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备战2027高考
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应用文写作
一、整体破解
应用文写作步骤如下:
Step 1 精准审题:审人称,时态和要点(至少3个)。
Step 2 构建文章框架:分为三段式,第一段开门见山交代事情;第二段是详细描述所有要点;第三段结尾要简明扼要。
Step 3 根据具体内容,在草稿上写出所用句子,然后用并列句、从句、非谓语或特殊句式升级原先的句子。
Step 4 根据句子之间的逻辑关系,采用合适的连接词,把句子连成有机的语篇。
写作步骤
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高分点拨
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高考书面表达赋分标准
档次 要点和内容 语法和词汇 连接成分 词数和书写
五档15-13 覆盖所有内容要点 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分 词数少于80或多于120的,从总分中减去2分;如书写较差,以致影响阅卷,将分数降低一个档次
四档12-10 虽漏掉一两个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是由尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致 应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑
三档9-7 虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解 应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯
二档6-4 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解 较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性
一档3-1 明显漏掉主要内容,写了一些无关内容 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解 缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯
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二、体裁微解
篇章微解1:邀请信
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假定你是李华,你校无人机社团将于下周六举办无人机展览。请根据以下提示,给留学生朋友Chris写一封电子邮件,邀请他来一起观看,内容包括:
1. 时间、地点;
2. 展览介绍:亲自操作无人机、夜空无人机表演等;
3. 期待回复。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
参考词汇:无人机drone
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Dear Chris,
I am writing to invite you to attend a drone exhibition to be held next Saturday in our school.
The exhibition is scheduled to start at 9:00 am and end at 8:00 pm. You will be amazed when you see so many drones of different sizes in person. In addition, you will be allowed to operate some drones after receiving basic training. Most importantly, you will watch a drone show on the playground in the evening.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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篇章微解2:建议信
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假定你是李华,你的美国好友Jane来信说她最近特别容易发火,常和别人起争执,因而情绪低落。请你给她写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 表示理解并给予安慰;
2. 你的建议和期待。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇:发火lose one’s temper
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Dear Jane,
I’m sorry to hear that you’ve been feeling down lately because you easily get angry and engage in arguments. Anger is a basic human emotion, so there’s no need to worry too much about it. But frequent outbursts of anger can indeed lead to problems like poor relationships and declining health.
I suggest you take time to consider why someone might say or do something that upsets you. Try to put yourself in their shoes, which may help reduce your anger. Additionally, you can help yourself remain calm by taking deep breaths and considering the potential consequences before losing your temper.
I hope my suggestions can be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
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篇章微解3:祝贺信
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假定你是李华,你的留学生好友Eric在你校举办的文化艺术节中获得了留学生组书法作品第二名的好成绩。请你给他写一封邮件,表示祝贺,内容包括:
1. 表达祝贺;
2. 肯定他的付出;
3. 鼓励他继续努力并提供帮助。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Eric,
I’m writing to offer my congratulations to you on your outstanding performance in the campus cultural and art festival. It’s truly impressive that you won second place in the international student category.
Your hard work, dedication, and talent have certainly paid off. Your Chinese calligraphy piece showcased your exceptional skills. I’m greatly impressed by your artistic abilities and your commitment to improving your skills. I hope you can continue to pursue your passion for calligraphy and if necessary, I can offer you additional resources, or connect you with experienced calligraphers who can offer guidance.
Congratulations again on your success. I believe that you will make more achievements in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
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篇章微解4:感谢信
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假定你是校学生会主席李华,你校上周六举办的英语戏剧节取得了圆满成功。请给外教Ms Jenkins写封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 感谢她的指导和帮助;
2. 回顾戏剧节的情况。
注意: 写作词数应为80左右。
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Dear Ms Jenkins,
I’m writing to express my sincere appreciation for your invaluable effort in helping us organize the English drama festival. It was an enormous success, and we couldn’t have done it without your support and hard work.
The festival was a great opportunity for students to showcase their talents and develop their language skills in a fun and engaging way. We were delighted to receive a lot of positive feedback.
We hope to build on the success of this year’s festival and make it an annual event. Thank you once again.
Best regards,
Li Hua
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篇章微解5:告知信
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为丰富学生生活,提高同学们的生态保护意识,你校将组织学生去植物园参观。请你以学生会的名义为学校的“英语天地”写一则通知,内容包括:
1. 活动时间;
2. 活动内容;
3. 注意事项。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
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Notice
To enrich students’ life and raise awareness of ecological protection, our school is going to organize a visit to the botanical garden.
Students who are interested to go are requested to gather at the school gate at 8:30 am this Sunday. The bus will leave school at 9 am. Students will be divided into several groups to observe plants in different areas of the garden. After the visit, students will be allowed to make bookmarks with leaves.
Don’t forget to bring drinking water and wear comfortable shoes. Please be on time.
The Students’ Union
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篇章微解6:道歉信
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假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Justin约好本周六一起去观看划龙舟比赛,但你因故不能赴约。请给他写封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示歉意并说明原因;
2. 提出新的邀请并给出理由。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
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Dear Justin,
I’m writing to apologize and let you know that I won’t be able to watch the dragon boat race with you this Saturday.
This morning, I received unexpected news—my painting course has been rescheduled due to my teacher’s resignation from the training center. I feel terrible that I have to cancel the appointment. Perhaps we could watch the final next Saturday instead—I think it would be even more exciting.
Again, I’m really sorry for any inconvenience this may have caused, and I hope we can reschedule soon.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
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篇章微解7:投诉信
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假定你是李华,最近和父母在美国旅游。昨天你在某快餐外卖网站进行了午餐预约服务,结果却遇到一些问题。请给该网站的负责人写一封邮件,进行投诉,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 投诉事由(预订的快餐未准时送达、与客服沟通后未得到合理解释);
3. 你的诉求。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua. I’m writing to make a complaint about your fast food delivery service.
I ordered three pizzas for my family from your website at 9:00 am yesterday, which were scheduled to arrive at our hotel at 11:30 am. However, to our great disappointment, we didn’t get the pizzas until 12:30 pm. In addition, the customer service representative I called did not give us a satisfactory explanation for the late delivery. Thus, I would like to get my money back.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
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篇章微解8:慰问信
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假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Chris发来邮件说,他因为刚转入新学校而感到不适应。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达安慰;
2. 提供建议;
3. 给予鼓励。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
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Dear Chris,
I am sorry to hear that you haven’t adapted to the new school._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes,
Li Hua
Most of us have such experiences. Therefore, what you are experiencing is nothing strange. Learning to adapt to unfamiliar surroundings helps us grow. My tips are as follows.
First of all, learn to be active. If you have problems, share them with your teachers. Besides, take part in class activities. Voluntary participation can help you integrate with the new class. Most importantly, refocus your attention. If you focus on your school subjects, you will have little time to feel you are a newcomer.
You have a sharp mind and I believe you will find your sense of belonging soon.
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篇章微解9:求助信
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假定你是李华,高三学习任务繁重,但你却沉溺于智能手机。你尝试了一些不看手机的方法但都不奏效。请给你的美国笔友Chris写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 你的困境;
3. 征求建议。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
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Dear Chris,
I’m facing an annoying problem and writing to ask for your help.
During my senior year of high school, I have to deal with mountains of assignments. However, I kind of get addicted to my smartphone. I know it’s wrong to spend too much time on the phone and I have tried some ways of staying away from it. But every time I pick up the phone, I just can’t put it down.
Could you give me some advice on how to solve my problem? Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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篇章微解10:倡议书
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假定你是李华,为帮助你校成绩优异的贫困生,学校学生会准备周末组织一次二手物品义卖会。请你根据下面的要点提示,代表学生会写一封倡议书,刊登在学校的英语报上。内容包括:
1. 义卖会介绍:时间、地点;
2. 参加义卖的同学将收到一套明信片作为礼物。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
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Dear friends,
Are you at a loss for how to reach out to those in need? Your great moment will come if you are willing to attend a charity sale to be held at 8:00 am this Saturday on the school playground. All the profits from the sale will be used to help those outstanding students in our school, who come from low-income families. Just bring your books, toys, clothes or any other valuable items you will not use! You will be given a set of postcards to honor your contributions.
The Students’ Union
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篇章微解11:咨询信
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假定你是李华,在网上看到著名心理咨询师Mr White发布的免费为中学生提供咨询服务的帖子,请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 咨询的内容和期望。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Mr White,
I am Li Hua, a senior high school student from China, who recently read your post about offering free counseling services to high school students. I’m writing to ask for some advice.
As a senior high school student, I’m experiencing stress and anxiety due to academic pressure and social relationships, which often make me feel depressed and frustrated. I hope to maintain a positive attitude towards study and life, and also improve my interpersonal skills. I’d deeply appreciate it if you could offer me any useful suggestions or guidance about dealing with these challenges.
I’m expecting your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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篇章微解12:求职信/申请信
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假定你是李华,目前在英国伦敦一所高中学习,得知你校的模拟联合国社团(Model United Nations Club)准备招募一名秘书,你有意申请。请根据以下提示,给社团的负责人写一封申请信:
1. 个人情况;
2. 具备优势;
3. 期待回复。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a Chinese student currently studying in London. Having learned that the Model United Nations Club of our school is seeking a secretary, I am writing to recommend myself for the post.
I possess several advantages that would make me a valuable addition to the club. Firstly, I am a friendly and approachable person. Secondly, I have a great interest in international affairs. Lastly, I am fluent in English and Chinese, which enables me to effectively communicate with students from diverse cultural backgrounds.
I would greatly appreciate an early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
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篇章微解13:推荐信
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假定你是李华,你的留学生朋友Jack发来邮件请你推荐学习中国诗词的材料。请你用英语给他回一封邮件,向他推荐中央电视台的节目《中国诗词大会》,内容包括:
1. 写邮件目的;
2. 节目简介;
3. 你的观看感受。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
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Dear Jack,
Knowing you want to learn more about Chinese poetry, I’m writing to recommend a Chinese TV program—“Chinese Poetry Conference”—to you.
It is a game show on China Central Television that tests competitors’ memory and understanding of Chinese poetry. Viewers can not only appreciate the beauty of different forms of Chinese poetry but also learn more about Chinese history. There have been several seasons of the program. Though I only watched several episodes, I was impressed by the contestants’ talent.
If you need any further help, don’t hesitate to let me know.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
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篇章微解14:通知
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假定你是校学生会主席李华,你校下周将进行以“文化中国”为主题的英语阅读周活动,请你写一篇英语通知,鼓励大家踊跃参加,内容包括:
1. 活动目的;
2. 活动内容、时间和地点;
3. 希望同学们踊跃参加。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Our school will hold an English reading week with the theme of Cultural China next week to enhance our understanding of Chinese culture and improve our English reading skills.
During the event, we’ll have various activities, including reading Chinese literature translated into English and participating in cultural workshops. We’ll also have guest speakers who’ll share their experiences and insights into Chinese culture. The event will take place from 4:00 pm to 5:00 pm every day in our school lecture hall next week.
Don’t miss the great activity and let’s actively participate and make it a success.
The Students’ Union
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篇章微解15:演讲稿
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你校正举办以“Volunteering”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1. 参加志愿活动的经历和益处;
2. 号召大家参与。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
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Hello, everyone! It’s my honour to speak here today. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your listening!
Doing voluntary work is a win-win situation for all involved. Last week, I participated in a voluntary activity called “Making an effort to beautify our community”. During the activity, volunteers assisted in sweeping roads, picking up rubbish and taking care of roadside plants. Through this activity, not only did I make our community more beautiful, but I also learned some practical skills. Moreover, volunteering can provide us with improved physical and mental health, new friendships, a sense of purpose and deeper self-confidence.
Let’s make good use of our spare time and take part in voluntary activities!
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篇章微解16:图表类作文
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最近,某机构针对中学生参加的志愿活动类型进行了调查。请根据图表中的调查结果给你校英文报写一篇英文短文,内容包括:
1. 描述图表数据;
2. 简单评论。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
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A survey has been conducted recently on what kind of volunteer activities middle school students participate in. The pie chart shows its results.
As we can see, over one third of the students surveyed are involved in civilized practices. 21% devote themselves to taking care of the elderly. 17% of the students help children in need. 15% focus on environmental protection. The remaining 12% of the students prefer other volunteer activities.
Volunteering has become a new trend. In my opinion, it’s important to choose something that we enjoy doing and that is beneficial to others as well.
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篇章微解17:议论文
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学校英文报正在开展以“Do Middle School Students Help with Housework on Weekends?”为题的讨论。请用图表中的调查结果写一篇英文短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 描述做家务情况;
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
中学生周末做家务情况调查结果
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Do Middle School Students Help with Housework on Weekends?
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A survey on whether middle school students help with housework on weekends has been conducted recently. As is shown on the chart, the majority of the students surveyed do housework on weekends, accounting for 91.5%. By contrast, the students who never help with housework account for 8.5%. 20% of the students spend over one hour on housework while 71.5% of them work for less than an hour.
It is good news that most students surveyed do housework. By learning basic skills, middle schoolers can know how to live independently. I hope parents encourage their children to do more housework.
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篇章微解18:新闻报道
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假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了“中国服饰文化”讲座活动。请你为校英文报写一篇英文报道,内容包括:
1. 讲座时间、地点;
2. 讲座概况;
3. 活动反响。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
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Last Sunday, a lecture on “Chinese clothing culture” was delivered at the Conference Centre in our school.
The lecture started with a fashion show, which drew enthusiastic applause from the audience. Then Professor Jiang provided a detailed and vivid analysis of the changes in Chinese clothing culture. The lecture was illustrated with pictures and was easy to understand, providing students with a deep understanding of the development of Chinese clothing culture.
The elegant traditional Chinese clothing showcased in the lecture impressed the students, and many expressed a desire to learn more about Chinese clothing culture.
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