Unit 6 Section Ⅳ Writing a summary（Word教参）-【学霸笔记·同步精讲】2026-2027学年高中英语必修第一册（外研版）

本讲义聚焦高中英语概要写作、阅读理解、完形填空等核心题型，构建“基础词汇-情境应用-篇章理解-综合表达”的学习支架。概要写作部分通过“归纳大意-定位主题句-提炼信息-转换表达-衔接成篇”步骤指导，帮助学生掌握信息整合与重组能力，同时搭配词汇表及微情境练习，强化语言知识在具体场景中的运用。 该资料以核心素养为导向，亮点显著。在思维品质培养上，概要写作通过原文分析与范文对比，引导学生逻辑梳理与信息提炼，如鸟类迁徙危机文本的要点归纳训练；在语言能力提升上，微情境“峡谷徒步遇雨”等场景设计，让学生在语境中运用动词和环境描写词汇。课中辅助教师实施分层教学，课后助力学生通过题型解析与词汇表查漏补缺，提升自主学习效率。

Section Ⅳ　Writing a summary 　　British people love to make tea with fruit and herbs.Such a habit is so popular that many people grow easy-to-grow herbs in their own tea gardens.There are many flavours of fruit and herbal teas， including traditional lemon and ginger， as well as many unusual flavours such as mango， strawberry， apple， pear， blackberry leaf and dandelion.Aside from the variety of flavours， herbal tea also has various health benefits.Some can help people relax， and some， like ginger tea， are good for the immune system， while others， such as mint tea， are beneficial for digestion. 学语言 　　本文为概要写作。范文分为三部分，三部分中心内容分别为Their popularity， Unusual flavours， Health benefits。范文正是从文章中心内容入手，然后用不同的表达，如so ...that ...结构，there be句型等；另外作者用不同的连接词或短语将不同段落的内容连接起来，使文章更加顺畅；除此之外，范文还对信息进行了适当地整合与重组。 学结构 　　读懂原文，归纳大意（Their popularity， Unusual flavours， Health benefits）→细读段落；明确要点（many people grow their very own tea gardens with easy-to-grow herbs/mango， strawberry， apple， pear， blackberry leaf and dandelion/It can be good for digestion）→添加细节，丰富内容→整合句子，重组文章→衔接过渡，连句成篇。 1.When some waste chemicals are put into the sea， they can hurt or kill animals and fish. 当一些化学废料被排放到海洋时，它们会伤害或杀死动物和鱼类。 2.As can be seen from the chart， an increasing number of people own mobile phones in China now. 从图表中可以看出，现在中国越来越多的人拥有手机。 3.Nowadays some teenagers prefer to watch TV at home rather than go out for exercise. 如今，一些青少年宁愿在家看电视也不愿意出去做运动。 4.Our city has developed into a big one， which is four times the size of what it used to be. 我们的城市已经发展成了一个大城市，是原来的四倍大。 5.The harder you work， the greater progress you will make. 你学习越努力，取得的进步就越大。 6.There’s no doubt that it can enhance people’s consciousness of health， but it is likely to result in over anxiety. 毫无疑问，它能增强人们的健康意识，但更有可能引起过度焦虑。 　　阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 　　Scientists say a huge percentage of bird species are in danger because their habitats， or homelands，are disappearing.Traditional migration paths take birds through countries that are not protecting locations to stop，rest and feed.The scientists studied the migration， or fight， paths， of almost 1，500 species.They decided that 91 percent of them passed through dangerous areas. 　　The major danger for migratory birds is development.Building and paving have covered over nature where birds stop and feed as they move from one part of the world to another.For example， a bird called the bar-tailed godwit migrates from its breeding grounds in the Arctic.It flies all the way to the southern hemisphere in Australia and New Zealand.Along the way，the small birds stop at Yellow Sea mudflats in China， North Korea and South Korea. 　　One of the scientists working on the study says “many of these critical sites have been lost to land reclamation （开垦） owing to urban， industrial and agricultural expansion”.The problem， according to investigators，is that many of these small birds die along their migration because they don’t have a safe place to eat and rest.There is no place to restore their energy for the next leg of their journey.“They simply perish （死亡） along the way，” says one of the scientists.Countries in North Africa， Central Asia and those along the coasts of East Asia are having the most difficult time conserving land.The scientists say these countries do not have enough areas that are safe for birds. 　　The researchers say countries need to work together and provide safe stopover areas for birds that pass through their boundaries.For example， one country might have preserved safe zones for migrating birds.But a neighbor country might not.A bird might perish.One scientist tells the Los Angeles Times that while some habitats are changing， more work can be done to make urban areas safe for birds.He says small changes — like planting more native plants or keeping cats out of areas birds would be likely to use — could make a big difference. 一、读懂原文，归纳大意 　　本文是说明文，全文共分四段。每段的主旨大意如下： 　　第一段：科学家指出世界上大部分的鸟类的生存受到威胁，因为鸟类正在失去它们的栖息地； 　　第二段：对鸟类最大的威胁来自人类的经济发展； 　　第三段：因为鸟儿们找不到一个安全的栖息场所，大量的鸟儿死在迁徙的途中； 　　第四段：呼吁世界各国加强合作，为过境的鸟儿提供一个安全的栖息地。只有这样，才能改变或改善现状。 　　本文是典型的“总—分—总”的结构，即“提出问题—分析问题—提出解决办法”。文章结构明确，要点清晰。 二、定位主题句，提炼关键信息 　　在读懂原文，抓住大意的基础上，接下来需要逐段定位每个段落的主题句，并以提纲的形式记录下来。 　　第一段：Scientists say a huge percentage of bird species are in danger because their habitats，or homelands，are disappearing. 　　第二段：The major danger for migratory birds is development. 　　第三段：The problem，according to investigators，is that many of these small birds die along their migration because they don’t have a safe place to eat and rest. 　　第四段：The researchers say countries need to work together and provide safe stopover areas for birds that pass through their boundaries.Small changes could make a big difference. 三、整理要点，转换表达 　　要点1：第一段主题句可概括为要点1。主题句中的bird species are in danger可改为endangered bird species； because their habitats， or homelands， are disappearing可改为短语due to the disappearance of their habitats or homelands。 　　要点2：第二段主题句可概括为要点2。主题句中的The major danger for migratory birds is development.可运用另一种句式结构变换表达方式，比如：Development accounts for/is to blame for the major danger of migratory birds. 　　要点3：第三段主题句可概括为要点3。主题句中的because they don’t have a safe place to eat and rest可整合为for lacking of a safe eating and resting place。 　　要点4：第四段主题句可概括为要点4。主题句中的need to work together可用make joint efforts来替换； small changes可改为a little kindness； make a big difference可改为contribute a lot。 四、衔接过渡，连句成篇 　　　Scientists say a large percentage of bird species are endangered due to the disappearance of their habitats or homelands，（要点1） for which development should take the responsibility.（要点2） Also，investigators add that not having a safe eating or resting place is to blame for the death of birds during their immigration.（要点3 ）Thus，countries should make joint efforts to save the birds and a little kindness can contribute a lot.（要点4）　 词汇 动作描写 wrap v.包，裹　 prevent v.阻挡，防止 design v.设计　　 harm v.伤害，损害 sail v.（乘船）航行 词汇 环境描写 frost n.霜　 steep adj.陡的，陡峭的 beauty n.美，美丽　 reef n.礁 grand adj.宏伟的，壮丽的 canyon n.峡谷　 valley n.谷，山谷 waterfall n.瀑布　 thunder v.打雷 channel n.海峡　 tunnel n.隧道 desert n.沙漠，荒漠　 pleasant adj.令人愉快的 佳句 1.Imagine mountains wrapped in silver water，shining in the spring sun. （环境描写） 想象群山被银白色的水田包裹，在春天的阳光下闪闪发光。 2.During autumn，these same mountains are gold，and in winter they are covered in sheets of white frost. （环境描写） 秋天，满山金黄，而隆冬，它们又披上了冰霜做成的雪白毛毯。 微情境一　峡谷徒步遇雨 　　Last Saturday， my cousin and I joined 1.　a hiking trip to the grand canyon　（一次大峡谷徒步旅行）， which she had 2.　designed for　 （为……设计） our autumn break.3.　The steep mountain paths　 （陡峭的山路）made my legs ache bitterly， and the valley below 4.　was wrapped in a thin layer of morning mist　 （被一层薄薄的晨雾笼罩）， hiding the waterfall we were eager to see.As we climbed higher， we 5.　noticed a light frost　 （注意到一层薄霜） on the grass， a reminder that winter was drawing near.Suddenly， the sky turned dark and 6.　began to thunder　 （开始打雷）， so we hurried to find 7.　 a narrow tunnel　 （一条狭窄的隧道） in the cliff to 8.　prevent ourselves from being harmed　 （防止我们自己被伤害） by the coming rain. 微情境二　海岸航行记 　　Last Sunday， my uncle took me to sail along 1.　the coastal channel　 （沿海水道） near his small cottage by the sea.As our boat glided past a sharp reef， I held the rail tightly， feeling a little nervous about the waves.In the distance， we could 2.　see the edge of a golden desert stretching　 （看到金色沙漠的边缘延伸）to the horizon， its quiet beauty blending with the blue sea.When the wind picked up， my uncle 3.　wrapped a thick blanket around me　 （给我裹上了一条厚毯子） and assured me we would reach the calm bay soon.He told me stories about local fishermen and how they designed their boats 4.　to prevent harm　 （防止伤害） from strong tides.As we anchored near the shore， the warm sunset and gentle breeze made the whole trip feel truly pleasant， and his patience and vivid stories turned a simple sail into a warm and meaningful adventure that I’ll cherish for a long time. Ⅰ.阅读理解 A 　　We all experience the presence of wild animals in our daily lives， whether it is the song of a garden bird or the fish on our plate.It’s important to consider the key role that the surprising diversity （多样性） of wild animals plays in our own survival.From the powerful whale to the small dung beetle， wild animals are all important pieces that make up life on the earth. 　　Wildlife helps most trees grow by spreading seeds， and they also help many of our food plants.They keep our forests strong， so they can hold a lot of carbon.A large number of animals move nutrients （养分） around in nature， which is good for industries like fisheries， and help prevent tipping points in places like the Amazon.Small animals underground， like soil helpers， make food grow better and stop flooding. 　　We risk our own survival if we lose these wild species.And it is not just important that they exist — their diversity is especially important.We need wildlife to interact with other animals and their habitats for effective ecological benefits. 　　Understanding the importance of wild animal species makes much sense.The 2024 Living Planet Report showed a 73％ average drop in wild vertebrate species since 1970.The Nature’s Technicians report makes it clear why these falls are disastrous not only for wildlife but also for people. 　　These two reports arrived at just the right moment.Countries will have an important talk soon about how to stop and fix the damage to nature， discussing what each country should do and what help is needed worldwide， under the Convention on Biological Diversity.What more of a wake-up call do we need than understanding that the fall in wild animals is more serious than expected and that such results could threaten our food systems and economies？ 　　Let’s ensure that this international conference is remembered as the important moment when we come together for a better planet — for wildlife and people alike. 语篇解读：本文是一篇议论文。文章强调了野生动物多样性对人类生存的重要性，并指出当前野生动物数量的急剧下降对人类和生态系统构成了严重威胁。文章呼吁国际社会共同努力，保护野生动物，以实现人类与自然的和谐共生。 1.What is the second paragraph mainly about？（　　） A.The important role of wildlife. B.The number of diverse species. C.The practical way to save animals. D.The damage caused by flooding. 解析：A　段落大意题。根据第二段可知，野生动物通过传播种子帮助大多数树木生长，也有助于许多食用植物；它们使森林保持强壮，从而储存大量碳；许多动物在自然界中转移养分，这对渔业等行业有益，并有助于防止亚马孙等地区的生态失衡；地下的小动物能让食物生长得更好并防止洪水。这些都是在阐述野生动物的重要作用。 2.Why does the author mention the two reports in the text？（　　） A.To recommend popular magazines. B.To compare the difference between plants and animals. C.To express his views on the diversity of wildlife. D.To stress the urgency of protecting wildlife. 解析：D　推理判断题。根据第四、五段可知，这两份报告显示了自1970年以来野生脊椎动物物种数量的大幅下降，这不仅对野生动物是灾难性的，对人类也是如此，这种情况会威胁到我们的食物系统和经济，由此可推知，作者提及这两份报告是为了强调保护野生动物的紧迫性。 3.What does the author expect us to do？（　　） A.Reduce the threat to our food systems. B.Get into important talks as often as we can. C.Share what we have learned with our friends. D.Build a healthy earth that supports animals and humans. 解析：D　推理判断题。根据最后一段可知，作者倡导为野生动物和人类共同拥有一个更美好的地球而团结在一起。由此可推知，作者希望我们努力构建一个有利于动物和人类生存的健康的地球。 4.Which can be a suitable title for the text？（　　） A.Protecting Our Food Systems Makes a Difference B.Save Wild Species， Save Ourselves C.Leave More Spaces， Save More Wildlife D.Boosting the Wild Species Matters a Lot 解析：B　标题归纳题。根据第一、五、六段可知，文章指出野生动物的多样性对我们的生存有着关键作用，失去野生动物我们将面临自身生存的风险，文章通过两份报告强调保护野生动物的紧迫性，并呼吁大家为了野生动物和人类构建一个更美好的地球。整篇文章围绕着保护野生动物就是保护我们自己这一观点展开，因此B项适合用作本文标题。 B 　　A new study into ladybirds （瓢虫） has suggested that not enough attention has been given to these spotty insects， which are important pest （害虫） controllers.Recently， their survival has come under threat （威胁）， so researchers are calling for citizen scientists （volunteer members of the public who help with scientific research） to help work out how to protect them.There are more than 6，000 species of ladybirds around the world， but their populations are dropping fast. 　　Ladybirds help to protect plants， including food crops， by eating smaller insects， which feed on plants and can do harm to them.The ladybird study was done by an international group of experts， including researchers from the UK Centre for Ecology and Hydrology.It shows that not enough is known about ladybirds and how they are dealing with threats such as climate change， pollution and changes in the use of land.The study points out that while projects to save other insects， such as bees， have been helpful for ladybirds， more specific research is needed. 　　The study recommends involving more citizen scientists in recording ladybird observations， and creating insect-friendly habitats.“Everyone can make a difference and help to protect ladybirds and other insects，” says Roy.“We need to act fast and act together.” 　　To help with their survival， try not to get rid of small insects from gardens， so that ladybirds have enough food.You could plant flowers with lots of pollen （花粉） and avoid cutting back old stems and clearing leaves， which are natural habitats for ladybirds in the cold months. 语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了瓢虫作为重要的害虫控制者，其生存正受到威胁，研究人员呼吁公民科学家参与保护瓢虫的研究，并提出了一些保护瓢虫的建议。 5.Why are ladybirds important？（　　） A.They have high scientific value. B.They can predict climate changes. C.They help protect plants from pests. D.They are food resources for some insects. 解析：C　细节理解题。根据第二段第一句可知，瓢虫有助于保护植物免受害虫侵害，所以很重要。 6.What can we learn from the ladybird study？（　　） A.There’re still mysteries about ladybirds. B.Recent projects do little good to ladybirds. C.How ladybirds deal with threats in nature. D.Why the population of ladybirds is dropping fast. 解析：A　推理判断题。根据第二段可知，关于瓢虫还有很多未解之谜。 7.What can citizen scientists do to protect ladybirds？（　　） A.They can help create suitable habitats for ladybirds. B.They can kill the insects which live in their gardens. C.They can recommend places for ladybird observation. D.They can clean up their gardens and plant more flowers. 解析：A　细节理解题。根据倒数第二段可知，公民科学家可以为瓢虫创造合适的栖息地来保护瓢虫。 8.What is the purpose of the text？（　　） A.To explain why ladybirds are important. B.To introduce the findings of a new study. C.To share opinions on doing scientific research. D.To call for immediate environmental protection. 解析：B　推理判断题。通读全文，尤其第一段可知，本文主要是介绍一项新研究的发现。 Ⅱ.完形填空 　　The heaviest snow in a hundred years hit the south of China.It snowed 　9　 for half a month.Many people were 　10　 in railway stations， bus stations and airports.People did everything they could to fight the 　11　； nobody was killed from cold and 　12　.Gradually， the trapped people all went back home 　13　.While fighting the snow， people 　14　their animal friends until a moving story of a swallow couple appeared on the Internet. 　　The couple hadn’t eaten anything for several days 　15　 the snow.They tried to fly into people’s home to warm themselves， but every house was 　16　 tightly.They got to a side of a balcony （阳台）where wind couldn’t reach.They jumped and flapped （拍打）their wings to 　17　 the attention of the people inside the house， who were 　18　 their own things.The wife’s body was 　19　.She couldn’t move any longer.The husband came near and 　20　 her with his wings.The husband lost his heat soon because of his opened wings. 　　The next morning， the housemaster went to the balcony to 　21　 his flowers and saw a dead swallow outside. 　22　 it， he found they were two embracing （拥抱） together.Thinking of the 　23　 the snow had brought to people， he was moved to tears.He took them in for giving them some warmness they couldn’t feel any longer.He found a small box， filled it with some hay （干草） and lay the couple in.He buried them in the garden of the community. 语篇解读：本文是一篇记叙文。南方遭遇了百年不遇的大雪，很多人被困在了回家的路上。在抗灾的过程中，发生了很多感人的故事。然而人类在雪灾中自救的时候，忘记了他们的动物朋友。一对燕子夫妇在这场冰雪中演绎了动人的爱情故事。 9.A.beautifully　 B.directly C.gently　 D.continuously 解析：D　根据空后的 half a month可知，此处表示连续下了半个月的雪。 10.A.forbidden　 B.rescued C.trapped　 D.covered 解析：C　根据后文的the trapped people可知，此处表示许多人被困在火车站、汽车站和机场，trapped为原词复现。 11.A.disaster　 B.war C.campaign　 D.disease 解析：A　根据前文的The heaviest snow可知，暴雪属于灾难。 12.A.anger　 B.heat C.hunger　 D.poverty 解析：C　根据前文可知，很多人被困在火车站、汽车站和机场，所以他们要忍受寒冷和饥饿。 13.A.sadly　 B.safely C.nervously　 D.curiously 解析：B　根据前文nobody was killed from cold and 　12　可知，没有人死于寒冷和饥饿，所以大家逐渐地安全回到家中。 14.A.treasured　 B.invited C.accepted　 D.forgot 解析：D　根据前文可知，人们竭尽所能与这场暴雪作斗争，还要忍受饥饿和寒冷，结合空后内容可知，人们忙于处理暴雪，无法顾及他们的动物朋友，所以“忘记”了它们。 15.A.because of　 B.in case of C.in spite of　 D.instead of 解析：A　根据空后the snow可知，因为下雪，燕子夫妇好几天没吃东西了。 16.A.controlled　 B.fixed C.stretched　 D.closed 解析：D　根据前文They tried to fly into people’s home to warm themselves可知，燕子夫妇想住进人们的家里取暖，连词but表明前后句意呈转折关系，但是房门紧闭导致它们进不去。 17.A.admit　 B.attract C.turn　 D.escape 解析：B　根据前后文可知，燕子夫妇又跳又拍打翅膀的目的是吸引房子里面的人的注意。 18.A.busy with　 B.born with C.good for　 D.famous for 解析：A　根据语境可知，人们应该是忙于他们自己的事情，所以没有注意到燕子夫妇。 19.A.burnt　 B.watched C.frozen　 D.found 解析：C　根据前文可知，室外在下暴雪，天气寒冷。结合后文She couldn’t move any longer.可知，妻子的身体被冻住了，动不了了。 20.A.supplied　 B.wrapped C.folded　 D.sorted 解析：B　根据最后一段they were two embracing together可知，这对燕子夫妇拥抱在一起，所以是丈夫用翅膀包裹住了妻子。 21.A.buy　 B.send C.sell　 D.check 解析：D　根据常识可知，花卉是在阳台上，所以管家是去查看花的状态。 22.A.Feeding　 B.Leaving C.Touching　 D.Greeting 解析：C　根据后文可知，起初管家看到了一只死燕子，走近触摸之后，发现是两只燕子抱在了一起。 23.A.hardship　 B.childhood C.cooperation　 D.lesson 解析：A　根据第一段可知，这场百年来最严重的大雪袭击了南方，导致很多人困在车站和机场，所以这场大雪给人们带来了困难。 Ⅲ.语法填空 　　Water shortage is knocking at the door.It is one of the 24.　　　　　　 （great） crises facing us today， with two thirds of the global population 25.　　　　　　 （live） in areas where water is short for a month or more every year.There are two main factors （因素） leading 26.　　　　　　 this problem： increasing global demand for water， and unsustainable means by which these demands are being met.Though global water usage 27.　　　　　　 （increase） a lot over the last fifty years， it is predicted that there will be a further 60％－100％ increase in water usage by 2050. 　　This is not just 28.　　　　　　 matter of turning the tap off when you brush your 29.　　　　　　 （tooth）， cutting your showers down to 3 minutes， or sharing the washing-load with your roommates.In fact， daily activities of human make up less than 4％ of our total water usage， with 92％ falling into two groups， 30.　　　　　　 are the industrial production of household items and the production of food.Astonishingly， 69％ of our total daily water usage comes from the 31.　　　　　　 （grow） and production of food alone. 　　32.　　　　　　 （unfortunate）， there is no reference book for the exact number of liters （升） used in the production of any individual food item.This is a hard thing to do， for we have other factors 33.　　　　 （consider） when weighing up the benefits of every food choice： taste， cost and convenience. 语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章讲述水资源短缺是我们今天面临的最大危机之一及造成水资源短缺的两个因素，并指出并不是日常生活中节约用水就能解决问题，我们每天总用水量的92％来自家庭用品的工业生产和食品的生产。 24.greatest　考查形容词的最高级。根据空前的one of the可知，此处应该用形容词的最高级，表示“最……的之一”。故填greatest。 25.living　考查非谓语动词。此处是with复合结构，two thirds of the global population与live是逻辑上的主谓关系，应该用动词-ing形式作宾语补足语。故填living。 26.to　考查介词。lead to导致。故填to。 27.has increased　考查动词的时态和主谓一致。根据时间状语over the last fifty years可知，空处应用现在完成时；主语global water usage是不可数名词，故填has increased。 28.a　考查冠词。a matter of ...一个……的问题。故填a。 29.teeth　考查名词复数。tooth为可数名词，空处应用其复数形式。故填teeth。 30.which　考查定语从句。空处引导非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词two groups，关系词在从句中作主语。故填which。 31.growth　考查词形转换。此处与名词production是并列成分，应用名词。故填growth。 32.Unfortunately　考查词形转换。此处修饰整个句子，应用副词作状语。根据语境可知，此处表示“不幸的是”，首字母应大写。故填Unfortunately。 33.to consider　考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，空处作后置定语，用动词不定式。故填to consider。 Ⅳ.读后续写 　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 　　（2026·广西崇左期末）One rainy night， when Victoria walked out of a fitness center， a small dog that was wet through， was sitting by the doors， staring inside.He was shaking.Victoria then walked up to him.The dog looked terrified but was friendly to her.With no one else around， Victoria knew she couldn’t leave him there.She picked up towels and covered him.Then she put him in her car and drove home. 　　The moment they got home， the dog relaxed.He had been outside in the rain for who knows how long.Now he was finally safe and warm.The next day， Victoria took him to the hospital.The doctor said the dog was all right.This meant Victoria could keep him. 　　Victoria named the dog Pluto.Pluto settled into his new home， learning routines and finding comfortable corners.Over the following months， Pluto turned from a shy dog into a confident and faithful friend.His favorite place was the carpet by the fireplace， and his gentle presence filled Victoria’s quiet house with a new kind of warmth.They often sat together in comfortable silence.Victoria read by the fire while Pluto slept quietly at her feet. 　　Then， one cold winter evening， their unspoken connection was tested in a way Victoria could never have imagined.After a long day’s work， she prepared a simple dinner and then went to bed early.What she didn’t know was that the kitchen stove had been leaking gas （泄漏煤气） slowly throughout the evening.As she fell into a deep dangerous sleep， Pluto became restless. 　　He walked around the room， touching Victoria’s hand， but she didn’t move.Pluto barked （吠叫） loud， but she remained unconscious （昏迷的）.Recognizing that his usual way to warn did not work， Pluto picked up one of Victoria’s running shoes from the floor， and pushed his way through the small dog door to their neighbor Mr Jensen’s house. 注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式作答。 　　Pluto ran to Mr Jensen’s house quickly and began barking.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　When Mr Jensen forced （强行） the door open， he smelled the strong gas at once.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 参考范文： 　　Pluto ran to Mr Jensen’s house quickly and began barking.He jumped up and down anxiously， holding Victoria’s shoe in his mouth and pushing it toward Mr Jensen.Mr Jensen， noticing the dog’s unusual restlessness and the shoe， realized something must be wrong.“Is it Victoria？” he asked in a hurry.Pluto barked louder， nodding his head as if in reply.Without hesitation， Mr Jensen grabbed his coat and followed Pluto to Victoria’s house. When Mr Jensen forced （强行） the door open， he smelled the strong gas at once.He rushed into the bedroom and found Victoria lying unconscious on the bed.Quickly， he opened all the windows to let the gas out and called the emergency number.Soon， doctors arrived and took Victoria to the hospital.Thanks to Pluto’s timely warning， Victoria recovered soon.From then on， their bond became even stronger， a silent promise of mutual protection that would last a lifetime. 1 / 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $