Unit 3 Journey into space（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材冀教版九年级下册

Unit 3 Journey into space单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于 “人与自然” 范畴，涉及 “宇宙探索与航天科技”。 该单元旨在培养学生探索宇宙的兴趣与科学精神，了解人类太空探索的历程。通过认识太阳系、月球、火星以及中国航天工程，感受我国航天取得的伟大成就，了解航天探索背后的故事。学习航天人物与万户的飞天梦想，体会勇于创新、敢于探索、坚持不懈的航天精神，激发好奇心与求知欲，树立探索未知、追求真理的意识。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.astronaut n. 宇航员；航天员 2.pioneer n. 先驱，开拓者 3.legend n. 传说；传奇人物 4.official n. 官员 adj. 官方的 5.crew n. 全体航天员乘组 6.mission n. 任务；航天任务 7.dedication n. 奉献，献身 8.bravery n. 勇敢，英勇 9.innovation n. 创新 10.collaboration n. 合作，协作 11.achieve v. 实现；达成 12.accomplish v. 完成（任务） 13.witness v. 见证 n. 目击者 14.train v. 训练，受训 15.complete v. 完成 adj. 完整的 16.conduct v. 实施，开展 17.inspire v. 激励，鼓舞 18.obsessed adj. 痴迷的，着迷的 19.give a science lecture 开展太空授课 20.manned space mission 载人航天任务 21.space crew 航天员乘组 22.in-orbit handover 在轨交接 23.conduct spacewalks 进行太空行走 24.carry out experiments 开展实验 25.turn … dream into reality 将…… 梦想变为现实 26.witness the historic completion 见证历史性的完成 27.train for many years 训练多年 28.meet with the press 会见媒体 29.complete quarantine and recuperation 完成隔离休养 30.resume regular training 恢复常规训练 31.the first female astronaut 第一位女航天员 32.the legend of Wan Hu 万户的传说 33.be obsessed with the stars 痴迷于星辰 34.gunpowder-filled rockets 火药火箭 35.perseverance n. 毅力，坚持不懈 36.ambitious adj. 有远大抱负的 37.courageous adj. 勇敢的，有勇气的 38.remarkable adj. 非凡的，引人瞩目的 39.explorer n. 探索者，探险家 40.devote v. 致力于，奉献 41.struggle v. 努力，奋力前行 42.accomplishment n. 成就，功绩 43.devote oneself to space exploration 献身于太空探索 44.make great achievements 取得巨大成就 45.hold on to one’s dream 坚守梦想 46.overcome all kinds of difficulties 克服重重困难 47.set a good example for us 为我们树立好榜样 48.inspire future generations 激励下一代 49.go through hard training 历经艰苦训练 50.make great contributions to 为…… 做出巨大贡献 句式积累 开头句： 1. Wan Hu is a famous pioneer in the story of space exploration.万户是太空探索故事里一位著名先驱。 2. Fei Junlong is a great Chinese astronaut.费俊龙是一名伟大的中国航天员。 3. The story of Wan Hu shows ancient people’s dream of flying to space.万户的故事展现了古人飞向太空的梦想。 中间句： 1. He trained for many years and finally got the chance to go into space.他训练多年，终于获得进入太空的机会。 2. The crew worked together and finished many difficult tasks in space.乘组齐心协力，在太空完成了许多艰巨任务。 3. He devoted himself to space exploration and never gave up his dream.他献身于太空探索，从未放弃梦想。 结尾句： 1. His bravery and perseverance inspire us a lot.他的勇敢与毅力深深鼓舞着我们。 2. He sets a great example for young people.他为年轻人树立了好榜样。 3. We should hold on to our dreams just like him.我们应当像他一样坚守梦想。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：These modern-day astronauts continue to inspire future generations with their bravery, innovation, and dedication to exploring the unknown depths of space. 仿写：这位伟大的科学家凭借他的毅力和对科研的热爱，不断激励着我们。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：Fulfilling my dream does not spell the end of my efforts, but is a new starting point for me. 仿写：完成任务并不代表我们征程的终点，而是我们的新起点。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：Since China’s first manned space mission in 2003, we have sent more than a dozen astronauts into space. 仿写：自从年轻时开启梦想，他已经坚持努力二十多年。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. This great scientist continues to inspire us with his perseverance and love for scientific research. 2. Finishing the task does not spell the end of our journey, but is a new starting point for us. 3. Since he started his dream in his youth, he has kept working hard for more than twenty years. 典例 我国航天员在中国空间站开讲的“天宫课堂”，为广大青少年带来了一场场精彩的太空科普课。为了激发中学生对太空探索的兴趣，某英语报正在举办主题为“Space Travel in the Future”的征文活动。作为一名太空迷，请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文投稿，介绍你想象中的太空之旅。 How will you go to space? What will you do in space? What do you think of space travel? Please write more about it. 注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数 100 左右(开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。 As a space fan, I’m very interested in space and I’ve always wanted to travel into space. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文； ② 人称、时态：表明自己是太空爱好者，梦想进入太空，所以人称为第一人称。描述未来乘坐航天器去太空的各项计划，在时态为一般将来时态。说明太空旅行的意义；展望科技发展，普通人未来也能太空旅行 ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 谋篇布局 开头 介绍自己是太空迷，对太空感兴趣，一直梦想太空旅行 中间 描述未来计划乘坐现代化航天器前往太空；列举太空活动：探索火星等行星、体验失重、寻找外星人、做科学实验、拍摄星空照片；阐述太空旅行激动人心且富有教育意义，能帮助我们了解宇宙，激励我们心怀梦想努力奋斗 结尾 随着科技发展，相信普通人未来也可以实现太空旅行。 佳作展示 As a space fan, I’m very interested in space and I’ve always wanted to travel into space. In the future, I plan to go to space in a modern spacecraft. There, I will explore planets like Mars, experience weightlessness, and try to find friendly aliens. I also want to do science experiments and take beautiful photos of stars. I believe space travel is both exciting and educational. It can help us learn more about science and the universe. More importantly, it encourages us to dream big and work hard to reach our goals. With the development of science and technology, I believe it’ll be possible for ordinary people to travel into space.佳作赏析 亮点词汇： ① explore planets探索行星 ②experience weightlessness体验失重 ③ reach our goals实现我们的目标 高分句型： ① I also want to do science experiments and take beautiful photos of stars.（and 并列句） ② With the development of science and technology, I believe it’ll be possible for ordinary people to travel into space.（with伴随状语） （一） 题目：人类一直在探索太空。请你写一篇英文短文，谈谈你对太空探索的看法。 要求： 1. 简述太空探索已经取得的成就（至少一个例子）； 2. 谈谈太空探索对人类的益处（至少两点）； 3. 在你的短文中，至少使用三个被动语态句子； 4. 词数80左右，语言正确，结构清晰。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： Space exploration has always been a dream of human beings. So far, great achievements have been made. For example, astronauts have been sent to the moon and many satellites have been launched into space. Space exploration is very beneficial to us. First, new technologies are developed through space research, which can be used in our daily life. Second, more knowledge about the universe is gained, helping us understand the earth better. I believe space exploration will bring us a brighter future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：议论文，以现在完成时和一般现在时为主 明确要点：简述太空探索的成就（至少一个例子）、太空探索的益处（至少两点） 确定人称：第三人称、第一人称 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，需涵盖所有要点并使用至少三个被动语态句子 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出太空探索的话题及已有成就 主体段：阐述太空探索对人类的益处 结尾段：表达对未来的展望 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：太空探索的成就 成就举例：astronauts have been sent to the moon/satellites have been launched/space stations have been built等 被动语态：have been sent/have been launched/have been discovered等 要点二：太空探索的益处 技术发展：new technologies are developed/used in daily life/improve communication等 知识获取：more knowledge about the universe is gained/understand the earth better等 被动语态：are developed/is gained/are shared等 要点三：未来展望 信念表达：I believe space exploration will bring us a brighter future./Humans will go further into space.等 （二） 我国航天员在中国空间站开讲的“天宫课堂”，为广大青少年带来了一场场精彩的太空科普课。为了激发中学生对太空探索的兴趣，某英语报正在举办主题为“Space travel in the future”的征文活动。作为一名太空迷，请你根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的短文投稿，介绍你想象中的太空之旅。 提示：1. How will you go to space? 2. What will you do in space? 3. What do you think of space travel? 要求：1. 包含提示内容，可适当发挥; 2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 As a space fan, I’m very interested in space and I’ve always wanted to travel into space. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： As a space fan, I’m very interested in space and I’ve always wanted to travel into space. In the future, I plan to go to space in a modern spacecraft. I will explore planets like Mars, experience weightlessness, and try to find friendly aliens. I also want to do science experiments and take beautiful photos of stars. I believe space travel is exciting and educational. It helps us learn more about science and the universe. More importantly, it encourages us to dream big and work hard to reach our goals. With technological development, I believe ordinary people can travel into space. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：想象性记叙文，以一般将来时（will/plan to）为主 明确要点：交通方式（How）、太空活动（What）、个人评价（What think） 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：开头已给出，需衔接自然 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：已给出，表达太空兴趣与愿望 主体段：按提示分两层——交通方式与太空活动 结尾段：总结对太空旅行的看法与展望 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：交通方式（How） 交通选择：in a modern spacecraft/by spaceship/rocket/space shuttle等 动作表述：plan to go/go to space/travel into space等 补充修饰：fast/safe/comfortable/advanced等 要点二：太空活动（What） 活动列举：explore planets like Mars/experience weightlessness/try to find friendly aliens/do science experiments/take beautiful photos of stars/walk in space / collect rock samples/build space stations/grow plants/watch Earth from space/talk to astronauts等 顺序连接：可使用also/first/then/after that/besides等 要点三：个人评价（What think） 看法表达：exciting and educational/amazing/fantastic/meaningful/unforgettable/helpful等 作用意义：helps us learn more about science and the universe/makes me proud/opens a new world/broadens my mind/inspires curiosity等 鼓励展望：encourages us to dream big and work hard/make great efforts/never give up/achieve our dreams/believe in ourselves等 未来前景：ordinary people can travel into space/in the near future/with the help of AI/space tourism/travel freely等 （三） 根据Project 4c的内容，写一篇关于中国航天计划的短文，100词左右。可以包括重要事件或任务、航天飞行或卫星的图片、重要人物或工作团队等。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I am going to introduce China’s space programme. It includes manned space flight, missions to Mars, missions to the moon, and the space station. Important events include the launch of Shenzhou spaceships and the building of Tiangong space station. Chang’e 8 will also be an important mission in the future. Many scientists and engineers work hard for China’s space programme. They have made great contributions to space exploration. I think China’s space programme is great, and I am proud of it. I hope China will achieve more in space exploration in the future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍类说明文，一般现在时和一般将来时为主 明确要点：中国航天计划、中国航天计划中的重要事件或任务等、个人看法和期待 确定人称：第一人称和第三人称 注意事项：100词左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：简要介绍中国航天计划，总起全文 主体段：详细介绍中国航天计划中的重要事件或任务等 结尾段：表达个人看法，表达美好期待 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：中国航天计划 介绍航天计划：I am going to introduce/I will introduce/It is mainly about… 要点二：重要事件或任务等 事件或任务：the launch of Shenzhou spaceships/the building of Tiangong space station/‌Mars Sample Return Mission/Jupiter and Asteroid Exploration等 人物或工作团队：scientists and engineers/astronauts/technicians/researchers等 要点三：个人看法和期待 个人看法：China’s space programme is great/amazing/impressive等 表达期待：I hope China will achieve more in space exploration in the future/I can’t wait to witness its continued success/It’s exciting to imagine the great progress that the future has in store for China’s space programme.等 （四） 上周三，英语老师在课堂上组织了一场关于“宇航员在太空中的生活与工作”的讨论。假定你是东东，请你根据下面提示，写一封邮件向你的外国朋友John分享你们的讨论成果。 参考词汇：stay healthy, hold tightly (牢牢握住), float away (飘走), meaningful, … 要求： 1．短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥； 2．语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范； 3．短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4．词数：不少于60。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数） Dear John, How’s everything going? I’m writing to share the results of our class discussion on astronauts’ life and work in space. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Dongdong 【答案】例文 Dear John, How’s everything going? I’m writing to share the results of our class discussion on astronauts’ life and work in space. In the morning, astronauts exercise with special machines to stay healthy. Eating in space is interesting! Their food comes in special bags, and they need to hold them tightly to avoid floating away. Sleeping here is fun, too. They sleep in a sleeping bag tied to the wall! During work hours, they do experiments and sometimes go for spacewalks. After work, they read books or talk with their family through video call. Though they miss the Earth, the view of stars outside is amazing. Their life here is busy but meaningful. Yours, Dongdong 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文 (电子邮件)，时态以一般现在时为主 明确要点：分享课堂讨论成果；介绍宇航员太空生活、工作、休闲相关内容；表达个人感受；词数不少于60，可选用提示参考词汇 确定人称：第三人称介绍宇航员+第一人称叙事 注意事项：开头不计入总词数，不出现真实个人信息；全部提示信息覆盖完整，行文流畅，符合邮件交际语境 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：沿用题目给出的邮件开篇，引出太空宇航员生活工作的讨论话题 主体段：依次介绍宇航员的日常起居、工作任务、业余休闲活动，合理使用参考词汇 结尾段：抒发对太空生活的内心感受，完成邮件主体内容 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：太空日常起居 生活细节：exercise with special machines to stay healthy/sleep in a sleeping bag tied to the wall/keep fit in space/avoid floating away while resting等 要点二：太空工作任务 工作内容：do experiments/go for spacewalks/carry out space tasks/walk outside the spaceship等 要点三：太空休闲时光 休闲方式：read books/talk with their family through video call/enjoy reading/communicate with family members remotely等 要点四：内心感受抒发 个人感触：life here is busy but meaningful/the space experience is amazing/their job is great and valuable等 （五） 请以“My Dream of Exploring Space”为题，根据以下提示介绍你探索太空的梦想。 1. 过去对太空的看法； 2. 现在的梦想和为此做的努力； 3. 谈谈你的感受与展望。 词数：100 词左右 提示词：space exploration、astronaut、study hard、dream 注意： 1. 表达中必须包含所给要点并进行适当发挥； 2. 词数100词左右； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名等信息。 My Dream of Exploring Space____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Dream of Exploring Space When I was little, I thought space was just a distant, boring place with nothing interesting. But after watching a documentary about Chinese taikonauts, I fell in love with space exploration. Now my dream is to become an astronaut. I study hard in math and science classes every day, and I join the school’s astronomy club to learn more about stars and rockets. I also do sports regularly to keep my body strong. I know the road to space is tough, but I’ll never give up. I hope one day I can fly into space, look down at our beautiful Earth, and contribute to humans’ exploration of the universe. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般现在时和一般过去时为主（描述过去看法用过去时，描述现状和梦想用现在时） 明确要点：过去对太空的看法；现在的梦想和为此做的努力；谈谈你的感受与展望 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名、校名和地名等信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，介绍小时候对太空的原有看法 主体段：介绍自己如今的梦想以及正在付出的行动 结尾段：总结内心感受，对未来进行展望 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：过去对太空的看法 具体看法：space was just a distant, boring place with nothing interesting/hardly paid any attention to space news when I was a kid等 要点二：现在的梦想和为此做的努力 现在的梦想：become an astronaut/work as a space scientist/take part in space exploration one day等 为此做的努力：study hard in math and science classes/join the school’s astronomy club to learn more about stars and rockets/do sports regularly to keep my body strong/spend a lot of time reading books about the universe and famous astronauts’ stories in the library等 要点三：谈谈你的感受与展望 感受：the road to space is tough/never give up/believe as long as I stick to my dream, I will get closer to space step by step等 展望：hope one day I can fly into space, look down at our beautiful Earth, and contribute to humans’ exploration of the universe/I am looking forward to the day when I can take a spacewalk and see the sunrise from above the Earth等 （六） 中国梦牵引航天梦， 航天梦助推中国梦。为了更好地追求航天梦， 我国专门将每年的4月24日定为中国航天日（China Space Day ）， 来纪念中国航天事业的卓越成就， 不断发扬中国航天精神。假如你也有一个航天梦， 请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文， 谈谈你的梦想。 要求：语句连贯，80词以上 (作文的开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Do you have a space dream? I have one. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文: Do you have a space dream? I have one. My dream is to be an astronaut. I’m very interested in everything in space. When I am free, I enjoy reading books and watching movies about it. I really hope that I can help people learn more about it in the future. Space travel can’t be easy, so I must work hard and get well prepared to make my dream come true. To begin with, I will do sports as often as I can because a strong and healthy body is a must for a good astronaut. What’s more, I will read more books about space. I am sure that I can make my dream come true! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，时态以一般现在时为主，夹杂将来时 明确要点：①简述航天梦，想要成为宇航员；②说明拥有梦想的原因；③讲述为梦想付出的努力；词数80以上，开头已给出不计入词数 确定人称：第一人称I 注意事项：覆盖思维导图全部要点，语句连贯，逻辑清晰 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 第一段：沿用题目给出开头，点明梦想是成为一名宇航员 第二段：阐述产生航天梦想的缘由 第三段：介绍为实现梦想付出的努力，结尾表达实现梦想的信心 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：航天梦简述 观点：My dream is to be an astronaut/hope to travel into space/chase space‑related goals等 具体梦想：be an astronaut/visit outer space/explore unknown planets/conduct space tasks等 要点二：为何会有这个梦想 兴趣一：interested in everything in space/enjoy space‑related stories/admire space heroes等 兴趣二：enjoy reading books/watching space movies/collect space magazines/follow space reports等 感受：hope to help people learn more about space/show interest in space exploration/praise space achievements等 要点三：将如何为梦想努力 行动：do sports as often as I can/read more space books/take science classes/practise space skills等 意义：get well prepared/build strong body/devote myself to space‑research/improve space knowledge等 （七） 假设你是一位航天员，正在中国空间站执行任务。联合国教科文组织邀请你与全球青少年视频连线，介绍你在空间站中一天的工作与生活，并分享你的感受。请你结合以下提示，写一篇英文发言稿。 A Day in Space work & life: do experiments, exercise, sleep in a sleeping bag, go for a spacewalk, read, talk with family... feeling(s): proud, excited, amazed... 注意： 1. 短文须包含所给提示，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80—100（开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数）。 Dear young friends, I am an astronaut from China. I am so glad to meet all of you here today. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 【答案】范文： Dear young friends, I am an astronaut from China. I am so glad to meet all of you here today. I would like to share with you a day in my life aboard the space station. My day starts with exercise. Since there is no gravity in space, we must exercise for two hours every day. Then I do some scientific experiments. Sometimes, I go for a spacewalk. At night, I sleep in a sleeping bag that is fixed to the wall. Before going to bed, I like to read or talk with my family on the video call. I feel proud and excited to work in space. I hope my experience can inspire you to explore the universe too! Thank you! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：演讲稿，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：自我介绍；介绍在空间站的一日生活；抒发太空工作的感受；激励青少年探索宇宙 确定人称：第一人称I/my/we 注意事项：语气亲切，符合演讲口吻，语句通顺，词数符合要求 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：自我介绍，引出话题——分享空间站的一天 主体段：按时间顺序描述太空生活：锻炼身体、科学实验、太空出舱、睡觉前的活动 结尾段：表达内心感受，对青少年寄予希望，结束语 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：开篇引入 开篇点题：an astronaut from China/share a day in my life aboard the space station/my great honor to share my experience in the space station/it is wonderful等 要点二：空间站日常生活 各项活动：exercise for two hours every day/do some scientific experiments/go for a spacewalk/sleep in a sleeping bag that is fixed to the wall/read or talk with family on the video call/take photos of the earth from space/repair space equipment等 要点三：感受与呼吁 情感：proud and excited/inspire you to explore the universe/are challenging and meaningful/helps us make progress等 （八） 假设你是李华，学校将举办”未来太空”英文演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇不少于80词的演讲稿。内容需包括： ● 未来50年太空探索的可能发展（至少2点，用will be done表达被动）； ● 这些发展对人类的好处（至少2点，用because/so that说明原因）； ● 你对太空探索的看法（用感叹句或I believe that...）； ● 你的期待。 要求：语句通顺，被动语态使用正确，书写工整，可适当发挥。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Hello everyone! I’m Li Hua. Let me talk about the future of space. In the next 50 years, more space stations will be built. Besides, long trips to Mars will be carried out by scientists. These developments help humans a lot. We can find new resources in space so that we can solve the problem of resource shortage on Earth. We will learn more about the universe because space research can bring new scientific discoveries. I believe that space exploration will change our world greatly! I hope we can work together to make more space dreams come true. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：英文演讲稿；以一般将来时为主 明确要点：未来50年太空发展（至少2点），发展带来的好处（至少2点），个人看法，表达期待 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：介绍未来发展时使用被动语态will be done，使用because/so that说明原因，表达看法时用感叹句或I believe that... [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：问候，自我介绍，引出演讲主题 主体段：介绍未来太空探索发展，阐述对人类的好处 结尾段：表达观点，说出期待 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：未来太空发展 more space stations will be built/long trips to Mars will be carried out/space hotels will be opened/more unknown planets will be studied等 要点二：探索带来的益处 find new resources in space/solve the problem of resource shortage/learn more about the universe/bring new scientific discoveries/look for new homes for humans/push technology forward等 要点三：表达观点 I believe that space exploration will change our world greatly!/How amazing space exploration is!等 要点四：表达期待 work together to make more space dreams come true/look forward to wonderful progress in space exploration等 （九） 假如你校英文周刊计划推出一期以“中国航天”为主题的报道。作为校园记者之一，你负责写一篇关于中国航天员在空间站的一天的短文。请你根据以下内容提示完成此任务。 时间流程： 大约6:00 a.m.起床→刷牙、穿好衣服 7:30 a.m.吃早饭→8:00 a.m.上班 12:00下班→大约12:30 p.m.吃午饭 午休→2:00 p.m.上班→2小时锻炼 6:00 p.m.下班→8:00~10:00 p.m.空闲时间→大约10:00 p.m.上床睡觉 参考词汇：astronaut航天员；space station空间站；take a lunch break午休 注意： (1) 表达正确，语句通顺。 (2) 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 (3) 词数60左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Chinese astronauts have a busy day on the space station. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Do you want to know more about their life on the space station? If so, feel free to ask! 【答案】例文： Chinese astronauts have a busy day on the space station. They get up around 6:00 a.m., brush their teeth, and get dressed. They have breakfast at 7:30 a.m., start work at 8:00 a.m., and finish at 12:00. They have lunch around 12:30 p.m. and take a break. After returning to work at 2:00 p.m., they spend two hours exercising. They stop working at 6:00 p.m., enjoy free time from 8:00 to 10:00 p.m., and go to bed around 10:00 p.m. Do you want to know more about their life on the space station? If so, feel free to ask! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍类记叙文，全文以一般现在时为主 明确要点：按照时间流程完整介绍中国航天员在空间站的一天作息，包含起床、早餐、工作、午餐、午休、锻炼、空闲时间、睡觉全部时间节点 确定人称：第三人称they（指代中国航天员） 注意事项：词数60词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；短文包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；表达正确，语句通顺 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：使用题目给定开篇句，总起航天员在空间站的一天很忙碌 主体段：严格按照时间从早到晚的顺序，依次叙述每个时间点的活动，完整覆盖全部时间流程 结尾段：使用题目给定收尾句，互动提问收尾 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：活动流程梳理（按时间顺序） 上午活动：get up/brush teeth/get dressed/have breakfast/start work/go to work... 中午活动：finish work/have lunch/take a lunch break/take an afternoon nap... 下午活动：return to work/go back to work/spend two hours exercising/do two hours of exercise/stop work/finish work/enjoy free time... 晚上活动：go to bed/go to sleep... 要点二：常用过渡表达 时间衔接：around.../at.../after that /then/later /in the afternoon /in the evening... 动作衔接：and/then/followed by... （十） 某英文报社正在举办以 “Should We Explore Space?” 为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文，分享你的观点。要点提示： 1.太空探索的重要性（科学发现、技术进步等）； 2.中国在太空探索方面的一项具体成就（如：天问一号、祝融号、嫦娥工程、天宫空间站等）； 3.你对太空探索未来的看法。 要求： 1.包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 2.注意使用本单元核心句型（被动语态、It is hoped/believed/expected that...等）； 3.词数100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇： exploration 探索；achievement 成就；discovery 发现；technology 技术；cooperate 合作 开头： As the saying goes, “The sky is not the limit.” I strongly believe that space exploration is important for the future of humanity. Here are my thoughts on this topic.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： As the saying goes, “The sky is not the limit.” I strongly believe that space exploration is important for the future of humanity. Here are my thoughts on this topic. Space exploration brings new scientific discoveries, and many useful technologies are developed during space research, improving our daily life greatly. A great Chinese achievement is Tiangong Space Station. Lots of space experiments are carried out inside it successfully. It is hoped that all countries will cooperate closely in space exploration. I’m convinced that we will know more about space and make greater progress in the future. In conclusion, space exploration is not only about going to space—it is about pushing the limits of what humans can achieve and dreaming of a better future for all of us. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] ‌确定文体‌：议论文，一般现在时和一般将来时为主 ‌明确要点‌： 1.太空探索的重要性（科学发现、技术进步等） 2.中国在太空探索方面的具体成就（如：天问一号、祝融号、嫦娥工程、天宫空间站等） 3.对太空探索未来的看法 ‌确定人称‌：第一人称（I/we） ‌注意事项‌：包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥，注意使用本单元核心句型（被动语态、It is hoped/believed/expected that...等）；词数100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数） [第二步：构思布局] ‌三段式结构‌： ‌开头段‌：通过引言引出主题，表明自己认为太空探索对人类未来很重要的观点 ‌主体段‌：阐述太空探索的重要性，举例说明中国在太空探索方面的成就 ‌结尾段‌：对未来太空探索进行展望，总结太空探索的意义 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：太空探索的重要性make new scientific discoveries/unlock the secrets of universe/space technologies are developed/improve daily life/by studying other planets and stars/learn more about the origin of the universe and our place in it/improved our daily lives/from satellite communication to medical advances/brings new scientific discoveries/improving our daily life greatly等 要点二：中国航天具体成就The Tianwen-1 mission/launched in 2020/landed the Zhurong rover on Mars/China’s first independent Mars mission/achieved three goals in one mission/orbiting, landing, and roving/show the world China’s growing capabilities in space technology/carried out inside it successfully等 要点三：太空探索未来展望It is expected that/It is hoped that/more amazing finds will be made/more exciting discoveries will be made/be sent to the Tiangong space station/explore even deeper into the universe/will be able to set foot on Mars/know more about space/make greater progress in the future等 $ Unit 3 Journey into space单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于 “人与自然” 范畴，涉及 “宇宙探索与航天科技”。 该单元旨在培养学生探索宇宙的兴趣与科学精神，了解人类太空探索的历程。通过认识太阳系、月球、火星以及中国航天工程，感受我国航天取得的伟大成就，了解航天探索背后的故事。学习航天人物与万户的飞天梦想，体会勇于创新、敢于探索、坚持不懈的航天精神，激发好奇心与求知欲，树立探索未知、追求真理的意识。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.astronaut n. 宇航员；航天员 2.pioneer n. 先驱，开拓者 3.legend n. 传说；传奇人物 4.official n. 官员 adj. 官方的 5.crew n. 全体航天员乘组 6.mission n. 任务；航天任务 7.dedication n. 奉献，献身 8.bravery n. 勇敢，英勇 9.innovation n. 创新 10.collaboration n. 合作，协作 11.achieve v. 实现；达成 12.accomplish v. 完成（任务） 13.witness v. 见证 n. 目击者 14.train v. 训练，受训 15.complete v. 完成 adj. 完整的 16.conduct v. 实施，开展 17.inspire v. 激励，鼓舞 18.obsessed adj. 痴迷的，着迷的 19.give a science lecture 开展太空授课 20.manned space mission 载人航天任务 21.space crew 航天员乘组 22.in-orbit handover 在轨交接 23.conduct spacewalks 进行太空行走 24.carry out experiments 开展实验 25.turn … dream into reality 将…… 梦想变为现实 26.witness the historic completion 见证历史性的完成 27.train for many years 训练多年 28.meet with the press 会见媒体 29.complete quarantine and recuperation 完成隔离休养 30.resume regular training 恢复常规训练 31.the first female astronaut 第一位女航天员 32.the legend of Wan Hu 万户的传说 33.be obsessed with the stars 痴迷于星辰 34.gunpowder-filled rockets 火药火箭 35.perseverance n. 毅力，坚持不懈 36.ambitious adj. 有远大抱负的 37.courageous adj. 勇敢的，有勇气的 38.remarkable adj. 非凡的，引人瞩目的 39.explorer n. 探索者，探险家 40.devote v. 致力于，奉献 41.struggle v. 努力，奋力前行 42.accomplishment n. 成就，功绩 43.devote oneself to space exploration 献身于太空探索 44.make great achievements 取得巨大成就 45.hold on to one’s dream 坚守梦想 46.overcome all kinds of difficulties 克服重重困难 47.set a good example for us 为我们树立好榜样 48.inspire future generations 激励下一代 49.go through hard training 历经艰苦训练 50.make great contributions to 为…… 做出巨大贡献 句式积累 开头句： 1. Wan Hu is a famous pioneer in the story of space exploration.万户是太空探索故事里一位著名先驱。 2. Fei Junlong is a great Chinese astronaut.费俊龙是一名伟大的中国航天员。 3. The story of Wan Hu shows ancient people’s dream of flying to space.万户的故事展现了古人飞向太空的梦想。 中间句： 1. He trained for many years and finally got the chance to go into space.他训练多年，终于获得进入太空的机会。 2. The crew worked together and finished many difficult tasks in space.乘组齐心协力，在太空完成了许多艰巨任务。 3. He devoted himself to space exploration and never gave up his dream.他献身于太空探索，从未放弃梦想。 结尾句： 1. His bravery and perseverance inspire us a lot.他的勇敢与毅力深深鼓舞着我们。 2. He sets a great example for young people.他为年轻人树立了好榜样。 3. We should hold on to our dreams just like him.我们应当像他一样坚守梦想。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：These modern-day astronauts continue to inspire future generations with their bravery, innovation, and dedication to exploring the unknown depths of space. 仿写：这位伟大的科学家凭借他的毅力和对科研的热爱，不断激励着我们。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：Fulfilling my dream does not spell the end of my efforts, but is a new starting point for me. 仿写：完成任务并不代表我们征程的终点，而是我们的新起点。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：Since China’s first manned space mission in 2003, we have sent more than a dozen astronauts into space. 仿写：自从年轻时开启梦想，他已经坚持努力二十多年。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 典例 我国航天员在中国空间站开讲的“天宫课堂”，为广大青少年带来了一场场精彩的太空科普课。为了激发中学生对太空探索的兴趣，某英语报正在举办主题为“Space Travel in the Future”的征文活动。作为一名太空迷，请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文投稿，介绍你想象中的太空之旅。 How will you go to space? What will you do in space? What do you think of space travel? Please write more about it. 注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数 100 左右(开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。 As a space fan, I’m very interested in space and I’ve always wanted to travel into space. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文； ② 人称、时态：表明自己是太空爱好者，梦想进入太空，所以人称为第一人称。描述未来乘坐航天器去太空的各项计划，在时态为一般将来时态。说明太空旅行的意义；展望科技发展，普通人未来也能太空旅行 ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 谋篇布局 开头 介绍自己是太空迷，对太空感兴趣，一直梦想太空旅行 中间 描述未来计划乘坐现代化航天器前往太空；列举太空活动：探索火星等行星、体验失重、寻找外星人、做科学实验、拍摄星空照片；阐述太空旅行激动人心且富有教育意义，能帮助我们了解宇宙，激励我们心怀梦想努力奋斗 结尾 随着科技发展，相信普通人未来也可以实现太空旅行。 佳作展示 As a space fan, I’m very interested in space and I’ve always wanted to travel into space. In the future, I plan to go to space in a modern spacecraft. There, I will explore planets like Mars, experience weightlessness, and try to find friendly aliens. I also want to do science experiments and take beautiful photos of stars. I believe space travel is both exciting and educational. It can help us learn more about science and the universe. More importantly, it encourages us to dream big and work hard to reach our goals. With the development of science and technology, I believe it’ll be possible for ordinary people to travel into space.佳作赏析 亮点词汇： ① explore planets探索行星 ②experience weightlessness体验失重 ③ reach our goals实现我们的目标 高分句型： ① I also want to do science experiments and take beautiful photos of stars.（and 并列句） ② With the development of science and technology, I believe it’ll be possible for ordinary people to travel into space.（with伴随状语） （一） 题目：人类一直在探索太空。请你写一篇英文短文，谈谈你对太空探索的看法。 要求： 1. 简述太空探索已经取得的成就（至少一个例子）； 2. 谈谈太空探索对人类的益处（至少两点）； 3. 在你的短文中，至少使用三个被动语态句子； 4. 词数80左右，语言正确，结构清晰。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） 我国航天员在中国空间站开讲的“天宫课堂”，为广大青少年带来了一场场精彩的太空科普课。为了激发中学生对太空探索的兴趣，某英语报正在举办主题为“Space travel in the future”的征文活动。作为一名太空迷，请你根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的短文投稿，介绍你想象中的太空之旅。 提示：1. How will you go to space? 2. What will you do in space? 3. What do you think of space travel? 要求：1. 包含提示内容，可适当发挥; 2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 As a space fan, I’m very interested in space and I’ve always wanted to travel into space. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） 根据Project 4c的内容，写一篇关于中国航天计划的短文，100词左右。可以包括重要事件或任务、航天飞行或卫星的图片、重要人物或工作团队等。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） 上周三，英语老师在课堂上组织了一场关于“宇航员在太空中的生活与工作”的讨论。假定你是东东，请你根据下面提示，写一封邮件向你的外国朋友John分享你们的讨论成果。 参考词汇：stay healthy, hold tightly (牢牢握住), float away (飘走), meaningful, … 要求： 1．短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥； 2．语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范； 3．短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4．词数：不少于60。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数） Dear John, How’s everything going? I’m writing to share the results of our class discussion on astronauts’ life and work in space. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Dongdong （五） 请以“My Dream of Exploring Space”为题，根据以下提示介绍你探索太空的梦想。 1. 过去对太空的看法； 2. 现在的梦想和为此做的努力； 3. 谈谈你的感受与展望。 词数：100 词左右 提示词：space exploration、astronaut、study hard、dream 注意： 1. 表达中必须包含所给要点并进行适当发挥； 2. 词数100词左右； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名等信息。 My Dream of Exploring Space____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） 中国梦牵引航天梦， 航天梦助推中国梦。为了更好地追求航天梦， 我国专门将每年的4月24日定为中国航天日（China Space Day ）， 来纪念中国航天事业的卓越成就， 不断发扬中国航天精神。假如你也有一个航天梦， 请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文， 谈谈你的梦想。 要求：语句连贯，80词以上 (作文的开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Do you have a space dream? I have one. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） 假设你是一位航天员，正在中国空间站执行任务。联合国教科文组织邀请你与全球青少年视频连线，介绍你在空间站中一天的工作与生活，并分享你的感受。请你结合以下提示，写一篇英文发言稿。 A Day in Space work & life: do experiments, exercise, sleep in a sleeping bag, go for a spacewalk, read, talk with family... feeling(s): proud, excited, amazed... 注意： 1. 短文须包含所给提示，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80—100（开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数）。 Dear young friends, I am an astronaut from China. I am so glad to meet all of you here today. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! （八） 假设你是李华，学校将举办”未来太空”英文演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇不少于80词的演讲稿。内容需包括： ● 未来50年太空探索的可能发展（至少2点，用will be done表达被动）； ● 这些发展对人类的好处（至少2点，用because/so that说明原因）； ● 你对太空探索的看法（用感叹句或I believe that...）； ● 你的期待。 要求：语句通顺，被动语态使用正确，书写工整，可适当发挥。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （九） 假如你校英文周刊计划推出一期以“中国航天”为主题的报道。作为校园记者之一，你负责写一篇关于中国航天员在空间站的一天的短文。请你根据以下内容提示完成此任务。 时间流程： 大约6:00 a.m.起床→刷牙、穿好衣服 7:30 a.m.吃早饭→8:00 a.m.上班 12:00下班→大约12:30 p.m.吃午饭 午休→2:00 p.m.上班→2小时锻炼 6:00 p.m.下班→8:00~10:00 p.m.空闲时间→大约10:00 p.m.上床睡觉 参考词汇：astronaut航天员；space station空间站；take a lunch break午休 注意： (1) 表达正确，语句通顺。 (2) 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 (3) 词数60左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Chinese astronauts have a busy day on the space station. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Do you want to know more about their life on the space station? If so, feel free to ask! （十） 某英文报社正在举办以 “Should We Explore Space?” 为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文，分享你的观点。要点提示： 1.太空探索的重要性（科学发现、技术进步等）； 2.中国在太空探索方面的一项具体成就（如：天问一号、祝融号、嫦娥工程、天宫空间站等）； 3.你对太空探索未来的看法。 要求： 1.包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 2.注意使用本单元核心句型（被动语态、It is hoped/believed/expected that...等）； 3.词数100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇： exploration 探索；achievement 成就；discovery 发现；technology 技术；cooperate 合作 开头： As the saying goes, “The sky is not the limit.” I strongly believe that space exploration is important for the future of humanity. Here are my thoughts on this topic.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $