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外研版(2024)英语七年级上册
Unit 5 The power of plants 单元写作练习
植物的力量 · 作用、用途与文化
班级 ______________ 姓名 ______________ 学号 ______________
一、本单元写作语料库
说明:下表所有短语与句型均出自本单元教材。动笔前先读一遍,写作时优先使用。
(一)重点短语
短语
中文释义
教材出处
quarter past seven
七点一刻
Understanding ideas 语篇
collect sunlight and CO2 during the day
在白天收集阳光和二氧化碳
Understanding ideas 语篇
send up water
向上输送水
Understanding ideas 语篇
rise up to the Leaf through the Stem
通过茎上升到叶子里
Understanding ideas 语篇
mix water, CO2 and sunlight
把水、二氧化碳和阳光混合在一起
Understanding ideas 语篇
there will be sugar
将会生成糖
Understanding ideas 语篇
be useful for the growth of the plant
对植物的生长有用
Understanding ideas 语篇
another product will be oxygen
另一种生成物将是氧气
Understanding ideas 语篇
they need it to breathe
他们需要它来呼吸
Understanding ideas 语篇
take a rest
休息一下
Understanding ideas 语篇
give more than food and oxygen
给予的不仅仅是食物和氧气
Understanding ideas 语篇
without plants, the natural world would be very different
没有植物,自然界会大不相同
Understanding ideas 语篇
mean a lot to us
对我们意义重大
Useful expressions 语言提示
the world's top three food plants
世界三大粮食作物
Developing ideas 板块导入
make their own rain
自己制造雨水
语法板块讲解例句
not only good for our health, but also a key part of many cultures
不仅对我们的健康有益,也是许多文化中的重要部分
Reading for writing 语篇
as many teahouses as leaves in a cup of tea
茶馆多得像一杯茶里的茶叶
Reading for writing 语篇
It's our way of connecting
这是我们联结的方式
Reading for writing 语篇
(二)重点句型
句型
教材例句
使用提示
主语 + will do sth.
The water will rise up to the Leaf through the Stem.
一般将来时,will 后面接动词原形,不随人称变化。
主语 + be going to do sth.
He's going to start work in the plant.
写“打算、即将发生”,be 要随主语变成 am / is / are。
… is useful for…
It's useful for the growth of the plant.
说“对……有用”,for 后面接名词或动词-ing。
Without plants, …
Without plants, the natural world would be very different!
从反面说植物的重要,without 后面接名词。
… mean(s) a lot to…
It means a lot to animals and humans.
说“对……意义重大”,to 后面接人。
It is not only…, but also…
It is not only good for our health, but also a key part of many cultures.
连接两个并列信息,not only 和 but also 后面的词性要一致。
It's no secret that…
It's no secret that Brits love afternoon tea.
写“众所周知……”,that 后面接一个完整的句子。
… make(s) sb feel like…
A cup of warm tea always makes me feel like I'm back home.
写“某物让人感觉像……”,make 后面接人再接动词原形。
二、写作练习
本单元的话题是“植物的重要性”。五个话题由“补全短文”过渡到“独立成篇”,写之前请先读第一部分语料库。
话题1 Our Planting Day(补全短文)
请以 "Our Planting Day" 为题,写一篇英语短文,写写学校植树日那天你做了什么,以及你学到的植物知识。
写作内容:
1. 植树日那天你做了什么;
2. 植物是怎么“工作”的;
3. 你对植物的新认识。
要求:先读下面这篇不完整的短文,再根据括号中的汉语提示补全空缺部分,每空填写一个短语或一句话。(本练笔共 10 小题)
Last Friday our school had a Planting Day. I got up at (1) ________________(七点一刻)and put on my old clothes. My classmate and I planted a young tree behind the teaching building.
Our biology teacher came and told us how a plant works. The leaves (2) ________________(在白天收集阳光和二氧化碳). Water from the roots (3) ________________(将通过茎上升到叶子里). Then the leaves (4) ________________(把水、二氧化碳和阳光混合在一起).
"(5) ________________(将会生成糖)," she said. "It (6) ________________(对植物的生长很有用).(7) ________________(另一种生成物将是氧气), and we need it to breathe." I never knew plants work so hard.
After two hours we (8) ________________(休息了一下). I looked at our young tree and thought: (9) ________________(植物给予我们的不只是食物和氧气).(10) ________________(没有植物,自然界会大不相同).
话题2 Tea in My Family(补全短文)
茶对中国人来说常常不只是一种饮料。请以 "Tea in My Family" 为题,写一篇英语短文,说说茶在你家里的故事。
写作内容:
1. 家里谁爱喝茶、在哪儿喝;
2. 你和家人一起喝茶的情景;
3. 茶对你意味着什么。
要求:根据括号中的汉语提示补全下面的短文,每空填写一个短语或一句话。(本练笔共 10 小题)
In my family, tea (1) ________________(对我们意义重大). My grandpa (2) ________________(过去常常带我去茶馆). He and his friends drank tea and (3) ________________(分享他们的消息).
My mother likes green tea. (4) ________________(它不仅对我们的健康有益,也是许多文化中的一个重要部分).
At weekends we sit outside. We (5) ________________(在院子里聊天放松,喝着红茶、吃着饼干). For us, (6) ________________(这是我们联结的方式).
Now I study in another city. Most of my classmates (7) ________________(更喜欢咖啡), but (8) ________________(我总会选择绿茶). A cup of warm tea (9) ________________(总是让我感觉就像回到了家). For me, tea is (10) ________________(对我来说不只是一种饮料).
话题3 A Poster About Bamboo(植物海报)
本单元最后的任务是制作一张关于植物的海报。请你挑一种熟悉的植物,独立写出海报上的文字。
写作内容:
开头:这种植物对人们意味着什么;
中间:它对动物和自然有什么作用;
结尾:我们能用它做什么,以及没有植物会怎样。
本单元语块参考(至少用上 6 个):
… is more than a plant for…;Animals need them for food.;Plants influence…;We make… from…;We use… for…;… is useful for…;It means a lot to…;Without plants, the natural world…。
词数要求:60—70 词
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话题4 给笔友介绍植树日(应用文)
你的英国笔友 Peter 想知道你们学校为自然做过什么。请你给他写一封邮件,介绍学校的植树日。
写作内容:
1. 植树日那天你做了什么;
2. 植物为什么重要;
3. 问问对方的做法。
词数要求:60—70 词
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话题5 My Favourite Plant(开放式写作)
请以 "My Favourite Plant" 为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍你最喜欢的一种植物和它与你的日常。
写作内容:
1. 你最喜欢什么植物;
2. 你平时怎么照顾它,它有什么变化;
3. 你对植物的感受。
词数要求:70 词左右
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三、写后自查表
□ 顺序:先写“植物做什么/我们怎么用”,再写“它对自然和文化意味着什么”。
□ 语言:至少用上了 3 个本单元语料库里的短语或句型。
□ 语法:will 和 be going to 后面都接动词原形,别再多加 to。
□ 时态:讲植物的规律用一般现在时,讲将来和打算用 will 或 be going to。
□ 字数:60—70 词的不少于 60 词,70 词左右的不少于 70 词。
参考答案与解析
(教师讲评用,学生独立完成前请勿翻阅;可单独打印或在使用前删除此部分)
话题1:Our Planting Day(补全短文) 参考答案
题号
参考答案
答案解析
1
quarter past seven
教材原句是 It's quarter past seven,表示“几点过一刻”。
2
collect sunlight and CO2 during the day
教材原句;讲植物的规律用一般现在时,主语是复数,动词用原形。
3
will rise up to the leaves through the stem
教材原句是 The water will rise up to the Leaf through the Stem,这里不大写,并把 Leaf 换成复数。
4
will mix water, CO2 and sunlight
教材原句是 Then workers in the Leaf will mix water, CO2 and sunlight。
5
There will be sugar
教材原句;there will be 表示“将会有”,后面接名词。
6
is useful for the growth of the plant
教材原句是 It's useful for the growth of the plant,for 后面接名词短语。
7
Another product will be oxygen
教材原句;another 后面接单数名词 product。
8
took a rest
教材原句是 They will take a rest,这里写已经发生的事,take 用过去式 took。
9
Plants give more than food and oxygen
教材原句是 They give more than food and oxygen,把 they 换成 plants。
10
Without plants, the natural world would be very different
教材原句;without 表示“没有”,后面直接接名词。
话题2:Tea in My Family(补全短文) 参考答案
题号
参考答案
答案解析
1
means a lot to us
教材 Useful expressions 里有 … mean a lot to…,主语 tea 是不可数名词,mean 加-s。
2
used to take me to the teahouse
教材原句是 Grandpa used to take me to the teahouse,used to 后面接动词原形。
3
shared their news
教材原句是 He and his friends drank tea and shared their news,两个动词都用过去式。
4
It is not only good for our health, but also a key part of many cultures
教材 Reading for writing 原句,not only 和 but also 后面接的都是形容词短语。
5
chat and relax in the yard with black tea and biscuits
教材原句是 We chat and relax in the yard with black tea and biscuits,with 表示“伴着”。
6
it is our way of connecting
教材原句是 It's our way of connecting,way of 后面接动词-ing。
7
prefer coffee
教材原句是 Most of my classmates prefer coffee,prefer 后面直接接名词。
8
I will always choose green tea
教材原句是 but I will always choose green tea;will 后面接动词原形 choose。
9
always makes me feel like I'm back home
教材原句是 A cup of warm tea always makes me feel like I'm back home。
10
more than a drink
教材原句是 It's more than a drink for me,more than 表示“不只是”。
话题3:A Poster About Bamboo(植物海报) 参考答案
参考范文:Wonderful Bamboo
Bamboo is more than a plant for people in the south of China.
Animals need bamboo for food. Pandas eat it every day. Plants influence the climate too, and bamboo can make the air clean.
We make chairs and baskets from bamboo. We also use it for building. It is useful for our life and it means a lot to us.
范文点评:
结构:按“意义—对自然的作用—对人的用途”三段写,正好对应教材海报提纲的三栏。
语言:用 Without plants 从反面收尾,比再写一句“植物很重要”更有力。
可迁移:把 bamboo 换成 rice 或 cotton,改掉用途那两句即可。
话题4:给笔友介绍植树日(应用文) 参考答案
参考范文:Dear Peter
Dear Peter,
Last Friday we had a Planting Day at school. I planted a young tree with my classmate behind the teaching building. It was hard work, but I was happy.
Plants are important. They give more than food and oxygen. They also influence the climate and give animals somewhere to live.
What do you do for nature? Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Lin Tao
范文点评:
格式:开头 Dear Peter,结尾 Yours, 加署名,正文分三段,符合英文邮件习惯。
语言:用 give more than… 一句说完植物的两大贡献,不啰嗦。
可迁移:把 Planting Day 换成 a tree-planting club,就是另一封介绍信。
话题5:My Favourite Plant(开放式写作) 参考答案
参考范文:My Favourite Plant
My favourite plant is the sunflower. There is one in our yard and it is taller than me now.
Every morning it turns its face to the sun. Its leaves collect sunlight during the day and the plant grows fast. I water it before school and take a rest beside it after school.
In autumn it will give us seeds. Plants are quiet, but they mean a lot to us.
范文点评:
选材:写院子里的一株向日葵,有地点有细节,比泛泛写“植物很重要”好。
语言:用本单元的 collect sunlight 和 take a rest,语块都用在了具体情景里。
可迁移:把向日葵换成绿萝、多肉,第二段照着“早上—放学后”的时间线写。
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