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单元写作专题
[答案 P3]
本单元写作围绕“生活变化”这一核心话题,要求学生运用“过去—现在”的对比结构,描述个人或家乡在居住、交通、学习等方面的变迁,表达对变化的感受。话题贴近学生生活,能锻炼对比描述和观点表达的能力,符合中考英语写作的考查方向。
[开头句]
1.过去几年里,我的生活发生了巨大的变化。(take place)
Great changes have taken place in my life over the past few years.
2.自从成为一名九年级学生,我的生活改变了很多。(since)
My life has changed a lot since I became a Grade 9 student.
3.当我回首往事时,我发现过去和现在的生活有很多不同。(look back)
When I look back, I find there are many differences between my past and present life.
[中间句]
4.在过去,我花很多时间玩游戏,但是现在我把时间都用在学习上。(in the past)
In the past, I spent a lot of time playing games, but now I devote all my time to studying.
5.以前,我常常害怕在公众面前发言,然而现在我能自信地参加课堂讨论。(used to)
Before, I used to be afraid of speaking in public. However, now I can take part in class discussions confidently.
6.一个很大的变化是我学会了合理安排自己的时间,不再拖延作业。(one big change)
One big change is that I have learned to arrange my time wisely and no longer put off doing my homework.
[结尾句]
7.这些变化让我的生活更便捷、更多彩。(convenient)
These changes have made my life more convenient and colourful.
8.我很庆幸经历了这么大的变化,我会更加努力为更美好的未来奋斗。(work harder)
I feel lucky to experience such great changes and I will work harder for a better future.
9.我对这些变化感到满意,因为它们给我带来了更好的生活。(be happy with)
I am happy with these changes because they have brought me a better life.
[佳句积累]
1.Change is the only constant in life.
(变化是生活中唯一不变的事。)
2.Growth starts when we step out of our comfort zone.
(当我们走出舒适区时,成长便开始了。)
3.Every day brings new choices.
(每一天都带来新的选择。)
[常用句式]
1.表示程度逐渐加深: …is becoming+比较级+and+比较级(……正变得越来越……)
2.表示今昔对比: 主语+used to do sth, but now …(……过去常常做某事,但现在……)
3.表示因果关系: …, which makes it+形容词+for sb to do sth(……,这让某人做某事变得……)
4.表示变化的背景: With the development of …, … has changed greatly(随着……的发展,……发生了巨大变化)
5.表示递进关系: Not only …, but also …(不仅……,而且……)(注意:若置于句首,前半句需倒装)
6.表示感叹: What a huge difference these changes have made!(这些变化带来了多么大的不同啊!)
以“Changes in My Life”为题,用英语写一篇短文。内容包括:
1.过去的生活(居住、上学方式、课后活动)
2.现在的生活(居住、上学方式、课后活动)
3.你对这些变化的感受
要求:1.词数80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当添加细节,使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
Changes in My Life
Great changes have taken place in my life over the past three years.
人称:以第一人称(I)为主,讲述个人经历。
时态:描述过去:一般过去时(lived, walked, helped)
描述现在:一般现在时(live, take, join)
总结感受:一般现在时(feel, make)
要点:1.必须包含“过去—现在”的对比,覆盖居住、交通、活动三个方面
2.结尾需表达对变化的积极感受
Changes in My Life
Great changes have taken place① in my life over the past three years.
In the past, I lived in a small old house with my grandparents and walked 30 minutes each day to get to school.⑤ After class, I usually helped with farm work like planting corn. Now, my family has moved into a new flat in the town,⑤ and I take the school bus to school, which only takes 10 minutes.⑥ At school, we use computers for our lessons, and after class, I join the sports club to practise playing basketball.
These changes have made my life more convenient② and enjoyable③. I feel lucky to grow up in such a wonderful④ time.
[亮点词汇]
①take place(发生)
②convenient(便利的)
③enjoyable(愉快的)
④wonderful(美好的)
[高分句型]
⑤In the past, I lived in a small old house… and walked 30 minutes… Now, my family has moved into a new flat…, and I take the school bus…(通过一般过去时与现在完成时、一般现在时的对比,配合“In the past”和“Now”的时间状语,清晰展现了生活变迁。)
⑥…I take the school bus to school, which only takes 10 minutes.(用which引导的非限制性定语从句来修饰整件事,避免了句子细碎。)
假设你是林晓,你的英国网友Lily看到你社交账号上的照片后,好奇你近两年来的变化。请你以“How I've Changed”为题,用英语写一篇短文分享你的成长。内容包括:
1.你在性格、兴趣、生活习惯上的具体变化;
2.这些变化给你带来的积极影响;
3.你对这些变化的感悟。
要求:1.词数80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当添加细节,使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考词汇:used to(过去常常); outgoing(外向的); positive(积极的)
How I've Changed
How time flies! I've changed a lot in the past two years.
I used to be a quiet girl who only stayed at home reading. Now, I'm more outgoing and often play volleyball with my friends after class. Before, I often forgot to finish my homework on time, but now I plan my day carefully and hand in my tasks early.
These changes have made me more positive and confident. I've learned that small changes can make a big difference in life, and I'll keep growing into a better version of myself.
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