Unit 3 Section Ⅳ Writing about a family memory（Word教参）-【学霸笔记·同步精讲】2026-2027学年高中英语必修第一册（外研版）

本高中英语讲义聚焦家庭回忆类写作核心知识点，以范文为依托，系统梳理过去时态运用、情感动词（如surprise、tip-toe）及比喻修辞（如“love is a magical ingredient”）的语言技巧，通过时间顺序（yesterday→ten years ago→this weekend）构建写作结构。提供开头回忆、事件描述、感触或愿望的句式支架，辅以审题谋篇、要点陈述、句间衔接的写作指导，结合词汇积累与微情境练习，形成从输入到输出的完整学习链。 资料特色在于融合语言能力与思维品质培养，通过范文分析引导学生掌握形象化表达与逻辑组织，如“tip-toe”体现动作细节，时间顺序强化叙事条理。设置写作任务（如给Tom写信分享回忆）与综合练习（完形填空、读后续写），既助教师课堂教学实施，又供学生课后巩固，在真实情境中提升语言运用与问题解决能力，落实学习能力的培养。

Section Ⅳ　Writing about a family memory Sunday　20 October 　　I was tidying my room yesterday and found an old photo in a notebook.As I was looking at it， the lovely memory of that day came back to me. 　　It was my mother’s birthday ten years ago， and I decided to surprise her with home-made scrambled eggs.I woke up really early and tip-toed to the kitchen.I had never cooked anything before， so I tried to copy how she did it.But somehow they ended up burnt. 　　I was about to throw everything away when my mother came in.I showed her the eggs and sadly explained what happened.To my surprise， she tasted them and said they weren’t bad！ I guess love is indeed a magical ingredient.In fact， we ended up laughing and ate them all. 　　This weekend is her 45th birthday. I’ll make her scrambled eggs again， and this time they won’t be burnt！ 学语言 　　本文主要讲述了作者对十年前为母亲制作生日礼物的回忆。文章以过去时态为主，为了给母亲惊喜，文中使用了surprise， tip-toe等动词，使语言更加形象；失败后作者使用了sadly表达失望之情。 　　最终，母亲品尝后说还不错。作者使用了 ... love is indeed a magical ingredient， 将爱比喻成“神奇的调料”，由此“爱”得到升华…… 学结构 　　本文写作主要按时间顺序展开：yesterday→ten years ago→this weekend。 　　文章内容：一张老照片（引起回忆）→十年前给母亲制作生日礼物失败→下周母亲45岁生日，将再次制作同样的生日礼物（新的愿望）。 开头回忆 1.Three years ago when I just attended junior school， I spent much time playing and was rather lazy in my study. 三年前，我刚上初中，我花了大量时间去玩，学习上很懒惰。 2.Every time I look at the watch on my wrist， a lovely memory will come into my mind. 每次我看到手腕上的手表，一段美好的回忆就会浮现在我的脑海里。 3.Although the evening party happened three years ago， I will never forget it. 尽管这场晚会发生在三年前，但我永远不会忘记。 事件描述 1.I was walking in the street when I met a friend of mine. 我正在大街上走着，就在那时遇见了我的一位朋友。 2.As a senior high school student， you should know how to manage your time. 作为一名高中生，你应该知道如何管理时间。 3.I took it over eagerly， falling in love with it at first sight.我迫不及待地接过它，第一眼就喜欢上了它。 感触或愿望 1.I have been following Father’s words and have benefited a lot from it.I am thankful for my father. 我一直遵循父亲的话，并从中受益良多。我感谢我的父亲。 2.This is really the most unpleasant trip I have ever had！ 这是我曾经经历过的最不愉快的旅行！ 　　假定你是李华，你在整理书架时偶然看到妈妈曾经写给你的一堆卡片。刚进入高中时，你的学习压力很大，这些卡片是妈妈为了鼓励并帮助你缓解压力而写下的，最后你开始了快乐的学习旅程。请你把这段美好的回忆分享给你的好友Tom。 注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式作答。 Dear Tom， 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Yours， Li Hua 一、审题谋篇，结构分明 二、要点陈述，语言规范 1.这个周末我在整理书架时，发现了一叠卡片。 While I 　was cleaning up my bookshelf　 this weekend， I found a stack of cards. 2.当我读到每张卡片上的文字时，我的眼睛湿润了。 When I read the words on each card， 　my eyes watered　. 3.这些鼓励的卡片帮助我度过了挫折。 These encouraging cards 　helped me go through　 my frustration. 4.刚上高中的时候，我感到压力很大，每分每秒都害怕落后。 I 　felt pressured　 at the beginning of high school and I was afraid of falling behind every minute of the day. 5.妈妈很体贴，她发现了我的问题。 Mum was 　so considerate that　 she found my problem. 6.从那时起，我每天早上都能在我的桌子上发现一张特别的卡片。 　From then on　， I could find a special card on my desk every morning. 7.渐渐地，我变得不那么焦虑了，开始在学习中找到乐趣。 Gradually， I 　became less anxious　 and began to find pleasure in my studies. 8.妈妈让我明白压力是无法避免的。 Mum 　makes me understand　 that pressure can’t be avoided. 9.重要的是如何正确地处理它，如何把它变成快乐或挑战。 What counts is 　how to deal with it　 properly， and how to turn it into pleasure or challenge. 三、句间衔接，过渡自然 1.用省略句改写要点1。 　While cleaning up my bookshelf this weekend， I found a stack of cards.　 2.用强调句改写要点3。 　It was these encouraging cards that helped me go through my frustration.　 四、检查誊写，卷面整洁 Dear Tom， 　　　While cleaning up my bookshelf this weekend， I found a stack of cards.When I read the words on each card， my eyes watered.It was these encouraging cards that helped me go through my frustration.　 　　　I felt pressured at the beginning of high school and I was afraid of falling behind every minute of the day.Mum was so considerate that she found my problem.From then on， I could find a special card on my desk every morning.Gradually， I became less anxious and began to find pleasure in my studies.　 　　　Mum makes me understand that pressure can’t be avoided.What counts is how to deal with it properly， and how to turn it into pleasure or challenge.　 Yours， Li Hua 词汇 动作描写 approach v.走近，靠近 　　 chat v.& n.聊天 ignore v.忽视，不理 　　 sigh v.& n.叹气 judge v.认为，判断　　 apologise v.道歉 admire v.钦佩，赞美，羡慕 contain v.包含，含有；抑制 observe v.庆祝，过（节日、生日等） settle v.定居；停留；和解，结束（争论） 词汇 人物描写 skin n.皮肤 　　 beard n.胡须 jaw n.下巴，下颌　　 talent n.天赋，才能 professional adj.职业的，专业的 slim adj.苗条的，修长的 cheek n.面颊，脸颊 responsible adj.（对事故、错误、罪行等）负有责任的；应承担责任的→responsibility n.责任 佳句 1.She still has smooth skin and straight black hair， and jogging has kept her slim and fit. （外貌描写） 她仍然有光滑的皮肤和直直的黑发，慢跑使她保持苗条和健康。 2.I still have light skin and black hair， of course.But I usually wear my hair in ponytail these days as it has got a lot longer.Mum says I have cute rosy cheeks， but now I have freckles. （外貌描写） 当然，我仍然有浅色的皮肤和黑色的头发。但是这些天我通常把头发扎成马尾，因为我的头发变长了。妈妈说我有可爱红润的脸颊，但现在我有雀斑。 微情境一　班级才艺展示筹备 　　Our class planned to hold a talent show for the school art festival， and Lily had long intended to show her piano skills.1.　Worrying that her performance wasn’t professional enough　 （担心自己的表演不够专业）， she practiced alone in the music room every afternoon.2.　Her deskmate Tom approached her gently　 （她的同桌汤姆温柔地走近她）， saying：“Your playing is amazing — I really 3.　admire your talent　 （羡慕你的天赋）！”At first， some classmates had different ideas about the program order， 4.　but they soon settled the dispute through discussion　 （但他们很快通过讨论解决了分歧）.On the day of the show， Lily sat in front of the piano with a calm smile， her slim fingers dancing on the keys.After her performance， everyone cheered loudly — 5.　no one could contain their praise　 （没人能抑制住赞美之情）！ 微情境二　校园志愿者活动日 　　Our class signed up for the community volunteer activity， and we gathered at the school gate early in the morning.1.　We intended to help clean the park and chat with the elderly　 （我们打算帮忙打扫公园并和老人聊天）.2.　At first， Xiaoming accidentally ignored an old grandma sitting on the bench　 （起初，小明不小心忽视了坐在长椅上的老奶奶）， as he was busy picking up rubbish.3.　When he realized his mistake， he hurried to apologise to her　 （当意识到自己的错误时，他赶紧向她道歉）， his cheeks turning red.The grandma smiled and said it didn’t matter — she even shared stories about her youth with us.4.　We observed that some elderly people needed help with carrying things　 （我们注意到一些老人需要帮忙搬东西）， so we divided the tasks reasonably.By the end of the day， though we were tired， we all felt proud — we understood that 5.　being responsible means caring for others　 （有责任感意味着关心他人）. Ⅰ.完形填空 　　（2026·湖北黄石期中）Ben and his single father， Tom， lived in a small， cozy house on Elm Street.Life wasn’t always easy for them.Tom worked long hours at a local factory to 　1　， and Ben often felt 　2　 after school. 　　One evening， Ben came home with a 　3　 on his face.His school planned a father-son camping trip， but he was 　4　 to mention it.Noticing Ben’s quietness， Tom sat beside him and 　5　 asked， “What’s wrong， son？” 　　After a sigh， Ben 　6　 the news.Surprisingly， Ben’s eyes 　7　 with joy instantly when he heard his father promise， “I’ll 　8　 tomorrow！ We’ll have a great time together！” Ben’s face sparked in excitement， and a big smile 　9　 his frown. 　　At the campsite， Tom 　10　 the tent in the beautiful forest while Ben watched 　11　.Though Ben caught no fish later， he didn’t 　12　 — Dad’s childhood stories were treasure enough. 　　That night， as they sat around the campfire， under starry skies， Ben 　13　， “I thought you were too busy.”Tom hugged him.“You’re my top 　14　.These moments with you mean the world to me.” 　　This trip proved that real 　15　 isn’t about money but shared moments.Through life’s storms， such memories shine brightest. 语篇解读：本文是一篇夹叙夹议文。文章讲述了Ben和单亲父亲Tom生活拮据，Ben因学校父子露营旅行而心情低落，父亲Tom得知后请假陪伴，通过露营之旅展现父子间的温情，最终揭示真正的家庭温暖不在于金钱而在于共享时光的道理。 1.A.make a difference　 B.make a profit C.make ends meet　 D.make a change 解析：C　根据上文Life wasn’t always easy for them.可知，父子俩生活不易， Tom长时间工作是为了维持生计。 2.A.excited　 B.lonely C.tired　 D.angry 解析：B　根据上文Ben and his single father可推知，单亲家庭的Ben缺乏陪伴，应是感到孤独。 3.A.smile　 B.tear C.frown　 D.surprise 解析：C　根据下文Ben’s quietness以及What’s wrong， son？可知，Ben心情不佳，皱着眉头。 4.A.eager　 B.afraid C.ready　 D.happy 解析：B　根据上文Life wasn’t always easy for them.可知，Ben担心父亲无力承担或没时间而不敢提及此事。 5.A.rudely　 B.gently C.loudly　 D.quickly 解析：B　根据语境可知，父亲应是温柔地询问儿子。 6.A.shared　 B.kept C.heard　 D.forgot 解析：A　根据下文he heard his father promise以及We’ll have a great time together！可知，父亲答应和Ben一同去，说明Ben向父亲分享了这个消息。 7.A.darkened　 B.closed C.widened　 D.opened 解析：C　根据下文可知，听到父亲愿意陪伴自己露营，Ben惊喜万分，睁大了双眼。 8.A.work overtime　 B.take a day off C.stay at home　 D.have a look 解析：B　根据下文We’ll have a great time together！可知，父亲需要请假才能参加。 9.A.covered　 B.replaced C.showed　 D.hid 解析：B　根据Ben’s face sparked in excitement可知，Ben用灿烂的微笑取代了皱眉。 10.A.set up　 B.took down C.looked for　 D.played with 解析：A　根据At the campsite可知，到达营地后需要搭建帐篷。 11.A.sadly　 B.worriedly C.admiringly　 D.nervously 解析：C　根据上文渴望和父亲露营，以及对父亲的情感可知，Ben应是带着钦佩之情看着父亲搭帐篷。 12.A.mind　 B.know C.say　 D.think 解析：A　根据Dad’s childhood stories were treasure enough可知，有父亲的陪伴和故事，没钓到鱼也不介意。 13.A.shouted　 B.whispered C.replied　 D.said 解析：D　根据I thought you were too busy.可知，Ben应是告诉了父亲他之前的想法。 14.A.problem　 B.choice C.concern　 D.friend 解析：C　根据下文These moments with you mean the world to me.可知，此处是指最重要的、最关心的人。 15.A.wealth　 B.trip C.family　 D.life 解析：A　根据上文父子俩露营的温馨经历可知，本文聚焦温馨的亲子时光，认为这是最重要的事情、最大的财富，而非钱财。 Ⅱ.语法填空 　　（2026·湖南衡阳期中）It is common to have 16.　　　　　　 （heat） discussions and cold silences between you and your parents.Such family tensions may result from your physical 17.　　　　　　 （change） such as shooting up in height， your changing voice and weight problems.Besides， it is also a struggle 18.　　　　　　 （balance） your developing mental needs.You may have a desire for independence 19.　　　　　　 want to make decisions by yourself while your parents may not always agree or they have high expectations of you.Although it may seem impossible to get along as a family， you can take 20.　　　　　　 （act） to improve the situation.Having regular and honest communication 21.　　　　　　 （be） the key.When you disagree with your parents， you should calm down and try to understand the situation 22.　　　　　　 their point of view， which might help you understand their worries that you may get hurt or go through 23.　　　　　　 same pain as they did.Through this， the relationship with your parents can 24.　　　　　　 （improve）.Remember that this stormy period will not last forever and the changes and challenges 25.　　　　　　 you are experiencing in your teenage years will be a good preparation for your adulthood. 语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了青少年与父母之间常见的问题及改善亲子关系的建议。 16.heated　考查词形转换。本空修饰名词discussions，作定语，用形容词。故填heated。 17.changes　考查名词复数。本空作介词from的宾语，用名词，根据下文列举的多个变化可知，此处应用复数形式。故填changes。 18.to balance　考查非谓语动词。it为形式主语，用动词不定式作真正的主语。故填to balance。 19.and　考查连词。have a desire for independence与want to make decisions by yourself为并列关系，需用并列连词连接。故填and。 20.action　考查词形转换。take action采取行动。 21.is　考查时态和主谓一致。本句陈述事实，时态用一般现在时，主语communication为不可数名词。故填is。 22.from　考查介词。from one’s point of view从某人的角度。故填from。 23.the　考查冠词。the same相同的。故填the。 24.be improved　考查被动语态。主语relationship与improve之间为被动关系，本空与情态动词can构成含情态动词的被动语态。故填be improved. 25.that/which　考查定语从句。本空引导定语从句，修饰先行词changes and challenges，指物，关系代词代替先行词在从句中作are experiencing的宾语。故填that/which。 Ⅲ.读后续写 　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 　　（2026·河北保定六校期中）My mom only had one eye.I didn’t know why and she never told me what had happened to her.I hated her.She was such an embarrassment. 　　She ran a small shop at a flea market （跳蚤市场） and collected old clothes and some other things to sell for the money we needed.Once during elementary school， it was a field day， and my mom came.I was so embarrassed and wondered how she could do this to me.I threw her a hateful look and ran out.The next day at school， my schoolmates asked me， “Your mom only has one eye？！” and they laughed at me. 　　I was so angry with my mom and wished that she would just disappear from my world.So I said to my mom， “If you’re only going to make me a joke， why don’t you just stay far away from me？” My mom did not respond.I felt a little bad， but at the same time， I felt so good to have said what I wanted to say.Maybe it was because my mom hadn’t punished me， I didn’t think that I had hurt her feelings very badly. 　　For the words I had said to her earlier， there was something pinching （掐） at me in the corner of my heart.Even so， I hated my one-eyed mom and our terrible poverty （贫困）.I told myself that I would become successful in the near future， so I studied very hard.Later， I got accepted by Seoul University.I left my mom and went to Seoul to study. 　　Then I got married there.I bought a house of my own.Then I had kids， too.I was living happily as a successful man.I enjoyed the life in Seoul because it was a place that didn’t remind me of my mom and my past.This kind of happiness was getting bigger and bigger until one day someone knocked at my door. 注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式作答。 　　It was my mom still with her one eye！　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　I felt relieved about my mom’s leaving， but days later， a letter about her lost eye turned my world upside down.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 参考范文： 　　It was my mom still with her one eye！ It felt as if the whole sky was falling apart on me.My little girl ran away， scared of my mom’s eye.I screamed at her and said that I didn’t know her， asking how she dared to come to my house and scare my daughter.In response to this， my mom quietly answered， “Oh， I’m so sorry.” She said she might have gotten the wrong address， and she disappeared out of sight. I felt relieved about my mom’s leaving， but days later， a letter about her lost eye turned my world upside down.The secret was out：my mom gave me her eye when I was young， as mine was lost in an accident.Overwhelming （压倒性的） shame crushed me.I broke down.Tears blurred my sight.She saw my whole world with one eye， while I， with two， was blind to her love.Her one eye， once a shame， now glowed like stars.I must find her to beg for forgiveness， and finally told her， “Mom， I love you.” 1 / 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $