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Unit 5
Path to a Better World
Reading for Writing.
(仁爱版 2024)九年级
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Pre-writing
While-writing
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Post-writing
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Summary
Assessment
Homework
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Learning objectives
Lead in
By the end of the lesson, I will be able to...
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extract scenes and details from the model essay;
organize ideas with the plot chart;
write a short passage on how technology improves our life.
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Learning objectives
Watch and answer.
Q: What is the video about?
It’s about smart homes in China.
Look and learn.
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Lead in
Q: What smart devices do you know?
Smart speaker; Robot vacuum
Smart light; Smart phones
Electric cars; Smart robots
Voice assistant; sensor
Remote control; charge…
Q: How do these smart devices help us?
They make life easy.
/ They help us do housework.
…
Activity1 Pair work.
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Lead in
Talk about how science and technology have improved your life. Add more examples in the list.
Smart speaker; Robot vacuum
Smart light; Smart phones
Electric cars; Smart robots
Voice assistant; sensor
Remote control; charge…
convenient 方便的 easy 轻松的 fast 快捷的 colourful 丰富多彩的 comfortable 舒适的
Smart‑home devices
Describing words
________ makes our life much more convenient.
Thanks to ________, we do not need to ________.
When we have ________, things become ________.
________ changes our daily life a lot.
It saves our time, so life becomes ________.
Sentence Structure
How has technology changed our life?
High‑speed trains make our trip fast.
What about smart‑phones?
We can use smart‑phones for video calls.
Activity1 Pair work.
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Lead in
Talk about how science and technology have improved your life. Add more examples in the list.
Skim the text. Match the main idea with each paragraph.
Activity 2 Read and match.
Pre-writing
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Science and technology are so amazing!
My mom is a doctor and she says that she can’t even imagine life without all the cool things that science and technology give us. Let me tell you about a day we have.
In the morning, my mom prepares breakfast for us very fast in our modern kitchen. She then takes me and my brother to school. Sometimes there’s a lot of traffic, but her phone’s Beidou System helps us find the best way to get to school on time. When she gets to the hospital, she starts seeing her patients. They don’t have to wait long to see her because the order of seeing the doctor has already been made on the internet. Sometimes, she even helps patients over the phone or video calls if they can’t come to the hospital. After work, we watch movies at home on our big TV with amazing sound. We don’t even have to go to the theater! We should all be thankful for the benefits that science and technology bring us.
I really hope that in the future, science and technology will keep making the world an even better place to live in.
Science and technology are amazing.
Tech helps our morning life.
Tech helps mom’s hospital work.
Hope tech makes the world better.
Science and technology are so amazing!
My mom is a doctor and she says that she can’t even imagine life without all the cool things that science and technology give us. Let me tell you about a day we have.
In the morning, my mom prepares breakfast for us very fast in our modern kitchen. She then takes me and my brother to school. Sometimes there’s a lot of traffic, but her phone’s Beidou System helps us find the best way to get to school on time. When she gets to the hospital, she starts seeing her patients. They don’t have to wait long to see her because the order of seeing the doctor has already been made on the internet. Sometimes, she even helps patients over the phone or video calls if they can’t come to the hospital. After work, we watch movies at home on our big TV with amazing sound. We don’t even have to go to the theater! We should all be thankful for the benefits that science and technology bring us.
I really hope that in the future, science and technology will keep making the world an even better place to live in.
Activity 2 Analyze the outline.
Pre-writing
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Beginning
Middle
End
State your topic: How science and technology improve our life
Body: Talk about examples and details of science and technology in daily life
Summarize your opinion.
Pre-writing
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Read and take notes.
Science and technology are so amazing!
My mom is a doctor and she says that she can’t even imagine life without all the cool things that science and technology give us. Let me tell you about a day we have.
In the morning, my mom prepares breakfast for us very fast in our modern kitchen. She then takes me and my brother to school. Sometimes there’s a lot of traffic, but her phone’s Beidou System helps us find the best way to get to school on time. When she gets to the hospital, she starts seeing her patients. They don’t have to wait long to see her because the order of seeing the doctor has already been made on the internet. Sometimes, she even helps patients over the phone or video calls if they can’t come to the hospital. After work, we watch movies at home on our big TV with amazing sound. We don’t even have to go to the theater! We should all be thankful for the benefits that science and technology bring us.
I really hope that in the future, science and technology will keep making the world an even better place to live in.
prepare breakfast for sb. 为某人准备早餐
take sb. to school 送某人去上学
a lot of traffic 交通拥堵
start seeing her patients 开始接诊病人
don't have to wait long 不必等很久
be thankful for the benefits 感恩带来的益处
keep making…an even better place 不断使…… 成为更美好的地方
the order of seeing the doctor 就诊预约顺序
over the phone or video calls 通过电话或视频通话
can't come to the hospital 无法来到医院
amazing sound 震撼的音效
Activity 2 Read the text and underline the useful expressions.
Pre-writing
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Read and underline.
Science and technology are so amazing!
My mom is a doctor and she says that she can’t even imagine life without all the cool things that science and technology give us. Let me tell you about a day we have.
In the morning, my mom prepares breakfast for us very fast in our modern kitchen. She then takes me and my brother to school. Sometimes there’s a lot of traffic, but her phone’s Beidou System helps us find the best way to get to school on time. When she gets to the hospital, she starts seeing her patients. They don’t have to wait long to see her because the order of seeing the doctor has already been made on the internet. Sometimes, she even helps patients over the phone or video calls if they can’t come to the hospital. After work, we watch movies at home on our big TV with amazing sound. We don’t even have to go to the theater! We should all be thankful for the benefits that science and technology bring us.
I really hope that in the future, science and technology will keep making the world an even better place to live in.
Science and technology are so amazing! 科学技术真是太神奇了!
I can’t even imagine life without… 我甚至无法想象没有…… 的生活。
Let me tell you about… 让我来给你讲讲……
prepare … for … very fast 很快地为…… 准备……
help sb. find the best way to do sth. 帮助某人找到做某事的最佳途径
get to … on time 准时到达……
They don’t have to wait long to do sth. because… 他们不用久等就能做某事,因为……
over the phone or video calls 通过电话或视频通话
We should all be thankful for the benefits that…bring us. 我们应当感恩…… 带给我们的益处。
I really hope that in the future, … will keep making … an even better place to live in. 我真心希望未来,…… 会不断让…… 成为更宜居的地方。
Activity 2 Read the model essay and complete the plot chart.
Read and complete.
While-writing
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Beginning (before work):
Middle (during work):
End (after work):
💡看图片或短文,找到故事最先发生的事 →填写 Beginning
💡找故事发展经过的事件 →填写 Middle
💡找故事最后的结果、人物感受 →填写 End
💡检验:Beginning‑Middle‑End 连起来,故事逻辑通顺完整。
Activity 2 Read the model essay and complete the plot chart.
Read and complete.
While-writing
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Beginning (before work):
💡看图片或短文,找到故事最先发生的事 →填写 Beginning
Mom uses modern kitchen and Beidou System in the morning.
Science and technology are so amazing!
My mom is a doctor and she says that she can’t even imagine life without all the cool things that science and technology give us. Let me tell you about a day we have.
In the morning, my mom prepares breakfast for us very fast in our modern kitchen. She then takes me and my brother to school. Sometimes there’s a lot of traffic, but her phone’s Beidou System helps us find the best way to get to school on time. When she gets to the hospital, she starts seeing her patients. They don’t have to wait long to see her because the order of seeing the doctor has already been made on the internet. Sometimes, she even helps patients over the phone or video calls if they can’t come to the hospital. After work, we watch movies at home on our big TV with amazing sound. We don’t even have to go to the theater! We should all be thankful for the benefits that science and technology bring us.
I really hope that in the future, science and technology will keep making the world an even better place to live in.
Activity 2 Read the model essay and complete the plot chart.
Read and complete.
While-writing
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Science and technology are so amazing!
My mom is a doctor and she says that she can’t even imagine life without all the cool things that science and technology give us. Let me tell you about a day we have.
In the morning, my mom prepares breakfast for us very fast in our modern kitchen. She then takes me and my brother to school. Sometimes there’s a lot of traffic, but her phone’s Beidou System helps us find the best way to get to school on time. When she gets to the hospital, she starts seeing her patients. They don’t have to wait long to see her because the order of seeing the doctor has already been made on the internet. Sometimes, she even helps patients over the phone or video calls if they can’t come to the hospital. After work, we watch movies at home on our big TV with amazing sound. We don’t even have to go to the theater! We should all be thankful for the benefits that science and technology bring us.
I really hope that in the future, science and technology will keep making the world an even better place to live in.
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Middle (during work):
Patients book visits on the Internet, so they needn’t wait long. Mom can help patients by phone or video calls.
💡找故事发展经过的事件 →填写 Middle
Activity 2 Read the model essay and complete the plot chart.
Read and complete.
While-writing
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Science and technology are so amazing!
My mom is a doctor and she says that she can’t even imagine life without all the cool things that science and technology give us. Let me tell you about a day we have.
In the morning, my mom prepares breakfast for us very fast in our modern kitchen. She then takes me and my brother to school. Sometimes there’s a lot of traffic, but her phone’s Beidou System helps us find the best way to get to school on time. When she gets to the hospital, she starts seeing her patients. They don’t have to wait long to see her because the order of seeing the doctor has already been made on the internet. Sometimes, she even helps patients over the phone or video calls if they can’t come to the hospital. After work, we watch movies at home on our big TV with amazing sound. We don’t even have to go to the theater! We should all be thankful for the benefits that science and technology bring us.
I really hope that in the future, science and technology will keep making the world an even better place to live in.
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End (after work):
We watch movies at home. We hope tech makes the world better.
💡找故事最后的结果、人物感受 →填写 End
Think about how science and technology have changed your life and draw a plot chart.
Think and draw.
While-writing
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Beginning (before work):
Middle (during work):
End (after work):
Draft your essay about how science and technology have changed your life or the life of someone you know. The phrases and sentence patterns may help you.
While-writing
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Activity 3 Draft your essay.
Useful phrase Useful sentence pattern
prepare … for … Let … do …
help … do … I’m so thankful for …
can't wait to do … I really hope …
keep doing …
Activity 3 Draft your essay.
While-writing
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Draft your essay about how science and technology have changed your life or the life of someone you know.
Beginning
Middle
End
State your topic: How science and technology improve our life
Body: Talk about examples and details of science and technology in daily life
Summarize your opinion.
Science and technology are …!
I can’t even imagine life without …
Let me tell you about a day in our life.
‑ In the morning, … prepares … for … in our modern kitchen.
‑ … helps us find … to get to … on time.
‑ When … gets to …, … starts …. … don’t have to … because ….
‑ Sometimes, … even helps … over … if they can’t come to ….
‑ After work, we … at home. We don’t even have to …..
We should all be thankful for the benefits that … bring us. I really hope that in the future, … will keep making the world an even better place to live in.
How well can you ______________? Partner’s rating
express your view of changes in science and technology
use the thinking skill of making a plot
write about how science and technology have changed your life
organize ideas into a well‑balanced structure
use the theme vocabulary of the unit
use the passive voice
use punctuation
spell the words
Invite your partner to rate your final draft. Write 1 (more improvements needed), 2 (fair), 3 (good), or 4 (excellent) for the ratings.
Activity 4 Rate your final draft.
Post-writing
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Please invite your partner to make some comments and suggestions on your final draft based on the form above.
Science and technology are so amazing!
My aunt works in a shopping mall, and she tell me we cannot imagine life without the gifts bring by modern technology. Let me talk about one of our ordinary day.
In the morning, we shop for fruit and vegetable on a mobile shopping app. Then we take the shared subway to the city park. If the weather gets bad, the weather app warn us ahead of time. Later, we video call my grandma who lives in another city. We don’t even need travel a long way to visit her! We should all be thankful for the good changes technology brings to us.
I really hope science and technology will keep making people’s life become much nicer in the future.
Post-writing
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Read and correct.
tells
brought
days
warns
need to travel
Science and technology are so amazing!
My dad is an engineer and he say that he can’t even imagine life without all the cool things that science and technology give us. Let me tell you about our busy weekend.
In the morning, my dad drive my sister and me to the city library. Sometimes there is heavy traffic, but his car’s GPS help us choose the shortest road. When we get to the library, we use the self‑service machine borrow books. After that, we order food on phone app and eat at home. We don’t even have to go to the restaurant! We should all be thankful for the benefits that science and technology brings us.
I really hope that in the future, science and technology will keep making our daily life much more better.
Post-writing
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Read and correct.
he says
my dad drives
GPS helps
machine to borrow
better
The words we have learned
一、汉译英
为…… 准备某物 ____________________________________
帮助某人做某事 ____________________________________
迫不及待做某事 ____________________________________
坚持做某事 ____________________________________
让某人做某事 ____________________________________
我十分感激…… ____________________________________
我真心希望…… ____________________________________
科学技术改善生活 ____________________________________
现代厨房 ____________________________________
Summary
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prepare…for…
help…do…
can’t wait to do…
keep doing…
let … do …
I’m so thankful for…
I really hope…
science and technology improve our life
modern kitchen
The phrases we have learned
二、用短语的正确形式填空。
prepare…for…, help…do…, can’t wait to do, keep doing, let…do…, be thankful for, hope
1. Mom _________ breakfast _______ us every morning in the modern kitchen.
2. The phone’s Beidou System _________ us _____ find the best way to school.
3. I _________________ watch my favourite movie after finishing homework.
4. We should ____________________ the good things science brings us.
5. He ___________________ practicing, and he makes great progress.
Summary
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prepares for
helps to
can’t wait to
be thankful for
keeps doing
三、根据中文提示完成句子。
1. 妈妈在现代化厨房为我们快速准备早餐。
Mom ________________________ breakfast for us quickly in our modern kitchen.
2. 北斗导航帮我们准时到达学校。
Beidou System ________________________ get to school on time.
3. 我十分感谢科技带给我们的便利。
I ________________________ the convenience from science and technology.
4. 我真心希望科技让世界变得更加美好。
________________________, science and technology will make the world better.
5. 下班后,我们在家看电影。
________________________, we watch movies at home.
The sentences we have learned
Summary
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prepares
helps us (to)
am so thankful for
I really hope
After work
The outline we have learned
Summary
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Beginning
Middle
End
State your topic: How science and technology improve our life
Body: Talk about examples and details of science and technology in daily life
Summarize your opinion.
Science and technology are …!
I can’t even imagine life without …
Let me tell you about a day in our life.
‑ In the morning, … prepares … for … in our modern kitchen.
‑ … helps us find … to get to … on time.
‑ When … gets to …, … starts …. … don’t have to … because ….
‑ Sometimes, … even helps … over … if they can’t come to ….
‑ After work, we … at home. We don’t even have to …..
We should all be thankful for the benefits that … bring us. I really hope that in the future, … will keep making the world an even better place to live in.
Assessment
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Self-assessment
I can extract reasons and details from the model essay.
I can organize ideas with the plot chart.
I can write a short passage on how technology improves our life.
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