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Unit4 Scientists who changed the world写作精讲
Making a plan for the school Science Festival(制定学校科技节的计划)
Unit4 Scientists who changed the world写作精讲
单元:Unit4 Scientists who changed the world写作在务:Making a plan for the school
Science Festival(制定学校科技节的计划)
审题
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话题:为学校科技节制定一份活动计划,包括活动目的、具体安排、人员分工等,体现科
学精神和创新意识。
2
体裁:计划类应用文(可写成计划书或建议信形式)
3人称:以第一人称we或1为主(作为计划提出者),适当使用第二人称you(如写给校方
或同学)
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时态:以一般现在时和一般将来时为核心时态(陈述计划内容及预期效果)
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字数要求:高考标准100-120词
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核心要点:
>说明科技节的目的和意义
>列出2-3项具体活动(如展览、竞赛、讲座等)
,明确时间、地点或负责人员
>表达对科技节的期待和祝愿
二、文章结构
1开头段:
简要介绍科技节的背景或目的
>表明写信/写计划的目的(如“为了成功举办科技节,我制定了以下计划”)
2
主体段:
>分条阐述具体活动安排(每条建议搭配时间、地点、内容或理由)
,使用连接词(First of all,Besides,Additionally等)使逻辑清晰
3
结尾段:
>表达对科技节成功的信心与祝愿
>如有需要,可请求批准或征求意见
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
science festival
科技节
innovation innovative
n.创新;adj.创新的
experiment
n.w.实验
exhibition
n.展览;展示
competition
n.竞赛;比赛
workshop
n.工作坊;研讨会
display
n.N.展示;陈列
lecture
n.讲座
hands-on
adj.动手实践的
inspire
V.激励;后发
organize/arrange
v.组织;v.安排
participant
n.参与者
creativity
n.创造力
2.常用短语
短语
释义
set up a science festival
举办科技节
hold an exhibition
举办展览
take part in
参加
carry out experiments
进行实验
aro use students'interest in science
激发学生对科学的兴趣
develop creative thinking
培养创造性思维
put forward ideas
提出想法
work in groups
分组合作
make contrib utions to
为做贡献
3.基础造句
1I am writing to propose a detailed plan for the school Science Festival.
我写信是为学校科技节提出一份详细计划。
2
First of all,we will hold a science exhibition to display students'inventions.
首先,我们将举办一场科技展览,展示学生们的发明。
3 Besides,a hands-on workshop will be organized to encourage students to do
experiments.
此外,还会组织动手工作坊,鼓励学生做实验。
4
I believe this plan will make the Science Festival a great success.
我相信这个计划将使科技节取得巨大成功。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通important→of great significance/crucial
普通interesting→fascinating/appealing
普通
planproposal arrangement
普通
show display demonstrate
普通
helpcontribute to facilitate
加分句型
With the aim of inspiring students'creativity,I have worked out the following
plan.
为了激发学生的创造力,我制定了以下计划。(介词短语作状语)
2 Not only will the exhibition showcase innovative projects,but it will also
provide a platform for students to communicate ideas.
展览不仅将展示创新项目,还将为学生提供交流想法的平台。(部分倒装)
It is highly recommended that a science lecture be given by a local scientist to
broaden students'horizons.
强烈建议邀请一位本地科学家举办一场讲座,以拓宽学生的视野。(虚拟语气)
4Only by combining theory with practice can students truly appreciate the
charm of science.
只有将理论与实践相结合,学生亨能真正体会到科学的魅力。(倒装句型)
5The festival,which will last three days,promises to be an unforgettable
experience for everyone.
这场为期三天的科技节,注定会成为每个人难忘的经历。(非限制性定语从句)
五、写作模板(100-120词)
Dear [Namel,
To make the school Science Festival a memorable and meaningful event,I am
writing to present a detailed plan.
First of all,a science exhibition will be held in the school hall from 9 a.m.to 12
a.m.on Friday,where students can display their innovative projects.Besides,we
plan to organize a hands-on workshop in the afternoon,allowing participants to
carry out simple experiments under teachers'guidance.Last but not least,a
lecture on "The Future of AI"by a guest scientist will inspire students to explore
more about science.
I sincerely hope this plan can be approved.I am confident that the Science Festival
will greatly stimulate students'interest in science.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考翻译:
尊敬的[姓名]:
为了使学校科技节成为一次难忘而有意义的活动,我写信提出一份详细计划。
首先,周五上午9点到12点将在学校大厅举办一场科技展览,学生们可以展示自己的创新项目。此
外,我们计划在下午组织一场动手实践工作坊,让参与者在老师的指导下进行简单实验。最后但同样
重要的是,一位客座科学家将带来一场关于“人工智能的未来”的讲座,激励学生进一步探索科学。
我衷心希望这个计划能够获批。我相信科技节将极大地激发学生对科学的兴趣。
您真诚的,
李华
六、作文仿写(120词左右)
仿写题目:作为科学俱乐部主席,请给校长写一封信,为学校即将举办的科技节制
定一份计划(包括展览、竞赛、讲座三项活动)。
Dear Mr.Smith,
To make this year's Science Festival both educational and enjoyable,I would like to
put forward the following plan.
First of all,a science exhibition will be arranged in the main hall,where students
can show their original inventions and models.Besides,we will hold a science quiz
competition to test students'knowledge and teamwork.Additionally,an online
lecture on "Great Scientists in History"is scheduled for the last day,which will
help students learn from the pioneers of science.
I believe that these activities will ignite students'passion for science and develop
their creative thinking.I sincerely hope you will support this plan.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
参考译文:
尊敬的史密斯先生:
为了使今年的科技节既有教育意义又有趣味性,我想提出以下计划。
首先,将在主厅安排一场科技展览,学生们可以展示自己的原创发明和模型。此外,我们将举办一场科学知识
竞赛,以检验学生的知识储备和团队协作能力。另外,最后一天还安排了一场主题为“历史上的伟大科学家”的
在线讲座,帮助学生向科学先驱学习。
我相信这些活动将点燃学生对科学的热情,并培养他们的创造性思维。衷心希望您能支持这项计划。
您真诚的,
李华
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一:建议同学参与科技节准备
Dear Li Hua,
I'm excited that the school Science Festival is coming.I'm writing to share some
suggestions for making a good plan.
First of all,it is a wise idea to choose a creative project,such as a model rocket or
a water filter,because it can attract visitors and show your innovation.Besides,
you should form a team of three or four classmates,which helps divide tasks and
work efficiently.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to practice your
presentation in advance,as it is beneficial to boosting your confidence and
communication skills.
I hope my suggestions will help you prepare well.Good luck with your project!
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Wei
(词数:114)
范文二:建议班长组织科技节活动
Dear Monitor,
With the Science Festival approaching,I'd like to offer some advice on organizing it
successfully.
1.Set up different zones:a hands-on experiment zone and a display zone for
models.This helps visitors experience science in various ways.
2.Invite a science teacher to give a short lecture on the first day.*It can inspire
interest and explain key knowledge.
3.Prepare a simple handbook for each visitor,covering the schedule and fun facts.
This makes the festival more informative and memorable.
I hope my plan will make the festival more organized and enjoyable.Let's work
together!
Yours sincerely,
Wang Fang
(词数:115)