湖南永州市2027届高三一模英语试题

永州市2027年高考第一次模拟考试 英语 命题人：赵博（永州一中） 周昱（祁阳一中） 刘嫦云（蓝山二中) 李建英（道县一中） 审题人：邓旭明（永州市教科院） 注意事项： 1.本试卷共10页，满分150分。考试用时120分钟。考试结束后，将本试卷和答题 卡一并交回。 2.答题前，考生务必将自己的姓名、考生号填写在答题卡上。 3.选出每小题答案后，用铅笔把答题卡上对应题目的答案标号涂黑，如需改动，用橡 皮擦千净后，再选涂其他答案标号，不能答在本试卷上，否则无效。 第一部分听力（共两节，满分30分） 做题时，先将答案标在试卷上。录音内容结束后，你将有两分钟的时间将试卷上的答 案转涂到答题卡上。 第一节（共5小题；每小题1.5分，满分7.5分） 听下面5段录音。每段录音后有一个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最 佳选项。听完每段录音后，你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。每段录 音播放两遍。 1.How does Monica feel these days? A.Excited. B.Worried. C.Calm. 2.When did the man go to Paris? A.Last September. B.无ast December. C.Last July. 3.What are the speakers talking about? A.Their hometown. B.Their holiday plans. C.Their favorite festivals. 4.What is the woman doing? A.Doing some shopping. B.Waiting for her friend. C.Asking for directions. 5.Why does the man make the call? A.To arrange a delivery. B.To check his package information. C.To inform Mrs.Green of a charge. 第二节（共15小题；每小题1.5分，满分22.5分) 听下面5段录音。每段录音后有几个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出 最佳选项。听每段录音前，你将有时间阅读各个小题，每小题5秒钟；听完后，每小题都 有5秒钟的作答时间。每段录音播放两遍。 听下面的录音，回答第6和第7小题。 6.What seems to be Jessica's problem? A.She performs poorly at school. B.She has become more emotional. C.She gets on worse with her classmates. 7.What does Mr.Smith imply about Jessica? A.She needs more strict family rules. B.She acts out to get her parents'attention. C.She is facing common teenage problems. 永州市2027年女 听下面的录音，回答第8至9小题 8.What is the probable relationship between the speakers? A.Close friends. B.Parent and child. C.Writer and reader. 9.Why doesn't the woman write about her life? A.It's too private. B.It's too ordinary. C It's too embarrassing. 听下面的录音，回答第10至12小题 10.What is the man's opinion on fixing environmental damage? A.It's hopeful to prevent further damage. B.It's possible to fix the existing problems. C.It can be fully achieved with small actions. 11.What does the man suggest people do about personal lifestyle? A.Stop driving cars. B.Form practical eco-friendly habits. C.Switch to renewable energy entirely. 12.What does the man think is the biggest problem in the future? A.Shortage of clean water. B.The effect of global warming. C.Lack of environmental awareness. 听下面的录音，回答第13至16小题 13.Why does the man recommend the white e-reader first? A.Because of its cost. B.Because of its storage. C.Because of its appearance. 14.How many books can the black e-reader store? A.15,000. B.17,000. C.25,000. 15.What will the woman most likely do next? A.Try the free trial. B.Choose the cheaper model. C.Use her phone to read books. 16.Where are the speakers? A.At a tech company. B.At a repair center. C.At an electronics shop. 听下面的录音，回答第17至20小题。 17.Where can a going-away party be held? A.At a fancy restaurant.B.At a favorite cafe. C.At a friend's house. 18.What is the speaker's third suggestion? A.Make the guest list. B.Ask for useful gifts. C.Send invitations ahead of time. 19.What is a useful gift according to the speaker? A.A potted plant. B.Packing materials. C.A homemade sweater. 20.What does the speaker mainly talk about? A.How to pack for a move. B.How to pick out the perfect gift C.How to organize a going-away party. 永州市2027年高考第一次模拟考试·英语第2页（共10石、 第二部分 阅读理解（共两节，满分50分) 第一节（共15小题，每小题2.5分，满分37.5分） 阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D)中，选出最佳选项，并在答 题卡上将选项涂黑。 A "I was here"-each generation has its own way of saying it.For today's Chinese youth overseas,that feeling is no longer expressed by holding up a passport,but by holding up a familiar textbook against the very landmarks printed on its cover.Now,let's take a closer look at the landmarks that decorate these textbooks. Big Ben For most young Chinese,Big Ben and the red 地路 double-decker bus stand for Britain,as they appeared on their school English textbook covers.Inspired by these 年回 childhood books,young Chinese initiated a "textbook relay"by the Thames:They hid textbooks in hidden spots and whoever found it could take photos beside real Big Ben and write messages on book margins. The Golden Gate Bridge The Golden Gate Bridge is a suspension bridge 跳 spanning the Golden Gate.It carries vehicular, 量nL转 pedestrian(行人的)and bicycle traffic..Recognized by the American Society of Civil Engineers as one of the Wonders of the Modern World,the bridge is one of the most internationally recognized symbols of San Francisco and California. Pyramids 义务牧向限程标准试验教科书 Chinese tourists in Egypt are visiting the pyramids 须炎 and posing for photos with 7th-grade history textbooks, LISHI turning a "textbook journey"into a popular travel trend. 七年切下0 This phenomenon highlights a deep engagement with history,with some travelers even hiding their textbooks as "treasures"or gifts for others in the stone cracks of the sites. Twelve Apostles The Twelve Apostles is one of Australia's most 英语 famous destinations,famed for its stunning coastal views and attractive rock formations.Their closeness to INM one another has made the site a popular tourist attraction.The formation's name was made official as the Twelve Apostles,after the Apostles of Jesus,to attract more tourists. 永州市2027年高考第一次模拟考试·英语第3页（共10页） 21.How do today's Chinese youth express"I was here"now? A.By taking selfies. B.By holding a passport. C.By visiting landmarks. D.By posing with a textbook. 22.What's the common textbook act at Big Ben and Pyramids? A.Taking photos of books. B.Hiding books for others. C.Writing notes on pages. D.Selling books to tourists. 23.What is the Twelve Apostles known for? A.Pedestrian and bicycle traffic. B.Messages in the.margins. C.A deep engagement with history. D.Coastal scenery and rock structures. B Waters,a 13-year-old boy from Lehi,Utah,became fascinated with 3D printing after watching a YouTube channel about the technology.But he wanted to do more than simply make cool things.He discovered MakeGood,a nonprofit that creates 3D-printed assistive devices for people with disabilities,and found the perfect way to combine his passion with his desire to help others. His summer project was a custom wheelchair designed for a 21-month-old girl.Waters spent roughly 300 hours designing,printing,testing,and constructing the chair.He also made sure it included features that could make a real difference for the child and her family.The wheelchair has pink highlights because pink is the girl's favorite color.It also includes a removable cupholder and table,along with a space on the back where heavier medical equipment can be stored.The footrest and headrest can be adjusted as she grows,while the straps()are made from soft,flexible material for added comfort. Waters said his favorite part of 3D printing is putting all the individual pieces together,and this project gave him plenty of that.He also credits his family for supporting him throughout the process and helping him work through his ideas. His grandmother,Charlotte Waters,hopes the experience will stay with him long after the wheelchair is delivered."We hope he always remembers that the greatest legacy anyone can leave is to make someone else's life better,"she said."His age does not define his ability to make a difference.His character does." Waters hopes to pursue "something techie"when he grows up and plans to continue developing his 3D printing skills so he can help even more people in the future. 24.What motivated Waters to take on the project? A.His desire to practice printing. B.His passion for YouTube videos. C.His interest coupled with kindness. D.His family's tradition of helping others. 25.Which of the following is a feature of the custom wheelchair? A.It is entirely pink. B.It has adjustable parts. C.It is designed mainly for adults. D.It has removable medical equipment. 永州市2027年高考第一次模拟考试·英语第4页(（共10页) 26.What does"the greatest legacy"mean according to Charlotte Waters? A.Personal achievements. B.Technical skills. C.Positive impacts on others. D.Admirable personal qualities. 27.What can be a suitable title for the text? A Print with a Purpose. B.Growing with a Big Dream. C.Family Support,Shared Effort. D.3D Printing,Artistic Creations. 0 El Ninos(厄尔尼诺)，which are a temporary warming of parts of the equatorial Pacific,. affect weather worldwide and increase extreme events,including heat waves,floods and droughts,costing trillions in damage.A new study suggests that El Nifos,the natural climatic chaos agent that occurs regularly and raises global temperatures,are getting stronger because of human-caused climate change. El Ninos are more than 36%stronger than they were before the industrial age began in the mid-1800s,according to a study in Science.In the last 40 years alone,they have jumped 16%, showing that the increase is speeding up.The findings come as a strong El Nifo that formed a couple months ago is forecast to be the biggest on record in coming months. "That's important because strong EI Ninos have much stronger impacts on climate hazards and extremes worldwide,"said lead author Julia Cole.Her study looks back at El Nifios going back 900 years or so.Cole's team took a novel approach by analyzing 29 coral fossils from the Galapagos Islands,with the oldest from around year 1100.By measuring proportions of calcium and other elements and different forms of oxygen,they calculated seawater temperatures.The temperature curve looks like a hockey stick,consistent with global warming. An El Nino's strength is determined by measuring water temperature in a region of the central Pacific and comparing a three-month average to normal.The most recent weekly figure is at 2.7 degrees Celsius above normal and is expected to keep growing for another two to four months.Scientists have long theorized that global warming would strengthen El Ninos,but observational records only go back about 75 years,previously too incomplete to show a trend. The new finding has caused disagreement.Some experts regard coral records as trustworthy proof that El Niiios grow stronger as the planet warms.Critics,however,argue that the chemical signals in corals reflect general ocean warming instead of stronger El Nino cycles,and recent local data fails to back up the claim.Cole notes that natural ups-and-downs between massive and mild El Nifos may distort (short-term statistics. Despite the academic argument,all scientists reach one agreement:we must cut fossil-fuel use,since no simple solution exists to weaken destructive El Ninos in the future. 28.What does the new Science study find about El Ninos? A.They are gaining intensity. B.They occur more frequently. C.They give rise to most global disasters. D They are unrelated to natural climate shifts. 永州市2027年高考第一次模拟考试·英语第5页（共10页) 29.What does paragraph 3 mainly talk about? A.The research background. B.The research process. C.The research significance. D.The research objective. 30.What is the major argument against the study? A.El Ninos have stayed unchanged for centuries. B.Local data is more trustworthy than fossil data. C.Coral fossils cannot reflect ancient ocean conditions. D.The study mistakes ocean warming for El Nino change. 31.What is the main purpose of the last paragraph? A.To sound an alarm. B.To offer a solution. C.To present a finding. D,To clarify a debate. D In recent years,we've have witnessed a return of interest in products and culture from before the internet,as shown by rising sales of vinyl records,CDs,books,and board games. While one might assume these trends are primarily driven by middle-aged and older adults looking to revisit their youth,young people-particularly Gen Z-are a major force behind this retro revival(复古复兴). To understand the psychology behind this phenomenon,researchers at the Human Flourishing Lab partnered with a cultural insights agency.Their analysis revealed that Gen Z isn't just passively consuming historical nostalgia();they are actively mining the past to enrich their lives and plan for the future.For instance,one social media user,expressed a desire to create physical photo albums to share with visitors,just as previous generations did.Their interest in old-school technology appears to be driven,in part,by a desire to dial back their digital engagement and foster a greater appreciation for offline living. To measure these observations,the team subsequently conducted a nationally representative survey of over 2,000 U.S.adults.We found that most Gen Z adults feel nostalgic for eras before they were born (68%),are attracted to their media,styles,hobbies,and traditions (73%),and believe that new technologies should incorporate their ideas and design elements (78%). Moreover,about two-thirds of Gen Z report that exploring past eras helps them deal with stress about modern life (65%)or anxiety about the future (66%). This phenomenon is not unique to Gen Z.Millennials and Gen Xers also report significant levels of historical nostalgia,while older generations show less interest in eras that before them. What distinguishes Gen Z,however,is that those who grew up with smartphones and social media are increasingly curious about what came before the digital revolution. Rather than signaling a retreat from technology,Gen Z's embrace of historical nostalgia appears to reflect a more thoughtful and active approach to digital living. 32.What can we learn about the retro revival? A.Older adults lead the new trend. B.Young generations fuel it greatly C Its products have seen declining sales. It mainly involves e-books and games. 永州市2027年高考第一次模拟考试·英语 33.What does the underlined word"dial back"in paragraph 2 mean? A.Maintain. B.Increase. C.Reduce. D.Understand. 34.What can be inferred from the survey results? A.73%show preference for new technology. B.68%attach less attention to the past eras. C.Nostalgia relieves Gen Z's unease. D.Nostalgia brings about new challenges. 35.Which of the following best describes Gen Z according to the passage? A.Mindful. B.Passive. C.Obsessive. D.Trendy. 第二节（共5小题；每小题2.5分，满分12.5分) 根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。 Enter Artificial Intelligence (AI),a powerhouse of innovation in the fitness universe.AI is not just a buzzword;it's a game-changer ready to revolutionize our exercise routines.Imagine a trainer who knows your body better than you do.It adapts your workout plan instantly,using your performance,mood,and energy as guides.36:it's the reality that AI is bringing to our gym floors and living rooms. The journey of technology in the fitness industry began with basic tracking devices.37: think of basic pedometers and heart rate monitors in the early days.These devices were revolutionary then,providing athletes with crucial workout data. 38 Among them,the real game changer was the introduction of Al,which began to make its mark in the early 2000s.This era saw more advanced devices and software that learned from user data to give personalized workout and health tips. A significant milestone came with AI-powered fitness apps and wearables that could track health metrics like steps,sleep patterns,and stress levels.These tools gathered data and interpreted it to provide users with insights on progress. Another critical development was the introduction of virtual personal trainers.Powered by Al,these trainers could adapt workouts in real time,pushing users when they detected higher energy levels or lowering the intensity when necessary.39. The journey is a tale of innovation and evolution.Today,AI in digital fitness has reached a new level.It can predict injuries by analyzing movement patterns.It also recommends exercises to prevent them.40.This progression,from simple tracking to predictive coaching,shows AI's impact on fitness.It has turned the industry into one that is more interactive,personalized, and safer. A.The devices offer users monitoring data B.This isn't a scene from a futuristic movie C.AI respond to our real-time physical changes D.Initially,technology's role in fitness was simple E.As technology advanced,so did its applications in fitness F.This advancement keeps fitness enthusiasts safer during their workouts G.Such human-like guidance offers people a better customized workout experience 永州市2027年高考第一次模拟考试·英语第7页（共10页) 第三部分英语知识运用（共两节，满分30分) 第一节完形填空（共15小题：每小题1分，满分15分） 阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中选出可以填入空白处 的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。 It was a 1969 Mustang Mach 1,Daniel Allen would tell his six boys,the best car he'd ever owned. Though the car 41 his youth with joy,he traded it away for something more 42 decades ago-a vehicle more suitable for a growing household. Every time Mr.Allen told the story,Shane,the youngest son,was listening 43.Shane happened to grow up with a (n)44 for classic cars as well,and it became 45 for the pair to attend Father's Day car shows together,where they'd look at Mustangs and 46 the one that got away. Earlier this year,Shane 47 a white Mach 1 from 1969 just like how his father had always described it.He 48 the opportunity to fulfill his dad's dream of driving that same car again. 49 his own car away,Shane wanted to surprise his dad with this Father's Day 50. Soon,on their habitual 51 to a Father's Day car show,Daniel saw a white Mach 1 sitting in the lot,with a 52 label hanging from the mirror marked "Daniel".Joking,he said,"Wheret are my keys?"A moment later,Shane handed him the keys and told him to fire it up.Daniel then broke down and 53 his son. Shane said that as a man he recognized the incredible 54 Daniel made to serve his family,and was only too happy to have the opportunity to make some sort of 55 of that debt. 41.A.covered B.colored C.repiaced D.mixed 42.A.precious B.expensive C.practical D.attractive 43.A.attentively B.frequently C.secretly D.nervously 44.A.demand B.option C.fondness D.concern 45.A.vital B.extraordinary C.fantastic D.routine 46.A.picture B.predict C.evaluate D.recall 47.A.repaired B.spotted C.polished D.painted 48.A.jumped at B.waited for C.sought for D.opened up 49.A.Trading B.Throwing C.Putting D.Taking 50.A.wish B.card C.present D.promise 51.A.reaction B.exposure C.visit D.adaptation 52.A.price B.name C.luggage D.date 53.A.hugged B.encouraged C.supported D.comforted 54.A.comments B.preparations C.suggestions D.sacrifices 55.A.point B.repayment C.sense D.assessment 第二节（共10小题：每小题1.5分，满分15分） 阅读下面材料，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确式。 EDINBURGH-Minutes before going on stage on the evening of August 12,Han Zaifen sat before a dressing-room mirror.singing softly to herself as the final56 (touch)were put on her makeup. That night,the Anhui Zaifen Huangmei Xiqu Art Theatre,led by its director Han,57xstage) The Lady Prince Consort at the Edinburgh Festival Fringe,marking the first appearance of Huangmei xigu at the event. The classic opera tells the story of Feng Suzhen,58 young woman who dresses herself as a man and enters the imperial examination to save her beloved.She unexpectedly finishes first and is chosen by the emperor as husband for his daughter,59 (set)off a series of twists before her true identity is revealed. Having performed the opera for over.four decades,Han remains convinced that its core themes hold contemporary 60 (rerevant)."Whether you're a young woman or a young man, you need the courage 61 (hoxdi)your ground when things get tough and to go after the life you truly want,"she says. That message resonated(产生共鸣)with Monika Owczarek,a Polish resident of Edinburgh, who says Feng's storw reminds her62.Mulan,the legendary heroine."Both women refuse to accept the limits 63 (place)on them,"she says. "We did not share a language,but the humor and emotions still connected us 64(deeply) than words ever could, made me feel that Huangmei xigu can touch audiences anywhere,"says Wu Meilian,a Plum Blossom Award-winning actress. 第四部分写作（共两节，满分40分） 第一节（满分15分） 假定你是李华，目前在伦敦学习，得知当地文化中心正在征集关于中秋节活动的意见， 现有Hanfu Charm,Poetic Mid-Autumn和Mooncake Crafting三个活动供大家选择。请给负 责人写一封邮件，内容包括： (1)你的选择： (2)说明理由。 注意：(1)写作词数应为80个左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Sir or Madam, I am Li Hua,a Chinese student studying in London. Yours, LiHua 永州市2027年高考第一次模拟考试·英语第9页（共10页) 第二节（满分25分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Last summer,a disastrous wildfire swept through our neighborhood in Los Angeles, destroying our house and thousands of others.My husband,our two children-Rummy,14,and Willa,12-and I lost almost everything. Months later,we returned to see what was left.The neighborhood lay flat and empty.Only chimneys,walls,and our strangely surviving garage remained.Burnt trees stood like ghosts. There were no dogs,hardly any birds.People wander silently down the middle of the empty streets. For my children,the loss was terrible-not just our home,but the trees they had climbed, their favorite restaurants,their friends'houses.They became quiet and sad.I worried about how they would ever get through this. Then an image came to me:white-and-yellow daisies covering the blackened hills.I remembered Miss Rumphius,a children's book about a woman who scattered flower seeds everywhere she went.An idea struck me.I told the kids,"What if we spread wildflower seeds in the ruined places?We could bring color back." We decided to give it a try.If it worked,maybe we could share the idea with others in the community who were also struggling to find hope.I found a simple recipe for "seed bombs"-balls made of seeds,soil,and clay.In the yard of our rental house,we made our first set of seed balls.It was messy but fun.Rolling the sticky mixture between our hands felt strangely relaxing.We dried them carefully,wondering if anything would actually grow. On a cloudy summer day,we returned to our old address.The kids stood on the brick doorstep-the only thing left of our front door-and threw seed bombs into the empty space. Then we climbed down into the hole that had been our living room,where we had spent every Christmas.We placed a pile of seed bombs on the bare ground and crushed them with our boots, right where the hearth(炉灶)used to be. We waited,hoping for rain to come soon so that the seeds could sprout ) 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1:For the longest time,nothing happened. Paragraph 2:The green sprouts changed everything for our family. 永州市2027年高考第一次模拟考试·英语第10页（共10页)永州市2027年高考第一次模拟考试 英语参考答案及评分标准 第一部分听力 1-5.ABBCC 6-10.BCABA 11-15.BABAA 16-20.CBCBC 第二部分阅读理解 21-23.DBD 24-27.CBCA 28-31.ABDA 32-35.BCCA 36-40.BDEGF 第三部分语言知识运用 第一节完形填空 41-45.BCACD 46-50.DBAAC 51-55.CBADB 第二节语法填空 56.touches 57.staged 58.a 59.setting 60.relevance 61.to hold 62.of 63.placed 64.more deeply 65.which 第四部分写作 第一节： Dear Sir or Madam, I am Li Hua,a Chinese student studying in London.Having learned that you are collecting opinions on Mid-Autumn activities,I would like to recommend Mooncake Crafting as my top choice. My reasons are as follows.First,making mooncakes is highly interactive and requires no language barrier,making it suitable for all ages and backgrounds.Participants can not only enjoy the fun of hands-on creation but also taste their own works,which leaves a lasting impression.Moreover,compared with Hanfu Charm or Poetic Mid-Autumn,this activity is more accessible to local Londoners who may know little about Chinese culture,thus effectively sparking their interest. I sincerely hope my suggestion can be of help.Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 第二节： Para 1: For the longest time,nothing happened.Day after day,we checked the lot,but all we saw was bare,blackened earth.Rummy stopped asking about the seeds.Willa stopped checking the ground when we passed by.Their disappointment hung heavy in the air.I tried to cheer them up,saying,"We just need to be patient."But even I wasn't sure anymore.Weeks turned into a month,and the empty lot remained empty.Then one evening in October,the sky finally darkened.Rain poured down,soaking the parched earth.A few days later,we drove by our old lot again-and there it was:a tiny patch of green pushing up through the ash,right where our fireplace used to be. 永州市2027年高考第一次模拟考试·英语参考答案及评分标准第1页（共5页） Para 2: The green sprouts changed everything for our family.Rummy's eyes lit up like I hadn't seen in months.He called his friends,his voice full of excitement:"They're growing!" Willa started checking the sprouts every morning before breakfast,carefully watering them. As more flowers bloomed-white and yellow-we knew it was time to keep our promise. We made more seed bombs and shared them with neighbors who had also lost their homes. Soon,everyone was planting together,turning the gray ruins into a garden.Standing among the flowers with my children,I realized something:the seeds hadn't just brought color back to the land.They had brought hope back to all of us. 三、书面表达 第一节应用文写作评分标准 档次 描述 覆盖所有必要内容。 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 第五档 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。 (13-15分) 具备较强的语言运用能力。 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 覆盖所有必要内容。 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 第四档 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。 (10-12分) 应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 达到了预期的写作目的。 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 第三档 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。 (7-9分) 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。 语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。 第二档 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。 (4-6分) 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。 第一档 语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。 (1-3分) 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。 永州市2027年高考第一次模拟考试·英语参考答案及评分标准第2页（共5页) 第二节读后续写评分标准 档次 描述 与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。 第五档 内容丰富。 (21-25) 语法结构和词汇丰富官、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达。 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。 与所给短文融洽度较高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理。 第四档 内容比较丰富。 (16-20) -所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但不影响意义表达。 -比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。 与所给短文关系较为密切，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接。 第三档 写出了若干有关内容。 (11-15) 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求，虽有一些错误，但不影响意义表达。 应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。 与所给短文有一定的关系，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接。 第二档 写出了一些有关内容。 (6-10) 结构单调，词汇项目有限，有些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影响了意义的表达。 较少使用语句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少连贯性。 与所提供短文和开头语的衔接较差。 第一档 产出内容太少。 (1-5) 语法结构单调，词汇项目很有限，有较多语法结构和词汇错误，严重影响了意义表达。 缺乏语句间的连接成分，全文内容不连贯。 0 白卷、内容太少无法评判或所写内容与所提供内容无关。 应用文写作评分细则： 1. 本题总分为15分，按5个档次给分。 2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡 量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3. 词数少于60和多于100的，从总分中减去2分。 4.评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性 及上下文的连贯性。 5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以 考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 6. 如书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 读后续写评分细则： 一、评分原则 严格依据与原文故事衔接、续写情节合理性、主题契合度、语言表达、篇章结构五 个维度综合评分。 主题可以围绕“灾难后重建希望、用行动传递温暖、生命力的复苏、社区互助”等 核心要素展开。 续写词数要求为150词左右，字数明显偏少或偏多将酌情扣分。 永州市2027年高考第一次模拟考试·英语参考答案及评分标准第3页（共5页) 二、各档次评分标准 一档（21一25分)优秀 1.情节与衔接 两段续写与上文“撒下种子后等待下雨”紧密衔接，逻辑自然。第一段能合理描写 等待过程中的失落、坚持，以及雨后发芽的惊喜；第二段能顺利延伸到家庭变化（如孩 子重拾笑容、主动照料)、社区分享种子、共同种植等情节，选择其中一个即可。细节 丰富：有天气变化、心理活动、动作描写（如反复查看、浇水、欢呼），氛围从压抑转 向温暖，与原文伤感、期待的语气高度一致。 2.主题与内容 紧扣“种子唤醒希望、生命战胜废墟、爱与分享”等主题，情感真挚。第二段能合 理升华（如种子不仅带来色彩，更带来邻里间的联结和整个社区的重生），能呼应原文 中“想分享给社区”的伏笔。 3.语言表达 用词准确丰富，句式多样（如非谓语、复合句、比喻等）。几乎没有语法、拼写或 搭配错误，行文流畅自然。 4.结构与连贯 两段之间过渡顺畅，从“无动静”到“发芽”再到“改变一切”层层推进，逻辑清 晰。词数达标，篇章完整。 二档(16一20分)良好 1.情节与衔接 情节基本合理，能完成“等待→发芽→家庭变化”的主线，与上文衔接较自然。有 必要的动作或心理描写，但细节不够丰富（如缺少天气描写、孩子具体反应、社区互动 等)。 2.主题与内容 主题明确，围绕希望、家庭、社区展开，无重大偏离。第二段能提到分享种子或邻 居参与，但内容较简略，升华不够充分。 3.语言表达 语言基本准确，句式有一定变化，存在少量用词或语法错误，但不影响理解。 4.结构与连贯 结构较完整，两段过渡基本顺畅，词数基本符合要求。 5. 三档(11一15分)中等 1.情节与衔接 永州市2027年高考第一次模拟考试·英语参考答案及评分标准第4页（共5页) 能完成“种子发芽”基本情节，但与上文衔接略显生硬，缺乏等待过程中的情绪铺 垫。细节描写较少，多为简单叙述，缺少从失落转向惊喜的层次感。 2.主题与内容 主题基本正确（如“植物生长带来快乐”），但情感表达较单薄，未能充分体现“希 望”和“分享”的深意。第二段内容简短，与社区关联弱，未能呼应原文伏笔。 3.语言表达 词汇、句式较基础，重复较多。存在一些语法错误，但不影响整体理解。 4.结构与连贯 结构较松散，过渡不够自然，词数略有不足或偏多。 四档(6一10分)较差 1.情节与衔接 情节不完整，例如只简单描述“发芽了”但未涉及家庭反应，或未提及社区分享。 与上文“等待下雨”衔接突兀，逻辑漏洞明显。 2.主题与内容 偏离“希望与重建”主题，内容空洞，与原文的火灾背景关联很弱。 3.语言表达 语法、用词错误较多，句式单调，部分语句难以理解。 4.结构与连贯 段落混乱，缺乏衔接，词数明显不足。 五档(0一5分)差 1.情节与内容 完全跑题，与原文火灾、种花、家庭失去家园等情节无关。未完成写作，或内容极 少、抄袭原文。 2.语言表达 语言错误极多，无法读懂，不成篇章。 3.结构与词数 无结构，词数严重不足。 永州市2027年高考第一次模拟考试·英语参考答案及评分标准第5页（共5页）