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UNIT 3 FASCINATING PARKS
主题语境:人与社会——主题公园
Section Ⅴ Writing
Writing 1 应用文——公园介绍
◎情境呈现
假定你是李华,收到外教Mr Green的邮件,要你推荐附近某公园、景点或博物馆以了解当地的文化,为此请你给他回一封邮件,内容要点包括:
1.你的推荐;
2.介绍情况;
3.表达希望。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
Step 1.审题谋篇
Step 2.遣词造句
字斟句酌添细节,写作框架雏形现
第一段:点明写信目的,推荐主题公园
1.当我知道你对民族文化感兴趣时,我写信推荐你去一个新建的主题公园。
____________________________________________, I'm writing to recommend you to go to a newly built theme park.
第二段:介绍主题公园的详情
2.公园的主题是城市的民族文化。
The theme of the park ___________________________.
Knowing that you're interested in the national culture
is about the city's ethnic culture
3.该建筑以传统民族风格为特色,涵盖了居住在这座城市的所有地方民族。
The construction _____________________________________.The construction ___________________________ living in the city.
4.在这里,你既能欣赏当地的房屋,又能沉浸式体验当地的生活百态与民俗节庆,全方位感受这座城市的人文风情。
You can ________________________________________________________,
from which you can learn a lot about the people in the city.
is characterized by traditional national styles
covers all the local nationalities
not only see local houses, but also experience local life and festivals
5.游客可以在公园里休息,玩得开心。
Visitors can _____________________ in the park.
第三段: 表达个人希望
6.如果可能的话,我希望能和你一起体验这个主题公园。
__________, I hope to experience this theme park with you.
have a rest and have fun
If possible
巧用单元句式,靓化表达促提升
读教材原句 (教材P31)The theme park you are probably most familiar with is Disneyland, which can be found in several parts of the world.
记句式 本句套了两层定语从句,结构紧凑、逻辑连贯。
学仿写 将句3合并升级为定语从句。
The construction is characterized by traditional national styles, ____________ ___________________________________.
which covers
all the local nationalities living in the city
Step 3.衔接成篇
Dear Mr Green,
Knowing that you're interested in the national culture, I'm writing to recommend you to go to a newly built theme park.
The theme of the park is about the city's ethnic culture.The construction is characterized by traditional national styles, which covers all the local nationalities living in the city.In the park, you can not only see local houses, but also experience local life and festivals, from which you can learn a lot about the people in the city.Happily, visitors can have a rest and have fun in the park.
If possible, I hope to experience this theme park with you.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
◎语料拓展
一、介绍功能或特点
1.In my view,it is a good place for relaxation and amusement.
在我看来,这是一个放松和娱乐的好地方。
2.In addition,you can enjoy wonderful performances at the theme park.
此外,你可以在主题公园里欣赏精彩的表演。
二、介绍地理位置
1.The theme park is located/situated in the west of our city near the high-speed railway station.
该主题公园坐落在我们城市西郊的高铁站附近。
2.The theme park lies in the northern part of Sichuan Province,which is well-known for its beautiful lakes.
该主题公园位于四川省北部,以其美丽的湖泊而闻名。
3.Located in the southeast of Jilin Province,Changbaishan is one of the Ten Most Famous Mountains in China.
长白山位于吉林省东南部,是中国十大名山之一。
三、介绍面积
It will be a world-famous theme park,covering an area of 670,000 square metres.
=It will be a world-famous theme park with an area of 670,000 square metres.
它将成为世界著名的主题公园,占地67万平方米。
四、介绍历史
1.It is a world-famous theme park which has a history of 50 years.
它是一个有着50年历史的世界著名的主题公园。
2.Serving as the capital of 13 dynasties in Chinese history,Xi'an is considered to be one of the birth places of the Chinese civilization.
西安是中国历史上13个朝代的都城,被认为是中华文明的诞生地之一。
五、介绍交通方式
1.You can reach the theme park by subway.
你可以乘地铁到主题公园。
2.You can get there a little more quickly by taxi.
乘出租车去那里你可能会更快一点儿。
六、介绍收费情况
The admission fee to the park is 100 yuan,and all the activities in the park are free.
公园门票是100元,园内的所有活动都是免费的。
◎实战演练
假定你是李华,周末你想邀请你的留学生好友 David到大熊猫国家公园参观。请你用英语给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.公园概况;2.发出邀请。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右。
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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参考范文
Dear David,
①__________________________________________________________ ____________________(如果你这个周末有空,我想邀请你去参观大熊猫国家公园).
The park stretches across Sichuan,Gansu, and Shaanxi provinces, ②________________________________________________________________ (其大部分区域位于四川,这里栖息着80%以上的野生大熊猫).We're truly lucky to live in Chengdu.
I'd like to invite you to visit the Giant Panda National Park if you're
available this weekend
most of whose land is in Sichuan, home to more than 80 percent of wild pandas
The park brings together many established panda reserves and protected areas containing thousands of plant and animal species, ③______________ ______________________[其中许多(物种)都受到威胁或濒临灭绝].Since you've always been fascinated by giant pandas,④_____________________ ________________(我相信这次旅行一定会让你印象深刻).
Waiting for your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
many of them
threatened or endangered
I believe this trip would
impress you a lot
Writing 2 语料积累 读后续写
教材语料积累
词
汇 情感
描写 amusement n.娱乐(活动);愉悦→amuse vt.(提供)消遣;(使)娱乐→amusing adj.逗人笑的;有趣的→amused adj.被逗乐的;觉得好笑的
动作
描写 ①bless vt.祝福 ②buffet vt.连续猛击;打来打去
③cycle vi.骑自行车 ④adopt vt.采用;采取;采纳 vt.& vi.领养
⑤accompany vt.陪同;陪伴;伴随;(尤指用钢琴)为……伴奏
⑥stretch vi.延伸;延续 vi.& vt.伸展;舒展
⑦appeal vi.有吸引力;呼吁;恳求;上诉
⑧wander vt.& vi.闲逛;漫游 vi.走失;离散;走神
⑨set out出发;启程;(怀着目标)开始工作
美
句 1.I wake up to the sound of the wind buffeting the cloth of my tent.(动作描写)
2.I'm above the Arctic Circle,where in summer the sun never sets.(环境描写)
3.Spreading out before me,branches of the Rapa River flow through the valley below.(环境描写)
4.At the far side of the valley,an ancient Sami cottage is visible.Close by,there are a few reindeer feeding on grass.(环境描写)
5.They used the reindeer's meat for food,their bones for tools,and their skin for making clothes and tents.(排比修辞)
6.Here I am,alone under this broad sky,breathing the fresh air,and enjoying this great adventure.(动作描写)
续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇,完成以下语段,然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
With my parents 1.________________,I 2. _______ _____ the picturesque beach 3. ______________________ ____________.The sea waves were 4. ____________ _____.The seawater was glittering in the morning sunlight and the sea wave was cool on our feet as we leisurely 5.________________________.I made some sandcastles 6. ________________.Then 7. _____________________ were the seashells scattered on the beach.8. _____________ __________________________________________. 父母陪着我,我向一望无际的风景如画的沙滩出发。海浪拍打着海岸。海水在清晨的阳光下闪闪发光。当我们悠闲地沿着海滩闲逛时,脚下的海浪很凉爽。我快乐地堆了一些沙堡。接着,最吸引我的是散落在沙滩上的贝壳。身处如此吸引人的地方,我们感到活着是幸福的。
accompanying me
set out
for
stretching out as far as
we could see
buffeting the
shore
wandered along the beach
with/in amusement
what appealed to me most
Being in such
an appealing place made us feel blessed to be alive
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