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Unit4 Waves of Technology写作精讲三
Unit4 Naves of Technology写作精讲三
Unit4 Waves of Technology写作精讲三
单元:Unit4 Naves of Technology写作任务:A letter of advice(建议信)一一如何合理使用技术
审题
1话题:针对他人在使用技术(如手机、网络、社交媒体等)过程中遇到的问题与困扰,撰
写建议信提供实用建议
2体裁:书信类应用文(建议信)
3人称:以第二人称you为主,辅以第一人称I
4
时态:以一般现在时、一般将来时为核心时态
5
字数要求:高考标准100-120词
6
核心要点:点明写信目的、给出2-3条具体可操作建议、表达鼓励与美好祝愿
文章结构
1开头段:礼貌问候+点明写信背景与目的(回应对方在技术使用方面的问题),
引出下文建议
2主体段:分条阐述具体建议(如何合理使用技术、避免沉迷、平衡线上线下生活
等),每条建议搭配合理理由,用连接词衔接,逻辑清晰
3
结尾段:表达鼓励与信心,祝愿对方解决问题,收尾符合书信格式
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
technology
n.技术
digital
adj.数字的;数码的
device
n.设备
n.上瘾;沉迷addict v.使上瘾addictive adj.
addiction
使人上瘾的
screen
n.屏幕;屏幕时间
distraction
n.分心的事物;干扰distract v.使分心
efficiency
n.效率efficient adj..高效的
balance
n./N.平衡
limit
n./N.限制
benefit
n.益处v.使受益beneficial adj..有益的
2.常用短语
短语
释义
spend too much time on...
在,上花费太多时间
get addicted to
沉迷于
be distracted by
被.分心
make proper use of
合理利用
set a time limit
设定时间限制
keep a balance between online life and
平衡线上与线下生活
offline life
improve learning efficiency
提高学习效率
replace...with...
用..代替.…
take advantage of
利用
3.基础造句
I am writing to offer you some advice on how to use technology wisely.
我写信是为了给你一些如何合理使用技术的建议。
2 First,you should set a time limit for using your phone every day.
首先,你应该设定每天使用手机的时间限制。
It is beneficial to take part in outdoor activities instead of staring at screens.
参加户外活动而不是盯着屏幕是很有益的。
4If you follow my advice,you will find a healthy relationship with technology.
如果你采纳我的建议,你会找到与技术的健康关系。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通】
I thinkAs far as I am concerned From my perspective
普通
very important of great significance
普通】
helpful(beneficial/rewarding
普通】
try to domake every effort to do
普通
use→
take advantage of make use of
加分句型
1Knowing that you have trouble managing your screen time,I am writing to
give you some practical suggestions.
得知你难以控制屏幕使用时间,我写信给你提供一些实用建议。(现在分词作原因状语)
2 Not only should you limit your online time,but also you need to find
interesting offline hobbies.
你不仅应该限制上网时间,还需要找到有趣的线下爱好。(部分倒装句型)
3)It is highly recommended that you should replace screen time with physical
exercise.
强烈建议你用体育锻炼代替屏幕时间。(虚拟语气句型)
Only in this way can you truly enjoy the benefits of technology without being
controlled by it.
只有用这种方法,你扌能真正享受技术带来的好处而不被它控制。(倒装句型)
五、写作模板(100-120词)
Dear
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble with
(对方在使用技术方
面的问题).I am writing to offer you some useful advice.
First of all,it is a good idea to
(建议-),because
(原因一).
Besides,you should
(建议=),which can help you
(好处二)·
Last but not least,I strongly advise you to
(建议三),as it is
beneficial to
(好处三).
I hope my advice will be of some help to you.I am confident that you will
find a healthy balance with technology soon.
Yours sincerely,
[Your Name]
参考翻译:
亲爱的
很抱歉听说你在.…方面遇到了困难(对方在使用技术方面的问题)。我写信给你提供一些有用的建
议。
首先,…是个好主意(建议一),因为.…(原因一)。此外,你应该…(建议二),这能帮助
你..(好处二)。最后但同样重要的是,我强烈建议你,(建议三),因为这有益于.(好处
三)。
我希望我的建议对你有所帮助。我相信你很快就会与科技建立健康的平衡。
你真诚的,
[你的名字]
六、作文仿军(120词左右)
仿写题目:你的好友李明沉迷手机游戏,影响了学习和健康。请你给他写一封建议
信,帮助他合理使用手机。
Dear Li Ming,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble with mobile game addiction,which is
affecting both your studies and health.I am writing to offer you some useful
advice.
First of all,it is a good idea to set a strict time limit for games each day,because
this can help you regain control over your schedule.Besides,you should take part
in sports or other outdoor activities with friends,which can help you reduce screen
time and build up your body.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to make a
study plan and use your phone as a learning tool,as it is beneficial to turning the
device into a helper rather than a distraction.
I hope my advice will be of some help to you.I am confident that you will overcome
this challenge and enjoy a healthier lifestyle soon.
Yours sincerely,
Tom
参考译文:
亲爱的李明:
很抱歉听说你沉迷于手机游戏,这影响了你的学习和健康。我写信来给你一些有用的建议。
首先,每天给游戏设定严格的时间限制是个好主意,因为这能帮助你重新掌控自己的日程。此外,你应该和朋
友一起参加体育运动或其他户外活动,这能帮助你减少屏幕时间、增强体质。最后但同样重要的是,我强烈建
议你制定学习计划并把手机当作学习工具,因为这有助于把设备变成帮手而不是干扰。
我希望我的建议对你有所帮助。我相信你很快就会克服这一挑战,享受更健康的生活方式。
你真诚的,
Tom
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一:建议朋友提高数学成绩
Dear Mike
I am sorry to hear that you are struggling with math.I am writing to give you some
practical suggestions.
First of all,it is a good idea to review basic concepts every day,because it helps
you build a solid foundation for harder problems.Besides,you should practice
solving different types of problems after class,which can improve your problem-
solving skills.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to ask your teacher for help
when in trouble,as it is beneficial to clearing up confusion quickly.
I hope my advice will work for you.I'm sure you will make progress soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
范文二:建议同学克服拖延症
Dear Sarah,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for advice on overcoming procrastination.I'd
like to share some useful tips with you.
First of all,it is a good idea to make a daily to-do list,because it helps you focus on
important tasks and manage time wisely.Besides,you should set small and
achievable goals every day,which can give you a sense of accomplishment.Last
but not least,I strongly advise you to avoid distractions like your phone while
studying,as it is beneficial to concentrating better.
I hope my advice will be helpful.I'm looking forward to your progress.
Yours sincerely,
David