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Unit9 Learning写作精讲
A Learning Reflection(学习反思写作)
Unit9 Learning写作精讲
写作任务:A Learning Reflection(学习反思写作)
审题
1话题:回顾菜一阶段或某一具体学习经历,反思自己的学习方法、态度、收获与不足,总
结经验教训并提出改进方向
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体裁:反思性短文(Learning Reflection),属于论说类应用文,可带一定叙述成分
3人称:以第一人称I/we为主,适当使用第二人称you进行概括性议论
4时态:以一般过去时(描述经历和感受)和一般现在时(总结现状、提出观点)为主,可
结合一般将来时(展望改进)
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字数要求:高考标准100-120词(考场作文);平时练习可适当放宽至120-150词
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核心要点:
>明确反思的具体学习内容或经历
〉分析成功之处或失败原因(方法、态度、习惯等)
,总结主要收获或教训
,提出未来改进计划或行动方向
文章结构
1开头段(背景引入)
>简要说明反思的对象(某个课程、某次考试、某项技能学习等)
冫用一两句话引出反思的目的或整体感受
>例如:After finishing this unit on learning strategies,.I have come to
realize how much my study habits need improving.
2主体段(反思与分析)
>分2-3个角度展开,常用结构:
①过去的问题/不足(+原因)
②认识到的新方法/新态度(+具体事例)
③对比前后变化,分析收获
>使用过渡词(first of all,,moreover,,however,.as a result等)连接
〉每一点要具体、有实例支撑
3结尾段(总结与展望)
〉总结反思带来的核心后示
>表达未来打算或改进的决心
>必要时可写一句鼓励性话语
三、
核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
reflect
v.反思;reflection n.反思
improve
v.提高;improvement n.改进
strategy
n.策略;method n.方法
habit
n.习惯
efficient
adj.高效的;efficiency n.效率
progress
n.进步
weakness
n.弱点;strength n.优势
outcome
n.结果;效果
adjust
V.调整
evaluate
v.评价;评估
2.常用短语
短语
释义
reflect on upon
反思…
learn from mistakes
从错误中学习
make progress in
在.…方面取得进步
develop good study habits
培养良好的学习习惯
adjust one's learning methods
调整学习方法
keep a learning journal
写学习日志
set clear goals
设定清晰目标
manage time efficiently
高效管理时间
benefit a lot from
从.中受益良多
overcome difficulties
克服困难
3,基础造句
1Reflecting on my experience,I realize that I used to spend too much time on
memorizing without understanding.
反思我的经历,我意识到自己过去花了太多时间死记硬背而不理解。
2 I have learned that making a study plan in advance is of great importance.
我明白了提前制定学习计划非常重要。
3 By keeping a learning diary,I can track my progress and find out my weak
points.
通过写学习日记,我可以追踪自己的进步并发现薄弱环节。
4From this experience,I have benefited a lot and will continue to improve.
从这次经历中我受益匪浅,并且会继续改进。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通think→reflect/consider/recognize
普通
importantcrucial essential of great significance
普通
changeadjust/transform shift
普通helpful→beneficial/rewarding/instructive
加分句型
1 Having experienced both failure and success,I have come to understand that
effective learning requires constant reflection.
经历了失败和成功之后,我逐渐明白高效学习需要不断反思。(现在分词完成式作状语)
2 Only when we reflect on our own learning process can we truly make progress.
只有当我们反思自己的学习过程时,我们中能真正取得进步。(倒装句型)
3 It is not enough to simply work hard;we also need to adopt proper strategies.
仅仅努力学习是不够的,我们还需要采用恰当的策略。(否定前置强调)
What impressed me most was the fact that group discussion can deepen our
understanding.
最分我印象深刻的是小组讨论能够加深我们的理解这一事实。(主语从句+同位语从句)
5By adjusting my study habits,I not only improved my grades but also gained
confidence.
通过调整学习习惯,我不仅提高了成绩,还获得了自信。(not only..but also.并列结构)
五、写作模板(100-120词)
Learning Reflection
After finishing the study of[具体内容/单元],I have deeply reflected on my learning
process.At first,I[描述过去的做法或问题].For instance,I[举一个具体例子].owever,
I gradually realized that[认识到的新方法或道理].
From this experience,I have learned several important lessons.First of all,
收获].Secondly,,[第二条收获].Moreover,I find that[第三条收获或建议].
In the future,I intend to[改进计划].I am confident that by doing so,I will make
continuous progress in my learning.Reflection is truly the key to growth.
六、作文仿写(120词左右)
仿写题目:写一篇学习反思,回顾你在学习“英语阅读理解”过程中遇到的问题与改
进方法,并总结收获与未来计划。
Learning Reflection
After a whole semester of training in English reading comprehension,I have
seriously reflected on my own learning process.At first,I used to read every
passage word by word,which made me slow and easily distracted.I often failed to
grasp the main idea.
However,I gradually realized that reading strategies are essential.First of all,I
started to skim the passage for the main idea before reading details.Secondly,I
learned to guess the meaning of new words from context instead of looking them
up immediately.Moreover,I began to keep a reading journal to record new
vocabulary and typical sentence patterns.
From this experience,I have greatly improved both my reading speed and
accuracy.In the future,I plan to read more English articles on diverse topics.I
believe constant practice and reflection will lead to greater success.
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一:建议朋友养成健康饮食习惯
Dear Mike,
I'm sorry to learn that you often feel tired and weak.I'm writing to offer you some
advice on healthy eating.
1.Have breakfast every day:It is a good idea to eat a balanced breakfast,because
it provides energy for the whole morning.
2.Drink enough water:You should drink at least eight glasses of water daily,which
helps your body work properly and keeps your skin fresh.
3.Avoid too much fast food:I strongly advise you to eat more fruits,vegetables
and whole grains,as they are rich in vitamins and fiber.
I hope my suggestions can help you feel stronger.Take good care of yourself!
Yours sincerely,
Li Wei
范文二:建议同学高效规划周未时间
Dear Lucy,
I'm glad to hear that you want to make better use of your weekends.Here is some
practical advice for you.
1.Make a to-do list on Friday night:It is a good idea to write down tasks in order
of importance,because it helps you stay organized and avoid forgetting
2.Set a fixed time for homework:You should finish your homework first on
Saturday morning,so that the rest of the weekend is free for relaxation.
3.Plan short breaks:I strongly advise you to take a 15-minute rest after every 45
minutes of study,which can improve concentration.
I hope these tips help you enjoy both study and fun.Wish you a productive
weekend!
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Wei