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Unit4 Our Memory作文讲解与练习
单元话题详解
本单元围绕记忆展开,探讨人的记忆力是什么、记忆的特点、影响记忆的因素、提升记忆的技巧,同时引导学生回忆生活里难忘的往事,体会记忆保存美好经历的价值。
写作任务方向
1.论坛帖子:分享一段难忘的个人记忆,讲述事件经过和感悟;
2.说明文短文:介绍几种提升记忆力的好方法;
3.观点短文:谈论记忆对我们的重要性;
4.记叙短文:描写一件深深印在脑海里的往事。
核心时态
一般过去时:记叙难忘往事、过去发生的经历;
一般现在时:介绍记忆原理、记忆技巧,表达个人看法、感悟;
情态动词 should/can:给出提升记忆的建议。
重点语法 定语从句(that/which/who 引导);同位语;宾语从句;though 引导让步状语从句。
单元核心短语
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1.our memory 我们的记忆
2.keep … in mind 记住……
3.improve one’s memory 提高某人的记忆力
4.forget things easily 容易忘事
5.repeat again and again 反复重复
6.connect … with … 把…… 和…… 联系起来
7.take notes 记笔记
8.have a good memory 记忆力好
9.a lasting memory 持久的记忆
10.in one’s mind 在某人脑海中
11.learn from mistakes 从错误中学习
12.stay relaxed 保持放松
13.have trouble remembering … 很难记住……
14.leave a deep impression 留下深刻印象
常用句式
1.One of the clearest memories I have is the experience that changed me a lot.
我最清晰的记忆之一是那段改变了我的经历。(定语从句)
2.Memory is a wonderful thing that keeps our past experiences alive.
记忆是奇妙的东西,留存着我们过往的经历。(定语从句)
3.I still remember the day when I first took part in the competition.
我依然记得我第一次参加比赛的那一天。
4.Though I met lots of difficulties, the memory still stays fresh in my mind.
尽管我遇到很多困难,这段记忆依然清晰地留在我的脑海。
5.What helps us improve memory is to connect new knowledge with something interesting.
帮助我们提升记忆的是把新知识和有趣的事物联系起来。
6.We can learn a lot from our memories. They encourage us to become better.
我们能从记忆中学到很多,它们激励我们变得更好。
7.Good memory skills can help us learn more efficiently.
良好的记忆技巧可以帮助我们更高效地学习。
✅ 写作佳句填空练习
1.记忆是一件奇妙的事物,它保存着我们所有珍贵的经历。
Memory is a wonderful thing ______ ______ all our precious experiences.
2.我仍然记得我第一次勇敢站上舞台的那一天。
I still ______ the day when I bravely stood on the stage for the first time.
3.尽管过去很多年,这段记忆依然清晰地留在我的脑海。
______ many years have passed, this memory stays fresh in my mind.
4.帮助我们提升记忆力的是把新知识和有趣的事物联系起来。
______ ______ ______ ______ is to connect new knowledge with interesting things.
5.这段经历给我留下深刻的印象。
This experience ______ ______ deep impression on me.
📝 典例 1(话题帖子:An Unforgettable Memory)
学校英语论坛发起主题帖子 An Unforgettable Memory,请你发帖分享一段难忘的记忆。
写作要点:
1.开篇:我有一段难以忘记的记忆,它给我留下很深的印象;
2.事件:去年英语比赛,赛前紧张,老师鼓励我,坚持练习;上台完成演讲;
3.结果:没有拿到第一名,但收获勇气;
4.个人感悟:这段记忆提醒我勇敢尝试,不要害怕失败。
要求:80–100 词;线上帖子文体;一般过去时记叙事件,一般现在时表达感悟;尽量使用定语从
句,语句连贯。
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思路导引
1.人称:第一人称
2.时态:一般过去时叙事;一般现在时表达感悟
3.文体:线上论坛帖子
4.提纲
* 开篇 One of the most unforgettable memories I have is an English speech competition last year.
* 事件 I felt nervous before it. My teacher encouraged me and I kept practising every day.
* 结果 I didn’t win first prize, but I finished my speech bravely.
* 感悟 What this memory teaches me is to try bravely and never fear failure. It stays fresh in my mind.
👉 根据提纲成文
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📝 典例 2(话题征文:How to Improve Our Memory)
校英文报刊征文,题目 How to Improve Our Memory,请你投稿介绍提升记忆力的方法。
写作要点:
1.总起:良好的记忆力对学习很重要,我们可以用一些方法改善记忆;
2.方法:①把新知识和有趣事物联系;②反复复习;③保持放松,好好休息;
3.感悟:记忆力可以通过练习提高,坚持就会看到进步。
要求:80–100 词;短文征文;时态准确,要点齐全;可使用定语从句。
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思路导引
1.人称:第一、三人称结合
2.时态:一般现在时为主
3.文体:报刊征文短文
4.提纲
*开篇 Good memory is important for our study. There are some useful ways that help us improve our memory.
*方法 First, connect new knowledge with something fun. Second, repeat what we learn regularly. Besides, stay relaxed and have enough rest.
*感悟 Memory skills need practice. If we keep trying, we will make progress.
👉 根据提纲成文
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📝 配套课后练习
Exercise 1
英语课短文写作,请你以 The Memory That Warms My Heart 为题写一篇短文,讲述一段温暖的记忆。 写作要点:
1.开篇:有一段温暖记忆,一直留在我的脑海;
2.事件:一次考试失利,心情低落,妈妈陪伴我,帮我分析错题;
3.感悟:这份温暖鼓励我,遇到困难不要放弃。
要求:80 词左右;叙事用一般过去时,感悟用一般现在时;尽量使用本单元短语和定语从句。
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Exercise 2
你的表弟记忆力不好,背东西很吃力。请写一封信给他,给出提升记忆力的建议。 写作要点:
1.安慰他,很多人都有记东西困难的问题;
2.给出建议:将知识联想有趣画面,及时复习,充分休息;
3.鼓励:坚持练习,记忆力会慢慢变好。
要求:80–100 词;书信格式;时态合理,用上定语从句。
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✅ Keys
写作佳句填空
1.that keeps 2.remember 3.Though 4.What helps us improve memory 5.leaves a
典例1
An Unforgettable Memory
One of the most unforgettable memories I have is an English speech competition last year. I felt really nervous before the competition. My teacher, who was always patient, encouraged me not to give up. I kept practising my speech day after day. On that day, I stood on the stage and finished my speech bravely. I didn’t win first prize. Though I failed to get the top prize, I gained much courage. What this memory teaches me is to keep trying. It leaves a deep impression on me.
典例2
How to Improve Our Memory
Good memory is important for our study. There are some useful ways that help us improve our memory. First, we can connect new knowledge with something interesting. It makes things easier to remember. Second, we should repeat what we learn from time to time. Besides, staying relaxed and getting enough rest also works well. What makes these methods helpful is that they train our brain little by little. Our memory can become better with practice. If we keep trying, we will see great progress.
Exercise 1
The Memory That Warms
My Heart I have a warm memory that stays fresh in my mind. I failed an important exam months ago and felt upset. My mom sat with me patiently. She helped me look through my mistakes and told me not to lose heart. She believed I could do better next time. Though much time has passed, I still remember her words clearly. What touches me most is her love. This memory encourages me whenever I meet difficulties.
Exercise 2
Dear cousin,
I hear you have trouble remembering new knowledge. Don’t worry. Many people have the same problem. Here are some ways that can improve your memory. You can connect what you learn with funny pictures. Remember to review regularly and get enough sleep. Keep practising these skills. Little by little, your memory will become better. I believe you can make great progress.
Yours,
Li Hua
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