（课件）社区选择写作-Unit 2 Community Life-《英语 基础模块3》（高教版第三版）【单元写作精讲精练】

An Introduction to the Community 单击此处输入你的正文，文字是您思想的提炼，为了最终演示发布的良好效果，请尽量言简意赅的阐述观点；根据需要可酌情增减文字，以便观者可以准确理解您所传达的信息。 单击此处输入你的正文，文字是您思想的提炼，为了最终演示发布的良好效果，请尽量言简意赅的阐述观点；根据需要可酌情增减文字，以便观者可以准确理解您所传达的信息。 单击此处输入你的正文，文字是您思想的提炼，为了最终演示发布的良好效果，请尽量言简意赅的阐述观点；根据需要可酌情增减文字，以便观者可以准确理解您所传达的信息。 1. Master community‑related vocabulary, phrases and sentence patterns. 2. Learn the structure of a community‑introduction composition. 3. Write an 80‑120‑word short passage: introduce a community and give your reasons for choosing it. Learning Objectives What facilities can you see in a good community? 体裁地位 字数要求 评分核心 链接高考 常见话题 说明文是春考书面表达高频体裁 80‑120 words 社区介绍、家乡介绍、校园介绍、居住地点选择 Suppose you are going to choose a new community to live in. You need to write a short passage to introduce this community and explain why you choose it. Do you know how to write？ Basic Vocabulary community n. 社区； neighbourhood n. 小区 flat n. 公寓；apartment n. 套房 facility n. 设施；garden n. 花园 supermarket n. 超市；hospital n. 医院 transport n. 交通； convenient adj. 方便的；safe adj. 安全的 Advanced Vocabulary comfortable adj. 舒适的；peaceful adj. 安静祥和的； environment n. 环境；reason n. 理由；advantage n. 优势； besides 此外； what’s more 而且； in addition 另外 Quick quiz 1. This ______(community / communities) is very convenient. 2. There are many new ______(facility / facilities) in the neighbourhood. community facilities this 翻译成这个，后加单数可数名词 many翻译成许多，后面加复数 Useful Phrases ‑ Community information a beautiful and quiet community 一个美丽安静的社区 close to … 靠近…… good public transport 便利的公共交通 Useful Phrases ‑ Community information green environment 绿色环境 different kinds of facilities 各种各样的设施 shopping centre 购物中心；medical service 医疗服务 Useful Phrases‑Reasons for choice the main reason is that… 主要理由是…… one of the advantages is that… 优势之一是…… be convenient for doing sth 方便做某事 Useful Phrases‑Reasons for choice it is safe to live here 居住在这里很安全 what attracts me most is that… 最吸引我的是…… because of + 名词短语 由于…… Sentence Patterns Opening（开篇：引出 + 简单介绍社区） Basic：I’d like to introduce a nice community to you. Advanced：The community I want to choose is near the city centre. Sentence Patterns Body‑1（主体：描述位置、环境、配套设施） Basic：It is close to the ______. There are many ______ in this community. Advanced：It has good public transport and plenty of public facilities for people. Sentence Patterns Body‑2（主体：说明选择理由，本课核心句型） Basic：I choose this community because ______. Advanced：One main reason for my choice is that it is very convenient for daily life. What attracts me most is its safe and beautiful living environment. Sentence Patterns Ending（结尾：简单总结） Basic：This is why I choose this community. Advanced：All these advantages make it a good place to live in. Grammar Focus 1. Tense：General Present Simple（介绍客观现实，全文多用一般现在时） 2. Noun number：many + 可数名词复数；much + 不可数名词 3. Reason expression：because + 完整句子；because of + 名词 / 名词短语 4. Preposition：close to + 地点（to 不可以省略！） Common Mistakes Common Mistakes（1）Tense & Nouns ❌ This community were very good.（主谓不一致） ✅ This community is very good. 口诀：介绍客观事物多用一般现在时，注意主谓一致。 ❌ There is many facility.（many 后用复数） ✅ There are many facilities. Common Mistakes Common Mistakes（2）because vs because of ❌ I choose it because of it is safe.（because of 后不能接完整句子） ✅ I choose it because it is safe. ✅ I choose it because of its safe environment. Common Mistakes Common Mistakes（3）Preposition mistakes ❌ It is close the supermarket.（漏 to） ✅ It is close to the supermarket. ❌ It is convenient live here. ✅ It is convenient to live here. Four key points 1. Where：社区位置 2. What：社区环境、配套设施 3. Why‑1：Reason 1 for choosing it（理由 1） 4. Why‑2：Reason 2 for choosing it（理由 2） Writing Template I’d like to introduce ________ to you. This community is ________(位置). There are ________ in this neighbourhood. Besides, it has ________(环境、配套设施). Writing Template I choose this community for two main reasons. First, ________(理由 1). Second, ________(理由 2). What attracts me most is that ________. All these advantages make it a wonderful place to live in. Writing Task 你打算选择阳光社区（Sunshine Community）居住，请写一篇 80‑120 词短文，介绍这个社区，并且说明你选择它的理由。 提示信息： 位置：near the city centre 配套：有花园、超市、医院，公交很便利 理由：1. 出行购物看病方便；2. 环境优美安全，适合居住 Steps for writing 第一步：判断体裁 →说明文（社区介绍 + 说明理由） 第二步：提取四要素 Where: near the city centre What: garden, supermarket, hospital, good bus transport Steps for writing Reason1: convenient for shopping, going to hospital and travelling Reason2: beautiful and safe environment 第三步：套用模板，填充信息；检查时态、名词单复数、because/because of 搭配 Model Essay I’d like to introduce Sunshine Community to you. This community is near the city centre. There are beautiful gardens, a big supermarket and a hospital in this neighbourhood. Besides, it has good public bus transport for people. Model Essay I choose this community for two main reasons. First, it is very convenient for shopping, seeing doctors and going out. Second, it has a beautiful and safe living environment. What attracts me most is its green gardens. All these advantages make it a wonderful place to live in. Summary 1. Words & phrases：community‑related words & phrases for giving reasons 2. Sentences：opening / describing‑community / giving‑reasons / ending patterns 3. Structure：four‑point writing structure（位置‑设施‑理由‑总结） 4. Rules：Simple Present Tense; pay attention to noun number; tell apart because / because of Thank you $