2027届安徽高三英语读后续写：梦想的力量 清单

2027届安徽高三英语读后续写背诵 · 梦想的力量 梦想的力量｜01 一个念头住下来 适用情境：写一个挥之不去的念头——它不该在，可它一直在。 1. It started as a sentence I told nobody. 它开始于一句我没告诉任何人的话。 2. Then it began to come back on its own. 然后它自己开始回来找我。 3. In maths lessons. On the bus. Just before sleep. 数学课上。公交车上。刚要睡着的时候。 4. I tried putting it away, and it would not stay put. 我试着把它收起来，它不肯待在原处。 5. The trouble with an idea is that it does not need your permission. 念头的麻烦在于：它不需要你同意。 6. I wrote it on the back of an envelope and threw the envelope away. 我把它写在信封背面，又把信封扔了。 7. Two days later I found it in my coat pocket, unfolded. 两天后我在外套口袋里找到它，是展开的。 8. Some things arrive quietly and then refuse to leave. 有些东西是悄悄来的，然后就不肯走了。 9. Nobody knew about it, and still it took up a whole corner of my mind. 没人知道它，它却占了我心里的一整块地方。 10. That was the first sign: I had stopped choosing it. It had started choosing me. 那是第一个信号：已经不是我选它了，是它开始选我。 搭配积累 come back on its own（自己回来） refuse to leave（不肯走） take up a corner of one’s mind（占住心里一块地方） 串联示范 It started as a sentence I told nobody, and then it began to come back on its own. In maths lessons, on the bus, just before sleep. Some things arrive quietly and then refuse to leave. 使用要点：写“念头”不要写“我立志要……”，要写它不受控制地反复出现——“不需要你同意”“不肯待在原处”这类拟人化，比发誓有力得多。 梦想的力量｜02 它让人熬得过枯燥 适用情境：写日复一日的重复里，那个念头起的作用。 1. Nobody tells you how much of it is simply repetition. 没人告诉你，这里面有多少只是重复。 2. The same twenty minutes, the same mistakes, the same evening. 同样的二十分钟，同样的错，同样的晚上。 3. On Thursday I could not remember why I had started. 到周四，我已经想不起当初为什么开始。 4. So I wrote the reason on a card and put it where I would see it. 我就把理由写在卡片上，放在看得见的地方。 5. That is the whole trick: keep the reason in front of you. 诀窍就这一条：让理由一直在眼前。 6. The work did not become easier. I became more patient with it. 活儿没有变容易，是我对它更有耐心了。 7. A dream is not a feeling. It is a thing you do in bad weather. 梦想不是一种感觉，是坏天气里你还要做的事。 8. By the tenth week the routine had stopped needing encouragement. 到第十周，这套流程已经不需要打气了。 9. What had been effort became habit, and habit needed no speech. 曾经要用力的，变成了习惯，而习惯不需要演讲。 10. That is what the idea gave me: something to do on the days I did not believe in it. 这就是那个念头给我的：在我不信它的日子里，还有事可做。 搭配积累 keep the reason in front of you（让理由一直在眼前） in bad weather（在坏天气里） something to do on the days I did not believe in it（不信它的时候还有事可做） 串联示范 Nobody tells you how much of it is simply repetition. On Thursday I could not remember why I had started, so I wrote the reason on a card. A dream is not a feeling; it is a thing you do in bad weather. 使用要点：写枯燥不要写“很辛苦”，要写重复的**具体内容**（同样的二十分钟、同样的错）。“梦想是坏天气里还要做的事”是全册题眼句之一。 梦想的力量｜03 它把不相干的人连在一起 适用情境：写因为同一个念头而认识的人。 1. She sat two rows behind me for a year and we never spoke. 她在我后面两排坐了一年，我们没说过话。 2. Then we both turned up at the same meeting, on the same errand. 然后我们在同一次会上碰见，为同一件事来的。 3. We found out we had been working on the same idea separately. 我们发现各自在做同一件事。 4. Nobody had told her to come, and nobody had told me. 没人叫她来，也没人叫我来。 5. That is how the group started: two people, one table, no plan. 小组就是这么开始的：两个人，一张桌子，没有计划。 6. The third one arrived the following week with a notebook. 第三个是下周来的，带着一个本子。 7. We did not agree about much, which turned out to be useful. 我们很多事都不同意，后来证明这有用。 8. What held us together was not friendship; it was the same question. 把我们拴在一起的不是交情，是同一个问题。 9. Years later I can still name the day we met, and none of us celebrated it. 多年后我还能说出那天，我们谁也没为它庆祝过。 10. An idea is a place where strangers become the people who know. 一个念头就是一个地方，陌生人在这里变成了解你的人。 搭配积累 turn up at the same meeting（在同一次会上碰见） on the same errand（为同一件事） the same question（同一个问题） 串联示范 She sat two rows behind me for a year and we never spoke. Then we both turned up at the same meeting, on the same errand. That is how the group started: two people, one table, no plan. 使用要点：“不是交情，是同一个问题”——把关系的原因写成共同的问题而非感情，比“我们成了好朋友”更高级。 梦想的力量｜04 它让人敢说平时不敢说的话 适用情境：写因为这件事而第一次公开发言、公开表态。 1. I had never spoken in front of more than three people. 我从没在超过三个人面前讲过话。 2. But this was not about me; it was about the thing itself. 但这不是关于我，是关于这件事本身。 3. When you are speaking for something else, your voice behaves. 当你替别的东西说话时，你的声音是听话的。 4. I stood up, said four sentences, and sat down. 我站起来，说了四句，坐下。 5. My hands were still shaking, and it did not matter. 手还在抖，但这不重要。 6. Somebody wrote down what I had said. 有人把我说的记了下来。 7. By the next morning not one line of it had stayed with me. 到第二天早上，我一句都没记住。 8. That is the strange part: nervousness and usefulness can happen at once. 奇怪的地方就在这儿：紧张和有用可以同时发生。 9. I have spoken many times since, and none of it was as hard. 后来我讲过很多次，没有一次这么难。 10. An idea gives you something to say, and that is most of the courage. 一个念头给了你话可说，而勇气大部分就在这里。 搭配积累 speak for something else（替别的东西说话） your voice behaves（声音是听话的） nervousness and usefulness at once（紧张与有用同时发生） 串联示范 I had never spoken in front of more than three people. But this was not about me; it was about the thing itself. I stood up, said four sentences, and sat down. An idea gives you something to say, and that is most of the courage. 使用要点：写勇气不要写“我不再害怕”，要写害怕与有用同时发生——“手还在抖，但这不重要”比“我变勇敢了”真实得多。 梦想的力量｜05 它第一次被别人看见 适用情境：写第一次得到真正认可的那一下。 1. For eleven months nobody had asked me about it. 十一个月里没人问过我这件事。 2. Then a teacher stopped me in the corridor and used the word properly. 然后有位老师在走廊叫住我，用的是那个词的本义。 3. She said it the way you say something you have read about, not something you are humouring. 她说的时候，像在说一件她真读到过的事，不是在哄你。 4. I have forgotten most of that term. I remember the corridor. 那个学期我大多忘了，但记得那条走廊。 5. Being seen is not the same as being praised. 被看见和被表扬不是一回事。 6. Praise tells you what people think. Being seen tells you that it is real. 表扬告诉你别人怎么想；被看见告诉你是真的。 7. After that I worked differently, though nothing else had changed. 那之后我做得不一样了，虽然别的什么都没变。 8. It was not the reward that helped. It was the sentence she used. 帮我的不是奖励，是她用的那个说法。 9. One person taking it seriously was enough for a year. 有一个人当真，就够撑一年。 10. Nobody had told me that a single sentence could do that. 没人告诉过我，一句话能有这个作用。 搭配积累 use the word properly（用那个词的本义） being seen vs being praised（被看见与被表扬） take it seriously（当真） 串联示范 For eleven months nobody had asked me about it. Then a teacher stopped me in the corridor and used the word properly. Being seen is not the same as being praised. One person taking it seriously was enough for a year. 使用要点：“被看见 ≠ 被表扬”是本节的立意。写认可不要写颁奖台，写有人用对了一个词——细节越小，力量越大。 梦想的力量｜06 它也会伤到最亲近的人 适用情境：写因为专注这件事而忽略家人朋友的那一段，以及后来的弥补。 1. My mother asked what I was doing. I said I was busy, which was true and useless. 我妈问我在做什么。我说我在忙——这话是真的，但没用。 2. It was not nothing. It was just not explainable at seven in the morning. 那不是“没什么”，只是早上七点讲不清。 3. I stopped going to my cousin’s on Sundays. 我不再去表哥家了，那是周日的惯例。 4. Nobody complained, which was worse than complaining. 没人抱怨，这比抱怨更难受。 5. For two months I was in the same house as my family and somewhere else entirely. 有整整两个月，我和家人同住一屋，心思却在别处。 6. My father put a cup of tea next to me and said nothing about the papers. 我爸在我旁边放下一杯茶，一个字没提那些纸。 7. That cup was the closest anyone came to saying it out loud. 那杯茶，是最接近“说出来”的一次。 8. When I finally explained, it took ten minutes and my voice was wrong the whole time. 等我终于解释，只用了十分钟，全程声音都不对。 9. He said he had known since the first Sunday. 他说从第一个周日就知道了。 10. Whatever you are chasing, it is spending someone else’s patience. 不管你在追什么，花的都是别人的耐心。 搭配积累 worse than complaining（比抱怨更难受） somewhere else entirely（心思完全在别处） spend someone else’s patience（花别人的耐心） 串联示范 I stopped going to my cousin’s on Sundays. Nobody complained, which was worse than complaining. My father put a cup of tea next to me and said nothing about the papers. Whatever you are chasing, it is spending someone else’s patience. 使用要点：这是全册唯一一节写“代价”——读后续写最忌全程正能量。写出对亲近者的亏欠，情节立刻有了厚度，也更像真的。 梦想的力量｜07 它在最差的时候没有走 适用情境：写失败之后，那个念头仍然在。 1. The results came out on a Tuesday and I read them standing up. 结果周二出来，我是站着看的。 2. I had worked eleven months for a number on a page. 我为一张纸上的一个数字干了十一个月。 3. For a week I did not open the folder. 有一个星期我没打开那个文件夹。 4. On the eighth day I opened it for no reason at all. 第八天，我毫无理由地把它打开了。 5. Nothing in it had changed. I had expected it to. 里面的东西一点没变，我本以为会变。 6. That was the moment I understood it had never been about winning. 就在那一刻我明白，这事从来不是为了赢。 7. What I had built in those months was not a result. It was a capacity. 那几个月里我建起来的不是一个结果，是一种能力。 8. Results can be taken away. That cannot. 结果能被拿走，那个不能。 9. So I started again on the ninth day, with no announcement. 于是第九天我重新开始，没跟谁说。 10. The idea had stayed through the worst of it. That is what made it mine. 在我最差的时候它没走。这就是它变成我的东西的原因。 搭配积累 for a number on a page（为纸上的一个数字） a result vs a capacity（结果与能力） with no announcement（没跟谁说） 串联示范 The results came out on a Tuesday and I read them standing up. For a week I did not open the folder. Then I understood it had never been about winning. What I had built was not a result; it was a capacity. 使用要点：“结果能被拿走，那个不能”是本节的题眼。写失败不写“我很难过”，写重新打开文件夹的第八天——动作一出现，情绪自然成立。 梦想的力量｜08 它给了日子一个坐标 适用情境：写平凡的日子因为这件事而有了方向感。 1. Before it, my weeks had no shape. Monday was like Saturday, only louder. 在那之前，我的周是没有形状的。周一和周六一样，只是更吵。 2. Now there were three evenings I did not give away to anything else. 现在有三个晚上我不会让给别的事。 3. A timetable is a way of saying what matters. 一张时间表，就是在说明什么重要。 4. I stopped explaining why I could not come. People learned. 我不再解释为什么来不了，大家也就知道了。 5. The bus ride home became the best part of the day. 回家的公交成了一天里最好的部分。 6. It was not excitement. It was more like having somewhere to be. 那不是兴奋，更像是有个地方可去。 7. Ordinary days stopped being a waste of time. 平常的日子不再是浪费时间了。 8. When everything else was uncertain, this was the fixed point. 别的都不确定时，它是那个定点。 9. That is what a dream actually does: it arranges your week. 梦想真正做的事，是安排你的星期。 10. You do not need to reach it for it to hold you steady. 它不必实现，就已经能让你稳住。 搭配积累 have no shape（没有形状） give away an evening（把晚上让出去） the fixed point（那个定点） 串联示范 Before it, my weeks had no shape. Now there were three evenings I did not give away. That is what a dream actually does: it arranges your week. You do not need to reach it for it to hold you steady. 使用要点：“梦想真正做的事，是安排你的星期”——把宏大的词落到作息上，是这一节最容易被记住的写法，也是本册金句线之一。 梦想的力量｜09 有一天你发现它变了 适用情境：写目标悄悄换了，而人没换。 1. Somewhere in the third year the goal stopped being the goal. 到第三年某个时候，那个目标不再是目标了。 2. I still wanted it, but I no longer needed it. 我还是想要它，但不再需要它了。 3. The thing I had started for had become the reason I kept going, which is not the same. 当初开始的理由变成了继续下去的理由——这不是一回事。 4. I noticed this on an ordinary evening, doing the work badly. 我是在一个平常的晚上发现的，那天做得还很糟。 5. Nobody warns you that a wish can change shape while you are holding it. 没人提醒你，愿望在你手里的时候会变形。 6. For a while I was afraid I had lost the original feeling. 有一阵我怕自己丢了最初那种感觉。 7. Then I understood that the feeling had not gone. It had moved into the hands. 后来我明白感觉没丢，它挪到手上了。 8. It used to live in imagining. Now it lives in doing. 它以前住在想象里，现在住在干活里。 9. That is not a smaller version of the dream. It is the settled form. 这不是梦想缩水了，这是它落定的样子。 10. Ten years later I am still doing it, and I cannot fully explain why. 十年后我还在做，而我说不清为什么。 搭配积累 change shape（变形） move into the hands（挪到手上） the settled form（落定的样子） 串联示范 I still wanted it, but I no longer needed it. The thing I had started for had become the reason I kept going, which is not the same. It used to live in imagining; now it lives in doing. 使用要点：“以前住在想象里，现在住在干活里”——写成长的高级手法是同一个词的位移，而不是换一个更大的词。 梦想的力量｜10 它最终留下了什么 适用情境：结尾段——写结果之外真正留下的东西。 1. I did not get the thing I had written down at fifteen. 十五岁写下的那个东西，我没得到。 2. I got something else, and it took years to notice. 我得到了别的东西，很多年后才发觉。 3. A way of working. A tolerance for being bad at something. 一种做事的方法。一种容忍自己做得差的能力。 4. Two friends who would still answer at midnight. 两个半夜还会回你消息的朋友。 5. The knowledge that I can stay with a thing for years. 一种“我能长期守着一件事”的确信。 6. None of it is on the certificate, because certificates are for the other kind. 这些都不在证书上，因为证书是给另一种东西准备的。 7. What a dream leaves is mostly a person, slightly rearranged. 梦想留下的，大多是一个被稍稍改写过的人。 8. The plan failed, and the years were not wasted. Both are true. 计划失败了，那几年没白过。两件都是真的。 9. I would not trade the attempt for a safer decade. 我不会用这一次尝试去换安稳的十年。 10. You do not have to reach it. You have to be changed by it. 你不必抵达它，你只要被它改写。 搭配积累 a tolerance for being bad at something（容忍自己做得差） slightly rearranged（被稍稍改写） be changed by it（被它改写） 串联示范 I did not get the thing I had written down at fifteen. I got something else, and it took years to notice. The plan failed, and the years were not wasted. Both are true. You do not have to reach it; you have to be changed by it. 使用要点：结尾用“两件都是真的”这种并列承认，比一味升华更可信；末句“你只要被它改写”为全册收束。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $