2026-2027学年沪教版九年级英语上学期第一次月考自编模拟卷（深圳）（测试范围：Units1-2）

2026-2027学年九年级上学期第一次月考自编模拟卷（深圳专用） 英 语 （测试范围：九上沪教版，Units1-2） 学校:___________班级：___________姓名：___________分数：___________ （时间：70分钟，满分：75分） I.完形填空(共10分) 阅读下面短文，从短文后所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出能填入相应空白处的最佳选项。 Guo Shoujing was a brilliant astronomer and engineer in the Yuan Dynasty. Born in 1231, he showed great talent for math and astronomy at a young age. His grandfather, Guo Rong, was a respected scholar who taught him to observe nature carefully. When Guo was 20, he 1 a broken water clock in his hometown. This caught the 2 of Kublai Khan, the emperor, who invited him to work on the calendar system. At that time, the old calendar was 3 , causing farmers to plant crops at the wrong time. Guo believed it was his duty to 4 this problem. He traveled across China to collect data, climbing mountains to measure 5 . Once, while building a new observatory, his team faced a shortage of materials. Instead of 6 , Guo used local stones and wood, proving his creativity. He also invented new tools, such as the “simplified instrument” (简仪), which made star observation much 7 . After years of effort, Guo completed the Shoushi Calendar (授时历). It was so accurate that it only had a 26-second error per 8 ! His work helped farmers plan their work better and improved daily life. Even today, Guo’s spirit of precision and dedication inspires scientists. He showed us that true greatness lies not in 9 , but in using knowledge to 10 others. 1．A．fixed B．broke C．sold D．hid 2．A．attention B．money C．trouble D．rest 3．A．easy B．inaccurate C．expensive D．popular 4．A．buy B．sell C．solve D．avoid 5．A．clocks B．crops C．stars D．books 6．A．giving up B．looking for C．running away D．falling asleep 7．A．easier B．harder C．slower D．worse 8．A．minute B．hour C．day D．year 9．A．fame B．wealth C．service D．power 10．A．control B．serve C．follow D．forget 二、阅读理解（共40分） 第一节(共22.5分) 阅读下列短文，从下面每小题的A、B、C、D四个选项中选择最佳选项。 A Throughout history, many great people have changed the world with their ideas and actions. Here are four of them: Name Achievement Influence Confucius​ (551—479 BC) A great thinker and educator. He set up private schools and taught students for free. His ideas about kindness and learning are still important in China and other Asian countries. Isaac Newton​ (1643—1727) An English scientist who discovered gravity and the laws of motion. His work laid the foundation for modern physics and space exploration. Marie Curie​ (1867—1934) A Polish-French scientist who discovered radium and polonium. She was the first woman to win a Nobel Prize, and her research helps treat cancer today. Nelson Mandela​ (1918—2013) A South African leader who fought against racial segregation (种族隔离). He became president and promoted peace, teaching the world about forgiveness and equality. These people came from different backgrounds, but they all shared one thing: a strong belief in making the world better. They faced many difficulties, but they never gave up. Their stories teach us that anyone can make a difference, no matter where they come from. 11．Who was the first woman to win a Nobel Prize? A．Confucius B．Isaac Newton C．Marie Curie D．Nelson Mandela 12．What did Isaac Newton discover? A．Gravity B．Radium C．Kindness D．Equality 13．What did Confucius do to help education? A．He built many public schools. B．He set up private schools and taught for free. C．He wrote many books about science. D．He traveled around the world to teach. 14．Which of the following is TRUE about Nelson Mandela? A．He was a scientist. B．He fought against racial segregation. C．He discovered a new element. D．He was born in China. 15．What do these four people have in common? A．They were all born in Asia. B．They all won Nobel Prizes. C．They all faced difficulties but never gave up. D．They all studied in the same university. B On March 4th, 2023, the 2022 Touching China Award Ceremony (颁奖典礼) was seen on CCTV. Ten people were awarded for their moving stories and great contributions to society. Lin Zhanxi is one of them. Lin was born in 1943 in Liancheng, Fujian. He is a scientist of the National Juncao Technology Research Center and a teacher at Fujian Agriculture and Forestry University. He is called “Father of Juncao”. Juncao, known as “magic grass”, can be used to grow mushrooms (蘑菇). The technology of growing Juncao was invented in the 1980s by Lin Zhanxi. It is helpful in reducing global poverty (全球贫困). However, the research of Juncao is not easy. Professor Lin experienced tens of thousands of failed experiments. To continue the study, he had to borrow money and equipment. But he never gave up. On a day in October 1986, the first mushroom using Juncao technology was grown. Lin’s excitement was beyond words. So far, Juncao has helped over 20,000 families in Ningxia shake off poverty. The technology has also been introduced into 106 countries around the world. At the age of 54, Juncao was introduced into Papua New Guinea from China. Villagers in the country began to learn the Juncao technology with the help of Chinese scientists. After Juncao was successfully planted, the villagers shouted “Juncao, China!” to express their excitement. Many people in the South Pacific, Latin America and African countries have shaken off poverty through growing Juncao and mushrooms, too. Nowadays, Juncao becomes a “happy grass” that benefits (受益) more people all over the world. 16．What may Juncao be like according to the text? A． B． C． D． 17．Which of the following can best describe Lin Zhanxi? A．Honest. B．Humorous. C．Open-minded. D．Strong-willed. 18．When did the Juncao technology first appear in Papua New Guinea? A．In 1997. B．In 1980. C．In 1986. D．In 1943. 19．What is the main idea of paragraph 4? A．Juncao is planted in Ningxia. B．Chinese scientists help plant Juncao. C．Juncao technology is being used in many countries. D．Latin American countries have shaken off poverty. 20．The text is written to _________. A．introduce Juncao technology to the world B．introduce Lin Zhanxi’s great contributions C．show us how to use the Juncao technology D．show us how to shake off the global poverty C In recent years, six amazing companies from Hangzhou have made a big splash (声名鹊起) in the world of technology: People call them the “Six Little Dragons”. These companies are doing great things in fields like artificial intelligence (人工智能), robotics, brain-computer interfaces (脑机接口), and video games. DeepSeek is a leader in AI. Its DeepSeek-V3 model is cheaper to make than other models, but it works better. This has made a big impact (影响) on the global AI market. Meanwhile, Unitree Technology and DEEP Robotics are changing the world of robots. Unitree’s robots can move like animals and have amazed people around the world. DEEP Robotics makes robots that can work in dangerous places to keep people safe. Both companies are making robots smarter and more useful. BrainCo is another important company. It makes devices (设备) that can read brain activity and help people relax. ManyCore Tech also plays a big role. Its 3D data platform helps other companies develop better AI technology. Game Science has made waves in the game industry with its game “Black Myth: Wukong”. The game is based on the famous Chinese story called Journey to the West. The game’s success shows how Chinese developers can combine culture and technology in new ways. Hangzhou’s success is no accident. The local government has not only created a friendly environment for businesses, but also carried out policies (政策) to support them, which attracts (吸引) talented people from all over the country. This combination (结合) has turned Hangzhou into a global (全球的) center for creation. Other cities in China, like Beijing, Shanghai, Shenzhen, and Guangzhou, are also home to many leading tech companies. Together, these cities are leading China’s rapid technological progress. Hangzhou’s “Six Little Dragons” are not only a symbol of the city’s success but also a symbol of China’s growing influence in the global tech industry. 21．The DeepSeek-V3 model’s advantage lies in that ________. A．it is the only model made by DeepSeek B．it costs less to produce yet performs better C．it is the most advanced AI model in the world D．it is making robots smarter and more useful 22．What is the main technological field of BrainCo? A．Developing video games. B．Creating animal-like robots. C．Making brain-reading devices for relaxing. D．Designing 3D data platforms. 23．Which of the following statements is true? A．Unitree Technology’s robots can communicate with humans fluently (流利地). B．DEEP Robotics makes robots that can work in risky places. C．ManyCore Tech has made a hit game “Black Myth: Wukong”. D．BrainCo can improve users’ memory. 24．Which is not the reason for Hangzhou’s success in technology? A．The business-friendly environment. B．Supportive policies. C．Outstanding people. D．China’s growing influence. 25．Why does the writer write this passage? A．To introduce Chinese culture to the world. B．To explain how Hangzhou became a global hub (全球中心) for tourism. C．To introduce six amazing tech companies in Hangzhou and their contributions (贡献). D．To show the worldwide influence of AI. 第二节（共10分） 阅读短文，从所给的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项，使短文通顺、连贯，选项中有一项为多余选项。 Have you ever got a toothache? Can you stand the pain? It’s important for us to keep our teeth healthy. Let’s learn more about our teeth. 26 The first baby teeth fall out between ages 6 and 12. The second is the last set that we have for life. 27 Front teeth for biting (咬) and back teeth for chewing (咀嚼). When baby teeth start coming in, brush them at least twice a day with clean water. At six months, add a little toothpaste (牙膏). Use toothpaste that has fluoride, which can make our teeth stronger. 28 Imagine our mouth has four parts. In each one, brush at a 45-degree angle (角度). From down to up, and front to back. When we don’t brush our teeth well, our teeth may have plaque (菌斑). 29 Brushing teeth well twice a day with toothpaste can deal with the plaque problem. Visiting the dentist can catch problems before they start. 30 Sugar in drinks like fruit juice and sodas can hurt our teeth. Sweet things make our teeth worse faster. A．We get two sets of teeth. B．How to brush our teeth correctly? C．We have two different kinds of teeth. D．And remember not to eat too much sugar. E．It may cause bad breath and tooth problems. F．It can also keep your teeth strong and healthy. 第三节（共7.5分） 下面材料A~F分别是六个人物传记介绍。根据五位同学的需求，选择最合适的人物传记。 Students’ Needs Biographies 31 Anna is interested in environmental protection. She wants to read about a scientist who studied nature and developed sustainable ideas. 32 Ben loves space exploration. He wants to learn about an engineer whose ideas helped launch satellites. 33 Cindy is good at drawing. She hopes to find a biography about an artist who combined science and art in his work. 34 David is curious about medicine. He wants to read about a researcher who developed life-saving vaccines. 35 Ella enjoys stories about brave women. She wants to read about a female pilot who broke records. A．Marie Curie: The Pioneer of Radioactivity. This book tells the story of the first woman to win a Nobel Prize. Her discovery of radium changed medicine forever. B．Leonardo da Vinci: The Genius Who Saw the Future. Explore the life of the ultimate Renaissance man. His detailed sketches of flying machines inspired generations of engineers. C． Rachel Carson: The Woman Who Challenged the World. Learn about the marine biologist whose book Silent Spring sparked the modern environmental movement. D．Wernher von Braun: Rocket Scientist. This biography covers the life of the engineer who developed the Saturn V rocket that sent Apollo missions to the moon. E. Amelia Earhart: The Sky’s No Limit. Read about the courageous aviator who was the first woman to fly solo across the Atlantic Ocean. F. Edward Jenner: Conqueror of Smallpox. Discover how a country doctor’s curiosity led to the development of the world’s first vaccine III. 语法填空（共10分） Many years ago, there were many states (国家) in China. The State of Qi used to be very strong, but it became less powerful. Yan Zi was a wise man who gave 36 (suggest) to the king, so the king of Qi sent him to ask Chu to cooperate. The king of Chu knew Yan Zi was very short. He tried to make Yan Zi 37 (feel) shy about his height. When Yan Zi arrived, the guard told him to enter through the small gate. Yan Zi didn’t get mad 38 him. “Only a state of dogs will greet visitors with a gate for dogs. I’m visiting the State of Chu. This gate isn’t for me,” Yan Zi said. So the guard had to take him through the main gate. The king of Chu was unhappy at what Yan Zi did. “Why did Qi send YOU? Don’t they have anyone better?” the king tried another way. “If Qi meets a great king, it 39 (send) the best ambassador (使臣). I’m the 40 (bad). That’s why I’m here,” Yan Zi replied calmly (镇定地). At this time, a thief 41 (bring) by the guards to the king. The thief was from Qi. “Ha! Yan Zi, is Qi a state of thieves?” asked the king 42 (impolite). Yan Zi replied, “The orange trees south of Huai River produce big and delicious fruit, 43 the orange trees north of Huai River produce small and sour fruit. The environment makes the fruit grow differently. In Qi, people are good and honest, but here, they steal. What made 44 (they) qualities change here?” Finally, the king looked at Yan Zi and laughed, “I was wrong about you and your state!” The story of Yan Zi shows that we should make 45 effort to win others’ respect with our own courage and wisdom. IV. 书面表达（共15分） 46．从古至今，许多伟大的创意都源于人们遇到的难题。为锻炼同学们叙事与说明类写作能力，英语课开展写作练习。请你选取一个知名伟大创意，以 A Brilliant Idea That Changed Lives 为题写一篇英语短文。 内容必须包含： 1.当时人们亟待解决的难题是什么； 2.是谁想出这个绝妙创意； 3.这个创意是什么、如何解决了难题； 4.该创意对人类生活带来的深远影响。 注意： 1.文中不得出现真实人名、校名； 2.行文流畅，句式多样，词数 80–100 词； ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 题号 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 答案 A A B C C A A D A B 题号 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 答案 C A B B C C D A C B 题号 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 答案 B C B D C A C B E D 题号 31 32 33 34 35 答案 C D B F E 1．A 2．A 3．B 4．C 5．C 6．A 7．A 8．D 9．A 10．B 【导语】本文讲述元代天文学家郭守敬的生平。他修水钟、制历法、发明仪器，其精准和奉献精神至今激励科学家，展现了用知识服务他人的伟大。 【详解】1．句意：郭守敬20岁时，在家乡修理一座破损的水钟。 根据“broken water clock”可知，坏掉的东西需要“修理”。fixed符合逻辑。broke“打碎”、sold“售卖”、hid“隐藏”与修复坏物的逻辑不符。 2．句意：这件事引起了皇帝忽必烈的注意，皇帝邀请他参与历法的修订工作。 因为修理水钟，所以引起了皇帝的注意，catch the attention of为固定搭配，意为“引起……的注意”。attention符合搭配。money“金钱”、trouble“麻烦”、rest“休息”无法构成合理搭配且不符合语境。 3．句意：在那时，旧历法并不精准，导致农民播种作物的时间出错。 根据后文“causing farmers to plant crops at the wrong time”，说明旧历法不“准确”。inaccurate符合语境，easy“简单的”、expensive“昂贵的”、popular“受欢迎的”无法解释为何种错庄稼。 4．句意：郭守敬认为解决这个难题是他的责任。 根据“problem”可知，责任是“解决”问题。solve符合语境。sell“售卖”、buy“购买”与问题搭配不当，avoid“回避”不符合责任感语境。 5．句意：他走遍中国收集数据，登山测量星辰。 郭是天文学家，测量对象应为天体。star“星星”符合。clock“时钟”、crop“庄稼”、book“书本”均非天文观测对象。 6．句意：材料短缺时，郭守敬没有放弃，而是就地取材，使用当地的石头和木材，展现了创造力。 根据“used local stones…proving his creativity”可知他克服困难未“放弃”。giving up符合语境。look for“寻找”、run away“逃跑”、fall asleep“入睡”不符合面对短缺时的积极态度。 7．句意：他还发明了简仪这类新仪器，让星体观测变得容易得多。 发明新工具旨在提高效率，使工作“更简便”。easier符合逻辑。harder“更困难的”、slower“更慢的”、worse“更差的”均为负面效果，不符合发明目的。 8．句意：《授时历》精度极高，每年误差仅26秒。 历法的准确度通常以年为单位衡量，且26秒/年符合史实。year“年”符合逻辑。minute“分钟”、hour“小时”、day“天”时间单位过短，不符合历法误差常识。 9．句意：他向我们证明，真正的伟大不在于名望，而在于运用知识服务他人。 此处与后文“服务他人”形成对比，强调精神而非虚名。fame符合语境。wealth“财富”、power“权力”虽也属私利，但fame常与greatness直接对比；service“服务”是后半句内容。 10．句意：他向我们证明，真正的伟大不在于名望，而在于运用知识服务他人。 根据“help farmers plan their work better”可知是帮助和“服务”他人。serve符合语境。control“控制”、follow“跟随”、forget“忘记”不符合奉献精神的语境。 11．C 12．A 13．B 14．B 15．C 【导语】本文罗列了孔子、牛顿、居里夫人、曼德拉四位伟人的生平、成就与带来的影响，讲述他们凭借思想与行动改变世界，传递直面困境永不放弃、人人都能有所作为的主旨。 【详解】11．原文表格Marie Curie一栏写明“She was the first woman to win a Nobel Prize”，Marie Curie是第一位获得诺贝尔奖的女性。 12．原文表格Isaac Newton一栏写明“discovered gravity and the laws of motion”，牛顿发现了重力和运动定律。 13．原文表格Confucius一栏写明“He set up private schools and taught students for free”，孔子创办私学，免费教授学生。 14．原文表格Nelson Mandela一栏写明“A South African leader who fought against racial segregation”，Nelson Mandela是反抗种族隔离的南非领导人。 15．文章末尾段落写明“They faced many difficulties, but they never gave up”，四位伟人都经历了诸多困难，但从未放弃。 16．C 17．D 18．A 19．C 20．B 【导语】本文为人物说明文，介绍感动中国人物林占熺，讲述他数十年潜心研发菌草技术，克服无数失败，该技术助力国内外众多民众脱贫致富的巨大贡献。 【详解】16．文中称菌草为“magic grass”，可培育蘑菇，易种植、经济价值高，能改善贫困，是用途广泛的草本植物。 17． 根据第三段“Professor Lin experienced tens of thousands of failed experiments…But he never gave up.”，他历经上万次失败仍不放弃，意志坚定，strong-willed (意志坚定的) 最贴合。 18． 林占熺1943年出生，54岁时菌草技术引入巴布亚新几内亚，1943+54=1997，选1997。 19．第四段先写菌草帮助宁夏两万多家庭脱贫，又讲技术传到106个国家，惠及南太平洋、拉美、非洲多国，核心是菌草技术在多国落地应用。Juncao technology is being used in many countries.符合文意。 20．文章围绕林占熺展开，介绍他研发菌草技术、凭借这项技术为国内外脱贫作出巨大贡献，核心是介绍他的伟大贡献。B选项introduce Lin Zhanxi’s great contributions.符合文意。 21．B 22．C 23．B 24．D 25．C 【导语】本文是一篇说明文，主要讲述了杭州六家杰出科技公司“六小龙”，介绍各家公司的产品与技术优势，分析杭州科技取得成功的原因，并点明其代表中国在全球科技领域不断提升的影响力。 【详解】21．第二段指出模型优势：“Its DeepSeek‑V3 model is cheaper to make than other models, but it works better.”，这直接说明DeepSeek‑V3模型生产成本更低，但是性能更好。 22．第四段说明公司业务：“It makes devices (设备) that can read brain activity and help people relax.”，这直接说明BrainCo的主要技术领域是制造读取大脑活动、帮助人们放松的设备。 23．第三段原文：“DEEP Robotics makes robots that can work in dangerous places to keep people safe.”，dangerous places等价于risky places，可知DEEP Robotics制造可以在危险环境工作的机器人。 24．第六段给出原因：“The local government has not only created a friendly environment for businesses, but also carried out policies (政策) to support them, which attracts (吸引) talented people from all over the country.”，营商环境、扶持政策、优秀人才是成功原因，中国日益增长的影响力是杭州科技成功带来的结果。 25．通读全文，文章围绕杭州“六小龙”展开，介绍六家科技公司以及它们做出的贡献。 26．A 27．C 28．B 29．E 30．D 【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章主要讲述了牙齿的重要性、牙齿的生长阶段与种类、正确的刷牙方法以及保护牙齿的建议。 【详解】26．根据后文“The first baby teeth fall out between ages 6 and 12. The second is the last set that we have for life.”可知，后文分别介绍第一套乳牙、第二套恒牙，A选项“We get two sets of teeth.”总起两句内容，衔接逻辑通顺。 27．根据后文“Front teeth for biting and back teeth for chewing.”可知，后文区分门牙和后槽牙的作用，C选项“We have two different kinds of teeth.”总领该句内容，前后对应。 28．根据后文“Imagine our mouth has four parts. In each one, brush at a 45-degree angle. From down to up, and front to back.”可知，后文详细讲解刷牙的角度、顺序，是对正确刷牙方式的说明，B选项“How to brush our teeth correctly?”设问引出下文操作方法。 29．根据前文“When we don’t brush our teeth well, our teeth may have plaque.”可知，代词It指代前文的plaque，E选项“It may cause bad breath and tooth problems.”说明菌斑带来的不良后果，承接上文。 30．根据后文“Sugar in drinks like fruit juice and sodas can hurt our teeth. Sweet things make our teeth worse faster.”可知，后文讲述糖分对牙齿的伤害，D选项“And remember not to eat too much sugar.”引出控糖的护牙要点，上下文衔接自然。 31．C 32．D 33．B 34．F 35．E 【导语】本文是根据五位同学的阅读需求，匹配对应的人物传记介绍，引用需求与原文均使用双引号标注。 【详解】31．Anna的需求是想读一位研究自然并提出可持续发展理念的科学家的故事。选项C的介绍提到蕾切尔·卡森是推动现代环保运动的生物学家，完全匹配环保主题需求。 32．Ben的需求是想了解一位工程师，他的想法帮助发射了卫星。选项D的介绍提到冯·布劳恩是研发登月火箭的航天工程师，契合太空探索需求。 33．Cindy的需求是希望能找到一位将科学与艺术结合在一起的艺术家的传记。选项B的介绍提到达·芬奇是融合艺术与科学的艺术家，匹配需求。 34．David的需求是想读到一位研究人员研制出救命疫苗的故事。选项F的介绍提到爱德华·詹纳研发出世界首种疫苗，符合医药相关需求。 35．Ella的需求是想读一篇关于打破纪录的女飞行员的文章。选项E的介绍提到阿梅莉亚·埃尔哈特是打破飞行纪录的女性飞行员，匹配需求。 36．suggestions 37．feel 38．at 39．will send 40．worst 41．was brought 42．impolitely 43．while 44．their 45．an 【导语】本文讲述晏子出使楚国，面对楚王三次刻意刁难，凭借智慧巧妙回击，最终赢得楚王尊重的故事，告诉我们要依靠自身勇气与智慧努力赢得他人尊重。 【详解】36．句意：晏子是一位给君王提建议的智者，于是齐王派他出使楚国，请求楚国与齐国合作。give后接名词作宾语，suggest为动词，使用复数名词形式。 37．句意：他想让晏子因身高感到难堪。make sb. do sth.“使某人做某事”，为固定搭配，make后搭配动词原形。 38．句意：晏子并没有对他发火。get mad at sb.“生某人的气”是固定短语，搭配介词at。 39．句意：如果齐国遇到贤明的君主，就会派遣最好的使臣。if引导条件状语从句，遵循主将从现规则，主句采用一般将来时。 40．句意：我是最差的使臣。前文出现the best，前后形成对应，bad需使用最高级。 41．句意：这时，一名小偷被侍卫带到楚王面前。by引出动作执行者表示被动，全文时态为一般过去时，使用一般过去时被动语态，主语为“a thief”，用was brought。 42．句意：楚王无礼地问道：“哈！晏子，齐国是出盗贼的国家吗？” 修饰动词asked需要使用副词，形容词impolite需转换为副词。 43．句意：淮河以南的橘树结出又大又甜的果子，然而淮河以北的橘树只结又小又酸涩的果子。前后两句语义存在转折对比关系，while可用于对比两件事物。 44．句意：是什么让他们的品性到了这里就改变了呢？修饰名词qualities需用形容词性物主代词，人称代词they需转换为形容词性物主代词。 45．句意：晏子的故事告诉我们，我们应当全力以赴，依靠自身的勇气与智慧赢得他人的尊重。“make an effort”为固定短语，搭配不定冠词。 46．例文 A Brilliant Idea That Changed Lives Many great ideas come from solving hard problems, and papermaking is such a wonderful example. In ancient China, people wrote on heavy bamboo slips or expensive silk. It was hard for common people to record and spread knowledge. Cai Lun came up with a creative idea. He used cheap materials like tree bark and old cloth to make paper. After lots of experiments, he finally made light and affordable paper. Thanks to this great idea, knowledge spread quickly around the world. It makes our study and communication much easier. I realize small creative ideas can change the whole world. 【详解】写作步骤 ［第一步：审题立意］ 确定文体：说明叙事结合的英语说明文，主体叙事用一般过去时，描述长期影响使用现在完成时 明确要点：待解决的难题（书写材料笨重昂贵）、创意提出者（蔡伦）、创意内容与解决过程（利用廉价材料造纸）、创意带来的生活影响（知识传播、改变世界） 确定人称：第一人称 I（用于结尾感悟）；第三人称 he/it（用于叙述故事） 注意事项：文中不得出现真实姓名、校名（除历史人物外） ［第二步：构思布局］ 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，概括主题（伟大的创意源于解决难题），引出下文例子 主体段：分别介绍当时的困难背景、创意的产生及具体实施过程 结尾段：总结感受，升华主题（强调该创意对世界的深远影响） ［第三步：要点展开］ 要点一：当时人们亟待解决的难题      地点/时间选择：In ancient China / Long ago等      状况描述：wrote on heavy bamboo slips or expensive silk（写在沉重的竹简或昂贵的丝绸上）等 作用效果：hard for common people to record and spread knowledge（普通人很难记录和传播知识）、 inconvenient（不方便的）、costly（昂贵的）、burden（负担）等 要点二：创意内容与解决过程     人物动作：came up with a creative idea（想出了一个绝妙的主意）、invented（发明）、devise（设计）、propose（提议）等      具体做法：used cheap materials like tree bark and old cloth（使用像树皮和旧布这样的廉价材料）、 raw materials（原材料）、recycle（回收利用）、experiment（实验）等 最终结果：made light and affordable paper（造出了轻便且买得起的纸）、 durable（耐用的）、high-quality（高质量的）、success（成功）等 要点三：创意带来的生活影响与个人感悟     对世界的影响：knowledge spread quickly around the world（知识迅速传遍世界）、 civilization（文明）、promote（促进）、global（全球的）等       对生活的作用：makes our study and communication much easier（使我们的学习和交流变得更容易）、efficient（高效的）、convenient（便利的）、bridge（桥梁）等       个人感悟：realize small creative ideas can change the whole world（意识到小小的创意可以改变整个世界）、 inspire（启发）、innovation（创新）、significance（意义）等 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $