Unit 3 The seasons Section3-Writing课件 2026-2027学年 沪教版英语七年级上册

该初中英语课件围绕“人与自然”主题，聚焦季节描述的表达与结构，通过Key question引导学生思考，以Jenny的范文为范例，系统讲解天气、活动、节日等核心要素，结合句式模板、重点词汇及语言点解析，构建“导入-学习-实践”的学习支架，帮助学生掌握季节写作的逻辑与方法。 其亮点在于以语言能力培养为核心，提供“描述天气（如‘...is...and...’）”“表达活动（如‘It is...to...’）”等句式模板，结合思维品质培养，通过Pre-writing的Plan步骤引导学生从植物、活动、节日等维度梳理喜好原因，学习能力方面设计写作三步骤及检查清单，助力学生自主规划与修改。学生能提升季节表达的准确性与逻辑性，教师可依托结构化内容高效开展写作教学。

Key question 沪教牛津版七年级上册 Unit 3 The seasons Writing 主题范畴：人与自然 What do you know about the seasons? 学习目标 1.学习课本范文，掌握描述季节的表达和结构。 2.根据写作三步骤，完成写作任务和写作评价。 3.学习掌握课本范文的语言点。 Writing Writing an article about your favourite season Jenny has written about her favourite season, summer. My favourite season: summer 　I live in Guangzhou. My favourite season is summer. 　Everything is alive. The trees have a lot of green leaves, and they can help keep me cool on sunny days. There are also many beautiful flowers in summer. They smell really nice. 　The best thing about summer is the summer holiday! I have lots of time to do fun things. I enjoy going swimming with my friends. I also love going running in the park with my best friend. It is great to exercise outdoors in summer, and it is nice to eat ice cream on a hot day. Sometimes I go to the beach with my family. I like to build sand castles there with my little sister. 　Summer is the best for sure! How many paragraphs are there in this article? Three. 1 Before Jenny wrote about her favourite season, summer, she listed the reasons why she likes summer. Read her article to see how she organized her ideas. Read the article and answer the questions. What is summer like in Guangzhou? Is there any festival or holiday in this season? What is it? What things can she do in this season? Read the article and answer the questions. What is summer like in Guangzhou? Everything is alive. The trees have a lot of green leaves and there are many beautiful flowers. Is there any festival or holiday in this season? What is it? Yes, there is. It’s summer holiday. Read the article and answer the questions. What things can she do in this season? She can do lots of fun things, such as going swimming, going running, exercising outdoors and eating ice cream. Sometimes she goes to the beach with her family and likes to build sandcastles with her little sister. List the things you like best about this season. my favourite season Step 1: Plan Step 2: Write Step 3: Check and revise Which season do you like best? Why? Write about your favourite season. Write your article. Tick (✓) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it. Pre-writing Step 1: Plan List the things you like best about this season. A season How to talk about weather? 句式：...(season) is ...(adj.) and ...(adj.). What activities do we have in each season? It is nice to go on a picnic at this time of year. It is nice to eat ice cream in the hot weather. It is interesting to make snowmen. It is exciting to take a trip in spring. 句式：It is ... (adj.) to .... What festivals do we have in each season? Season Holidays and festivals Spring Women’s Day, the Qingming Festival/Tomb-sweeping Festival, Labour Day, Mother’s Day, Arbor Day/Tree Planting Day Summer Children’s Day, Father’s Day, the Dragon Boat Festival, Army Day Autumn Teachers’ Day, the Mid-Autumn Festival, National Day, Double-ninth Day Winter the Spring Festival, the Lantern Festival, Christmas 板书黑板！！！！ 13 My favourite season: summer 　I live in Guangzhou. My favourite season is summer. 　Everything is alive. The trees have a lot of green leaves, and they can help keep me cool on sunny days. There are also many beautiful flowers in summer. They smell really nice. 　The best thing about summer is the summer holiday! I have lots of time to do fun things. I enjoy going swimming with my friends. I also love going running in the park with my best friend. It is great to exercise outdoors in summer, and it is nice to eat ice cream on a hot day. Sometimes I go to the beach with my family. I like to build sandcastles there with my little sister. 　Summer is the best for sure! Read the article again and find the important phrases and main sentences. alive smell on sunny days have time to do sth. keep me cool for sure sandcastle adj.有生气；有活力 v.有...气味；发出...气味 n.气味；嗅觉 在晴朗的日子里 有时间做某事 让我保持凉爽 无疑；肯定 n.沙堡 重点词汇和核心句式 Can you figure out more? Language points 1. They can help keep me cool on sunny days. 句意：它们能帮助我在阳光明媚的日子里保持凉爽。 ①help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事 同义短语: help sb.with sth. 在某方面帮助某人 Eg. She often helps me learn English. 她经常帮助我学英语。 She often helps me with my English. 她经常在英语方面帮助我。 1. They can help keep me cool on sunny days. 句意：它们能帮助我在阳光明媚的日子里保持凉爽。 考点拓展: help用作名词，意为“帮助”。 with the help of sb.= with one's help 在某人的帮助下 Eg.With the help of the boy, she passed the exam. = With the boy's help, she passed the exam. 在这个男孩的帮助下，她通过了考试。 1. They can help keep me cool on sunny days. 句意：它们能帮助我在阳光明媚的日子里保持凉爽。 ②“keep+sb./ sth.+adj.” 意为“使某人/某物处于某种状态”。 Eg.We should keep the classroom clean and tidy. 我们应该保持教室干净整洁。 Eg. I'll keep him calm, don't worry. 我会让他保持冷静的,不用担心。 1. They can help keep me cool on sunny days. 句意：它们能帮助我在阳光明媚的日子里保持凉爽。 考点拓展: (1)keep做系动词，后接形容词,意为“保持……”。 Eg. Keep quiet in the library. 在图书馆里保持安静。 (2)keep doing sth.意为“持续做某事”。 Eg. Don’t keep watching TV. 不要一直看电视。 (3)keep sb. from doing sth.意为“阻止某人做某事”。 Eg. My mom always keeps me from eating too many candies. 我妈妈总是阻止我吃太多糖果。 2.They smell really nice. 句意：它们闻起来非常香。 ③smell，感官动词，在句子中通常作连系动词使用，后面常接形容词作表语，表达人通过感官对事物的感受或判断。 此类感官动词有： sound taste feel smell look taste 尝起来 The cake tastes delicious. 这蛋糕尝起来很美味。 look 看起来 The sky looks blue. 天空看起来是蓝色的。 smell 闻起来 The flowers smell sweet. 这些花闻起来很香。 feel 摸起来；感觉 The pillow feels soft. 这个枕头摸起来很软。 sound 听起来 The music sounds beautiful. 这音乐听起来很美。 3. Summer is the best for sure! 句意：夏天无疑是最好的！ ④best最好的/地，是good/well最高级形式。best前面需要加定冠词the或名词所有格、形容词性物主代词。 Eg. Her handwriting is the best in the class. 她的书法是班上最好的。 Eg. My best friend is John. 我最好的朋友是约翰。 Write about your favourite season. Writing 李华正要给她的澳大利亚笔友 Jerry写信介绍她最喜欢的季节——秋季。请你根据以下表格内容，以李华的名义，给Jerry写一封电子邮件。要求：70词左右，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不算入总词数。提示： 主题：人与自然——自然生态 文体：说明文 人称： ________和第三人称 时态：以 _____________ 为主 第一 一般现在时 Step 1: 题干细审 1. 在中国，秋天从九月持续到十一月。(last) ________________________________________________ 2. 在秋天，一切都变了。(everything) ________________________________________________ 3. 放风筝是有趣的。(动名词做主语) ________________________________________________ Autumn in China lasts from September to November. In autumn, everything changes. Flying kites is exciting. Step 2: 句型点拨 开头 02 01 My favourite season 03 结尾 正文 引出话题，介绍最喜欢的季节的时间以及天气情况。 Step 3: 谋篇布局 总结全文 1.介绍秋天的景色、活动及人们的感受。 2.介绍秋天的节日以及活动。 3.秋天是一个丰收的季节。（补充要点） My favourite season Dear Jerry, My favourite season is autumn. It is the third season in a year. Autumn in China lasts from September to November. In autumn, everything changes. The trees change their colours from green to yellow, orange, and red, like a big, beautiful painting. The weather is windy and cool. We usually fly kites outside after school. Flying kites is exciting. On the weekend, we can take a picnic. It’s interesting. We have Teachers’ Day on September 10th. It is time when we say thanks to our teachers. We have National Day on October 1st. It’s great to go on a family outing during the days. Step 4: 扩充成文 The Mid-Autumn Festival is also in this season. Our family usually get together and have a big dinner on the Mid-Autumn Festival. It’s nice to eat mooncakes and enjoy the moon. We talk and play, with smile on everyone’s face. Autumn is a time of harvest for the farmers. They are busy but happy at this time of year. Sometimes you can smell the delicious scent of fruits that are ripe for picking in the countryside. I like autumn very much. It is my favourite season. Post-writing Check and revise 检查和修改 Tick (√) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it. 根据下面的清单检查和修改作文。 I explained the reasons why______________ is my favourite season. I used adjectives, such as ________________ to describe this season. I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit. I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation. $