专题10 写作（期中专项训练）六年级英语上学期（人教PEP版·新教材）

期中专项训练·人教PEP版六上 专题10 写作 解题小技巧 写作练习 内容导航 解题小技巧 英语写作答题分为审题划要点、搭建框架、书写检查三步。 ①仔细审题，圈出全部要求。看清题目、时态、字数、必用单词、要点清单。旅行、节日类短文多用一般过去时；健康建议、日常习惯用一般现在时。把题目要求的关键词、要点全部标记，保证不遗漏信息。 ②先搭简单提纲，再动笔写。按照 “开头 — 中间细节 — 结尾感受” 的顺序写。开头交代背景；中间写动作、事件；结尾写感受、评价。优先使用自己熟练的句型，少用长难句。遇到提示词，一定要全部用上；可以用 And/Then 衔接句子，让行文更流畅。 ③写完通读检查。重点核查：时态统一、动词变形、人称、名词单复数；检查句首大写、句末标点，注意单词拼写。控制字数，不要过少也不要过度拓展。书写工整，保持卷面干净。遇到不会写的单词，换成简单同义单词，不要空着。平时积累话题句型，背诵范文里的万能句式。 （一） 请选择你去过的一个地方，完成一篇旅行短文。 提示：可以先填写好思维导图，写作时涵盖思维导图中“Where & When” “What did I do?” “What was special?”“How did I feel?”四个要点。 My Special Trip ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） 写作：请以My Holiday为题写一篇作文。 要求：1. 语句通顺，语法正确； 2. 不少于 6 句话； 3. 运用一般过去时和句型(I went to... / I climbed... / It was...) ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） 暑假刚结束，请你以“My Special Trip”为题，用一般过去时写一篇小短文，介绍你的一次难忘旅行。 要求： 1. 不少于 5 句话； 2. 必须使用下列单词：went, saw, ate, took, was； 3. 语句通顺，注意大小写和标点符号。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） 根据提示，写一篇短文介绍春节的来历或习俗。不少于5句话。 提示词：monster Nian, afraid, red paper, fireworks, celebrate, get together The Spring Festival ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） 在刚过去的端午节当天，Amy一家度过了充实的假期并留下了美好照片。请你根据图片提示，帮助她记录一下愉快的时光。 要求：书写工整规范，开头已给出，至少写5句，要求涉及以下所有照片内容。 词汇参考：told me a story about Qu Yuan，made zongzi，had a dragon boat race，flew a kite, read a book，played basketball July 2nd, Tuesday The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional Chinese festival. It was in June this year. We did many fun things. My grandma told me a story about Qu Yuan. _______________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） 请以“How to stay healthy”为题，写5-8句话，给朋友提出健康建议。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） 根据思维导图，以“My healthy life”为题，写一篇英语短文。 要求：条理清晰，语句通顺；不少于50词。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （八） 请根据如下思维导图问题提示，写一写你的暑假旅行，内容可适当发挥，不 少于50词。 My summer holiday ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文及解析 （一） 范文： My Special Trip I went to Sanya with my parents in the summer holiday. There, we swam in the blue sea. Then, we walked on the soft sand and collected shells. The most special thing was seeing many colourful fish when I tried snorkeling (浮潜)! I felt very excited because it was my first time to try it. The trip was amazing and fun! 【解析】1. 题干解读：注意文章为一般过去时态。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：Sanya三亚，summer holiday暑假，swam游泳，soft sand软沙，collected收集，shell贝壳，colourful颜色鲜艳的，excited兴奋的，amazing令人惊奇的 参考句型：I …； There, we …；Then, we …；The most special thing was …；I felt ... （二） 范文： My Holiday Last summer holiday, I went to Beijing with my family. We climbed the Great Wall. The view was beautiful and inspiring. I took many nice photos there. Then we walked around the Palace Museum. We also ate Beijing duck. It was delicious. I had a great holiday! 【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目用第一人称，时态是一般过去时。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：summer holiday暑假，climbed爬，inspiring鼓舞人心的，ate吃，delicious美味的 参考句型：I went to…；We climbed…；We also…；It was… （三） 范文：                                                  My Special Trip Last summer, I went to Beijing with my family. We saw the Great Wall. It was amazing. We ate Beijing roast duck. It was delicious. I took many nice photos there. I was very happy. 【解析】1. 题干解读：注意文章为一般过去时态。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：went去，the Great Wall长城，amazing令人惊奇的，ate吃，Beijing roast duck北京烤鸭，delicious美味的，took拍摄 参考句型：Last summer, I …； We/I …；It was … （四） 范文：   The Spring Festival Long ago, there was a monster called Nian. It came to a village and ate animals. People were very afraid. An old man helped them. He pasted red paper on the doors and lit candles. He also set off fireworks. Nian was afraid of red and loud noises. It ran back to the sea. From then on, people get together to celebrate the Spring Festival every year. They paste fu and set off fireworks. This is the story of the Spring Festival. 【解析】1. 题干解读：注意文章为一般过去时态和一般现在时态。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：monster怪物，village村庄，afraid害怕的，paste粘贴，red paper红纸，set off fireworks放烟花，celebrate庆祝 参考句型：Long ago, there was …； People were very …；He …； Nian was afraid of …；From then on, people ... （五） 范文： July 2nd,Tuesday The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional Chinese festival. It was in June this year. We did many fun things. My grandma told me a story about Qu Yuan. My mum made zongzi. My cousins had a dragon boat race. My brother flew a kite. My grandpa read a book. Mary and I played basketball. 【解析】1.题干解读：注意时态是一般过去时。 2.参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：tell a story讲故事，make zongzi包粽子，have a dragon boat race举行龙舟比赛，fly a kite放风筝, read a book读书，play basketball打篮球 参考句型：…did… （六） 范文： How to stay healthy? We should eat healthy food and drink enough water. We should do exercise every day. We should have a good rest and sleep well. When we feel ill, we should tell our parents and see a doctor. These habits can help us stay healthy. 【解析】1. 题干解读：文章使用第一人称，围绕健康习惯提建议，注意文章为一般现在时。 2. 参考词汇和参考句型： 参考词汇：healthy food健康的食物，enough water足够的水，do exercise做运动，have a good rest好好休息，sleep well睡眠好，feel ill感到生病，see a doctor看医生，stay healthy保持健康 参考句型：We should...，When we...，These habits can help us... （七） 范文： My healthy life I have a healthy life. I have good healthy habits. I get up early and never go to bed too late. I have three meals on time every day. I eat healthy food. I eat a lot of fruit and vegetables. I don’t eat a lot of meat or hamburgers. I often do some exercise every day. I like playing football. I always do things I enjoy. It can make me feel good. 【解析】1. 题干解读：人称用第一人称，时态用一般现在时。 2. 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：have good healthy habits有良好的健康习惯，get up early早早起床，eat healthy food吃健康食物，do some exercise做锻炼，make me feel good让我感觉良好。 参考句型：I have...；I eat...；I don’t eat...；I like...；It can... （八） 范文： My summer holiday My summer holiday was wonderful. I went to Sanya with my parents. I visited my grandparents. I saw the blue sea. I went to the beach with my family. We played ball games there and built sandcastles by the sea. We also enjoyed many delicious food. It’s a great place to visit! 【解析】1. 题干解读：该题时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。 2. 参考词汇和参考句型： 参考词汇：go to Sanya去三亚，play ball games玩球类游戏，by the sea在海边 参考句型：My summer holiday was…；I visited…；It’s a great place to... 答案第1页，共2页 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $