内容正文:
假定你是校英语戏剧社社长李华,社团计划举办英文短剧汇报演出,外教Ms Davis建议选用经典剧目,但你认为可以尝试原创剧本。请你给她写一封邮件,内容包括: (1) 提出建议; (2) 说明理由。
注意: (1) 写作词数应为80个左右; (2) 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:剧本 script
写作思路分析:
体裁:建议信(邮件)
- 身份:英语戏剧社社长李华;收信人:外教Ms Davis
- 背景:社团办英文短剧汇演,外教提议用经典剧目,你建议尝试原创剧本script
- 要点:①提出建议;②说明理由;词数80左右
- 逻辑链:邮件开头写信目的→提出建议用原创剧本→分点讲理由→委婉希望对方考虑建议
表达参考
1. English drama club 英语戏剧社
2. put on an English shortplay performance 举办英文短剧汇演
3. classic plays 经典剧目 4. original script 原创剧本
Dear Ms Davis,
I am writing to give you some suggestions about our coming English shortplay performance. While classic plays are wonderful, I would prefer us to try original scripts written by our club members.
As far as I am concerned, it would be wise to give original scripts a try. It is advisable to create our own plays, because they are closely connected with our school life. Besides, creating scripts will inspire our members’ creativity and improve our English writing skills. Of course, we can still draw inspiration from classic works for reference.
I hope you will take my advice into consideration. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
注意:交际得体: While classic plays are wonderful 先肯定外教的提议,再提出不同想法,语气委婉有礼貌,符合建议信高分交际要求,不直接否定对方
建议信
开头段:写信背景+目的
1. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to improve your grades. Here are a few suggestions.
很高兴收到你的来信,你在信中向我咨询提高成绩的建议。以下是几点建议。
2. So sorry/glad am I when I know that you have trouble in learning English.
得知你学习英语遇到困难,我深感遗憾 / 很高兴(收到你的求助)。
(倒装句,正常语序:I am so sorry/glad when I know…)
中间段:建议的内容和理由
3. To begin with, I strongly recommend that you should join a volunteer club because you can improve your ability.
首先,我强烈建议你加入志愿者俱乐部,这样能够提升你的能力。
✦ 注意:recommend 建议,从句用 (should) do
4. What’s more, you may as well read English, which can correct your pronunciation.
此外,你不妨朗读英语,这可以纠正你的发音。
5. Last but not least, it is a good idea to take notes carefully, which is a good way to review what you have learned from time to time.
最后但同样重要的是,认真记笔记是个好办法,这可以帮助你时常复习所学知识。
6. If I were you, I would improve my reading skills by reading the textbook aloud.
如果我是你,我会通过大声朗读课本来提升阅读能力。(虚拟语气)
结尾段:如有问题可再来信+美好祝愿
7. I would appreciate it if you can take my advice into consideration.
如果你能考虑我的建议,我将不胜感激。
8. I sincerely hope my advice will be of help to you.
我真心希望我的建议能对你有所帮助。
9. I’m looking forward to your reply.
期待你的回信。
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