专题08 书面表达（期中专项训练）五年级英语上学期（沪教版·新教材）

专题08 书面表达 (期中专项训练) 答题技巧 一、做题四步法 1. 审清题目：圈画主题、时态、人称、词数要求，明确写作要点。 2. 罗列要点：根据提示，列出必写信息词，不漏关键内容。 3. 连词成篇：选用熟悉句型串联要点，用好连接词，完成初稿。 4. 通读检查：逐句核对时态、拼写、大小写、标点，修正错误。 ✅ 计划类作文（一般将来时）：用will / be going to，写清时间、人物、地点、活动。 ✅ 介绍类作文（一般现在时）：描述事物、常识，注意主谓一致。 ✅ 观点建议类：使用should / shouldn’t，分层表达看法与建议。 1.时态混用！计划用将来时、往事用过去时、介绍常识用一般现在时。 2.名词单复数、句首单词大写、英语句号.，这类小错误极易丢分。 3.不要强行写复杂长句，优先使用有把握的句子，减少语法错误。 4.要点不能缺，题目给出的信息点必须全部写到，否则会扣分。 审题圈词定时态，要点罗列不遗漏； 连词成句有条理，写完检查别忘掉。 二、分题型要点 三、常见陷阱提醒 口诀 习题演练 1、 假如你是乐乐，以 “My Weekend Plan”为题，写一篇短文，介绍你这个周末游玩的计划，用一般将来时表达，内容可包含：你将要去哪里、和谁一起去、天气如何、几点出发、乘坐什么交通工具前往、在景区里做哪些事，最后表达游玩感受。 (至少包含5方面，不少于40词) My Weekend Plan _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2、 请以My weekend plan为题，写一篇文章介绍自己的周末计划。 要求：1.用be going to句型。 2.不少于40词。 3.思路清晰，语句通顺和标点符号正确。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3、 国庆假期即将到来，请你从时事热点“全民健身”出发，为你的国庆假期撰写一份主题为“My healthy weekend plan”的英语短文，写下你打算怎么度过。 要求：1. 必须使用be going to结构(如：I am going to... / We are going to...)。 2. 必须使用 first、next、then、finally等顺序词。 3. 至少写5句话，卷面整洁，书写规范。 提示词汇(可使用，也可自行替换)：do exercise, ride a bike, play ball games, eat healthy food, drink a lot of water, get enough sleep, stay away from mobile phones (远离手机) My healthy weekend plan Now our country encourages (鼓励) everyone to keep healthy. I have a great plan for this weekend. ________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4、 同学们，我们都知道健康第一，每个人都是自己健康的第一责任人。请根据表格信息，写一写我们应该如何保持健康。要求：不少于五句话，书写规范，语句通顺，语义连贯。 keep healthy ways should shouldn’t food eat more vegetables and fruit; drink more water eat too much candy; drink too much cola sport do exercise every day sit for too long rest go to bed early stay up late feelings keep happy get angry easily Health is very important to everyone. How to keep healthy? We should eat more vegetables and fruit. We shouldn’t eat too much candy. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s keep healthy together. 5、 健康的饮食是人类生活中不可或缺的一部分，它对我们的身体健康和生活质量有着重要的影响。根据所给的图片提示，以“Healthy eating”为题写一篇英语小短文。 Healthy eating _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6、 Please help Li Tao introduce our country!请帮助李涛介绍下我们的祖国吧！ 要求：1. 语句通顺，书写规范；2. 不少于5句话 Our country _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7、 同学们，暑假快要到了。读下面的对话内容，George，Xuxuan和Jin Xiuying分别打算去广州、北京和上海，想去品尝当地的美食，欣赏美丽的风景。你也想利用假期去感受中国的大好河山吗？请你根据下面提示信息仿写一篇短文，介绍自己的假期出行计划。 I’m George. I’m from England. I am going to go to Guangzhou during my holiday. It is in the south of China. I am going there by plane. My favourite food is milk tea and bread, so I am going to eat lots of them. I’m Xuxuan. I’m Chinese. I am going to go to Beijing in my summer holiday. I am going to try dumplings first. And I am going to eat Beijing Roast Duck. I think it is going to become my favourite food. I’m Jin Xiuying. I come from the Republic of Korea. It will be my first trip to Shanghai, so I am going to visit Shanghai in my holiday. I am going to see traditional Chinese buildings and taste different Chinese food. I am going to eat noodles and Chinese rice. 提示： Xi’an Location (位置) Transportation (交通工具) Food Activities in the west of China by train eat biangbiang noodles visit the Terracotta Army (秦始皇兵马俑), take photos ... 要求：语句通顺、连贯，不少于5句话。开头已给出，不计入总句数。 Summer holiday is coming. ______________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案加解析 1、 范文： My Weekend Plan Hello, I’m Lele. This weekend, I will go to the park with my best friend Tom. The weather will be sunny and warm, so it’s perfect for going out. We will leave at 8 o’clock in the morning and go there by bike. At the park, we will fly kites, have a picnic and take some nice photos. I think we will have a wonderful time there, and I’m looking forward to this happy weekend. 【详解】题干解读：该题目用第一人称，可以写一写 你将要去哪里、和谁一起去、天气如何、几点出发、乘坐什么交通工具前往、在景区里做哪些事，最后表达游玩感受等。注意文章为一般将来时态。 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：weekend周末，park公园，by bike骑自行车 参考句型：I will...；We will...；I think ... 2、 例文： My weekend plan I’m going to have a busy but happy weekend. On Saturday morning, I’m going to visit my grandparents with my parents. We’re going to have lunch together. In the afternoon, I’m going to read books in the library. On Sunday, I’m going to clean my room first. Then, I’m going to play football with my friends. I’m sure I’ll have a great time! 【详解】题干解读：该题目要求以My weekend plan为题，用be going to句型介绍周末计划，需不少于40词，思路清晰、语句通顺。 参考词汇与句型：      参考词汇：visit grandparents看望祖父母，have lunch吃午餐，read books读书，clean the room打扫房间，play football踢足球；      参考句型：I’m going to...；On Saturday/Sunday, I’m going to...；We’re going to...；Then, I’m going to... 3、 范文： My healthy weekend plan Now our country encourages everyone to keep healthy. I have a great plan for this weekend. First, I am going to do exercise in the park with my parents on Saturday morning. We are going to go jogging and play badminton to make our bodies strong. Next, I am going to ride a bike to the library. I am going to read some good books there. Then, I am going to eat healthy food at home. I am going to eat more vegetables and fruit, and I am going to drink a lot of water. Finally, I am going to get enough sleep and stay away from mobile phones. I am going to go to bed early on Sunday night. I am going to have a healthy and happy weekend! 【详解】题干解读：主要用第一人称，时态为一般将来时。 参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：encourage鼓励，keep healthy保持健康，plan计划，do exercise做运动，go jogging慢跑，play badminton打羽毛球，ride a bike骑自行车，read books读书，healthy food健康食物，vegetables蔬菜，fruit水果，drink water喝水，enough sleep充足的睡眠，stay away from远离，mobile phones手机，go to bed上床睡觉 参考句型：I have a plan for...；I am going to...；First, I am going to...；We are going to... 4、 范文： Health is very important to everyone. How to keep healthy? First, we should eat more fruit and vegetables. We shouldn’t eat too much candy. Next, we should do exercise. We shouldn’t always stay at home. Then we should go to bed early and have a good rest every day. We shouldn’t go to bed late. Finally, we should keep happy. We shouldn’t get angry easily. 【详解】1.题干解读：注意文章为一般现在时态。 2.参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：important重要的，fruit and vegetables水果和蔬菜，too much太多的，do exercise做运动，go to bed睡觉，keep happy保持心情愉快 参考句型：Health is…；How…；We shouldn’t…；We should… 5、 范文： Healthy eating Healthy eating is very important for us. We should eat some bread, one egg and drink some milk for breakfast. We should eat enough rice, fish and meat for lunch and dinner. We should also eat enough vegetables and fruit. We shouldn’t eat too much candy. Don’t eat too much fast food. It can make us fat. 【详解】题干解读：该题目用第一人称复数。 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：important重要的，breakfast早餐，enough足够的，candy糖果，fast food快餐，fat胖的 参考句型：We should…；We shouldn’t…；Don’t…；It can… 6、 范文：                                                                         Our country     Our country is China. Beijing is the capital city. We speak Chinese. The flag is red with five yellow stars. There are many famous places in China. The Great Wall is one of them. It is very long. Tian’anmen Square is also famous. The Palace Museum has a long history and lots of wonderful things. I love our country very much. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求写介绍自己的祖国。人称用第一人称，时态用一般现在时，同时注意单词和句子数量符合要求。 2.参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：capital首都，speak讲，flag旗，stars星星，famous places名胜古迹，The Great Wall长城，Tian'anmen Square天安门广场，The Palace Museum故宫，very much非常 参考句型：Beijing is…；The flag is…；There are…；The Great Wall is…；Tian'anmen Square is…；The Palace Museum has…；I love… 7、 范文：     Summer holiday is coming. I am going to Xi’an with my family during my holiday. It’s in the west of China. We will go there by train. I want to eat biangbiang noodles and visit the Terracotta Army. I will take lots of pictures too. 【详解】题干解读： 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：am going to打算，during在……期间，in the west在西部，go there去那里，by train坐火车，eat吃，visit参观，take lots of pictures拍很多照 参考句型：I am going to...；I want to...and...；We/I will... 2 / 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $