摘要:
**基本信息**
以旅行计划邮件写作为核心,通过"输入-输出-迁移"三阶训练,系统构建应用文结构规范、情感表达策略及语法运用体系,培养语言能力与思维品质。
**专项设计**
|模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑|
|----|-----------|----------|----------|
|教材基础|1篇范文+1写作任务|邮件五部分结构(日期/称呼等);情感词汇句式(It is amazing等);现在进行时表将来|从格式规范到内容要素(目的/行程/情感),再到语言表达,层层递进|
|迁移应用|1真题+3原创题|内容具体/语气自然/礼貌得体;场景化表达转换|从邮件拓展至演讲稿/征文,实现方法跨情境迁移,强化文化意识与学习能力|
内容正文:
人教版必修第一册Unit 2 Travelling Around
单元写作任务专项练习
本单元的写作任务是写一份旅行计划,在回复朋友邮件的同时介绍自己的旅行安排。要求文章包含以下部分:
日期(Date):书写写信日期。
称呼(Greeting):对收信人的礼貌称呼。
正文(Body):说明旅行目的与目的地,介绍具体行程安排,表达对旅行的期待。
结尾(Close):礼貌收尾,表达祝愿。
签名(Signature):落款署名。
在正式写作前,教材有充分的输入和铺垫:
阅读输入:教材提供了Richard写给朋友Xiao Li的电子邮件,介绍自己的旅行计划;同时搭配了一份旅游宣传册,帮助学生获取目的地信息。教材引导学生研读邮件,学习如何清晰地表达旅行目的、行程安排和情感态度,同时学习了表达情感的词汇与句式,如:It is an amazing sight. / I can’t wait to go. / It is almost unbelievable.以及用现在进行时表达未来计划,如:We are planning to go to Xi’an. / We are also planning to visit...
写作输出:教材设定学生扮演Xiao Li,回复Richard的电子邮件,写一份关于西安的旅行计划。教材提供了邮件结构梳理表和情感表达参照表,引导学生在小组讨论后完成写作,并通过同伴互评清单进行修改和完善。
本单元的写作任务旨在培养学生用英语清晰、有条理地描述旅行计划,掌握电子邮件中表达情感和安排的常用表达,正确运用现在进行时表示将来的用法,并在书信交流中做到内容具体、语气自然、礼貌得体。
★真题写作迁移
(2021年天津6月卷)假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了《最美中华》栏目,请你给该栏目投稿,介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括:
(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等);
(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等);
(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
★单元写作强基(原创)
下周英语课上你将参加以“我最向往的旅行目的地”为主题的演讲活动。请你写一篇英语演讲稿,内容包括:
(1)名称及位置。
(2)说明理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右。
(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Good morning, everyone!
★写作主题提升(原创)
你所在的旅行社团计划于下周六组织一次“City Walk”活动。请写一封邮件邀请你的交换生好友Peter一起参加,内容包括:
(1)活动介绍。
(2)行程安排。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右。
(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
Yours,
Li Hua
★高考模拟演练(原创)
你校英文报“Travel & Discovery”专栏正在举办以“假期好去处”为主题的征文活动。请你给该专栏投稿,推荐一个你了解的旅游景点,内容包括:
(1)简要介绍景点。
(2)说明推荐理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右。
(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
More Than a Destination
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人教版必修第一册Unit 2 Travelling Around
单元写作任务专项练习
参考范文
★真题写作迁移
(2021年天津6月卷)
One possible version:
范文词数 114
Having visited Guilin last summer, I would like to recommend this wonderful city for the “Amazing China” column. Located in the northeast of Guangxi, Guilin is world-famous for its impressive mountains and clear rivers.
What makes Guilin so appealing is its remarkable natural scenery. The Li River flows through a series of hills, creating a view that looks like a traditional Chinese painting brought to life. Visitors can take a boat ride to admire the landscape or cycle through the countryside to explore local villages.
Words cannot fully express how deeply I was impressed by this place. I strongly recommend that Guilin be featured in your column to share its beauty with more people.
★单元写作强基(原创)
One possible version:
范文词数 96
Good morning, everyone!
Today I would like to share with you my dream travel destination Dali, in Yunnan Province. Located in the southwest of China, it is surrounded by beautiful mountains and a lovely lake.
I am planning to admire the amazing natural views there. The Cangshan Mountain and Erhai Lake form a unique picture that is almost unbelievable. I would also explore the ancient towns and try the local food. Besides, I can hike along the lake and take plenty of photos. I am looking forward to experiencing the local culture and meeting friendly people there.
Thank you!
★写作主题提升(原创)
One possible version:
范文词数 94
Dear Peter,
How are you doing? Our travel club is organising a “City Walk” event next Saturday. I’m writing to invite you!
Here are the arrangements. We are going to meet at the city square at 9 am and walk along the old streets to admire the traditional buildings. Then we’ll get around the narrow paths and explore some local shops. We’ll also stop at a tea house for a rest at noon, and in the afternoon we’ll discover the city’s rich past at the museum.
Would you like to join? Look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
★高考模拟演练(原创)
One possible version:
范文词数 99
More Than a Destination
I’m writing to recommend the West Lake in Hangzhou for your holiday. It’s a place where unforgettable scenery connects with rich culture.
Located in the centre of Hangzhou, the West Lake is famous for its amazing natural beauty. You can explore the narrow paths along the lake, admire the ancient bridges, and take a boat to enjoy the wonderful views.
What makes it special is its deep culture. It’s a place where you can truly connect with nature and history. Walking along the lake, you will discover a sense of peace that stays with you long after you leave.
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