（课件）家庭成员介绍写作-Unit1Personal and Family Life-《英语 基础模块1》（高教版第三版）【单元写作精讲】

Family Introduction Learning Objectives 1. Master family‑member vocabulary, phrases and universal sentence patterns. 2. Learn the structure of a family‑introduction passage. 3. Write an 80‑120‑word short passage to introduce your family members with complete information and correct grammar. Lead—in what are they talking about？ What does your father /mother do？ Li Hua's pen pal Tom came to visit Li Hua's home and saw the family photo hanging on the wall. He wants Li Hua to introduce them one by one. Can you help him write an introduction? What is a family introduction？ ● 定义：家庭成员介绍属于介绍类说明文，用来向他人介绍自己的家人 ● 核心目的：Introduce family members → describe their jobs /personalities → show your feelings ● 和记叙文的区别：侧重客观介绍家人的基本信息，不是讲一个完整故事 链接高考 ● 体裁地位：人物 / 家庭介绍是春考书面表达高频体裁 ● 字数要求：80‑120 words ● 评分核心：信息完整 + 语言通顺 + 语法无误 + 逻辑清晰 ● 常见话题：自我介绍、家庭成员、朋友、同学、老师介绍 Basic Vocabulary family n. 家庭；家人 father /dad n. 父亲 mother /mum n. 母亲 brother n. 兄弟 sister n. 姐妹 grandfather /grandpa n. 祖父；外祖父 grandmother /grandma n. 祖母；外祖母 Basic Vocabulary uncle n. 叔；伯；舅； 姑父；姨父 aunt n. 姑；姨；婶； 伯母；舅母 cousin n. 堂 / 表兄弟姐妹 job n. 工作 worker n. 工人 teacher n. 教师 doctor n. 医生 driver n. 司机 Advanced Vocabulary happy adj. 幸福的；快乐的 kind adj. 和蔼的；善良的 friendly adj. 友好的 hardworking adj. 勤奋的 love v. 爱；热爱 care for 照顾；关心 the only child 独生子女 a happy family 一个幸福的家庭 Quick quiz 1. There ______(is / are) four people in my family. 2. My mother is a ______(teach / teacher). are there be句型遵循就近原则，be动词的选择根据后面的名词确定，four是四个，是复数 teacher a后面跟名词 Useful Phrases 🔹 About family a happy family 一个幸福的家庭 there are…people in my family 我家有…… 口人 the only child 独生子女 love my family very much 非常爱我的家人 Sentence Patterns Opening（开篇：引出家庭） Basic：I have a happy family. There are…people in my family. Body‑1（主体：介绍第一位家人） Basic：This is my… He / She is a… He / She works in… Basic：He / She is kind and hardworking. Sentence Patterns Body‑2（主体：介绍第二位家人） Basic：My…is a… He / She often… Basic：I love my… very much. Ending（结尾：表达感受） Basic：I have a happy family. I love my family very much. Grammar Focus 1. Tense：一般现在时（介绍客观家庭情况，全文主要使用一般现在时） 2. there be 句型：There are + 复数名词 + 地点（be 动词和后面的名词保持一致） 3. 职业表达：a + 职业名词（a teacher /a worker /a doctor） 4. 第三人称单数：He / She is…; He works…; She likes… Common Mistakes （1）there be 句型错误 ❌ There is four people in my family. ✅ There are four people in my family. 口诀：there be 后面的名词是复数，be 动词用 are；单数用 is。 Common Mistakes （2）职业名词错误 ❌ My mother is a teach. ✅ My mother is a teacher. > 表示职业要使用名词，不能用动词。 ❌ My father is worker. ✅ My father is a worker. 可数名词单数前面要加冠词 a。 Common Mistakes （3）第三人称单数错误 ❌ He work in a hospital. ✅ He works in a hospital. he /she 是第三人称单数，动词要加 s。 ❌ She like cooking. ✅ She likes cooking. Common Mistakes （4）代词指代错误 ❌ My father is a teacher. She likes reading. ✅ My father is a teacher. He likes reading. 父亲是男性，要用 he；母亲是女性，要用 she，不能混淆。 Four key points 1. Overall：家里一共有几口人 2. Member 1：介绍第一位家人是谁、职业、特点 3. Member 2：介绍第二位家人是谁、职业、特点 4. Feeling：表达你对家庭的感受 Writing Template I have a happy family. There are ______ people in my family. They are my ______, my ______ and I. My ______ is a ______. He / She works in ______. He / She is kind and hardworking. My ______ is a ______. She / He often ______. She / He is very friendly. I love my family very much. I have a happy family. Writing Task 你的英语老师要求每位同学在课上介绍自己的家庭。请写一篇 80‑120 词短文，介绍你的家庭成员。 Writing Task 提示信息： 1. 家庭：三口之家，爸爸、妈妈和你 2. 爸爸：工人，在工厂工作，勤奋善良 3. 妈妈：教师，在中学教书，经常给你做美味的饭菜 4. 感受：你有一个幸福的家庭，很爱家人 Steps for writing 第一步：判断体裁 →介绍类说明文 第二步：提取四要素 Overall: three people — father, mother and I Member 1: father — worker, in a factory, kind and hardworking Steps for writing Member 2: mother — teacher, in a middle school, cooks delicious food Feeling: happy family, love my family 第三步：套用模板填充信息；检查 there be 句型、第三人称单数、职业名词 Model Essay I have a happy small family. There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and I. My father is a worker. He works in a local factory. He is kind and hard‑working. He always tries his best to support our family. Model Essay My mother is a middle‑school teacher. She is very patient and friendly. After work, she often cooks delicious food for me and helps me with my study. I am a vocational school student. I love my family very much and I feel warm to live with them. Summary 1. Words & phrases：家庭成员词汇、职业词汇、介绍家人的短语 2. Sentences：开篇‑介绍家人‑表达感受句型 3. Structure：四要素结构：家庭概况‑介绍每位家人‑表达感受 4. Rules：一般现在时；there be 句型就近一致；第三人称单数动词变形 Homework 1.Recite the template and key sentence patterns, copy the model essay. 2.Write a short passage to introduce your best friend. Thank you Lavf57.71.100 Packed by Bilibili XCoder v2.0.2 $