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读后续写微技能: 人物描写(一)
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外貌描写是用来刻画人物的一种写作方法,主要从人物的体貌特
征(包括人物的容貌、衣着、神情、体态、姿态等)进行描写,以揭示
人物的思想性格,表现作者的爱憎,加深读者对人物的印象。
外貌描写一般包括肖像描写与神态描写两部分。
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一、肖像描写常用语
肖像描写是对人物的一种静态描写,注重描绘人物的面貌特征。
肖像描写的目的是以“形”传“神”,刻画人物的性格特征,反映人物的内
心世界。
1.各种“脸型”的常见英语表达法
(1)圆/方/长脸round/square/long face
(2)瘦削的脸thin/lean face
(3)布满皱纹的脸wrinkled/lined face
(4)布满泪痕的脸tear-stained face
(5)晒黑的脸sunburned face
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2.各种“面颊”的常见英语表达法
红润/粉红/苍白的双颊rosy/pink/pale cheeks
3.各种“眼睛”的常见英语表达法
(1)乌黑的/灰色的眼睛dark/grey eyes
(2)睁得大大的眼睛wide-open eyes
(3)深陷的眼睛deep-set eyes
4.各种“鼻子”的常见英语表达法
(1)扁鼻子flat nose
(2)挺直的鼻子straight nose
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5.各种“嘴巴”的常见英语表达法
(1)大/小嘴巴wide/small mouth
(2)薄薄的红唇thin red lips
(3)苍白的嘴唇pale lips
6.各种“额头”的常见英语表达法
(1)宽额头broad forehead
(2)窄小的额头narrow forehead
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7.各种“下巴”的常见英语表达法
(1)双下巴double chin
(2)尖尖的下巴pointed chin
(3)圆圆的下巴round chin
8.各种“头发颜色”的常见英语表达法
(1)黑头发的dark-haired
(2)头发灰白的grey-haired
(3)金发的blond-haired
为了突出人物特点,肖像描写也可以延展为对人物的衣着、身材
等的描绘,如:
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9.各种“服饰”的常见英语表达法
(1)well-dressed衣着讲究的
(2)elegant优雅的
(3)fashionable时髦的
(4)casual随便的
(5)untidy不整洁的
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10.各种“身材”的常见英语表达法
(1)优美/匀称的身材graceful/neat figure
(2)瘦削/瘦小/苗条的身材lean/slight/slim figure
(3)发育良好的身材well-developed figure
(4)中等身材of average build
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二、神态描写常用语
神态描写是对人物外貌的一种动态描写,用表示表情、神态的词
语对脸部表情进行刻画。神态描写注重刻画人物性格,反映人物品格,
展示人物的内心,反映人物的命运。
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1.有关“嗓音”的表达
(1)清晰的嗓音a clear/ringing voice
(2)低沉的嗓音/低声a deep/low voice
(3)响亮的嗓音a loud/ringing voice
(4)悦耳动听的嗓音a pleasant voice
(5)温柔的嗓音a soft voice
(6)微弱的嗓音a weak voice
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2.有关“看”的表达
(1)gaze/stare at盯着……看
(2)glare at怒视
(3)one's eyes be glued to目不转睛地盯着
(4)give a glimpse of…瞥了一眼……
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3.有关“微笑”的表达
(1)灿烂的笑容a bright smile
(2)明朗的笑容a broad smile
(3)迷人的微笑a charming smile
(4)幸福/愉快的微笑a happy/pleasant smile
(5)满意的微笑a pleased/satisfied smile
(6)天真的微笑an innocent smile
(7)淡淡的微笑a weak/faint smile
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4.有关“愤怒”的表达
(1)His face clouded over with anger.
他气得脸色阴沉。
(2)Sue stormed out of the room in a rage/with rage. 休怒气冲
冲地冲出房间。
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5.有关“悲伤”的表达
(1)He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.
他静静地站着,眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。
(2)I sobbed slowly, my heart filled with despair. 我慢慢抽泣起来,
心里满是绝望。
(3)She cried as if it was raining cats and dogs.
她大哭,像是大雨倾盆。
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6.有关“害怕”的表达
(1)He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.
他转向我,眼里充满了恐惧。
(2)Hearing the bad news, he felt he was thrown into a world of
horror.
听到这个坏消息,他觉得自己被卷入了一个恐怖的世界里。
(3)Speechless and frightened, she held her son tightly into her
arms. 她说不出话来,害怕极了,把儿子紧紧地抱在怀里。
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7.有关“惊讶”的表达
(1)He put his hand over his mouth. His eyes were widely open
for he couldn't believe what had happened. 他用手捂住嘴。他的
眼睛睁得大大的,因为他不敢相信发生了什么。
(2)He stood there like a log with his face turning grey/pale.
他像根木头一样站在那儿,脸色变得苍白。
(3)Suddenly he stopped talking, fixed his feet on the ground
with two hands hanging in the air, as if he was frozen. 突然,他
停止说话,脚踩在地面上,双手举在空中,仿佛被冻住了。
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8.有关“紧张”的表达
(1)I have butterflies in my stomach every time I speak in public.
我每次在公众场合讲话都会感到紧张。
(2)I could feel my heart in my mouth as my name was called.
当我的名字被叫到时,我能感觉到我的心都要跳出来了。
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【跟踪演练】
Ⅰ单句翻译(每小题3分,共18分)
1.她的嘴小小的,圆脸蛋红红的。
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She has a small mouth and round rosy/pink cheeks.
2.Alee现在开心了,整张脸洋溢着温和的微笑。(spread)
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Alee becomes happy now and a gentle smile spreads over her face.
3.他脸上露出了满意的微笑。(flash)
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A pleased/satisfied smile flashed across his face.
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4.她说不出话来,眼泪顺着她的脸流了下来。(fail)
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With tears streaming down her face, words failed her.
5.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。(burn)
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He glared at me with burning eyes.
6.她脸色苍白地站在那里,舌头打结。(tongue-tied)
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With her face turning pale/grey, she stood there tongue-tied.
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Ⅱ根据汉语提示完成下面的语篇(每小题3分,共15分)
When memory began for me, my grandfather was past
sixty—a great tall man 1._____________________________
(浓密的头发变成了灰色). He had 2.___________________________
_____(黑眼睛和挺直的鼻子) which ended in a slightly flattened
tip. Once he explained seriously to me that he got that
flattened tip as a small child when he 3.__________(摔倒) and
hit his nose.
with thick hair becoming grey
black eyes and a straight nose
fell down
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The little marks of laughter at the corners of his eyes were the
product of 4.__________________________(善良幽默的天性).
The years of work which had 5.______________________(压弯了
他的肩膀) had never dulled his humour nor his love of a joke.
Everywhere he went, my grandpa made friends easily.
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Ⅲ读后续写(25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成
一篇完整的短文。
“Another new year,” Maggie thought as she headed out.
She walked a few blocks to buy herself a gift. Suddenly, one
store caught her attention. And as she entered the front door,
a small bell announced her presence.
“Happy New Year,” a man greeted. “Hi,” Maggie replied,
“you too.” “Can I help you find something?” he inquired.
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“I don't really know what I want as my gift,” Maggie sighed.
“Ah, when you don't know what you want, get what you need,”
he offered. After a brief moment of silence, the man smiled and
claimed, “I have the perfect gift for you.”
The man went to a shelf that had one item left on it. “This
is what you need,” he said as he handed Maggie a box. “A
doll?” Maggie asked, looking through the clean plastic on the
front of the box. “It's what you need and what will make you
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happy,” he replied. “It is a beautiful baby doll,”
Maggie observed. “It looks expensive and I don't know if I
have enough money. How much is it?” “98 cents,” the man
replied. Maggie asked in a surprising tone, “This doll is worth
much more. How can you stay in business when you charge so
little?” “We will be just fine,” the man smiled back at her, “and
you will get a gift that will make you happy.”
The doll was quickly wrapped and returned to her. Maggie
paid for the doll and left. She walked down the street in the
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direction of home. The sky was slowly darkening as the evening
took over.
After a few minutes, she approached a woman and a
young girl sitting on a bench next to the sidewalk in front of a
small park. Maggie decided to sit down on a nearby vacant
bench and take in the atmosphere of New Year.
She noticed the woman was trying to comfort the little girl
who was upset and sniffling (抽噎). “We still have each other,”
the woman comforted. “I know,” the young girl replied, “but I
don't know why somebody would steal presents on this day.”
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注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
Paragraph 1:
“Wish there was something I could do to help,” Maggie
thought. ___________________________________________________________
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Paragraph 2:
Both mother and daughter were thankful.____________________
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【思路点拨】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了新年时玛吉出门给自己
买礼物,在一家店铺里,店主推荐给她一个漂亮的洋娃娃,价格仅98
美分,远低于其价值。玛吉买下后离开。傍晚在小公园前的长椅上,
她看到一对母女,小女孩因礼物被偷而难过,她的母亲在安慰她。
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【详解】
1. 段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“‘希望我能帮上什么忙,’玛吉想。”可知,第一
段可描写玛吉决定把洋娃娃送给小女孩以及她们之间的对话。
②由第二段首句内容“母女俩都很感激。”可知,第二段可描写小女孩
的母亲感谢玛吉以及玛吉的心理感受。
2. 续写线索:希望帮上忙—把洋娃娃送给小女孩—母女俩都很感
激—每个人脸上都挂着笑容—感悟。
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One possible version:
“Wish there was something I could do to help,” Maggie
thought. Looking around, Maggie noticed the gift-wrapped doll
box next to her on the bench. She looked back at the mother
and daughter, aware of what she had to do. Maggie left the
bench, with the doll box in her hands, and approached them.
“Excuse me,” Maggie said, “you don't know me but I would like
to give you this gift since I overheard that your present had
been stolen.” Maggie handed the gift-wrapped box to the little
girl whose eyes were wide open.
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Both mother and daughter were thankful. Tears of joy
welling up in their eyes, the previous worry and concern
were replaced by smiles. “I can't thank you enough for your
kindness,” the woman said in a choked voice. “Without your
assistance, my daughter couldn't have obtained the present. You
have no idea what a surprise this is!” “I am happy to help!”
Maggie replied as a warm feeling of joy came over her.
Everyone had smiles on their faces, immersing themselves in
the warm atmosphere. Only then did Maggie realize that it
was kindness and love that made our world so beautiful!
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