Unit 4 My space 写作精讲-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第一册单元话题写作精讲（沪教版）

高中 教版上海教育出版社)·必修第一册 Unit4 My space写作精讲 Writing an article to describe a room(写描述房间的文章) Unit4 My space写作精讲 单元：Unit4 My space导作任务：Writing an article to describe a room(写-篇描述房间的文 章) 审题 1 话题：描述自己或他人的房间，包括房间的布局、家具、装饰、颜色、物品以及个人感受 或意义。 2体裁：描述性文章(article/descriptive writing) 3人称：以第一人称1为主（描述自己的房间）；也可用第三人称（描述他人房间） 4时态：以一般现在时为核心时态（描述客观现状） 5字数要求：高考标准100-120词 >点明房间的整体印象（大小、位置、风格) 〉按空间顺序或逻辑顺序描述布局与主要家具 >提及一两件有特色的物品或装饰，并说明其意义 ,表达对房间的感受（如温馨、舒适、喜欢） 二 文章结构 1 开头段：总写房间的位置、大小、整体氛围，引出下文。 2 主体段： 描述房间的主要区域（如床、书桌、书架、窗户等） 使用方位介词(in the corner,next to,on the left,opposite to等) ,适当加入颜色、材质等细节，让描述生动 〉最后可提及一件对你有特殊意义的物品（如照片、纪念品） 3结尾段：总结个人感受，说明房间对你的意义（如“这是我的小天地“在这里我 感到放松"等) 三、核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 furniture n.家具 layout n.布局 cosy adj.舒适的；温馨的 spacious adj.宽儆的 decorate v.装饰；decoration n.装饰品 shelf n.书架；搁板 curtain n.窗帘 carpet n地毯 drawer n.抽屉 pillow n.枕头 lamp n.台灯 poster n.海报 2:常用短语 短语 释义 in the corner of the room 在房间的角落 against the wall 靠墙 next to beside 在.旁边 on the left/right 在左/右边 短语 释义 be filled with 充满… a sense of belonging 归属感 remind me of 使我想起… add some warmth 增添一些温暖 3.基础造句 1 My room is located on the second floor,facing south. 我的房间在二楼，朝南。 2 There is a single bed in the left corner with a soft blue pillow. 左边角落有一张单人床，上面有一个柔软的蓝色枕头。 Next to the window stands a wooden desk,where I do my homework 窗户旁边放着一张木书桌，我在那里做作业。 4A small bookshelf against the wall holds my favourite novels. 靠墙的一个小书架上放着我最喜欢的小说。 5What I love most is the photo frame on the desk,which reminds me of my family. 我最喜欢的是书桌上的相框，它让我想起我的家人。 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普通nice→appealing/charming/inviting 普通big→spacious/roomy 普通 small→compact/cosy Located on the east side of the house,my room enjoys plenty of sunlight in the morning. 我的房间位于房子东侧，早晨能享受充足的阳光。（过去分词短语作状语） 2 On the wall hangs a beautiful painting that my best friend gave me. 墙上挂着一幅我最好的朋友送给我的美丽画作。（倒装结构，强调地点） Not only is my room a place to rest,but it also serves as a private study space. 我的房间不仅是一个休息的地方，也是我私人的学习空间。（部分倒装） 4It is this small but cosy room that makes me feel at home. 正是这个小巧而舒适的房间让我有家的感觉。（强调句型） 五、写作模板(100-120词) 题目：Describe your own room. My Room My room is a small but cosy space on the third floor.It is painted in light blue, which makes me feel calm and relaxed. In the left corner stands a single bed with a soft pillow and a warm blanket. Against the opposite wall is a white desk,where I place my computer and a lamp Beside the desk there is a bookshelf filled with novels and textbooks.What I like most is the corner by the window,decorated with a small plant and a photo of my family.Every time I look at it,I feel a sense of warmth. Although my room is not big,it is my private world.Here I can read,study,and dream.I really love this space. 六、作文仿得(120词左右) 仿写题目：描述你理想中的房间(a dream room),可以从布局、家具、颜色、特 殊物品等方面展开。 My Dream Room I have always dreamed of a room that is bright and spacious.It would be on the top floor with large windows allowing sunlight to pour in. In the centre of the room there would be a large bed with white sheets and fluffy pillows.A tall bookshelf would stand against the wall,holding all my favourite books.Next to it,a comfortable armchair would sit by the window,perfect for reading in the afternoon.On the desk,I would place a vase of fresh flowers and a globe to remind me of distant places. This room would not just be a place to sleep,but a sanctuary where I can relax and be myself.I hope one day my dream will come true. 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：描述我的卧室 My bedroom is a small but cozy room.Facing south,it gets plenty of sunlight during the day. 1.A single bed stands against the left wall,covered with a soft blue quilt. 2.Beside the bed,there is a wooden desk with a lamp and a pile of textbooks. 3.On the right,a bookshelf holds my favorite novels and some magazines. 4.The window is decorated with white curtains,which gently move when the wind blows. This room is my private sanctuary.Here I study,read and relax after a busy day. (109 words) 范文二：描述学校图书馆 Our school library is a quiet and bright place for reading. 1.Rows of bookshelves stand against the walls,filled with books on science, history and literature. 2.In the center,there are six long tables with chairs,where students sit silently. 3.Near the window,a computer area offers students access to online resources. 4.On the wall hangs a sign saying "Keep Silent". Walking into this room,you can smell the paper and feel a peaceful atmosphere.It is truly a perfect spot for learning. (108 words)