Unit 1 The Changing World 作文讲解Changes in Leisure Activities课件 2026-2027学年仁爱科普版英语 九年级上册

Changes in Leisure Activities 书面表达写作指导课 仁爱版 · 九年级上册 · Unit 1 The Changing World 作文题目 随着社会的发展，人们的生活发生了很大的变化。请以 Changes in Leisure Activities 为题写一篇英语短文，对比过去和现在休闲活动的不同。 思维导图要点： · 过去：watch TV；play Chinese chess · 现在：more choices；share…online；try new things 词数 80-100 词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 固定开头：As society develops, people's leisure activities have changed greatly. 固定结尾：People can enjoy different ways to relax and spend their free time happily. 第一步：理清思路 & 头脑风暴 今昔对比作文：过去 vs 现在。先想好词。 过去：空闲时间少 used to / spare time 过去：看电视 watch TV at home / either...or... 过去：下象棋 play Chinese chess / with neighbors 现在：更多选择 more choices / try new things 现在：网上分享 share online / photos and stories 现在：线上活动 online activities / many kinds of 第二步：连词成句（过去部分） 在过去，人们空闲时可做的活动很少。 关键词：在过去 in the past｜过去常常 used to do｜空闲时间 spare time In the past, people used to have very few activities in their spare time. 他们要么在家看电视，要么和邻居下中国象棋。 关键词：要么……要么 either...or...｜看电视 watch TV｜下象棋 play Chinese chess｜邻居 neighbors They either watched TV at home or played Chinese chess with their neighbors. 第二步：连词成句（现在部分） 人们不仅有更多选择，而且喜欢尝试新事物。 关键词：不仅……而且 not only...but also...｜更多选择 more choices｜尝试新事物 try new things People not only have more choices, but also love to try new things. 一些人去户外锻炼，而另一些人在网上分享有趣的故事和照片。 关键词：一些人……而另一些 some...while others...｜锻炼 take exercise｜分享 share...online Some take exercise outdoors, while others share their interesting stories and photos online. 如果他们想学新东西，可以参加各种各样的线上活动。 关键词：如果 if｜学新东西 learn something new｜各种各样 many kinds of｜线上活动 online activities If they want to learn something new, they can join many kinds of online activities. 第三步：表达看法（结尾升华） 结尾已给出，但中间要补一句总结升华。 所有这些变化表明我们的生活正变得越来越好。 关键词：所有这些变化 all these changes｜表明 show that｜越来越好 better and better All these changes show that our life is becoming better and better. 范文赏析：Changes in Leisure Activities As society develops, people's leisure activities have changed greatly. In the past, people used to have very few activities in their spare time. When they were free, they either watched TV at home or played Chinese chess with their neighbors. But now everything is different. People not only have more choices, but also love to try new things. Some take exercise outdoors, while others share their interesting stories and photos online. If they want to learn something new, they can join many kinds of online activities. All these changes show that our life is becoming better and better. People can enjoy different ways to relax and spend their free time happily. 图例： 红色=从句/高级句型 蓝色=重点短语 绿色=好句亮点 范文用到的语法结构（约100词） ① used to do 过去常常 ② either…or… 要么……要么 ③ not only…but also… 不仅而且 ④ while 并列连词（对比） ⑤ if 条件状语从句 ⑥ that 宾语从句 ⑦ better and better 比较级叠用 语法精讲① used to do 过去常常做某事 【原句】 In the past, people used to have very few activities in their spare time. 【翻译】 在过去，人们空闲时可做的活动很少。 【要点】 used to + 动词原形，表示过去常常做（现在不做了），今昔对比王牌句型 ✍ 仿写练习：看中文+关键词，自己说英文 我小时候常常走路去上学。 关键词：used to do｜走路去上学 walk to school｜小时候 when I was young I used to walk to school when I was young. 过去人们空闲时活动更少。 关键词：used to｜更少 fewer｜空闲时间 in spare time People used to have fewer activities in their spare time. 语法精讲② either…or… 要么……要么…… 【原句】 They either watched TV at home or played Chinese chess with their neighbors. 【翻译】 他们要么在家看电视，要么和邻居下中国象棋。 【要点】 either...or...连接两个并列动作，谓语动词就近一致 ✍ 仿写练习：看中文+关键词，自己说英文 你可以坐公交去，或者骑自行车去。 关键词：either...or...｜坐公交 by bus｜骑自行车 by bike You can either go by bus or by bike. 周末我要么读书，要么帮妈妈做家务。 关键词：either...or...｜读书 read books｜做家务 do housework On weekends, I either read books or help Mom do housework. 语法精讲③ while 并列连词（而……，表对比） 【原句】 Some take exercise outdoors, while others share their stories online. 【翻译】 一些人去户外锻炼，而另一些人在网上分享故事。 【要点】 while连接两个并列句子，强调前后对比 ✍ 仿写练习：看中文+关键词，自己说英文 汤姆喜欢阅读，而他弟弟喜欢运动。 关键词：while｜阅读 read｜运动 sports Tom likes reading, while his brother likes sports. 一些人喜欢待在家里，而另一些人喜欢外出旅行。 关键词：while｜待在家里 stay at home｜外出旅行 travel Some like staying at home, while others like travelling. 语法精讲④ show that... 宾语从句 【原句】 All these changes show that our life is becoming better and better. 【翻译】 所有这些变化表明我们的生活正变得越来越好。 【要点】 show/think/believe/hope that + 从句，that可省略 ✍ 仿写练习：看中文+关键词，自己说英文 我认为我们应该好好利用空闲时间。 关键词：think that｜好好利用 make good use of｜空闲时间 free time I think that we should make good use of free time. 这些照片表明我们的生活越来越幸福。 关键词：show that｜照片 photos｜越来越幸福 happier and happier These photos show that our life is becoming happier and happier. 重点短语必背（选自范文） ① spare time / free time 空闲时间 ② used to do sth. 过去常常做某事 ③ try new things 尝试新事物 ④ many kinds of 各种各样的 ⑤ better and better 越来越好 ⑥ share...online 在网上分享 ⑦ take exercise 锻炼 短语闯关（看中文说英文） ① 空闲时间 spare time / free time ② 过去常常做某事 used to do sth. ③ 尝试新事物 try new things ④ 各种各样的 many kinds of ⑤ 越来越好 better and better ⑥ 在网上分享 share...online ⑦ 锻炼 take exercise 背诵闯关（一）看中文背英文 在过去，人们空闲时可做的活动很少。 结构：in the past｜used to do｜spare time In the past, people used to have very few activities in their spare time. 他们要么在家看电视，要么和邻居下中国象棋。 结构：either...or...｜watch TV｜play Chinese chess They either watched TV at home or played Chinese chess with their neighbors. 人们不仅有更多选择，而且喜欢尝试新事物。 结构：not only...but also...｜more choices｜try new things People not only have more choices, but also love to try new things. 背诵闯关（二）看中文背英文 一些人去户外锻炼，而另一些人在网上分享故事和照片。 结构：some...while others...｜share online Some take exercise outdoors, while others share their stories and photos online. 所有这些变化表明我们的生活正变得越来越好。 结构：show that｜better and better All these changes show that our life is becoming better and better. 如果他们想学新东西，可以参加各种各样的线上活动。 结构：if｜learn something new｜many kinds of If they want to learn something new, they can join many kinds of online activities. 写作技巧总结 ① 今昔对比结构 过去什么样 → 现在什么样 → 总结变化，三段式 ② used to do 写过去必用used to do，"现在不这样了"的对比感立刻出来 ③ either...or... / while 写过去用either...or列举，写现在用while对比两类人 ④ 时态要分清 过去用一般过去时，现在用一般现在时，别混 ⑤ 结尾升华 用show that...宾语从句+better and better收束全文 Life is Changing, Life is Better. 时代在变，生活更美。下节课见！ 仁爱版 · 九年级上册 · Unit 1 The Changing World $