Unit 3 On the move 写作精讲-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第二册单元话题写作精讲（外研版）

高中 外研版·必修第二册 Unit3 On the move写作精讲 Writing a sports story(写体育故事) Unit3 On the move写作精讲 写作任务：Writing a sports story(写体育故事) 审题 1 话题：记叙一次体育赛事、比赛经历或运动员的感人故事，突出“运动"带来的拼搏、团 结、 成长或感动。 2 体裁：记叙文（体育故事），可带有新闻报导或个人叙事色彩。 3人称：以第-人称(I/we)或第三人称(he/she/they)为主，视叙述角度而定。 4 时态：以一般过去时为核心时态，描述比赛过程；可适当使用过去进行时（背景描写）和 过去完成时（提前发生的准备）。 5 字数要求：高考标准100-120词（若为完整故事可略长至120-150词）。 6 核心要点： >交代比赛/事件背景（时间、地点、人物、起因） >描述关键过程（冲突、转折、高潮） >点明结果与感悟（收获、精神、意义） 文章结构 1 开头段：简要交代故事背景（何时、何地、什么比赛、参赛者是谁），引出事 件。 常用句式：Last Sunday,a basketball match was held between../It was a sunny afternoon when... 2 主体段：按时间顺序叙述比赛/经过，突出关键情节（紧张、落后、反超、绝杀 等)，加入动作描写和感受。 常用连接词：At the beginning,..Then,Suddenly,.In the end,. 3结尾段：总结结果，升华主题（如团队精神、永不放弃、运动之美），可加入一 句个人感悟。 三、核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 match game competition n.比赛 athlete/player/teammate n.运动员/队友 score nN.比分；得分 compete v.竞争；competition n.竞赛 effort n.努力 determination n.决心 victory n.胜利；defeat n.N.失败 teamwork n.团队合作 sprint V.冲刺 cheer V.加油；欢呼 2.常用短语 短语 释义 take part in 参加 in the first half second half 上半场/下半场 fall behind 落后 catch up 追上 tie the score 追平比分 短语 释义 take the lead 领先 give one's best 全力以赴 never give up 永不放弃 with the help of 在…帮助下 in the final moments 在最后关头 3.基础造句 1 Our team took part in the school football final last Friday. 我们队上周五参加了学校足球决赛。 2 In the first half,we fell behind by two goals. 上半场我们落后两球。 3With great determination,we caught up and tied the score. 凭着极大的决心，我们追平了比分。 4 The victory taught me the true meaning of teamwork. 这场胜利让我懂得了团队合作的真正意义。 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普通important→vital/crucial 普通 winclaim the victory secure the win 普通 try hardspare no effort/fight tooth and nail 普通】 in the end(eventually ultimately 加分句型 1Hardly had the match begun when we received a heavy blow. 比赛刚开始，我们就遭受了沉重打击。（否定倒装句型） 2 It was our never-say-die spirit that turned the game around. 正是我们永不放弃的精神扭转了比赛。（强调句型） 3As the whistle blew,the crowd erupted into cheers. 哨声一响，人群爆发出欢呼声。（时间状语从句+生动描写） What impressed me most was the moment when the captain scored the winning goal. 最合我印象深刻的是队长打入制胜球的那一刻。（主语从句+定语从句） 五、导作模板(120词左右) Title(可选)：An Unforgettable Match/A Story on the Move 开头段： Last[时间]，a[比赛项目]was held in[地点].I was one of the players/a spectator. 主体段： At the beginning,[初始情况].Then[转折/紧张].However,we did not lose heart.[关键 动作/表现].In the final minutes,[高潮/逆转].With a powerful shot/amazing teamwork,we finally[结果]. 结尾段： The match ended with a score of[比分].More than victory,I learned that[主题感悟]， Sports are not just about winning,but about moving forward together. 六、作文仿军(120词左右) 仿写题目：上周你参加了学校篮球决赛，描述这场此赛并分享你的感受。 Last Saturday,the school basketball final was held in the gym.I was the guard of our team. At the beginning,we fell behind by 10 points.Their players were taller and faster. However,we did not give up.We changed our strategy and began to cooperate more closely.In the last two minutes,I passed the ball to our captain,who made a three-pointer and tied the score.Then,with only five seconds left,I stole the ball and scored the winning basket.The crowd went wild! The final score was 62:60.That night,I realized that determination and teamwork are more important than individual skills.On the move,every effort counts. 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：分享班级足球赛经历 Dear Mike, I'd like to share my exciting football match with you.Last Friday,our class had a great game against Class 3. First,our team warmed up and the coach encouraged us to stay united.Then,the match began and we worked hard to control the ball.In the second half,I passed the ball to Tom,who scored the winning goal!We all cheered loudly.Finally,the referee blew the whistle and we won 2-1. This match taught me that teamwork always leads to success.I hope you can come and watch our next game! Yours, Li Hua 范文二：分享校运会接力赛经历 Dear Sarah I want to tell you about our school relay race last week.It was really unforgettable. First,I felt nervous standing at the start line.Then,our first runner passed the baton to me smoothly.I ran as fast as I could,with my teammates shouting my name.In the final 50 meters,I focused on breathing and pushed forward.Finally,I handed the baton to the last runner,and we finished second! Though we didn't win first place,I learned the value of persistence and trust.I'll never forget that moment. Yours, Zhang Wei