Unit 4 Friends forever 写作精讲-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第一册单元话题写作精讲（外研版）

高中 外研版·必修第一册 Unit4 Friends forever写作精讲 Writing an ending to a story(给故事写-个结尾) Unit4 Friends forever写作精讲 写作任务：Writing an ending to a story(给故事写-一个结尾) 审题 1 话题：根据已给出的故事开头或情节线索，合理续写故事的结尾，体现“友谊永恒”的主 题。 2体裁：记叙文（做事结尾） 一一需要在保持原文风格和基调的基础上，完成情节收束、情 感升华。 3人称：通常与原文一致。若原文用第一人称则继续用we;若用第三人称则保持 he/she/they. 4时态：故事以一般过去时为主，可辅以过去进行时、过去将来时、过去完成时；结尾处的 感悟或总结可用一般现在时。 5 字数要求：高考标准120-150词（单元任务可酌情调整）。 6 核心要点： >衔接开头情节，逻辑合理； ,解决故事中的矛盾或悬念； >突出友谊的主题（如理解、信任、陪伴、共同成长）； >适当加入对话、心理描写或环境烘托，增强感染力； >结尾自然，可点题升华。 二、文章结构 1结尾段（核心）：承接前文，完成冲突化解或事件结果。通过动作、对话或心理 活动展现人物关系变化。点明友谊带来的感悟或成长。 写作建议：避免直接说“我们和好了”，要用具体细节呈现：如握手、一起大笑、共同 完成某件事。 2收束句：环境烘托或总结性语句，如“夕阳下，他们的影子拉得很长.”或“那 一刻，他明白，真正的朋友永远不会走远。” 写作建议：可借用比喻、象征，呼应标题或单元主题“Friends forever"。 提示：如果原文已给出前一段落，通常只需写一个自然段(80-120词)的结尾。若 独立成文，可包含2-3个短段落。 三、核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 bond n.纽带；情谊 trust n.N.信任 forgive V.原谅 apologize V.道歉 realize v.意识到 value V.珍惜 conflict n.冲突 reconciliation n.和解 support n.N.支持 memory n.回忆 2.常用短语 短语 释义 make up with sb. 与某人和解 put oneself in sb.'s shoes 换位思考 come to an understanding 达成理解 grow closer 变得更亲密 be there for each other 彼此陪伴 learn a lesson from... 从..…中吸取教训 value the friendship 珍惜友谊 go through difficult times together 一起度过难关 3.基础造句（故事结尾常用） 1They finally made up with each other and promised never to let misunderstandings hurt their friendship. 他们最终和好，并承诺再也不让误会伤害他们的友谊。 2 At that moment,he realized that a true friend is the one who stands by you no matter what. 那一刻，他意识到真正的朋友是无论发生什么都会站在你身边的人。 They hugged tightly,tears mixing with laughter,and knew that their friendship was stronger than ever. 他们紧紧拥抱，泪水与笑声交织，明白了他们的友谊比以往更加坚固。 4 From that experience,both of them learned to communicate honestly and to value each other's feelings. 从那经历中，他们都学会了坦诚沟通并珍惜彼此的感受。 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普通 finally(in the end eventually 普通very happy→overjoyed/thrilled 普通 saidwhispered murmured admitted 普通 understand figure out come to realize 普通 importantof great significance/priceless 加分句型 1 It was not until..that..(值到..扌..) It was not until they talked heart to heart that they truly understood each other. 直到他们推心置腹地交谈，亨真正理解了对方。 2 Never had..felt so.,(倒装句，强调从未有过) Never had Sarah felt so relieved as when her best friend said "I forgive you". 当最好的朋友说出“我原谅你"时，Sarah从未感到如此轻松。 3 The moment.,.(-就..) The moment they locked eyes,they knew the quarrel was over. 他们对视的那一刻，就知道争吵已经结束。 4 What really matters is that..(真正重要的是.…) What really matters is that they learned to treasure their friendship even more. 真正重要的是，他们学会了更加珍惜彼此的友谊。 5 With tears in his eyes,he whispered.,(伴随状语，增强画面感) With tears in his eyes,he whispered,"Thank you for being my friend." 他眼里含着泪，低声说：“谢谢你做我的朋友。” 五、写作模板(120-150词) 适用场景：故事开头已给出，续写结尾。模板中“.”处需根据具体情节填入。 模板一：冲突→和解型 In the end,they decided to sit down and talk honestly about what had happened. (简述交谈内容).Gradually,the misunderstanding disappeared. (描写和解动作，如握手、拥抱).From that day on,.they valued each other more and promised to be honest in the future. Looking at the sunset, (名字)smiled.He/She knew that a real friendship could weather any storm. 模板二：共同经历→成长型 The challenge they faced together brought them closer than ever. (描述他 们一起努力或完成某件事).When it was over,they looked at each other and laughed -not because it was easy,but because they had done it together. “We did it," (said softly."And we'll always be friends." That moment became a precious memory,reminding them that true friends are forever. 六、 作文仿写(150词左右) 题目（故事开头）：lom and)ack were best friends,but they had a big fight over a basketball game.Tom said some hurtful words,and Jack walked away.For a week,they did not speak to each other.One day,Tom found a note in his locker... 结尾（续写）： Tom unfolded the note and read:"Meet me after school on the playground.-Jack." His heart raced.When he arrived,Jack was standing there,holding a basketball. "I'm sorry for getting so angry,"Jack said in a low voice."I didn't mean to ruin our friendship."Tom felt a weight lift off his chest."Me too.I was stupid to say those things." They looked at each other and almost at the same time,they smiled.Jack threw the ball to Tom."Want to play a game?" Tom caught it easily."Of course." As they began to play,the afternoon sun painted golden streaks across the court. Tom realized that sometimes the best friends are the ones who are brave enough to say sorry first.It was just a basketball game,but their friendship was worth much more (约150词) 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：建议好友如何给故事写一个难忘的结尾 Dear Tom, I heard that you are struggling to write a proper ending for your story.I'd like to offer you some useful advice. First of all,it is a great idea to make your ending echo the beginning,because it can create a satisfying sense of closure.Besides,you should try to leave a question or a thoughtful message for readers,which can make your story more impressive. Last but not least,I strongly advise you to focus on the characters'feelings,as it helps readers connect emotionally with the ending. I hope these tips can help you finish your story well.Looking forward to reading your work! Yours sincerely, Jack 范文二：建议同学如何给故事军一个强有力的结尾 Dear Anna, I'm glad to receive your letter asking for advice on ending a story.Here are some practical suggestions for you. First of all,it is a good idea to summarize the main lesson or theme,because it leaves a clear impression on readers.Besides,you should consider an unexpected twist,which can surprise your audience and make the story unforgettable.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to use a short but powerful sentence at the end,as it can give the story a strong finish. I hope my advice will be helpful.I'm sure you will write a wonderful ending. Yours sincerely, Cindy