Unit 1 Section Ⅳ Writing（Word教参）-【学霸笔记·同步精讲】2026-2027学年高中英语选择性必修第二册（人教版)

本高中英语讲义聚焦科学精神评论文章写作与读后续写微场景训练，构建“科学家地位介绍-重要事迹描述-品质总结”的应用文写作支架，辅以佳句积累与句式升级示例，同时提供读后续写的情感、动作描写词汇及微场景训练模板。 资料特色在于融合科学精神培育与语言能力提升，通过屠呦呦、钱学森等科学家实例渗透文化意识，以写作步骤引导分析与评价培养思维品质，课中助力教师系统授课，课后便于学生依托范文与模板巩固练习，查漏补缺。

Section Ⅳ　Writing 写作一　应用文写作——关于科学精神的评论文章 　　关于科学精神的评论文章是新课程标准中的写作要求之一，它要求学生对人物外貌、个性、主要事迹和贡献进行描述和说明，并说明科学家所体现的科学精神。 一、开门见山，指出要介绍的科学家的历史地位 1.Born in 1911， he/she was one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century．他/她出生于1911年，是二十世纪最伟大的科学家之一。 2.As we all know， he/she is one of the most famous medical scientists in the 21st century in China． 众所周知，他/她是中国二十一世纪最著名的医学科学家之一。 二、描写要介绍的科学家的重要事迹 1.He got an award in 1998 for having played an important role in scientific research． 因为在科学研究中发挥了重要作用，他在1998年获奖。 2.He got the Nobel Prize in Physics in 1957 for his great discovery． 由于他的重大发现，他于1957年获得诺贝尔物理学奖。 3.He devoted all his life to scientific research and his scientific findings have benefited people all over the world． 他一生致力于科学研究，他的科学发现使全世界人民受益。 4.He made great achievements in the field of medicine． 他在医学领域取得了巨大成就。 三、总结概括科学家的品质 1. There is no doubt that he/she is regarded as one of the most successful scientists in the world． 毫无疑问，他/她被认为是世界上最成功的科学家之一。 2.His efforts in protecting people’s health and lives are worth celebrating． Let’s salute him and give him the thumbs up! 他为保护人民健康和生命所做的努力值得赞扬。让我们向他致敬，给他点赞! 3.Due to his great achievements and contributions，he was awarded the State Preeminent Science and Technology Award in 2005，which is China’s top science award． 由于他的巨大成就和贡献，他于2005年被授予国家最高科学技术奖，这是中国的最高科学奖。 　　假定你是李华，一年一度的世界科学节临近，英文杂志《新科学家》正在组织英语征文比赛。请你以“我最敬佩的科学家”为题写一篇短文参赛，内容包括： 　　（1）介绍科学家； 　　（2）介绍敬佩的原因。 注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 The Scientist I Admire Most 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 一、合理布局，精心谋篇 二、遣词造句，规范得体 1.几十年前，一位名叫屠呦呦的中国科学家受到启发，开始使用中药治疗疟疾。 Decades ago， a Chinese scientist named Tu Youyou was inspired to use traditional Chinese medicine to treat malaria． 2.这是一个相当缓慢且艰难的过程，因为此前几乎没有任何相关研究。 This was a rather slow and tough process， because there was almost no relevant research before． 3.一些科学家对此表现出消极的态度，这使得它更难实现。 Some scientists showed a negative attitude towards it， which made it harder to achieve． （定语从句） 4.虽然遇到了很多困难，但她从未放弃。 Although she came across/met with/encountered many difficulties， she never gave up． 5.她有一种强烈的愿望，想找到治疗这种疾病的方法，于是她全身心地投入这个实验中。 She had a strong desire to find a cure for the disease， so she devoted herself to the experiment wholeheartedly． 6.经过多次尝试，她成功地实现了自己的梦想。 After many attempts， she successfully realized her dream． 7.她被授予诺贝尔生理学或医学奖。 She was awarded the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine． 8.令我印象最深刻的是她坚强的意志。 What impressed me most was her strong will． 9.这让我相信我会实现我的目标。 This makes me believe that I will achieve my goals． 三、句式升级，吸睛亮点 把6、7句升级为并列句 After many attempts， she successfully realized her dream and was awarded the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine． 四、认真誊写，赏心悦目 The Scientist I Admire Most 　　Decades ago， a Chinese scientist named Tu Youyou was inspired to use traditional Chinese medicine to treat malaria． This was a rather slow and tough process， because there was almost no relevant research before． What’s more， some scientists showed a negative attitude towards it， which made it harder to achieve． 　　Although she encountered many difficulties， she never gave up． She had a strong desire to find a cure for the disease， so she devoted herself to the experiment wholeheartedly． After many attempts， she successfully realized her dream and was awarded the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine． 　　What impressed me most was her strong will． This makes me believe that I will achieve my goals． 　　你校英文报正在征集主题为Scientific Spirit的稿件，请你选取科学家必备精神的一个方面，并结合某一个科学家的具体事例写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 　　（1）科学精神； 　　（2）举例说明； 　　（3）你的感悟。 注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式作答。 Scientific Spirit 　　When we talk about scientific spirit， there are many aspects we should evaluate． 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 参考范文： Scientific Spirit 　　When we talk about scientific spirit， there are many aspects we should evaluate． Determination， persistence and diligence are all important scientific spirits． But what comes first to my mind is determination． 　　Determination plays an important role in helping scientists to make many outstanding achievements． For instance， there was a time when China’s rocket science was undeveloped． It was Qian Xuesen who took on the challenge and never gave up， thus helping develop China’s aerospace science successfully． Without determination， he couldn’t have made an amazing breakthrough． 　　All in all， determination is a significant scientific spirit that shapes a great scientist． We should make a determined effort to do what needs to be done． 写作二　读后续写——微场景训练 词汇 佳句 情感描写 ①frustrated adj．懊恼的；沮丧的；失意的 ②determined adj．下定决心的，坚定的 ③willing adj．乐意的 1.As a young doctor，John Snow became frustrated because no one knew how to prevent or treat cholera．　（情绪描写） 2.Besides being brilliant， he was brave，though sometimes careless in what he said or did．He was willing to say what others were afraid to say， and to dream of what others were afraid to dream about．Furthermore， he was quite determined． 3.No sooner had I got the chance to explain than she rushed into the pouring rain．　（动作描写） 4.Qian read a lot and was extremely knowledgeable， especially in the area of frontier science research．　（人物描写） 5.She cast a warm glance at her sleeping child， her eyes filled with love．　（情境描写） 6.When she heard the good news， tears poured down her face， and she jumped with joy．　（情绪描写） 动作描写 ①suspect vt．& vi．怀疑；疑有；不信任 ②blame vt．把……归咎于；责怪；指责 ③cast vt．投射；向……投以（视线、笑容等）；投掷 ④pour vt．倒出；倾泻；斟（饮料） ⑤trace vt．追溯；追踪；查出 ⑥defend vt．保卫；防守；辩解 微场景　时光流转，辛巴伴我蜕变，重拾勇气，重燃生活希望。 　　As time went by， 1.I found myself entirely transformed （我发现自己完全变了）． Inspired by the bravery of Simba， I could leave my house without tears． 2.Every time I felt frustrated or defeated （每当我感到沮丧或挫败时）， my puppy would keep me company quietly and 3.I would pour out all my inner thoughts to him （我会向它倾诉我内心所有的想法）． Whenever I got home， he greeted me by licking my hands and jumping up and down． Everything seemed to take a turn for the better． 4.Not until then did I truly understand （直到那时，我才真正理解） my doctor’s advice． 5.Thanks to Simba （多亏Simba）， my friend and instructor， it was he that restored my life． 1 / 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $