内容正文:
writing
1 What event is described?
The final of the 4×100-metre relay.
2 When and where did the event take place?
Last Saturday, at the school playground.
After reading, please answer the questions.
3 What did the author see?
All the audience stood up when the runners set off…The runners strained紧张 to run as fast as they could, while trying not to drop their batons接力棒 at the change.
4 What did the author hear?
Cheering and shouting.
5 How did the author feel?
Caught up in卷入,缠住,困住 the excitement, as if the author’s lungs肺 would burst爆炸. It was so wonderful to be part of this sporting moment and enjoy its speed速度 and passion热情.
Think about a sporting moment you have experienced and complete the table. Page 47
General introduction
What you saw and heard before the event
during the event
after the event
How you felt
Now write a passage about the sporting moment.
when, where, who, what
Body (talk about the event according to the time sequence)
Conclusion (feelings)
以一般过去时和过去进行时为主。
话题短语积累
hold a sports meeting举行运动会
physical activities 体育活动
achieve our goal 达到目标
potential ability 潜在能力
win/get/take the first place 获得第一名
lay a good foundation in… 在……方面打下良好基础
be beneficial to / contribute to 有助于、有益于
strong willpower 很强的意志力
应用文写作 · Application Writing 情景导学第70页
Exercise an Hour Every Day, Healthy Life for a Lifetime
假定你是李华,最近你校英文报在举办以"每天锻炼一小时,健康生活一辈子"为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文,内容包括:
1. 你对征文主题的理解;
2. 你喜欢的运动项目及活动情况;
3. 该运动项目给你的生活和学习带来的益处。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
同学们,今天我们来练习一篇关于运动健康主题的应用文写作。请大家先仔细阅读题目要求,明确三个写作要点:对主题的理解、喜欢的运动项目及情况、运动带来的益处。注意词数控制在80词左右。接下来我们通过造句和句式升级来搭建文章框架。
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I. 造句 Sentence Making (1) – (4)
(1) 众所周知,经常锻炼会使人保持健康,生活幸福。
As we know, regular exercise will make people ________ ________ and live a happy life.
keep fit
keep healthy
stay healthy
(2) 我最喜欢打篮球。
I like ________ ________ best.
playing basketball
(3) 放学后,我通常花半小时打篮球。
After school I usually ________ half an hour ________ basketball.
playing
(4) 打篮球不仅令我精神焕发,而且使我身体强壮。
Playing basketball makes me refreshed ________ ________ ________ building up my body.
as well as
spend
现在我们来完成前四个造句。请同学们先不看答案,根据中文提示和已给英文部分尝试填空。第一题考查 keep fit 这个短语;第二题 like doing sth. 结构;第三题 spend time (in) doing sth.;第四题 as well as 表示"以及、而且"。点击鼠标依次出现红色答案,大家核对。
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I. 造句 Sentence Making (5) – (8)
(5) 打篮球有助于我放松并提高学习效率。
Playing basketball helps me relax, and ________ my study efficiency.
improves
(6) 同时我还了解了团队协作的重要性。
At the same time, I have learnt ________ ________ ________ ________.
the importance of teamwork
(7) 这也是交新朋友的一种好方式。
It is also ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________.
a good way to make new friends
(8) 打篮球充实了我的生活,使我更加自信。
Playing basketball ________ my life and ________ ________ ________ ________.
enriches
makes me more confident
继续完成第5到第8题。第5题注意主语 Playing basketball 是动名词作主语,谓语用第三人称单数 improves;第6题 the importance of teamwork 是高频写作短语;第7题 a good way to do sth. 结构;第8题 enriches 和 makes 都要用第三人称单数,make sb. + adj. 表示"使某人……"。点击核对答案。
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2. 句式升级 Sentence Upgrading (9) – (12)
(9) 将 (1) 改为含有定语从句的句子:
As we know, a person who takes exercise regularly will keep fit and live a happy life.
(10) 将 (2) 改为用动名词作主语的句子:
Playing basketball is my favourite sport.
(11) 将 (3) 和 (4) 合并为含有非限制性定语从句的句子:
After school I usually spend half an hour playing basketball, which makes me refreshed as well as building up my body.
(12) 用 not only ... but also ... 连接的倒装句改写 (8):
Not only does playing basketball enrich my life but it also makes me more confident.
句式升级是提升作文档次的关键。第9题用 who 引导定语从句修饰 a person;第10题把动名词 Playing basketball 提前作主语;第11题用 which 引导非限制性定语从句,把两个简单句合并;第12题 not only 置于句首引起部分倒装,助动词 does 提前。点击鼠标逐题揭晓升级后的句子。
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II. 成篇
Nowadays, doing sport is becoming more and more popular. As we know, a person who takes exercise regularly will keep fit and live a happy life.
Playing basketball is my favourite sport. After school I usually spend half an hour playing basketball, which makes me refreshed as well as building up my body. Playing basketball helps me relax, and improves my study efficiency. At the same time, I have learnt the importance of teamwork. It is also a good way to make new friends. In short, not only does playing basketball enrich my life but it also makes me more confident.
Have you got your favourite sport? Let's do sport together and enjoy a healthy and happy life!
这是一篇参考范文。第一段引入运动主题并用定语从句点题;第二段是主体,融合了我们今天练习的所有句式——动名词作主语、spend time doing、which 非限制性定语从句、the importance of、a good way to do,以及 not only 倒装句收尾;最后一段用反问句和号召结尾,呼应题目。请同学们注意文章的衔接词:at the same time, in short。
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背诵积累
make me refreshed
build up my body
help me relax
study efficiency
the importance of teamwork
enrich my life
make me more confident
As we know, regular exercise will make people keep fit and live a happy life.
使我精神焕发
使我身体强壮
帮助我放松
学习效率
团队协作的重要性
丰富/充实我的生活
让我更加自信
众所周知,经常锻炼会使人保持健康,生活幸福。
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