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Unit 1 A new start
Part 4 Writing
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日记
写作题目
假定你是高一学生李华,你进入高中已有一周,请根据下列提示用英语写一篇日记,介绍你的新学
校的情况。
1.校园面貌;2.同学情况;3.校园生活。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.日记的格式已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Tuesday September 8th Sunny
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思路点拨
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遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1._______________n.印象
2.___________n.校园
3.______________n.挑战
4.________________高中
5.___________________________使某人处于压力之下
6._______________全力以赴
7._________________参加
take part in
go all out
put sb. under pressure
senior high
challenge
campus
impression
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Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
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答案
1.entered the senior high 2.leaves/makes a deep impression on me 3.The campus is very beautiful
4.there are forty-five students 5.puts me under pressure 6.decide to go all out 7.face the challenges
8.take part in 9.lead a very colourful school life 10.a very good experience 11.It has been a week since I
entered the senior high. 12.The campus is very beautiful with a lot of trees all around.
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连句成篇
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写作积累
日记写作中的常用词句
词汇 时间 this morning/afternoon/evening 今天早上/下午/晚上;at dawn 在黎明时分;in the late afternoon在傍晚;on a sunny/rainy day 在一个晴朗的/下雨的日子;at the weekend 在周末;
as usual 像往常一样;all day long 一整天
心情 delighted adj.高兴的;overjoyed adj.欣喜若狂的;upset adj.沮丧的,心烦的;annoyed adj.恼怒的;worried adj.担忧的;relieved adj.感到宽慰的;in high spirits心情高涨;be in a bad mood心情不佳;cheer up振作起来
活动 attend class上课;finish homework完成作业;review lessons复习功课;hang out with
friends和朋友闲逛;help with housework 帮忙做家务;read a novel 读小说;take a walk 散步;prepare for exams 备考
感受 unforgettable adj.难忘的;mean-ingful adj.有意义的;ordinary adj.平凡的;accidentally
adv.偶然地;fortunately adv.幸运的是;unex-pectedly adv.出乎意料地
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句式 开篇 ①Looking back on the day, it was one of those that were neither here nor there.回顾这一天,这是那种平淡无奇的日子之一。
②If I had to sum up today in one word, it would be “...”.如果我必须用一个词来总结今天,那就是“……”。
叙事 ①What started as an ordinary morning took an unexpected turn when...原本一个平凡的早晨,当……时,发生了意想不到的转折。
②The moment that really impressed me was when...真正让我印象深刻的时刻是当……的时候。
感想 ①What happened today has left a deep impression on me.今天发生的事给我留下了深刻的印象。
②Although/Though I was exhausted and sweaty, I had never felt so proud and delighted.虽然我已经精疲力竭,汗流浃背,但我从来没有感到过如此自豪和高兴。
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实战演练
[2026四川省达川中学月考]
假定你是高一年级新生李华,今天你的学校组织了社团招新活动,请用英语写一篇日记,描述你在
参加社团招新活动中发生的故事,内容包含以下三个要点:
1.招新前的心情;2.招新时的经历;3.加入社团后的感受。
注意:1.词数80个左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:club recruitment 社团招新
Tuesday September 24th Fine
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One possible version:
Tuesday September 24th Fine
Our school held a club recruitment activity this morning. Upon knowing it, I was overjoyed and decid-
ed to have a try, because I had always wanted to join the drama club.
When it came to my turn, I felt so nervous that my face turned red, and my palms started sweating, too.
Seeing this, some senior students came to comfort me. After calming down, I gave a performance of my fa-
vorite drama successfully.
Luckily, I was accepted as a member of the drama club, and I couldn't wait to participate in the upcom-
ing activities held by it.
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1.重点词汇
①overjoyed adj.欣喜若狂的
②have a try 试一试
③sweat v.出汗
④comfort v.安慰
⑤calm down 冷静下来
⑥participate in 参加,参与
2.亮点句型
① Upon knowing it , I was overjoyed and decided to have a try, because I had always wanted to join the
drama club.(upon/on doing sth.意为“刚做某事就……”)一得知这件事,我就欣喜若狂,决定去试一试,因
为我一直都想加入戏剧社。
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②When it came to my turn, I felt so nervous that my face turned red, and my palms started sweat-
ing, too.(so...that...引导结果状语从句,意为“如此……以至于……”)轮到我的时候,我紧张得脸都红了,
手心也开始冒汗。
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读后续写微写作
情景导入
老师正在分配小组合作的伙伴,你正在等待分配结果。请写一个语段,描述你当时忐忑不安和紧张
的心情。
思路点拨
等待分配结果时内心忐忑紧张→ 看着同学依次组队,慌张感加剧→ 老师宣布“我”的搭档,心
情由不安转为兴奋→ 满怀信心迎接挑战。
续写语料
心理描写
1.________________n.紧张
2.______________n.好奇心
curiosity
nervousness
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3.____________adj.焦虑的
4.______________n.渴望
5._______________n.不安
6._________adj.冷静的,镇定的
7.______________adj.自信的
8.__________n.恐慌,惊慌
9.____________________期待
动作描写
10._______________________ 深吸一口气
take a deep breath
look forward to
panic
confident
calm
uneasiness
eagerness
anxious
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微型读后续写
Ⅰ.单句写作
1.当老师开始宣读名单时,一阵强烈的紧张感和好奇心席卷了我。
As the teacher began to announce the list, ______ _______ _________ ______ _____________ _______
_________ swept over me.
curiosity
and
nervousness
of
sense
great
a
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归纳 表达情绪、情感的句型
A great sense of+表达情绪情感的名词+floods(充满)/sweeps over(席卷)sb.
表达情绪、情感的名词:
快乐 joy、happiness、delight、excitement
悲伤/绝望 grief、sadness、despair、desperation
愤怒 annoyance、anger
恐惧 fright、panic
惊讶/好奇 surprise、amazement、curiosity
焦虑 anxiety
紧张 nervousness
困惑 confusion
感激 gratitude
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2.我是如此焦虑,以至于能感觉到自己的心在怦怦跳。
I was ______ __________ ________I could feel my heart beating.
that
anxious
so
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3.看着同学们依次组队,我的渴望与不安交织在了一起。
When I watched my classmates _________ ________ _______ ______ ________ , my _________ ________
__________ mixed together.
4.就在压力不断加剧的时候,我突然想到,无论我和谁组队,这都会是一个锻炼合作能力的好机会。
Just as the pressure mounted, it struck me that, no matter who I was teamed with, it would be ______ _________
________ _______ ___________ ______________.
5.我深吸了一口气,努力让自己表现得冷静且自信。
I _________ ______ _________ ___________, trying to appear calm and confident.
breath
deep
a
took
cooperation
practice
to
chance
good
a
uneasiness
and
eagerness
one
by
one
teams
form
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6.当老师念出我的名字和搭档时, 之前的恐慌瞬间转化成了兴奋。
When the teacher read out my name and partner, _______ ___________ _________ ________ ________
____________ in an instant.
7.我满怀信心,期待与我的新搭档——一位聪慧友善的同学——一起完成这项挑战。
Full of confidence, I __________ __________ _______ working with my new partner, ______ _____________
________ _________ ______________, to complete the challenge.
classmate
friendly
and
intelligent
an
to
forward
looked
excitement
into
turned
panic
previous
the
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Ⅱ.连句成篇(注意使用恰当的衔接词)
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