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Part 6 Writing
第1讲 描述运动的基本概念
非正式的电子邮件(提供建议)
写作题目
假如你是李华,你的朋友肖东给你写了一封邮件,说他进入高中以来,感觉学习压力很大,不适应新
的生活和学习环境。现请你用英语给他回一封电子邮件,给他一些建议。
注意:
1.写作词数不少于80个;
2.开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Xiao Dong,
I feel sorry to hear that you are suffering from the great stress._____________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
第1讲 描述运动的基本概念
思路点拨
第1讲 描述运动的基本概念
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1._______________ n.自信
2.______________ adj.自信的
3.__________ adv.在前面,向前
4.______________处理,对付,应付
5._______________……以及……;除……之外(还)
6._____________适应
7.____________________期待,盼望
look forward to
adapt to
as well as
deal with
ahead
confident
confidence
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Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一部分:点明主题——要给对方提些建议帮助他
(1)This situation is not so difficult _____ ________ _________(应付) if you take my advice.
(2)Here are some tips _____ ________ ________(帮助你).
第二部分:适应新环境、缓解压力的具体建议
(3)Taking more exercise can rest your brain ______ _______ ______ ________ _______ _______ ________
(以及增强你的体质).
(4)It's a good way ______ _______ _____________ ______ _____________(对自己有信心).
(5)You should always think that you're _________ ___________ _________ _____ _________(一点一点地
取得进步).
little
by
little
progress
making
yourself
in
confidence
have
to
body
your
up
build
as
well
as
you
help
to
with
deal
to
第1讲 描述运动的基本概念
(6)That way, you will be more confident, and it is _____ ________ ______ __________ _______ _________
_____________(使你的学习进步的关键).
第三部分:希望对方采纳建议,尽快适应
(7)I ______ _________(真的希望) you will find these ideas of great use.
2.句式升级
(8)把句(6)改写成一个含有非限制性定语从句的句子
______________________________________________________________________________________
That way, you will be more confident, which is the key to getting your study improved.
hope
do
improved
study
your
getting
to
key
the
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连句成篇
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写作积累
关于建议信的增分佳句
开头:表达安慰,
给予帮助 ①I'm sorry to learn/know/hear that you are now having trouble/difficulty communicating with others and that you often feel lonely.得知/知道/听说现在你与他人交流有困难,并且你经常感到孤独,我很难过。
②You have asked for my advice on...and I will try to make some suggestions.你向我征求了关于……的建议,我会尽力提出一些建议。
③Here are some tips/suggestions to help you.这里有一些能帮助你的建议。
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主体:分析现状,
提出建议 ①To begin with, tell them you will do voluntary work in your spare time, which won’t
affect your study.首先,告诉他们你将在业余时间做志愿工作,这不会影响你的学习。
②Besides, it's a good chance to communicate with more people, thus helping you
accumulate social experience.此外,这是一个与更多的人交流的好机会,从而帮助你积累社会经验。
结尾:表达希
望采纳建议 ①Please take my advice into consideration and make a final decision.请考虑我的建议,并作出最后的决定。
②I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.我希望你会觉得这些建议很实用/有用/有帮助。
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实战演练
假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校英文报收到一封署名为Chris的高一新生的来信,在信中Chris表
示自己不能适应高中生活,急需一些建议,为了帮助他,请用英语给他写一封回信。内容包括:
1.表示理解并给予安慰;2.多与老师和同学们沟通、交流;3.合理分配时间(如学习、锻炼和休息的时间
等);4.积极参加学校活动。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Chris,
Yours,
Li Jin
第1讲 描述运动的基本概念
Dear Chris,
Hearing from you and learning that you couldn't adapt to your senior high school life, I feel so sorry and re-
ally understand you. Here is my advice.
First of all, communicating with your teachers and classmates is really of great importance. It will be benefi-
cial for you to adapt to the new environment and life. Besides, you should allocate your time reasonably. For
example, do some exercise and have a rest regularly. In addition, you should take part in some school activi-
ties actively through which you can make more friends in senior high.
The above I mentioned are my suggestions. Hope they will be helpful.
Yours,
Li Jin
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