. First, we should study hard to get more knowledge. Second, we can protect the environment by planting trees and reducing waste. Third, we should help people in need in our daily life. I am hopeful for the future. If every young person plays their part, our country will become stronger. I am sure that our efforts will create a brighter tomorrow. Possible Version 2: As modern teenagers, we should be independent, diligent and responsible. Liang Qichao said, “If we are strong, China will be strong.” This reminds us of our duty to our country. We can do our part in many ways. At school, we should study hard to learn more knowledge. In daily life, we can protect the environment by saving water and planting trees. Besides, we can help others by volunteering at old people’s homes. I believe that if we work together, our future will be bright. Our young generation can make a big difference to China. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，主体用一般现在时，结尾用一般将来时 明确要点：新时代青少年应具备的优良品质（如：独立、勤奋、有责任心等）；从学习、环保、帮助他人等方面，写出自己能贡献力量的具体做法；表达对未来的期许和展望 确定人称：第一人称we 注意事项：不得出现真实的人名、校名；主体论述用一般现在时，结尾展望未来用一般将来时 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引入主题，点明青少年的身份、应具备的品质，呼应“少年强则国强”的材料 主体段：分点阐述具体行动：学习、环保、帮助他人 结尾段：展望未来，表达青年一代的决心，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开]（Version 1） 要点一：新时代青少年应具备的优良品质 品质层面：we should be independent, hard-working and responsible/we should take our duty seriously/we should be independent, diligent and responsible/duty to our country/we ought to be self-disciplined and shoulder our responsibility等 要点二：从学习、环保、帮助他人等方面，写出自己能贡献力量的具体做法 学习：study hard to get more knowledge/learn more knowledge/enrich our knowledge/make progress constantly等 环保：protect the environment by planting trees and reducing waste/save water/save energy/live a low-carbon life等 帮助他人：help people in need in our daily life/help others by volunteering at old people’s homes/give a hand to people in trouble等 要点三：表达对未来的期许和展望 期许和展望：If every young person plays their part, our country will become stronger./our efforts will create a brighter tomorrow/work together/make a big difference/build a better homeland等 $ Unit 4 Get ready for the future 单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于 “人与自我” 范畴，涉及 “生活与职业选择、人生规划与理想信念”。 该单元旨在引导学生思考未来职业理想，了解不同职业的工作内容与素养要求，认识到梦想需要依靠努力、坚持与自身能力去实现；同时感悟青春的内涵，树立积极向上的人生态度，学会规划个人成长，勇敢面对挫折，保持对未来的热爱与追求。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.pilot 飞行员 2.artist 艺术家 3.transportation engineer 交通工程师 4.astronaut 宇航员 5.cook /chef 厨师 6.fireman (firefighter) 消防员 7.doctor 医生 8.dentist 牙医 9.merchant 商人 10.policeman 警察 11.professional 专业人士 12.career 职业；生涯 13.plan 计划 14.future 未来 15.dream 梦想 16.talent 天赋 17.interest 兴趣 18.wealth 财富 19.safety 安全 20.patient 病人 21.first aid 急救 22.graduating class 毕业班 23.astronaut 航天员 24.mission 任务 25.flag 旗帜 26.spirit 精神 27.grow up 长大 28.would like to be 想要成为 29.travel around the world 环游世界 30.run a big factory 经营一家大工厂 31.make money 赚钱 32.protect the environment 保护环境 33.invent things 发明东西 34.put out fires 灭火 35.save people 救人 36.educate the public 教育公众 37.keep learning 持续学习 38.offer advice 提供建议 39.achieve one’s dream 实现梦想 40.achieve a breakthrough 取得突破 41.take a new road 开启新道路 42.pick oneself up 振作起来 43.display the flag 展示旗帜 44.bear pressure 承受压力 45.complete the task 完成任务 46.plant seeds 播种 47.reap a harvest 收获 48.desert one’s ideals 放弃理想 49.solar-powered 太阳能的 50.brave 勇敢的 51.hard-working 勤奋的 52.patient 有耐心的 53.intelligent 聪明的 54.creative 有创造力的 55.valuable 有价值的 56.bright 光明的 57.calm 冷静的 58.professional 专业的 59.devoted 奉献的 60.patriotic 爱国的 61.infinite 无限的 62.contaminated 被污染的 63.rosy 红润的 64.supple 柔韧的 65.timid 胆小的 66.enthusiastic 热情的 67.optimistic 乐观的 68.pessimistic 悲观的 69.discuss their plans for the future 讨论未来规划 70.match not only your interests but also your talents 不仅符合兴趣，也匹配天赋 71.keep one’s mission in mind 牢记使命 72.in the face of death 面对死亡 73.dedication to duties 忠于职责 74.the passport to success 通往成功的途径 75.have bright futures ahead of you 拥有光明的未来 76.There is no such thing as true failure. 没有真正意义上的失败。 77.Failure is an opportunity to try something new. 失败是尝试新事物的机会。 78.keep your choices open 保留选择的余地 79.do well in school 在学校好好学习 80.carve…from… 从…… 雕琢出…… 81.grow old by deserting our ideals 因放弃理想而老去 82.courage over timidity 勇气战胜怯懦 83.as for me 至于我 84.on behalf of 代表 85.at times 有时 86.just at that moment 就在那时 87.luckily 幸运的是 88.overall 总的来说 句式积累 开头句： 1. What I want to be when I grow up is a job that fits my interests and talents. 我长大后想从事一份符合我兴趣与天赋的工作。 2. Everyone has a dream for the future, and my dream is to be a great astronaut. 每个人都有对未来的梦想，我的梦想是成为一名宇航员。 3. It has always been my dream to work as a firefighter to help people in need. 成为一名消防员，帮助有需要的人，一直是我的梦想。 中间句： 1. Not only does this job interest me, but it also requires me to keep learning all the time. 这份工作不仅吸引我，还要求我不断学习。 2. To make my dream come true, I will work harder and develop useful skills from now on. 为实现梦想，从现在起我会更加努力，培养实用技能。 3. Failure is never a stop; it is a chance for us to try something new. 失败不是终点，而是我们尝试新事物的机会。 结尾句： 1. I believe as long as I stick to my dream and keep working hard, it will come true one day. 我相信只要坚持梦想、不懈努力，终有一天梦想会实现。 2. Hard work is the passport to success, and I will never give up my ideals. 努力是通往成功的通行证，我永远不会放弃理想。 3. I will hold on to my dream and look forward to my bright future. 我会坚守梦想，期待属于自己的光明未来。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：Whatever you want to be, you need to work hard to achieve it. 仿写：无论我拥有什么梦想，我都需要坚持努力去实现它。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：Failure is an opportunity to try something new. 仿写：如果我遇到困难，那就是让自己变得更好的机会。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：I wish you the best in everything you do. 仿写：我相信只要坚守梦想，我将会拥有光明的未来。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 典例 假设你是李华，你校正在开展“多彩未来”职业规划主题活动，现向学生广泛征集信息。请你根据以下调查问卷，给活动负责人Mr. Black写一封邮件，谈谈自己的理想职业及理由，并阐述职业规划。 My Dream Job1. What do you want to be in the future? □A doctor.□A teacher.□Others ____________ 2. Why do you choose that? 3. How will you achieve your dream? 4. What colour can represent you? 注意： （1）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； （2）词数：90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. Black, I’m Li Hua from Grade Nine and I’m writing to talk about my dream job. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 审题 ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件应用文； ② 人称、时态：要求描写理想职业是什么、选择该职业的理由、如何实现梦想以及代表自己的颜色；人称为第一人称，时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。 ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 谋篇布局 开头 总起句，引出话题。 中间 分别介绍理想职业是什么、选择该职业的理由、如何实现梦想以及代表自己的颜色。 结尾 表达愿望，升华主题 佳作展示 Dear Mr. Black, I’m Li Hua from Grade Nine and I’m writing to talk about my dream job. I want to be a doctor in the future. I choose this job because I want to help sick people and save their lives. Also, doctors are always respected by others. To achieve my dream, I will study hard to get into a good medical university. Besides, I plan to read more books about medicine to get more knowledge. I think white can represent myself. White means purity and kindness, which are important qualities for a doctor. I believe my dream will come true one day. Yours, Li Hua 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： ① are always respected by others被其他人尊重 ② achieve my dream实现梦想 ③ come true 实现 高分句型： ① I choose this job because I want to help sick people and save their lives.（because引导的原因状语从句） ② To achieve my dream, I will study hard to get into a good medical university.（动词不定式表目的） （一） 毕业之际，学校英文报将举行以“My dream job”为题的征文比赛。请你根据自己的理想，选择下表中一个职业或自行确定另一个职业写一篇英语短文，向校英文报投稿。 内容要点 参考词汇 What do you want to be when you grow up? a teacher a scientist Why do you want to be a(n)...? • be good at communicating • work with children • be interested in science • invent new products How are you going to do that? • get a good education • learn how to teach children • study science hard • do scientific research Where are you going to work? • ... • ... When are you going to start? • ... • ... 注意：(1)文中必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用； (2)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； (3)词数80～100。 My dream job _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） 请以“Growth Notes of My Ninth Grade”为题，写一篇关于九年级成长的短文，词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 提示： 1. 学习上：注重细节，不轻易放弃；作业多时列清单规划；考前复习 2. 课余：喜欢阅读、擅长篮球；上周参加阅读比赛获一等奖 3. 成长愿望：想成为青少年工作者，帮助青少年解决问题 Growth Notes of My Ninth Grade I’m Li Hua. My ninth grade is a journey of growth and dream-chasing. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） 假设你是李华，你校正在举办“My Space Dream（我的太空梦）”英语征文活动。请你根据以下提示写一篇短文。 提示：1. 你的太空梦想是什么；2. 你为什么会有这样的梦想（至少两点理由）；3. 你打算如何实现它。 要求：1. 词数80—100；2. 语句通顺、语法正确；3. 包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥；4. 至少使用三处一般将来时的被动语态。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） 你的英语老师布置了一项特殊的英语活动：给十年后的自己写一封信。假设你是李华，请根据以下提示完成这封信。 写作要求： 1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； 3.词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Future Me, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua （五） 告别了八年级，九年级的挑战正在向你走来。回顾过去，你一定有许多收获：展望未来，你希望自己在哪些方面变得更好？请根据下图提示，以“My Plan for a Better Me”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你打算如何从健康、爱好、学习三个方面提升自己，为九年级做好准备。 要求： 1. 紧扣作文题目，注意正确运用时态； 2. 语言表达准确、语意通顺连贯； 3. 词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总数)。 My Plan for a Better Me As I am going to Grade 9, I realise it’s time to make some changes in my life. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） 人们常说：人生是一场马拉松。每天进步一点点，在平凡中不断突破，你将遇见更优秀的你。请以“Be a Better Person”为题，结合自己的实际情况，从生活习惯、体育锻炼、人际交往三方面，用英语写一篇短文。 内容包括：1．你未来的目标； 2．你的哪些不足阻碍了目标的实现，请举例说明（至少两点）； 3．你将如何改进不足，让自己更优秀（至少两点）。 写作要求：1．语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； 2．词数70—90，开头部分已经给出，不计入总词数； 3．书写规范，卷面整洁； 4．文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 Be a Better Person Life is like a marathon. We should make an effort to improve ourselves every day. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） 时光飞逝，初三学年已开始。回望初中过去两年，我们在学习与生活中收获成长，也看到自身的不足。初三是关键的收官之年，我们更要脚踏实地、奋力拼搏。校英语专栏Share Your Voice现面向全体九年级同学开展征文活动，请你以Meet the Better Me为题投稿，谈谈自己过去两年取得的进步、简述其原因，并反思自己目前不足之处、针对其提出新学期计划。 要求： 1. 80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 Meet the Better Me Looking back on the past two years, I have changed a lot. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （八） 暑假是自我提升的好时机。你校英文网站正在开展主题为“Improve Myself, Grow Better”的征文活动，征文通知页面附带一份自我评价量表，供同学们对照自查。请你从中选择自己最需要提升的一个方面，写一篇短文投稿。 Articles Wanted: Improve Myself, Grow Better We’re waiting for your articles! Read the self-check table first and start your writing. Self-check for Personal Improvement How well do you do in these areas? Very well OK Need improvement  Doing sports □ □ □  Eating habits □ □ □  Daily reading □ □ □  Volunteer work □ □ □  Housework □ □ □  Art learning □ □ □  Getting on with others □ □ □ Writing points: 1. What do you want to improve most? 2. Why do you want to improve it? 3. How do you plan to improve it? Summer vacation is a good chance to improve myself. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 要求： 1．词数100左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2．要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名。 （九） 假设你是李华，你的笔友询问你的未来理想。请写一篇80词左右的邮件。 要点提示： 你的理想职业是什么； 你打算通过哪些行动实现梦想； 简单说说你的看法。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （十） 梁启超在《少年中国说》中提到“少年智则国智，少年强则国强”。作为新时代的青少年，你认为青少年应该如何肩负起责任，为国家和社会做出贡献？请根据以下提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。 要点： 1. 你认为当代青少年应该具备哪些品质（如：独立、勤奋、有责任心等）？ 2. 你能在哪些方面(如：学习、环保、帮助他人等)贡献自己的力量？ 3. 你对未来有何展望？ 要求： 内容须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥。 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $