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Section Ⅴ Writing
Writing 1 应用文——关于科技的正反对比类议论文
◎情境呈现
(2026·福州四校联盟高二第一学期联考)
假如你是李华,你所在的当地英文报近期举办一场辩论赛,要求参赛者写一篇关于微信(WeChat)利弊的文章,刊登在论坛上。要点如下:
1.微信的益处;
2.微信的弊端;
3.你的看法。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Editor,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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Step 1.审题谋篇
Step 2.遣词造句
字斟句酌添细节,写作框架雏形现
第一段:引入话题——微信给我们带来利与弊
1.近来,微信在我们的日常生活中越来越受欢迎,它既带来了好处,也带来了弊端。
Recently, WeChat has become increasingly popular in our daily lives, bringing both benefits and drawbacks.
第二段:具体陈述微信给我们带来的方便及导致的问题
2.它提供了极大的便利。首先,我们可以随时随地很容易地与朋友和家人保持联系。
It offers great convenience. To begin with, we can easily keep in touch with friends and family anytime and anywhere.
3.此外,它还提供了一个平台,在这里我们可以分享瞬间、想法和有趣的内容。
What's more,it also provides a platform where we can share moments, ideas, and interesting content.
4.这也会带来问题。我们可能会过度沉迷于这款应用程序,从而影响我们的学习和工作。
It leads to problems.We may be addicted to the app too much, thus affecting our study and work.
5.更糟糕的是,由于人们越来越依赖虚拟交流,面对面的沟通能力可能会下降。
What's worse, face-to-face communication skills may decline since people rely more on virtual interactions.
第三段: 发表个人对微信的观点
6.在我看来,微信是一个强大的工具,但我们应当以恰当的方式使用它。
As far as I'm concerned, WeChat is a powerful tool, but we should use it in a proper way.
巧用单元句式,靓化表达促提升
【读教材原句】(教材P20)On the one hand, there are many different groups of people around the world who live happily in the absence of new technology.
On the other hand, new technology has provided people everywhere with many benefits over the years.
【记句式】句中的 on the one hand…on the other hand…能够使结构更清晰,客观地展示不同观点,并使文章更有逻辑性和说服力
【学仿写】将句2、4用on the one hand… on the other hand衔接。
On the one hand, it offers great convenience.To begin with, we can easily keep in touch with friends and family anytime and anywhere.On the other hand,it leads to problems.We may be addicted to the app too much, thus affecting our study and work.
Step 3.衔接成篇
Dear Editor,
Recently, WeChat has become increasingly popular in our daily lives, bringing both benefits and drawbacks.
On the one hand, it offers great convenience.To begin with, we can easily keep in touch with friends and family anytime and anywhere.What's more, it also provides a platform where we can share moments, ideas, and interesting content.
On the other hand, it leads to problems.We may be addicted to the app too much, thus affecting our study and work.What's worse, face-to-face communication skills may decline since people rely more on virtual interactions.
As far as I'm concerned, WeChat is a powerful tool, but we should use it in a proper way.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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◎语料拓展
一、介绍讨论的主题
1.There is a widespread concern over the issue that robots will cause great threat to us.
对机器人将会对我们造成很大的威胁这个问题,人们有一种普遍的担忧。
2.It is universally acknowledged that WeChat is becoming more and more popular.
人们普遍认为微信越来越受欢迎。
3.The students had a heated discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of social media.
同学们就社交媒体的利弊展开了激烈的讨论。
二、正反观点及论证
1.However, people differ in their opinions on this matter.
然而,在这个问题上人们的观点各不相同。
2.Generally speaking, its advantages can be seen as follows.
一般来说,它的优点如下。
3.As we all know, science and technology has changed our lives in many aspects.
众所周知,科学技术在很多方面改变了我们的生活。
4.The development of science and technology makes our lives more comfortable and convenient.
科学技术的发展使我们的生活更加舒适和便利。
5.People use electronic products every day, so people's bodies have a series of problems.
人们每天使用电子产品,因此身体出现了一系列问题。
三、发表个人观点
1.As far as I am concerned, what matters most is that we should make good use of science and technology.
依我看来,最重要的是我们应该好好运用科技。
2.But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.
但凡事都有两面性。消极的方面也是很明显的。
3.Personally, I will always look on the positive side of the advances of new technology.
就个人而言,我总是会看到新技术进步的积极面。
◎实战演练
(2026·福建省宁德市高二上期中)
假定你是李华,你班最近就“Should students use electronic dictionary pens?”这一话题进行了讨论,大家对此看法不一,讨论结果如下表。请介绍讨论情况并陈述你自己的观点。
赞同理由
1.电子词典笔便于携带;2.查单词容易。
反对理由
1.收录的单词少;2.单词释义(explanation)少;3.容易产生依赖性,不再下功夫记单词。
你的观点
……
注意:(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式作答。
Recently, we have had a heated discussion about whether we should use electronic dictionary pens.
【参考范文】
Recently, we have had a heated discussion about whether we should use electronic dictionary pens. Different people hold different views.
①Some students are in favour of the idea, arguing that the electronic dictionary pen is easy to carry(一些学生赞成这个想法,他们认为电子词典笔便于携带), which brings convenience to our English learning.Moreover, it's faster to get the meaning by
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scanning a word.Nevertheless, others are against it.First, ②they hold the belief that the electronic dictionary pen has a small vocabulary and fewer explanations of words(他们认为电子词典笔的词汇量小,对单词的解释也较少).Second, we may become too dependent when it comes to memorizing new words.
③Personally, I think using electronic dictionary pens should be allowed, which will help us learn English more conveniently(就我个人而言,我认为应该允许使用电子词典笔,这会帮助我们更方便地学习英语).
Writing 2 语料积累 读后续写
【教材语料积累】
词汇
情感
描写
①distant adj.遥远的;远处的;疏远的;心不在焉的 ②secure 安全的;安心的→security n.保护措施;安全工作 ③preference n.爱好;偏爱
动作
描写
①cease vi.& vt.(使)停止;终止 ②switch vt.转换;交换 vi.& vt.(使)改变;转变 ③leak vi.& vt.漏;渗漏;透露 ④persuade vt.劝说;说服 ⑤resist vi.& vt.抵制;反抗;抵挡
美
句
1.These smart homes will keep us secure,save us energy,and provide a more comfortable environment to live in.(排比修辞)
2.Today,we have to use switches for our lights,knobs for our appliances,and remote controls for our TVs and air conditioners.(排比修辞)
3.They can warn you early on if there is something abnormal or if you have a critical illness…(拟人)
4.Nevertheless,I will always look on the positive side of change and accept it rather than resist it.(结尾升华)
【续写语料运用】
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇,完成以下语段,然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
With 1.her secret leaked,Jane 2.couldn't resist sobbing,with 3.a distant look in her eyes.Lacking a sense of security,she 4.ceased communicating with those around her.She didn't know 5.how to switch the embarrassment.She was thrown into the abyss of pain,burying herself in tears.Luckily,the monitor finally 6.persuaded the leaker to apologize to Jane.Gradually,Jane's gloom from within vanished into the air and a smile reappeared on her face.The monitor sighed in relief.
简的秘密被泄露了,她忍不住啜泣,眼神恍惚。由于缺乏安全感,她停止和周围的人交流。她不知道如何改变这种窘境。她陷入痛苦的深渊,整日以泪洗面。幸运的是,班长最终说服泄密者向简道歉。逐渐地,简内心的阴霾消失了,她的脸上重新露出了笑容,班长松了口气。
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