内容正文:
仁爱新版
Unit 4 Fun in the Sun
初一上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Nrite about your favorite sport(介绍最喜欢的运动)
仁爱新版初一上Unit4 Fun in the Sun
写作任务Write about your favorite sport(介绍最喜欢的运动)
一、审题
①文体
介绍类短文(说明文/记叙文,无固定格式,但需条理清晰)
2话题
我最喜欢的运动(如basketball,swimming,.running,football等)
③人称
以第一人称1为主
4时态
一般现在时(描述习惯、喜好、事实)
5要点
,点明最喜欢的运动是什么
,说明喜欢的原因(至少2点)
,简单描述该运动的特点或如何开展(如时间、地点、同伴)
,结尾表达感受或呼吁
6字数
60~80词(初一上标准要求,可适当放宽至80~100词)
二、
文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
直接说出你最爱的运动
例如:My favorite sport is swimming,
中间
写2~3个喜欢的原因+简单细节
段落
内容要点
>原因1:有趣/对身体好
>原因2:和谁一起玩/在哪里玩
>原因3(可选):学到什么有什么好处
结尾
总结感受,或邀请大家尝试
例如:I like it very much.What about you?
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词
spot运动
favorite最喜欢的
interesting有趣的
词healthy健康的
fun乐趣
strong强壮的
词relax放松
team团队player运动员/玩家
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
play basketball/football
打篮球/踢足球
2
go swimming/running
去游泳/跑步
3
keep healthy
保持健康
4
have fun
玩得开心
5
do sports
做运动
6
after school
放学后
7
with my friends
和我的朋友们
6
feel relaxed
感到放松
基础造句
1I like running because it makes me strong.
2 Swimming is fun and it helps me keep healthy.
3 We often play basketball on the playground after school.
4I usually do sports with my classmates on weekends.
四、好词好句
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
enjoyable
合人愉快的
序号
单词
释义
2
exciting
分人兴奋的
popular
受欢迎的
4
improve
提高;改善
5
energy
精力;能量
6
cheerful
开心的
加分句型
表达喜欢原因】
I love it because it is not only fun but also good for my health.
It makes me feel relaxed and full of energy.
Playing football helps me learn how to work with others.
描述运动细节
We usually play it on the school playground after class.
I go swimming with my father every Saturday morning.
结尾升华句
Doing sports is a great way to have fun and stay healthy.
I hope everyone can find a sport they love and enjoy it.
五、导作模板
My favorite sport is
I like it very much because
(原因1),AIso,
(原因2),I often
with
(时间/地点/同伴)
(补充一句话,如:It makes me strong and happy.)
I really enjoy it and I hope you can try it too
六、作文仿写
仿写示例1
My favorite sport is swimming.
I like it very much because it is interesting and healthy.Also,swimming can make me feel
cool in summer.I often go swimming with my father on weekends at the pool.It helps me
relax after a busy week.
I really enjoy it.I hope you can try swimming too!
仿写示例2
My favorite sport is basketball.
I like it because it is exciting and I can play with my friends.Playing basketball helps me stay
strong and fast.We often play it on the school playground after class.I feel very happy when
we play together.
Basketball is my favorite sport.What is yours?
仿写示例3
(稍长)
My favorite sport is running.
I think running is the easiest sport.I like it because it keeps me healthy and gives me a lot of
energy.Every morning I run in the park near my home.Sometimes I run with my dad.When I
run,I feel free and relaxed.
Running is a wonderful sport.I hope more people will join me and enjoy it.
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1介绍最喜欢的运动一一篮球
约96词
Dear Sam,
I'm glad to tell you about my favorite sport-basketball.It is exciting and helps me stay
healthy.
First,playing basketball improves my teamwork skills because we need to pass and
cooperate.Second,it is a great way to relax after a busy day at school.I usually play with
my friends on weekends.We run,jump and shoot the ball.It makes me feel energetic and
happy.
I hope you can try it too.Maybe we can play together someday!
Yours,
Li Ming
拓展范文2
介绍最喜欢的运动一一游泳
约94词
Dear Jenny,
Swimming is my favorite sport.I love it because it makes me feel free and cool in summer.
1 Swimming is a full-body exercise:it strengthens my arms,legs and back.
2 It also teaches me to be brave when I face deep water./I go to the pool twice a week
with my coach.
3 Besides,swimming helps me focus better on my studies.
I think everyone should learn to swim.Would you like to join me next time?
Yours,
Chen Wei