专题08 书面表达（期中专项训练）六年级英语上学期（沪教版·新教材）

专题08 书面表达 (期中专项训练) 答题技巧 一、做题四步法 1. 审清题目：圈画主题、时态、人称、词数要求，明确写作要点。 2. 罗列要点：根据提示，列出必写信息词，不漏关键内容。 3. 连词成篇：选用熟悉句型串联要点，用好连接词，完成初稿。 4. 通读检查：逐句核对时态、拼写、大小写、标点，修正错误。 ✅ 计划类作文（一般将来时）：用will / be going to，写清时间、人物、地点、活动。 ✅ 介绍类作文（一般现在时）：描述事物、常识，注意主谓一致。 ✅ 观点建议类：使用should / shouldn’t，分层表达看法与建议。 1.时态混用！计划用将来时、往事用过去时、介绍常识用一般现在时。 2.名词单复数、句首单词大写、英语句号.，这类小错误极易丢分。 3.不要强行写复杂长句，优先使用有把握的句子，减少语法错误。 4.要点不能缺，题目给出的信息点必须全部写到，否则会扣分。 审题圈词定时态，要点罗列不遗漏； 连词成句有条理，写完检查别忘掉。 二、分题型要点 三、常见陷阱提醒 口诀 习题演练 1、 艺术节上大家各显身手，你最喜欢哪种艺术形式呢？请根据以下提示，写一篇短文介绍一下吧。 提示：1. What kind of art form do you like?2. Talk about this art form.3. Why do you like this art form?要求：语句通顺，意思连贯。 There are many art forms in our life. I like best. 2、 根据学校开展的 “安全月” 宣传活动，请你根据以下提示和要求，以 “How to Stay Safe When Swimming” 为题，用英语写一篇短文。 要求：文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；词数 50 左右。 提示：Why is safety important when we swim? What should we do to stay safe when swimming? (Use “First, Next, Then, Finally” to list your ideas. ) How do you feel about the rule “Safety comes first”? How to Stay Safe When Swimming Safety is very important when we swim. It keeps us safe._______________________________ 3、 艺术节后，同学们都对美术作品产生了浓厚的兴趣。请写一篇英语短文，介绍你最喜欢的一幅画。 写作要点：1. 介绍画的类型 (油画 / 中国水墨画)；2. 描述画里的内容；3. 说说你喜欢它的原因。要求：语句通顺，语法正确，不少于 50 词。 There are many famous paintings in the world. But I like ______ best. It is a /an ______ (oil painting / Chinese ink painting). In the picture, ________________________.I like it because ________________________________________.It makes me feel __________________________. 4、 体育节即将开始。请你以 “How to keep safe in sport” 为题，结合提示词写一篇短文，分享运动安全小贴士。 提示词:warm up, wear the safety gear, follow rules, rest, don't push 要求：语句通顺，使用 First / Next / Then / Finally, 不少于 5 句话。 How to keep safe in sport It's important to keep safe when we play sport. We should know some safety rules. First, Next, 5、 假如你是 Jim，请根据图片提示，以 “Last weekend” 为题，写一篇短文，介绍一下你上周末做的事情。要求：时态正确，意思连贯，语句通顺，不少于 50 词。 Last weekend 6、 徐悲鸿不仅是一位画家，还是一位用画笔唤醒民族灵魂的艺术家。请写一篇英语短文向大家介绍这位大师，不少于 5 句话。 参考： 1. Who was he? (a great artist) 2. What did he enjoy? (painting horses) 3. What else did he do? (teach students to paint) 7、 学校新建的滑冰运动场正式开放了。为了保障同学们的安全，体育老师决定在第一节滑冰课上进行安全教育。请根据以下提示，描述滑冰时应该注意的安全事项，并写出应该遵守的规则。 写作要求：书写工整，标点符号准确；语句通顺，条理清楚；不少于 5 句话。 提示词: wear helmets, keep quiet, arrive on time, before skating, warm up, hold the railing (栏杆) The new skatepark is open. 答案加解析 1、 范文： There are many art forms in our life. I like painting best.Painting is fun. We can use different colours to draw beautiful pictures on paper. I often draw flowers and animals in my free time. I like painting because it helps me show my feelings. It makes me happy and relaxed. I hope I can show my paintings on the Art Festival. 【详解】题干解读：本题要求介绍最喜欢的艺术形式，要写清楚喜欢哪种艺术形式、介绍这项艺术、说明喜欢的原因，用一般现在时，语句通顺连贯。 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：painting 绘画；colour 颜色；draw pictures 画画；Art Festival 艺术节 参考句型：I like…best.；I often…；I like…because…；It makes me… 2、 例文： How to Stay Safe When Swimming Safety is very important when we swim. It keeps us safe.First, we must swim with adults. Next, we should warm up before swimming. Then, don’t swim in deep water. Finally, we should follow the swimming rules. I think “Safety comes first” is very important. We must always keep it in mind. 【详解】题干解读：题目要求以 “How to Stay Safe When Swimming” 为题，使用 First, Next, Then, Finally 来写游泳安全要点，说明游泳安全的重要性、要做的安全事项，谈谈对 “安全第一” 的理解，词数 50 词左右，不能出现真实姓名校名。 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：swim 游泳；warm up 热身；adult 成年人；follow rules 遵守规则 参考句型：First,… Next,… Then,… Finally,…；I think… 3、 范文： There are many famous paintings in the world. But I like The Horse best. It is a Chinese ink painting. In the picture, there is a strong horse running fast. I like it because the horse looks powerful. It makes me feel energetic. I love Chinese ink paintings very much. 【详解】题干解读：这篇短文需要介绍最喜欢的画作，写明画作类型，描述画面内容，说明喜欢这幅画的原因，不少于 50 词，使用一般现在时。 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：Chinese ink painting 中国水墨画；oil painting 油画；powerful 有力量的；energetic 充满活力的 参考句型：But I like…best. It is a/an… In the picture,… I like it because… It makes me feel… 4、 范文： How to keep safe in sport It's important to keep safe when we play sport. We should know some safety rules. First, we need to warm up before sports. Next, we must wear the safety gear. Then, we should follow the sport rules. Don’t push your classmates when playing. Finally, we should have a rest when we feel tired. 【详解】题干解读：本题主题是运动安全小贴士，必须用上提示词 warm up, wear the safety gear, follow rules, rest, don't push；使用 First/Next/Then/Finally，不少于 5 句话，一般现在时。 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：warm up 热身；wear safety gear 佩戴安全装备；follow rules 遵守规则；rest 休息；push 推 参考句型：It’s important to… First,… Next,… Then,… Finally,… 5、 范文： Last weekend I’m Jim. Last weekend I was busy but happy. On Saturday morning, I read a book in the library. In the afternoon, I did my homework at home. On Sunday, I washed my clothes. In the evening, I watched a movie with my parents. I had a good time last weekend. 【详解】 题干解读：假设自己是 Jim，标题 Last weekend，根据四幅图片写短文，时态要用一般过去时，描述上周末的活动，不少于 50 词，语句通顺。 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：last weekend 上周末；read a book 看书；do homework 做作业；wash clothes 洗衣服；watch a movie 看电影 参考句型：I was…；I read…；I did…；I washed…；I watched… 6、 范文： Xu Beihong was a great Chinese artist. He was very good at painting. He enjoyed painting horses most. His horses look strong and lively. He also taught students to paint. Many people love his paintings. He is a famous artist in China. 【详解】 题干解读：要求介绍徐悲鸿，不少于 5 句话，参考提示介绍他的身份、爱好、其他事迹，全文用一般过去时。 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：artist 艺术家；paint horses 画马；teach students 教学生；famous 著名的 参考句型：…was…；He enjoyed…；He also…；Many people… 7、 范文：   The new skatepark is open. We should follow these rules when we skate. First, we must arrive on time. Before skating, we need to warm up. We have to wear helmets to keep safe. We can hold the railing when we feel scared. We must keep quiet in the skatepark. Safety is the most important. 【详解】 题干解读：介绍滑冰场安全规则，用上提示词 wear helmets, keep quiet, arrive on time, before skating, warm up, hold the railing，不少于 5 句话，条理清晰。 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：skate 滑冰；wear helmets 戴头盔；warm up 热身；hold the railing 扶栏杆；arrive on time 准时到达；keep quiet 保持安静 参考句型：We should…；We need to…；We have to…；…is the most important. 2 / 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $