Unit 3 读后续写微技能：人物描写（二）(PPT课件)-【满分思维】2026-2027学年高中英语选择性必修第一册配套课件（北师大版）

读后续写微技能：人物描写(二) 1 读后续写微技能 2 在读后续写过程中,在沿用原文语言特点的原则下,围绕原文主旨, 运用丰富的词汇和语句,在恰当描述人物外貌的基础上,可以对人物的 性格等做一些相应的扩展或者辅助性的描绘,从而丰富续写情节,进一 步提升续写语篇的可读性。 读后续写微技能 一、外貌描写范本及赏析 As time went by, he began making films. He grew more and more popular as his charming character, the little tramp, became known throughout the world. The tramp, a poor, homeless man with a moustache, wore large trousers, worn- out shoes and a small round black hat. He walked around stiffly carrying a walking stick. This character was a social failure but was loved for his optimism and determination to overcome all difficulties. He was the underdog who was kind even when others were unkind to him. 读后续写微技能 【赏析】这是人教版高中英语教材中关于人物外貌描写的典型片段。 本片段详细描写了卓别林所塑造的典型的银幕形象——流浪汉。作者 通过描述流浪汉的外貌特征、着装、动作特点以及性格特征把卓别林 所塑造的流浪汉栩栩如生地展现在读者面前,片段最后简短的人物评价 也使小流浪汉在读者眼中的形象变得高大。因此,我们在描写人物时, 也可以抓住人物的外貌特征和动作特点,并适当地添加人物评价。 读后续写微技能 二、外貌、性格描写的3个原则 1.注意区分描写对象的性别和年龄差异,用词准确。 2.抓住“五官”特点,写出人物的面部特征,可以适当添加动作描述。 3.适当运用倒装、从句等高级语法结构,尝试使用比喻、夸张、联想 等修辞手法。 (一)外貌描写 (1)她圆圆的脸上有一双蓝色的眼睛,还有两个可爱的酒窝。 ①On her round face are a pair of blue eyes and two lovely dimples. (倒装句型) 读后续写微技能 ②She is a girl with a pair of blue eyes and two lovely dimples on her round face. (with引导的介宾结构作后置定语,补充 说明人物特征) 读后续写微技能 (2)李老师三十多岁,中等身材,常梳着马尾辫。 ①Miss Li is in her thirties with a medium build and often has her hair in a ponytail. (由and连接的并列谓语;with短语用作后置定 语) ②Miss Li is a medium-sized woman in her thirties who often wears/ties her hair in a ponytail. (定语从句，补充说明人物特征) ③Miss Li, in her thirties, is of medium size, and often has her hair tied in a ponytail. (“be of+adj.+n.”结构，表示人或物具有某种 特征。常用的名词有:size, height, weight, build, age, shape等) 读后续写微技能 (二)性格描写 (1)Such is Ms Han, an easygoing, kind and warm-hearted woman. 韩女士是一个随和、善良又热心肠的女人。 (2)Though he comes from a poor family, he is a person of great determination and courage. 他虽出身贫寒,但拥有坚强的意志和勇气。 读后续写微技能 三、外貌、性格描写注意事项 1.外貌描写重点在于五官与体型的描写 采用多种表达方法, 对人物进行“从上到下”的细致刻画,包括面部表情、 发型装扮、身体状况、年龄等,例如: (1)Looking at his weather-worn face, I was surprised. 看着他饱经 风霜的脸,我很吃惊。 (2)She is of medium height, very slim, but her face is as white as snow. 她中等身高,很瘦,但是她的脸像雪一样惨白。 读后续写微技能 分析:(1)句中的weather-worn face表示“饱经风霜的脸”;(2)句中的 medium height表示“中等身高”,as white as snow表示“脸色惨白”。 这两句中,通过扩展对人物外貌的修饰,达到了增加描写的作用。 读后续写微技能 2.性格描写要细致突出人物的情绪 对于人物的性格描写,一定要突出人物的个性,尽量避免用过于笼统的 词,而应该采用相对细致入微的词汇或句式,来对人物进行“个性化”描 写,例如: (1)He is good-time Charlie, feeling no worries and anxieties. 他 是乐天派,从不担忧。 (2)Jerry is a self-possessed man, whose face never betrays his emotions. 杰里是个沉着冷静的人,从不喜形于色。 读后续写微技能 分析:(1)句中,用good-time Charlie来描述他的乐观,用词要比 optimistic更加形象;而(2)句中,用self-possessed和never betrays his emotions来细致描述杰里的个性,体现细节描写对人物个性的刻画。 读后续写微技能 3.描写外貌和性格时,可以多采用并列式表达 在进行人物外貌和性格描写时,不一定是单一性的描写,而可以采用并 列式或递进式的表达方式。例如: The fire light showed a pale, square-jawed face with keen eyes, and a little white scar near his left eyebrow. 火光映照出他苍白的面庞,方正的下巴,敏锐的双眼,左眉附近有一块小 的白色疤痕。 分析:本句在描写人物外貌时,采用了with和and的伴随以及并列结构, 使得表达更加丰富。 读后续写微技能 【跟踪演练】 Ⅰ单句翻译(每小题3分，共21分) 1.他高大又英俊,但是戴着一副厚眼镜。 _____________________________________________________ He's tall and handsome but with a pair of thick glasses. 2.她长着圆圆的脸,大大的眼睛。 ___________________________________ She has a round face and big eyes. 3.他是一个头发花白的瘦弱老人。 _________________________________ He is a grey-haired thin old man. 4.她中等身材,洋溢着青春、清新的气息。 ______________________________________________________ She is of medium build and has a young and fresh look. 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 读后续写微技能 15 5.他的脸庞黝黑,面容严厉,眉毛浓密。 ______________________________________________________ He has a dark face, with stern features and heavy brows. 6.他妈妈虽然有时严厉,但也有温柔的一面。 ___________________________________________________________ ______ Although his mother is sometimes strict, she also has a gentle side. 7.在阳光下他的目光像潭水般深沉,闪现出一种强烈的自信。 ___________________________________________________________ ______________________________ Under the sun, his eyes are as deep as a pool of water, flashing strong self-confidence. 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 读后续写微技能 16 Ⅱ根据汉语提示完成下面的语篇(每小题3分，共15分) Emily is one of the most remarkable people I have ever met. She is not only intelligent but also incredibly kind-hearted. 1._________________________________________________(有明亮的、 闪闪发光的大眼睛和温暖的微笑), she has a way of making everyone around her feel comfortable. Emily is always 2._____________________(第一个提供帮助) when someone is in need, whether it's with homework or just a listening ear. With her bright, sparkling big eyes and warm smile the first to offer help 1 2 3 4 5 1 2 3 4 5 1 2 3 4 5 读后续写微技能 17 What sets Emily apart is her passion for learning. She is often seen with a book in her hand during breaks. Her curiosity about the world is endless, and she is always eager to explore new ideas. 3.__________________________(尽管日程安排很紧张), she manages to balance her studies with extracurricular activities, excelling in both. She is a talented musician, playing the piano with such emotion that it leaves the audience amazed. Despite her busy schedule 1 2 3 4 5 1 2 3 4 5 1 2 3 4 5 读后续写微技能 18 Emily's determination is another trait that inspires me. She never gives up, 4.__________________________________ (不管任务多有挑战性). Her positive attitude makes her a role model for everyone around her. In short, Emily 5._____________ _______________________________(不仅仅是一个朋友，而且是一 个灵感的来源), reminding me to strive for excellence and to always be kind to others. no matter how challenging the task is not just a friend but a source of inspiration 1 2 3 4 5 1 2 3 4 5 1 2 3 4 5 读后续写微技能 19 Ⅲ读后续写(25分) 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成 一篇完整的短文。 In today's world, where negativity often takes centre stage, it's easy to overlook the simple acts of kindness that can bring joy to someone's life. I recently had a personal experience that reminded me of this during a particularly challenging week. 读后续写微技能 20 My week had been filled with problems, from work-related stress to unexpected bills and broken items. By the time I needed to go to the store for a few essentials, I was already feeling overwhelmed and at my breaking point. Despite my desire to just go home and relax, I made the trip across town to the store. When I arrived, I found the parking lot packed, which only added to my frustration. To make matters worse, the person next to my intended parking spot seemed to think their small 读后续写微技能 21 car was entitled (有资格) to take up two spaces. After finally finding a spot, I realized that I had left my purse, including my debit card (借记卡) and checkbook (支票簿), at home. Fortunately, I had a small amount of cash and my coupon (优惠券) book, so I decided to go inside and make the best of it. The store was bustling with people, but I managed to find the items I needed and got in line to check out. However, the line seemed to move at a snail's pace, and my patience was 读后续写微技能 wearing thin. As I waited, I couldn't help but feel my stress levels rising. That's when I noticed an old lady standing behind me in line. She seemed to sense my anxiety and cast a kind smile at me. I awkwardly returned the smile and continued to wait. After a seemingly endless wait, it was finally my turn to check out. 注意：续写词数应为150个左右。 读后续写微技能 Paragraph 1： However, what happened next was out of my expectation. ___________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： As I was about to return for more cash, I suddenly felt a tap on my shoulder._________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 读后续写微技能 【思路点拨】本文以人物为线索展开，作者的生活很不顺利，到处 都是问题。作者到超市买东西时，发现没带钱包，只有一些现金和 优惠券，当作者购买好东西，因为结账队伍缓慢移动，作者的耐心 逐渐耗尽，压力不断上升。就在这时，作者注意到身后一位老太太， 她似乎察觉到了作者的焦虑，投来一个善意的微笑。作者尴尬地回 以微笑，继续等待结账。 读后续写微技能 25 【详解】 1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“然而，接下来发生的事情出乎我的意料。”可知， 第一段可描写作者准备结账时发现带的钱不够了以及作者的反应。 ②由第二段首句内容“正当我准备回去取更多的现金时，我突然感到 有人拍了拍我的肩膀。”可知，第二段可描写身后的老太太给作者钱 帮作者付账以及作者的感激之情。 2. 续写线索：发现钱不够—感到尴尬—准备回去取钱—老太太给作 者钱—表达感激之情—决心帮助他人传递善良。 读后续写微技能 26 One possible version: However, what happened next was out of my expectation. As the cashier scanned my items, I discovered that the total cost exceeded the amount of cash I had on hand. Embarrassment and confusion filled me as I attempted to explain my situation to the cashier, who seemed increasingly frustrated. Meanwhile, the patience of the people waiting behind me in line started to run out. Just when I thought things couldn't get any worse, a feeling of hopelessness started 读后续写微技能 27 to take over, and I thought about having to go home to get more money. As I was about to return for more cash, I suddenly felt a tap on my shoulder. It was the elderly woman who had been standing behind me in line. With a warm smile, she handed me some money and reassuringly said, “Don't worry, dear. We all have tough days.” Her kindness deeply touched me, and I thanked her with all the sincerity I could muster before paying for my items. As I left the store, I felt a profound 读后续写微技能 sense of gratitude and realized that even the smallest acts of kindness can have a significant impact on someone's day. This simple gesture of goodwill truly brightened my spirits, and it inspired me to pay it forward by helping others whenever I can. 读后续写微技能 $