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专题13 读后续写
(一)
(25-26高一上·江苏射阳陈洋中学·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I never thought my father’s job could change my life so much. One evening he came home and told us his company was sending him to another city. At first, I didn’t worry, thinking it might be a short trip or just a small change. But then he added that because he and Mom would both be very busy, I would have to go to a boarding (寄宿) school. The word “boarding” made me unhappy. It meant leaving my neighborhood, my old school, and most of all, my best friend June.
June and I grew up together. We rode bikes in the summer, shared secrets at night, and laughed until our stomachs hurt. When I told her about the move, she tried to smile. “It’s okay,” she said quickly. “We’ll call every weekend. We’ll always be best friends,” she added. I wanted to believe her, so I agreed, holding on to her promise. Still, deep inside, a small voice raised doubts: Would things really stay the same once I left?
The new school was nothing like home. The buildings were big, and the students all were friendly, but I still missed home and June. At Saturday night, I sat on my dormitory (学生宿舍) bed waiting for June’s call. At first, we talked a lot, but soon our calls grew shorter. Sometimes she didn’t answer right away. When she did, she often talked about a new student named Emily. “Emily is so cool,” June said once, laughing through the phone. I forced myself to laugh too, but inside I felt hurt.
I told myself I didn’t care, but the truth was that I cared too much. I imagined Emily taking my place, walking beside June, and telling her jokes that used to be mine. I grew jealous (妒忌的). Soon I stopped answering her calls. I left her texts unread. At night, I cried quietly into my pillow, telling myself June didn’t need me anymore.
注意:
(1) 续写词数应为150个左右;
(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One Saturday morning, I heard my name called outside the dormitory.
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The next afternoon, I saw June off at the train station.
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(二)
(25-26高一上·江苏南京金陵中学·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Maya Rodriguez was a quiet girl who always felt more at ease with her paintbrushes than with people. While she found talking to others sometimes difficult, she felt she could express anything on a blank canvas (画布). Her art teacher, Ms. Albright, saw something special in her work. She noticed that Maya’s portraits (肖像画) were not just about how people looked, but about who they were inside. “You don’t just draw people, Maya,” she told her one day. “You show us their inner world.” These words stayed with Maya and made her feel that her art had a purpose.
As graduation day came closer, Maya had a big, exciting idea. What if she could paint a special picture for each of her 83 classmates? It was a huge task, but she decided to try. She began to work secretly, using little bits of time between classes and during lunch breaks. She quietly watched her classmates — how one smiled, how another thought deeply — and drew what she saw. A few people knew she liked art, but no one had any idea about her big secret project.
Finally, on graduation day, Maya walked up to the stage, her heart beating fast. The room grew quiet as she started to speak. Her voice was soft at first. She talked about their years together and how everyone has their own story that others might not know. “We’ve all been in the same school,” she said, “but I wonder if we have really seen each other.”
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then, she took a deep breath and said, “Please look under your chairs.”
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Ms. Albright went up the stage and held Maya’s hands.
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(一)
(25-26高一上·江苏泰州中学·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Suddenly I felt my face turn red with embarrassment. How could I have never noticed? Every Christmas my mother enjoyed creating special memories and traditions for her family. Mom loved Christmas- the shopping, cooking, decorating, music, gifts even the hustle and bustle (拥挤喧器) the season brings. Her enthusiasm encouraged my brother, sister, and me to experience the joy and wonder of the season. Although we could receive various gifts, we were taught that the real reason for the season was to celebrate the getting together of the whole family.
Many years have passed since I was a child. Yet I can still smell the aroma (香味) of Mom’s sugar cookies as she prepared a special treat for her family. These sweets were a sure sign that Christmas Day was near.
On Christmas Eve my mother laid all our stockings under the beautifully decorated pine tree my father had picked out and cut down in the forest. Later, in the middle of the night, she secretly filled the stockings. The next morning we excitedly opened our gifts, leaving our Christmas stockings for last.Our stockings were always full of tiny toys, trinkets, nuts, oranges,apples, and colorful hard candies in various shapes and sizes
In my twenties, I went Christmas shopping with a friend. She began looking for a small gift to place in her mother’s stocking. “You fix a Christmas stocking for your mother?” I asked. “Yes,” she replied. “Every year I fill a stocking with little treats and have it waiting for her on Christmas morning. I couldn’t bear for my mother to not have a Christmas stocking, especially since she prepares one for everyone else.
That’s when I felt my face turn red with embarrassment. I realized my mother had not had a Christmas stocking for as long as I remembered. And, even worse, no one had noticed her stocking was missing.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
My sister and I were determined to start a tradition of our own that year.
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Looking at the stocking, my mother’s eyes filled with tears.
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(二)
(25-26高一上·江苏南京一中·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Jeff was a skilled plumber with 30 years of experience. Everyone who knew him stood in awe of his excellence in plumbing. But little known to them was his craze about music. Yes, Jeff had a great passion for singing since he was a little boy; he even dreamed of going into a music school and being a pop singer like Elvis Presley and holding his private concerts some day. But a sudden car crash took away both of his parents and put an end to all his grand plans for the future. As the big brother and the only man in the home, he had to leave school early and got a job to feed his two little sisters.
Thirty years had rolled by, but the love for singing never faded away. Whenever he was working, he would bring with him a small radio and played songs to which he would sing along. Singing made all the boring repair work great fun and much easier to handle. Sometimes, he created a piece or two of his own when inspiration struck. He once even recorded some of these songs in his small basement studio just for fun.
One day, Jeff received a call from a client, Remus Gall, asking him to help repair the pipes in his kitchen. Jeff accepted the mission readily. Upon arriving at Mr. Gall’s, he was led into the kitchen and began his work. As usual, while doing the repair work, he happily sang along to his small radio. Coincidentally, Remus Gall was a music producer and owner of a small recording company. Remus overheard the plumber’s singing and immediately realized there was something in Jeff’s voice. He was amazed that an ordinary plumber should have such great talent in singing. After the repair work, Remus got the chance to talk with Jeff and introduced his profession to him.
“You’ve really got a beautiful voice.” Remus said sincerely. “Have you ever thought of releasing an album of your own? If so, I would be more than glad to help you.”
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Jeff was greatly shocked by what he heard.
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After three months’ hard work, Jeff’s first ever album finally came out.
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(三)
(25-26高一上·江苏南通中学·期中)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
The Game That Changed Everything
Starting high school as a new student from the countryside felt really hard. The crowded hallways and unfamiliar faces made everything seem strange. The once cheerful, outgoing girl was gone. I turned quiet and kept to myself, spending most of my time alone. My only comfort came from the books I read at my small, tidy desk at home, where I could escape into other worlds.
In my class, there was a girl named Emma who seemed to have everything I didn’t. She was popular, good at sports, and naturally confident. Like a bright sunflower standing tall in the sunlight, she was always surrounded by friends and laughter. I, on the other hand, felt like nobody noticed me. Though we saw each other every day, we never spoke — it felt like we lived in two different worlds.
The change came during an exciting school basketball game. The gym was full of energy and loud cheers. Emma, as the star player of our class team, was playing skillfully. But in the final intense moments, something unexpected happened. As she jumped to catch a rebound, she landed awkwardly and fell to the floor, crying out in pain. She hurt her ankle badly and couldn’t stand up.
While everyone else was panicking and didn’t know what to do, I remembered some first-aid tips from a book I’d read. Gathering all my courage, I walked through the crowd and said softly, “Let me help.” I carefully guided her to keep her foot still and suggested using a cold water bottle to reduce the swelling. She looked up at me, first surprised, then relieved.
After the game, as I was about to leave, Emma found me. “Thank you for helping me,” she said with a warm, sincere smile. “I’ve noticed you’re always reading interesting books during breaks. I actually need help with a book report that’s due next week — would you mind giving me some advice?” My heart pounding, however, I nodded, “Of course!”
注意:
1. 续写词数应为80词左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
We decided to meet at the school library the next day.
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(一)
(25-26高一上·江苏南京大学附中·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My dad was a cleaner in my school. When I was 12, I decided to study hard to have a life different from his.
One day when Dad asked me to play basketball with him, I just replied, “I’m busy. I want to study well so that I can become a rich man. I don’t want to be a cleaner like you, Dad!” He was shocked (震惊的), but I didn’t care and continued studying hard. Finally, I graduated from high school with honors, and decided it was time to break free from my dad and follow my dreams.
“Dad, I got a scholarship to a law school in California,” I told him. “I’ll leave in 3 days.” My dad was surprised but proud of me. As I left for the airport 3 days later, he said, “Son, wherever you go, welcome back home.” I ignored his words and flew to California.
After I graduated, I found a great job there. Later, I was made manager and earned much money. I no longer remembered my father was a cleaner. I had forgotten my dad, who was still cleaning my school. I seldom answered his calls or wrote back to him. I was busy; I still had a lot more to achieve.
With time, the more success I tasted, somehow, the lonelier I became. I felt especially lonely on my 31st birthday. I kept checking my phone, hoping someone wished me a happy birthday. But there wasn’t a single call or message. Later that evening when I returned home from my office, something in my mailbox drew my attention.
“A letter?” I whispered and saw it was from my father. He never forgot to mail me a letter on my each birthday. However, I never took the trouble to read it. “How did I ignore him?” I thought. I brought the letter home and took out his earlier letters. And I opened one. It read, “Wherever you are, I love you to the last drop of my blood. I wish you a happy life.”
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I picked up another letter and read it.
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Finally, I arrived at my dad’s house and saw him sitting alone in the yard.
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(二)
(25-26高一上·江苏盐城五校联考·期中)请认真阅读以下故事并根据给出的末段首句完成整个段落,注意故事的完整性。
Last Saturday, Jordon was taking a walk in the park near his home when he noticed a woman with a boy of about seven years old. When Jordon passed them, he heard the woman yell, “How stupid you are! You are good at nothing. ”Jordon stopped and looked at the little boy. The boy said nothing. He just stood there, looking upset.
Jordon was reminded of his English teacher Mrs Mary in middle school. He was often told that he was good at nothing. But one day it all changed. One day, in an English writing class, Mrs Mary asked them to read a novel. They were asked to write a new chapter of the novel after they finished reading the book. A few days later, Jordon handed in his story. But the next day to his surprise, the comment (评价) “well done” from Mrs Mary came into view the moment he turned to the page where the story was written. When Jordon read that, he almost burst into tears. That day after he returned home, he wrote a short story and gave it to Mrs Mary the next morning. And again he was praised.
Jordon became very interested in writing. He often wrote short stories and asked Mrs Mary to read them and correct them for him. Mrs Mary always corrected them for him and gave him good advice to improve them. One year later, he was no longer that boy who lacked self-confidence. He gained his confidence and was hopeful about his future. Several years after graduating from college, he had his first book published and became famous as a writer in his country. And he owed his success to Mrs Mary's encouragement. Without her encouragement, his life might be very different now.
注意:
续写词数应为80-100词左右;
续写内容为一段;
请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Encouraged by his own life story, Jordon decided to do something for that boy.
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专题13 读后续写
(一)
【参考范文】
One Saturday morning, I heard my name called outside the dormitory. To my surprise, it was June, her eyes tired from the long journey. She told me she had been worried when I stopped answering her calls. After begging her parents for permission, she decided to visit me. Sitting together on the bench, she explained gently, “You and Emily are both my friends, but you are unique.” I heard those words, and my sadness melted away. The fear that had been pressing on me for weeks lifted, replaced by the warmth of knowing I still mattered to her.
The next afternoon, I saw June off at the train station. We stood there, not wanting to let go, our eyes filled with both sadness and hope. The train whistle blew, pulling us apart, but inside I felt steady. I knew distance would never break what we shared. There would be phone calls, messages, and visits, each one keeping our ties alive. Walking back alone, I realized true friendship is not measured by how often we are together, but by the certainty that we remain close, even miles apart.
(二)
【参考范文】
Then, she took a deep breath and said, “Please look under your chairs.” The whole class was filled with curiosity. Everyone bent down to check. To their surprise, there was a small portrait of themselves under each chair. They stared at the paintings, amazed at how accurately Maya had captured their personalities. Some laughed with joy, while others were moved to tears. Classmates who had never really noticed Maya before were now looking at her with newfound respect. They began to realize that behind her quiet exterior was an incredibly observant and talented artist.
Ms. Albright went up the stage and held Maya’s hands. “Maya has shown us the power of art,” she said, her voice full of pride. “She saw the beauty in each of you, even when you yourselves might not have seen it. This is what true art is about.” Maya blushed, feeling a mix of shyness and pride. Her classmates erupted into thunderous applause. From that day on, Maya was no longer just the quiet girl in the corner. She was recognized as the artist who had seen the essence of each of her classmates and shared it with the world through her paintings.
(一)
【参考范文】
My sister and I were determined to start a tradition of our own that year. We secretly planned to fill a Christmas stocking for our mother, just like she did for us every year. We carefully selected small gifts that we knew she would love, such as a cozy blanket and some handwritten notes expressing our love and gratitude. We also added some of her favorite snacks, like nuts and dried fruits, to fill the stocking to the brim. The night before Christmas, we quietly placed the stocking under the tree, waiting to see her reaction in the morning.
Looking at the stocking, my mother’s eyes filled with tears. What we did that Christmas morning made her realize how much we appreciated all her efforts and love throughout the years. She hugged us tightly, saying that this was the best Christmas gift she had ever received. Over time, our tradition of filling a stocking for our mother continued, and it became a cherished part of our family’s Christmas celebrations. What started as a simple act of love has now become a lasting memory that we all treasure deeply.
(二)
【参考范文】
Jeff was greatly shocked by what he heard. He had never considered himself to be a talented singer, and his passion for music had always been a private hobby. But the sincere words from Remus Gall made him realize that he might have a chance to pursue his dream after all. Jeff felt a surge of excitement and anticipation, and he couldn’t wait to explore this new opportunity. He had always wondered what his life would have been like if he had pursued music instead of plumbing, and now he had a chance to find out.
After three months’ hard work, Jeff’s first ever album finally came out. The recording process was a new and challenging experience for Jeff, but he was determined to make the most of it. With the help of Remus Gall and his team, Jeff’s songs were professionally recorded and produced. The album was a mix of original songs and covers of some of Jeff's favorite classics. The album was titled “Plumber with a Voice”, a nod to Jeff’s unlikely journey from a skilled plumber to a budding singer.
(三)
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We decided to meet at the school library the next day. When I arrived, Emma was already there, looking a bit nervous. We started discussing the book, and I was surprised to find that she was really interested in what I had to say. As we talked, our friendship grew stronger. We discovered that we had a lot in common, like our love for reading and our dreams for the future. From then on, we became good friends, and my high school life finally became colorful.
(一)
【参考范文】
I picked up another letter and read it. “Son, I’m really proud of you every day, every minute, and every second.” It began as my glasses were fogged up. After I read all the letters, tears rushed out of my eyes. I was touched by my dad’s deep love for me and felt so regretful about not valuing it! Before long, I packed my things and went to the airport to meet my dad after so many years. “Will he be happy to see me? How will I face him?”I wonded.
Finally, I arrived at my dad’s house and saw him sitting alone in the yard. He looked up and rose in surprise and delight as my shadow was cast upon him from behind, He hugged me and cried before I could even greet him, “I've been waiting for your coming every single day, son!” he wept on my shoulder, I quit the job in California and lived with my dad. I realized money isn’t everything. It cannot buy things as precious as love and family.
(二)
【参考范文】
Encouraged by his own life story, Jordon decided to do something for that boy. He went to the woman, who immediately recognized him because she had read his books and seen his pictures. He told her that what she had said to her boy was not appropriate. Then he told her about the encouragement he once got from Mrs Mary. The mother was ashamed. She realized that she shouldn’t have called her son stupid. She said, “Thank you for your advice. I’ll find out what he’s good at and encourage him.” The woman then left with the boy. Looking at them, Jordon felt relieved, hoping he could make some difference to the boy.
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专题13 读后续写
(一)
(25-26高一上·江苏射阳陈洋中学·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I never thought my father’s job could change my life so much. One evening he came home and told us his company was sending him to another city. At first, I didn’t worry, thinking it might be a short trip or just a small change. But then he added that because he and Mom would both be very busy, I would have to go to a boarding (寄宿) school. The word “boarding” made me unhappy. It meant leaving my neighborhood, my old school, and most of all, my best friend June.
June and I grew up together. We rode bikes in the summer, shared secrets at night, and laughed until our stomachs hurt. When I told her about the move, she tried to smile. “It’s okay,” she said quickly. “We’ll call every weekend. We’ll always be best friends,” she added. I wanted to believe her, so I agreed, holding on to her promise. Still, deep inside, a small voice raised doubts: Would things really stay the same once I left?
The new school was nothing like home. The buildings were big, and the students all were friendly, but I still missed home and June. At Saturday night, I sat on my dormitory (学生宿舍) bed waiting for June’s call. At first, we talked a lot, but soon our calls grew shorter. Sometimes she didn’t answer right away. When she did, she often talked about a new student named Emily. “Emily is so cool,” June said once, laughing through the phone. I forced myself to laugh too, but inside I felt hurt.
I told myself I didn’t care, but the truth was that I cared too much. I imagined Emily taking my place, walking beside June, and telling her jokes that used to be mine. I grew jealous (妒忌的). Soon I stopped answering her calls. I left her texts unread. At night, I cried quietly into my pillow, telling myself June didn’t need me anymore.
注意:
(1) 续写词数应为150个左右;
(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One Saturday morning, I heard my name called outside the dormitory.
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The next afternoon, I saw June off at the train station.
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【参考范文】
One Saturday morning, I heard my name called outside the dormitory. To my surprise, it was June, her eyes tired from the long journey. She told me she had been worried when I stopped answering her calls. After begging her parents for permission, she decided to visit me. Sitting together on the bench, she explained gently, “You and Emily are both my friends, but you are unique.” I heard those words, and my sadness melted away. The fear that had been pressing on me for weeks lifted, replaced by the warmth of knowing I still mattered to her.
The next afternoon, I saw June off at the train station. We stood there, not wanting to let go, our eyes filled with both sadness and hope. The train whistle blew, pulling us apart, but inside I felt steady. I knew distance would never break what we shared. There would be phone calls, messages, and visits, each one keeping our ties alive. Walking back alone, I realized true friendship is not measured by how often we are together, but by the certainty that we remain close, even miles apart.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,主要讲述了作者因父亲工作变动转学寄宿,担心与挚友June的友谊变淡,产生妒忌与失落,最终通过June的到访解开误会、领悟真挚友谊真谛的故事。
【解析】
1.段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“一个星期六的早上,我听到宿舍外面有人叫我的名字。” 可知,第一段可描写作者听到呼唤后的意外反应、发现来访者是June时的心情,两人的见面场景,以及June解释误会、安抚情绪的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“第二天下午,我去火车站送June。”可知,第二段可描写火车站送别时的不舍场景,两人的互动,以及作者在送别后对友谊的深刻感悟,明确距离无法阻隔真挚友谊的核心思想。
2.续写线索:June到访——解释来访原因——主人公的悲伤消失——火车站分别——主人公意识到真正的友谊的内涵
3.词汇激活
行为类
①拜访:visit sb./pay sb. a visit/call on sb.
②解释:explain/account for/make an explanation
③独自走回去:walk back alone/return by myself/go back on my own
情绪类
①令某人吃惊的是:to one’s surprise/to one’s great astonishment
②悲伤:sadness/sorrow
【点睛】
【高分 句型1】She told me she had been worried when I stopped answering her calls.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句和省略that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I knew distance would never break what we shared.(运用了that引导的宾语从句,that省略,what引导的宾语从句)
(二)
(25-26高一上·江苏南京金陵中学·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Maya Rodriguez was a quiet girl who always felt more at ease with her paintbrushes than with people. While she found talking to others sometimes difficult, she felt she could express anything on a blank canvas (画布). Her art teacher, Ms. Albright, saw something special in her work. She noticed that Maya’s portraits (肖像画) were not just about how people looked, but about who they were inside. “You don’t just draw people, Maya,” she told her one day. “You show us their inner world.” These words stayed with Maya and made her feel that her art had a purpose.
As graduation day came closer, Maya had a big, exciting idea. What if she could paint a special picture for each of her 83 classmates? It was a huge task, but she decided to try. She began to work secretly, using little bits of time between classes and during lunch breaks. She quietly watched her classmates — how one smiled, how another thought deeply — and drew what she saw. A few people knew she liked art, but no one had any idea about her big secret project.
Finally, on graduation day, Maya walked up to the stage, her heart beating fast. The room grew quiet as she started to speak. Her voice was soft at first. She talked about their years together and how everyone has their own story that others might not know. “We’ve all been in the same school,” she said, “but I wonder if we have really seen each other.”
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then, she took a deep breath and said, “Please look under your chairs.”
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Ms. Albright went up the stage and held Maya’s hands.
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【参考范文】
Then, she took a deep breath and said, “Please look under your chairs.” The whole class was filled with curiosity. Everyone bent down to check. To their surprise, there was a small portrait of themselves under each chair. They stared at the paintings, amazed at how accurately Maya had captured their personalities. Some laughed with joy, while others were moved to tears. Classmates who had never really noticed Maya before were now looking at her with newfound respect. They began to realize that behind her quiet exterior was an incredibly observant and talented artist.
Ms. Albright went up the stage and held Maya’s hands. “Maya has shown us the power of art,” she said, her voice full of pride. “She saw the beauty in each of you, even when you yourselves might not have seen it. This is what true art is about.” Maya blushed, feeling a mix of shyness and pride. Her classmates erupted into thunderous applause. From that day on, Maya was no longer just the quiet girl in the corner. She was recognized as the artist who had seen the essence of each of her classmates and shared it with the world through her paintings.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了性格安静的 Maya Rodriguez 擅长绘画,她的艺术老师 Ms. Albright 认为她的肖像画能展现人物内心世界。临近毕业,Maya 决定为 83 位同学每人画一幅特别的画,她一直秘密进行这项工作。在毕业典礼上,Maya 开始讲述关于同学们的故事。
【解析】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“接着,她深吸一口气说道:“请看看你们的椅子下面。””可知,第一段可描写同学们好奇地查看椅子下,发现自己的肖像画,展现出惊讶、感动等不同反应,以及对 Maya 看法的改变,突出 Maya 画作的震撼效果。
②由第二段首句内容“奥尔布赖特老师走上舞台,握住了Maya的手。”可知,第二段可描写Ms. Albright 赞扬 Maya,强调艺术的力量,Maya 感到自豪,同学们以掌声回应,最后说明 Maya 从此得到大家认可,突出 Maya 行为的意义。
2.续写线索: Maya 让同学看椅子下——同学发现画作后惊讶、感动——对 Maya 看法改变——Ms. Albright 上台赞扬 Maya——Maya 自豪——同学鼓掌——Maya 得到认可
3.词汇激活
行为类
①感动:move/touch
②意识到:realize/be aware of
③爆发:erupt into/burst out
情绪类
①好奇:curiosity/inquisitiveness
②快乐:joy/pleasure
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Classmates who had never really noticed Maya before were now looking at her with newfound respect. (运用了who引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] She was recognized as the artist who had seen the essence of each of her classmates and shared it with the world through her paintings. (运用了who引导的定语从句)
(一)
(25-26高一上·江苏泰州中学·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Suddenly I felt my face turn red with embarrassment. How could I have never noticed? Every Christmas my mother enjoyed creating special memories and traditions for her family. Mom loved Christmas- the shopping, cooking, decorating, music, gifts even the hustle and bustle (拥挤喧器) the season brings. Her enthusiasm encouraged my brother, sister, and me to experience the joy and wonder of the season. Although we could receive various gifts, we were taught that the real reason for the season was to celebrate the getting together of the whole family.
Many years have passed since I was a child. Yet I can still smell the aroma (香味) of Mom’s sugar cookies as she prepared a special treat for her family. These sweets were a sure sign that Christmas Day was near.
On Christmas Eve my mother laid all our stockings under the beautifully decorated pine tree my father had picked out and cut down in the forest. Later, in the middle of the night, she secretly filled the stockings. The next morning we excitedly opened our gifts, leaving our Christmas stockings for last.Our stockings were always full of tiny toys, trinkets, nuts, oranges,apples, and colorful hard candies in various shapes and sizes
In my twenties, I went Christmas shopping with a friend. She began looking for a small gift to place in her mother’s stocking. “You fix a Christmas stocking for your mother?” I asked. “Yes,” she replied. “Every year I fill a stocking with little treats and have it waiting for her on Christmas morning. I couldn’t bear for my mother to not have a Christmas stocking, especially since she prepares one for everyone else.
That’s when I felt my face turn red with embarrassment. I realized my mother had not had a Christmas stocking for as long as I remembered. And, even worse, no one had noticed her stocking was missing.
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My sister and I were determined to start a tradition of our own that year.
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Looking at the stocking, my mother’s eyes filled with tears.
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【参考范文】
My sister and I were determined to start a tradition of our own that year. We secretly planned to fill a Christmas stocking for our mother, just like she did for us every year. We carefully selected small gifts that we knew she would love, such as a cozy blanket and some handwritten notes expressing our love and gratitude. We also added some of her favorite snacks, like nuts and dried fruits, to fill the stocking to the brim. The night before Christmas, we quietly placed the stocking under the tree, waiting to see her reaction in the morning.
Looking at the stocking, my mother’s eyes filled with tears. What we did that Christmas morning made her realize how much we appreciated all her efforts and love throughout the years. She hugged us tightly, saying that this was the best Christmas gift she had ever received. Over time, our tradition of filling a stocking for our mother continued, and it became a cherished part of our family’s Christmas celebrations. What started as a simple act of love has now become a lasting memory that we all treasure deeply.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,主要讲述了作者意识到母亲多年来一直为家人准备圣诞袜,自己却从未为母亲准备过,于是和姐姐决定为母亲也准备圣诞袜的故事。
【解析】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“那年,我和姐姐决心开创我们自己的传统。”可知,第一段可描写作者和姐姐秘密策划为母亲准备圣诞袜,以及准备过程中的用心和期待。
②由第二段首句内容“看着长筒袜,妈妈的眼里充满了泪水。”可知,第二段可描写母亲看到圣诞袜后的感动,以及这个新传统给家庭带来的温馨和持久影响。
2.续写线索:决定准备圣诞袜——秘密策划——精心挑选礼物——放置圣诞袜——母亲感动——新传统形成
3.词汇激活:
行为类:
①仔细挑选:select carefully/choose with care
②意识到:realize/be aware
③拥抱:hug/embrace
情绪类:
①感激:gratitude/appreciation
②珍爱的:cherished/precious
【点睛】
【高分句型1】 We carefully selected small gifts that we knew she would love, such as a cozy blanket and some handwritten notes expressing our love and gratitude. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】What we did that Christmas morning made her realize how much we appreciated all her efforts and love throughout the years.(运用了what引导的主语从句,how much引导的宾语从句)
(二)
(25-26高一上·江苏南京一中·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Jeff was a skilled plumber with 30 years of experience. Everyone who knew him stood in awe of his excellence in plumbing. But little known to them was his craze about music. Yes, Jeff had a great passion for singing since he was a little boy; he even dreamed of going into a music school and being a pop singer like Elvis Presley and holding his private concerts some day. But a sudden car crash took away both of his parents and put an end to all his grand plans for the future. As the big brother and the only man in the home, he had to leave school early and got a job to feed his two little sisters.
Thirty years had rolled by, but the love for singing never faded away. Whenever he was working, he would bring with him a small radio and played songs to which he would sing along. Singing made all the boring repair work great fun and much easier to handle. Sometimes, he created a piece or two of his own when inspiration struck. He once even recorded some of these songs in his small basement studio just for fun.
One day, Jeff received a call from a client, Remus Gall, asking him to help repair the pipes in his kitchen. Jeff accepted the mission readily. Upon arriving at Mr. Gall’s, he was led into the kitchen and began his work. As usual, while doing the repair work, he happily sang along to his small radio. Coincidentally, Remus Gall was a music producer and owner of a small recording company. Remus overheard the plumber’s singing and immediately realized there was something in Jeff’s voice. He was amazed that an ordinary plumber should have such great talent in singing. After the repair work, Remus got the chance to talk with Jeff and introduced his profession to him.
“You’ve really got a beautiful voice.” Remus said sincerely. “Have you ever thought of releasing an album of your own? If so, I would be more than glad to help you.”
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Jeff was greatly shocked by what he heard.
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After three months’ hard work, Jeff’s first ever album finally came out.
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【参考范文】
Jeff was greatly shocked by what he heard. He had never considered himself to be a talented singer, and his passion for music had always been a private hobby. But the sincere words from Remus Gall made him realize that he might have a chance to pursue his dream after all. Jeff felt a surge of excitement and anticipation, and he couldn’t wait to explore this new opportunity. He had always wondered what his life would have been like if he had pursued music instead of plumbing, and now he had a chance to find out.
After three months’ hard work, Jeff’s first ever album finally came out. The recording process was a new and challenging experience for Jeff, but he was determined to make the most of it. With the help of Remus Gall and his team, Jeff’s songs were professionally recorded and produced. The album was a mix of original songs and covers of some of Jeff's favorite classics. The album was titled “Plumber with a Voice”, a nod to Jeff’s unlikely journey from a skilled plumber to a budding singer.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了水管工Jeff勇于追求自己的音乐梦想,最终成功发行专辑的故事。
【解析】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“Jeff被他所听到的震惊了。”以及第二段首句内容“经过三个月的努力,Jeff的第一张专辑终于发行了。”可知,第一段可描写Jeff在听到Remus的话之后决定勇于追求自己的梦想。
②由第二段首句内容“经过三个月的努力,Jeff的第一张专辑终于发行了。”可知,第二段可描写Jeff成功发行了第一张专辑以及艰辛的过程。
2.续写线索:从小有音乐梦——放弃梦想——发现好嗓音——愿意提供帮助——决定追逐自己的梦想——实现了自己的音乐梦
3.词汇激活
行为类
①认为:consider/regard/view
②追求:pursue/seek/go after
③充分利用:make the most of/make full use of
情绪类
①热爱、热情:passion/love
②兴奋:excitement/thrill
【点睛】
【高分句型1】But the sincere words from Remus Gall made him realize that he might have a chance to pursue his dream after all.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】He had always wondered what his life would have been like if he had pursued music instead of plumbing, and now he had a chance to find out.(运用了what引导的宾语从句和if引导的状语从句)
(三)
(25-26高一上·江苏南通中学·期中)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
The Game That Changed Everything
Starting high school as a new student from the countryside felt really hard. The crowded hallways and unfamiliar faces made everything seem strange. The once cheerful, outgoing girl was gone. I turned quiet and kept to myself, spending most of my time alone. My only comfort came from the books I read at my small, tidy desk at home, where I could escape into other worlds.
In my class, there was a girl named Emma who seemed to have everything I didn’t. She was popular, good at sports, and naturally confident. Like a bright sunflower standing tall in the sunlight, she was always surrounded by friends and laughter. I, on the other hand, felt like nobody noticed me. Though we saw each other every day, we never spoke — it felt like we lived in two different worlds.
The change came during an exciting school basketball game. The gym was full of energy and loud cheers. Emma, as the star player of our class team, was playing skillfully. But in the final intense moments, something unexpected happened. As she jumped to catch a rebound, she landed awkwardly and fell to the floor, crying out in pain. She hurt her ankle badly and couldn’t stand up.
While everyone else was panicking and didn’t know what to do, I remembered some first-aid tips from a book I’d read. Gathering all my courage, I walked through the crowd and said softly, “Let me help.” I carefully guided her to keep her foot still and suggested using a cold water bottle to reduce the swelling. She looked up at me, first surprised, then relieved.
After the game, as I was about to leave, Emma found me. “Thank you for helping me,” she said with a warm, sincere smile. “I’ve noticed you’re always reading interesting books during breaks. I actually need help with a book report that’s due next week — would you mind giving me some advice?” My heart pounding, however, I nodded, “Of course!”
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We decided to meet at the school library the next day.
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【参考范文】
We decided to meet at the school library the next day. When I arrived, Emma was already there, looking a bit nervous. We started discussing the book, and I was surprised to find that she was really interested in what I had to say. As we talked, our friendship grew stronger. We discovered that we had a lot in common, like our love for reading and our dreams for the future. From then on, we became good friends, and my high school life finally became colorful.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了来自农村的作者在高中感到孤独,而受欢迎的Emma在篮球比赛中受伤,作者用从书中所学的急救知识帮助了她,之后她向作者求助读书报告的事情,作者答应了。
【解析】
1. 段落续写:
由段首句内容“我们决定第二天在学校图书馆见面。”可知,第一段可描写见面后两人讨论书的过程,以及友谊的发展。
2. 续写线索:图书馆见面——讨论书——发现共同点——友谊加深——生活变多彩
3. 词汇激活:
行为类
①讨论:discuss/talk about
②发现:discover/find out
③成为:become/turn into
情绪类
①紧张的:nervous/anxious
②惊讶的:surprised/amazed/astonished
【点睛】
[高分句型1] When I arrived, Emma was already there, looking a bit nervous.(运用了when引导时间状语从句和现在分词作伴随状语)
[高分句型2] We discovered that we had a lot in common, like our love for reading and our dreams for the future.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
(一)
(25-26高一上·江苏南京大学附中·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My dad was a cleaner in my school. When I was 12, I decided to study hard to have a life different from his.
One day when Dad asked me to play basketball with him, I just replied, “I’m busy. I want to study well so that I can become a rich man. I don’t want to be a cleaner like you, Dad!” He was shocked (震惊的), but I didn’t care and continued studying hard. Finally, I graduated from high school with honors, and decided it was time to break free from my dad and follow my dreams.
“Dad, I got a scholarship to a law school in California,” I told him. “I’ll leave in 3 days.” My dad was surprised but proud of me. As I left for the airport 3 days later, he said, “Son, wherever you go, welcome back home.” I ignored his words and flew to California.
After I graduated, I found a great job there. Later, I was made manager and earned much money. I no longer remembered my father was a cleaner. I had forgotten my dad, who was still cleaning my school. I seldom answered his calls or wrote back to him. I was busy; I still had a lot more to achieve.
With time, the more success I tasted, somehow, the lonelier I became. I felt especially lonely on my 31st birthday. I kept checking my phone, hoping someone wished me a happy birthday. But there wasn’t a single call or message. Later that evening when I returned home from my office, something in my mailbox drew my attention.
“A letter?” I whispered and saw it was from my father. He never forgot to mail me a letter on my each birthday. However, I never took the trouble to read it. “How did I ignore him?” I thought. I brought the letter home and took out his earlier letters. And I opened one. It read, “Wherever you are, I love you to the last drop of my blood. I wish you a happy life.”
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I picked up another letter and read it.
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Finally, I arrived at my dad’s house and saw him sitting alone in the yard.
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【参考范文】
I picked up another letter and read it. “Son, I’m really proud of you every day, every minute, and every second.” It began as my glasses were fogged up. After I read all the letters, tears rushed out of my eyes. I was touched by my dad’s deep love for me and felt so regretful about not valuing it! Before long, I packed my things and went to the airport to meet my dad after so many years. “Will he be happy to see me? How will I face him?”I wonded.
Finally, I arrived at my dad’s house and saw him sitting alone in the yard. He looked up and rose in surprise and delight as my shadow was cast upon him from behind, He hugged me and cried before I could even greet him, “I've been waiting for your coming every single day, son!” he wept on my shoulder, I quit the job in California and lived with my dad. I realized money isn’t everything. It cannot buy things as precious as love and family.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者的老父亲在作者中学当清洁工,作者为了以后能过上和父亲不一样的生活而刻苦学习。作者在读大学后远离了父亲,并且在大学毕业后找到了一份好工作,实现了过上富裕生活的梦想。但这些年他异常孤独。在他31岁生日当天,他收到了父亲寄来的信件。
【解析】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我又拿起另一封信读起来。”可知,第一段可描写作者又拿起下一封信读了起来。父亲在信里写了什么?作者读完所有信件后有什么感想?他会回去看望父亲吗?
②由第二段首句内容“终于,我到了爸爸家,看到他一个人坐在院子里。”可知,作者最终回到了父亲的家。见到作者,父亲什么心情?他会对作者说什么?作者明白子什么道理?
2.续写线索:读信——感动——返回看父亲——父亲欣喜——父子情加深——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①涌出:rush out of/gush out/pour out
②.哭泣:weep/sob/cry
③.拥抱:hug/embrace
情绪类
①.开心:happy/delighted/glad
②. 惊喜:surprise/amazed
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. After I read all the letters, tears rushed out of my eyes. (运用了after引导状语从句)
[高分句型2]. I realized money isn’t everything.(运用了省略连词that的宾语从句)
(二)
(25-26高一上·江苏盐城五校联考·期中)请认真阅读以下故事并根据给出的末段首句完成整个段落,注意故事的完整性。
Last Saturday, Jordon was taking a walk in the park near his home when he noticed a woman with a boy of about seven years old. When Jordon passed them, he heard the woman yell, “How stupid you are! You are good at nothing. ”Jordon stopped and looked at the little boy. The boy said nothing. He just stood there, looking upset.
Jordon was reminded of his English teacher Mrs Mary in middle school. He was often told that he was good at nothing. But one day it all changed. One day, in an English writing class, Mrs Mary asked them to read a novel. They were asked to write a new chapter of the novel after they finished reading the book. A few days later, Jordon handed in his story. But the next day to his surprise, the comment (评价) “well done” from Mrs Mary came into view the moment he turned to the page where the story was written. When Jordon read that, he almost burst into tears. That day after he returned home, he wrote a short story and gave it to Mrs Mary the next morning. And again he was praised.
Jordon became very interested in writing. He often wrote short stories and asked Mrs Mary to read them and correct them for him. Mrs Mary always corrected them for him and gave him good advice to improve them. One year later, he was no longer that boy who lacked self-confidence. He gained his confidence and was hopeful about his future. Several years after graduating from college, he had his first book published and became famous as a writer in his country. And he owed his success to Mrs Mary's encouragement. Without her encouragement, his life might be very different now.
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续写内容为一段;
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Encouraged by his own life story, Jordon decided to do something for that boy.
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【参考范文】
Encouraged by his own life story, Jordon decided to do something for that boy. He went to the woman, who immediately recognized him because she had read his books and seen his pictures. He told her that what she had said to her boy was not appropriate. Then he told her about the encouragement he once got from Mrs Mary. The mother was ashamed. She realized that she shouldn’t have called her son stupid. She said, “Thank you for your advice. I’ll find out what he’s good at and encourage him.” The woman then left with the boy. Looking at them, Jordon felt relieved, hoping he could make some difference to the boy.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Jordon在散步时看到一个妈妈训斥自己的儿子笨,那个男孩看起来很沮丧,这让Jordon想起了上中学时他经常被告知他什么都不擅长,但是Mrs Mary有一天称赞了他所写的故事,这让Jordon高兴,后来他又受到了表扬,Mrs Mary总是为他纠正错误,并给他很好的建议来改进他所写的故事,他获得了信心,对未来充满了希望,后来还出版了书,成为了著名的作家,他把自己的成功归功于Mrs Mary的鼓励。
【解析】
1.段落续写:
由本段首句内容“受到自己人生故事的鼓舞,乔丹决定为那个男孩做点什么。”可知,本段可描写作者如何帮助男孩,纠正男孩妈妈的做法。
2.续写线索:和女士谈话——告诉女士Mrs Mary给自己鼓励的故事——女士认识到错误——女士感谢——女士离开——Jordon松了一口气
3.词汇激活
行为类
①告诉:tell/inform
②意识到:realize that.../be aware that...
③离开:leave/depart
情绪类
①惭愧:ashamed/compunctious
②感谢:thank sb./be grateful to sb.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] He went to the woman, who immediately recognized him because she had read his books and seen his pictures. (由who引导的非限制性定语从句和because引导的原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] He told her that what she had said to her boy was not appropriate. (由that引导的宾语从句和what引导的主语从句)
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