摘要:
该初中英语课件聚焦七年级上册Unit 1“你和我”主题写作,核心为“结交新朋友”的自我介绍与介绍他人。课堂从“I have a new friend…”引入,通过品质、兴趣等分类词汇积累,提分佳句及名言警句搭建学习支架,帮助学生实现素材输入到写作输出的过渡。
其亮点在于分层练透教材,以分类词汇(如kind、funny等品质词,travel、play sport等兴趣词)夯实语言能力,结合名言警句(如“A friend in need is a friend indeed”)培养文化意识,例题与实战演练的审题立意、课堂布局(个人信息-兴趣爱好-日常活动-观点表达)提升思维品质。教师可直接用系统素材与范文,学生能高效掌握写作结构,提升学习能力。
内容正文:
七年级英语
上册
Unit 1 You and Me
主题写作专项
本单元的标题是“你和我”,话题是“结交新朋友”。本单元要求学生使用所学的词汇和句式介绍自己或他人。与此相关的写作内容有自我介绍和介绍他人(如家人、同学、朋友等),通常会涉及姓名、年龄、学校、居住地、家庭情况以及个人爱好等。
[词汇积累]
品质(Qualities)
kind 善良的
funny 有趣的;滑稽的
honest 诚实的
shy 害羞的
quiet 安静的
outgoing 外向的
cute 可爱的
helpful 乐于助人的
hard-working 勤奋的
兴趣(Hobbies)
hobby 爱好
travel 旅行
play sport 做运动
collect things 收集东西
read books 读书
listen to music 听音乐
draw pictures 画画
play chess 下国际象棋
play football踢足球
活动(Activities)
go camping 去野营
go swimming 去游泳
go hiking 徒步旅行
take a short trip 短途旅行
help sb learn English 帮某人学英语
do exercise 做运动
do exercises 做操
其他(Others)
a photo of … ……的照片
telephone number 电话号码
make new friends 交新朋友
[提分佳句]
1.Hello, everyone! My friend is …
2.Today, let me tell you something about my friend.
3.My friend is in Class … Grade …, and he is from…
4.She loves … and … is her favourite.
5.This is …, my good friend.
6.He is really a nice boy. We all like him.
7.Would you like to be friends with me?
[名言警句]
1.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。
2.A friend is a second self. 朋友是另一个我。
3.A faithful friend is hard to find. 益友难得。
4.A life without a friend is a life without the sun.人生没有朋友,犹如生活没有太阳。
5.Getting to know each other is the first step in making new friends. 相互了解是结交新朋友的第一步。
假设你是李平,请阅读来自英国笔友 Jack 的邮件并回复。
Dear Li Ping,
Everything is good in my school. How about you? Do you have a new friend in your school? How old is he/she? What's his/her hobby? What does he/she often do with you? Please tell me something about your friend.
Jack
写作要求:
1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名称;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;
3.字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清晰;
4.词数70左右。
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[审题立意]
1.审体裁:应用文。
2.审时态:一般现在时。
3.审人称:第一人称和第三人称。
4.审要点:根据所给邮件中提到的问题进行回复。
[谋篇布局]
eq \x(引入话题) → I have a new friend …
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eq \x(介绍朋友) → eq \b\lc\{\rc\ (\a\vs4\al\co1(个人信息:… years old; is from; lives in ,兴趣爱好:likes reading; love sport,日常活动:We often play basketball … ))
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eq \x(表达观点) → A life without a friend is a life without the sun.
[范文欣赏]
Dear Jack,
I'm glad to hear from you. I am fine. I have a new friend—Li Hua. Let me tell you something about him.
Li Hua is 13 years old and we're in the same class. He is from China and he lives in Beijing. He likes reading. He learns a lot from books. Both Li Hua and I love sport. He can play basketball very well. We often play basketball after school. We have fun together.
A life without a friend is a life without the sun. I'm happy to have Li Hua as my friend.
Yours,
Li Ping
初中生活的第一个学期刚刚开始,你一定结识了很多新朋友吧!请用英文写一篇短文介绍你最好的朋友。
写作要点:
1.介绍你朋友的基本信息(姓名、年龄、外貌特征、喜欢的穿着等);
2.介绍你朋友的喜好;
3.说明你喜欢他/她的原因。
写作要求:
1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名称;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;
3.字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清晰;
4.词数70左右。
My best friend is Lily. She is 13 years old. She is tall with big eyes. She likes wearing a red skirt and she looks nice.
She loves doing sports and her favourite sport is tennis. She always plays it with me after school. She is good at playing the guitar. At the school art festival, we can often enjoy her beautiful music.
She likes to help others. She often helps classmates with their homework. She also helps her mother a lot at home. I like to be friends with her because she is kind and always helps me a lot.
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